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Sonic Percival

Blaze

Blaze Fanart Uploaded on: Feb 24, 2009
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Color, Pencil

Submitted by: Blaze Send PM Series: Sonic

Percival
Description:

Percival is the only female member of the round-table, and represents Blaze in the Black Knight. I decided I would do all of Blaze's costumes, and started with this.

Please state the good and bad, and suggest what I could have done better. Thank you!


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    Darknesshedge since Dec 2008 | Feb 25, 09
    well i thought was good some of the drawing is bad like the sword and the hand holding the sword and is it suppose to be fat
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      Blaze since Jan 2009 | Feb 25, 09
      Yes, they are gloves and kind of like a gauntlet to hold the sword with. I didn't do the sword too well but...was the coloring and proportioning okay?
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    xlXPunkRockerXIx since Jan 2009 | Feb 25, 09
    I haven't really played the sonic games all that much so i dotn know what it should look like exactly so a reference pic would be nice but overall its pretty good. The sword could definitely use some touching up and maybe the helmet but otherwise its pretty good, better than anything i could draw.
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      Blaze since Jan 2009 | Feb 26, 09
      Hey thanks mate, can't show you the source, the pic was on a flash player...thank you.
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    Darknesshedge since Dec 2008 | Feb 26, 09
    other then those details pretty good old chap
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      Blaze since Jan 2009 | Feb 26, 09
      Thank you, that means a lot. ^.^
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    Darknesshedge since Dec 2008 | Feb 27, 09
    no problem * gives her a winking tumb up* i'm a hedgenchidna
    name's natari
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    G_Murph since Aug 2008 | Feb 28, 09
    Very nice. One question though. Are the smudge marks around the hand holding the sword suppose to be there?
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      Blaze since Jan 2009 | Feb 28, 09
      Nope, they were rubbings out.
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    Darknesshedge since Dec 2008 | Mar 1, 09
    ^^ did everyone have a nice valentine's day
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    Jameson user since Sep 2007 | Mar 16, 09
    From the view of someone who has artistic experience, and as a critic, I say the limbs need more space to individualize themselves; go for Blaze holding the sword out, blade first, to the viewer. Have her in a fighting stance, both hands gripping the blade. This will allow for a more 3-D experience. Spread her legs apart so she will look ready for action (fighting action, mind, I didn't mean anything dirty) and put in some shading. Perhaps put in a few battle-scars to her armor, maybe tatter her clothes as well as dirty the overall image to provide a battle-worn, badass Blaze.
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      Blaze since Jan 2009 | Mar 16, 09
      That's some really good advide there. Thank you I'll do that for my next drawing.
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        Jameson user since Sep 2007 | Mar 17, 09
        No prob Blaze.
        Artistic advice anytime, anywhere.

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