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Author:   Phlogiston
Date:   Aug 26, 12 at 7:25pm (PST)
Subject:   re: The Monster(Fanfiction)
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Speaking of Eragon:
**ELEMENT DISCHARGE**
BRIIISINGRRRRRRRRRR!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!



Author:   wildfire
Date:   Aug 27, 12 at 4:32am (PST)
Subject:   re: The Monster(Fanfiction)
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Phlogiston

The 'panel' is just a bit above the hand gaurd on the hilt of the axe. :You just touch it once to switch to sword mode, and hold it once the transformation is done to do the discharge.



Author:   Phlogiston
Date:   Aug 27, 12 at 8:49am (PST)
Subject:   re: The Monster(Fanfiction)
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http://gigazine.jp/img/2009/04/25/slash_ax/slash_ax02.png

What discharge panel? I've checked all the axes, and if there's a panel it's part of the handgrip that's bolted to the axe. Certainly it's not on the bone axe, and almost none of the axes have similar features except for the phial. Sorry it bothers me this much... I'll desist soon enough.



Author:   Phlogiston
Date:   Aug 27, 12 at 9:07am (PST)
Subject:   re: The Monster(Fanfiction)
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Wait, I'll need to check the axe in-game - all the pictures are from the left side. I might withdraw my previous statement when I find out.



Author:   wildfire
Date:   Aug 27, 12 at 9:45am (PST)
Subject:   re: The Monster(Fanfiction)
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Phlogiston

That's just something I made up because the game doesn't explain how Switch axes work, so I just used a bit of creativity in my story.... is that so bad?



Author:   Phlogiston
Date:   Aug 27, 12 at 6:31pm (PST)
Subject:   re: The Monster(Fanfiction)
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I like creativity... within reason. Explaining how switch axes "switch" is one thing; altering the game's weapons to suit your hypothesis is quite another (unless this is an axe you invented). I'd go for a lever on the interior of the handguard if I were explaining it.



Author:   Phlogiston
Date:   Aug 27, 12 at 6:33pm (PST)
Subject:   re: The Monster(Fanfiction)
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On second thought, it's YOUR idea, who am I to mess with it!



Author:   Phlogiston
Date:   Aug 27, 12 at 6:35pm (PST)
Subject:   re: The Monster(Fanfiction)
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Sorry for bothering you.



Author:   RockofKuthian
Date:   Aug 27, 12 at 8:34pm (PST)
Subject:   re: The Monster(Fanfiction)
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I feel like you are talking just to argue. I,d like to mention one thing
FanFICTION
that's is all.
Keep up the good work wild




Author:   wildfire
Date:   Aug 28, 12 at 6:05am (PST)
Subject:   re: The Monster(Fanfiction)
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Phlogiston
RockofKuthian

No, I asked for criticism, but I can't change what's already written....



Author:   Phlogiston
Date:   Aug 28, 12 at 6:39am (PST)
Subject:   re: The Monster(Fanfiction)
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I apologized. I know its a fanfic, it's YOUR fanfic, not mine. Sure, there are some inconsistencies that want constructive criticism, but those are part of the story, and they're set in stone s'far as I know. Overall it's a good job!

... I should make a fanfic...



Author:   wildfire
Date:   Aug 28, 12 at 6:48pm (PST)
Subject:   re: The Monster(Fanfiction)
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Phlogiston

I like your ideas, and like I said before the swax is still developmental in my world. Could I use your ideas? you seem interested in writing your own, and I'm not interested in taking whats not mine.

Also: Your alias (phlogiston), i remeber it having something to do with early chemistry? I think phlogiston was thought to be in everything changing chemicals into other things... like wood into ashes. can you explain it?



Author:   Its_my_time24
Date:   Aug 28, 12 at 7:16pm (PST)
Subject:   re: The Monster(Fanfiction)
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Im gonna have to agree with wild here. You SHOULD make a fanfic. I noticed when u post advice, its detailed and thoroughly explained. Also, you noticed grammar mistakes in possibly the greatest writer on this forum's (IMO) fanfic, wilds. I'd really like to read a fanfic of your own, as i never hunted with you, and wanna see what its like being in someone elses shoes,which is why i read this, GeckoCookie's, Scion's, and ofc, Kholdstare's. Btw, check out mine most likely on the second page of this forum.

wildfire aww, come on man! I nearly fell asleep reading about ur thoughts on his name (sorry, i dont remember it man, and on 3ds, cant see thread recap)




Author:   Phlogiston
Date:   Aug 29, 12 at 8:56am (PST)
Subject:   re: The Monster(Fanfiction)
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Veeery early chemistry... closer to alchemy.

http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Phlogiston_theory



Author:   Phlogiston
Date:   Aug 29, 12 at 9:10am (PST)
Subject:   re: The Monster(Fanfiction)
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As for using my ideas...
If they would complement your story or philosophy, fine.
Be warned, though, that they're only my opinions (like yours are). If I find any widely-accepted theories about anything, I'll let you know.


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