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Author:   Kingy
Date:   Feb 11, 12 at 8:06am (PST)
Subject:   -rewriting-
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Author:   Inkling
Date:   Feb 11, 12 at 9:38am (PST)
Subject:   re: -rewriting-
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quote King X2
While contemplating running away forever due to escalating problems within Sweet Apple Acres, hostility with the community around her and even her best friends, Applejack is shown by an unknown allicorn what Equestria would be like if she was never born.

- Coming soon -

Oooo! Can't wait



Author:   hiigaran
Date:   Feb 11, 12 at 12:45pm (PST)
Subject:   re: -rewriting-
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ooh, new fic!

*instasubscribe*

now get to work, bitch! you are here for our amusement!



Author:   Kingy
Date:   Feb 13, 12 at 11:11pm (PST)
Subject:   re: -rewriting-
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Just updated the first post with the first part of the first chapter.

I know it's not much, but I will write more very soon. I had to brainstorm for a while to get a good outline going before starting this thing. I pretty much have the entire first two chapters laid out in my mind.

Hope you guys like it!



Author:   hiigaran
Date:   Feb 14, 12 at 10:07am (PST)
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well...so far its keeping me interested and curious...do go on, good sir!



Author:   Kingy
Date:   Feb 15, 12 at 7:10am (PST)
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I'm going to post the whole chapter on Google Documents tomorrow. Plus there'll be a couple pictures. :>

I hope to make this thing a lot more professional and interesting looking. Stay tuned!



Author:   Kingy
Date:   Feb 16, 12 at 6:43am (PST)
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Well, everyone, I promised you the first chapter today. And here it is:

Chapter One [Google Docs]

Let me know what you guys think.

Also, I decided instead of posting the pictures now I'll post them after the appropriate part of the story happens.



Author:   hiigaran
Date:   Feb 16, 12 at 8:55am (PST)
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the story itself looks good. there are a couple of spelling errors, and i think one use of incorrect terminology, but its easy to miss anyway.



Author:   Kingy
Date:   Feb 16, 12 at 5:44pm (PST)
Subject:   re: [Fanfiction] .::It's a Magical Life::. <CHAPTER ONE COMPLETE>
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Found the spelling errors I think you were talking about. But I don't see any incorrect terminology being used anywhere. I kind of research all this before typing...

Thanks for the comment though!



Author:   hiigaran
Date:   Feb 16, 12 at 5:49pm (PST)
Subject:   re: [Fanfiction] .::It's a Magical Life::. <CHAPTER ONE COMPLETE>
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ill point out the specific one when my internet is restored again. viewing it on this laptop is...difficult, to say the least.

you have an ETA on the next chapter?



Author:   Kingy
Date:   Feb 16, 12 at 5:51pm (PST)
Subject:   re: [Fanfiction] .::It's a Magical Life::. <CHAPTER ONE COMPLETE>
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Probably in like a couple days.



Author:   Kingy
Date:   Feb 17, 12 at 8:06am (PST)
Subject:   re: [Fanfiction] It's a Magical Life <C.1>
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First post has been updated! I also decided on giving each of my chapters a unique name. Chapter Two will be here by this weekend. I'm so excited.



Author:   Kingy
Date:   Feb 25, 12 at 8:10am (PST)
Subject:   re: -rewriting-
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Chapter two will be up Saturday. Pinkie promise! (believe me, I don't break those)

After much pondering, inspiration seeking and revisions, I have finally concocted a final batch for a good chapter following the confusing and depressing first chapter. This chapter is quite a bit shorter, though.

Maybe you'll all rethink the word 'magic' once you finish reading it.

Well I'm off to bed. (it's 1AM -.-)



Author:   hiigaran
Date:   Feb 26, 12 at 2:31am (PST)
Subject:   re: -rewriting-
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*ahem*





Author:   Kingy
Date:   Feb 26, 12 at 6:49am (PST)
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CHAPTER TWO IS HERE

Here it is!!

With eleven minutes to spare.

The chapters will get longer and make more sense once I get the ball rolling. The beginning chapters are usually the shortest for me when I write things. Also, don't be put off if you're still confused. Just keep reading and things will make sense.

Sorry for being so slow lately haha. I've had so much going on. >.<


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