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Author:   LightningThedgehog
Date:   Dec 27, 04 at 7:56pm (PST)
Subject:   [Poetry/Song] Before Today Came [Comments Accepted]
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All right, this is my poems...Well, the thread with my poems. oO;

Before Today Came

Like every other day you left me behind
Like every other day you shunned me
Like every other day you told me lies
Like every other day you turned away

In this world there are a million truths
But just as many lies
In this world you said I won't make a difference
Even though I saved your life

Before today came I used to smile
Before today came I was tantalized by your words
But that was the melody of yesterday
And not the tune of today

I tried to shield you from danger
The incoming bullets and slashing swords
But you pushed me off
And ran away

In this world there are more lies than truths
To use against a person
In this world the truth was that you didn't want me near
And the lie was that you did

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That was my first poem. ^^ Not the best, but I was...a little bored.
Two words that describe me: Hopeless Romantic
Live with it.


This message was edited by LightningThedgehog on Jan 22 2005.



Author:   DarkAngelsRhapsody
Date:   Dec 30, 04 at 5:33am (PST)
Subject:   re: [Poetry] .Before Today Came. .Comments Accepted.
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It is good to be a hopeless romantic sometimes. Just don't become too hopeless..



Author:   LightningThedgehog
Date:   Jan 16, 05 at 12:47am (PST)
Subject:   Hold You Tight
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Heh, I'm always too hopeless...Kind of. >_<

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Hold You Tight
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The snow is falling
Draping around my shivering shoulders
But I know that I'm lucky
And you're not quite so

Stowed away in a dark corner
Dwelling in your own misery
You cry yourself to sleep
And forget that I'm ever there

Let me hold you tight
And never let you go
Until the earth stops turning
And the sun dies out

Let me embrace you tight
My arms around you
Until your heart thaws
And happiness dominates all

The stars are twinkling above
But I can't feel their heat
Later on I realize
I'm not the only one

A mournful silence of tears
Has become your life
A million icy fragments
Has become your eyes

Let me hold you tight
And comfort you when all is wrong
Until the day grows old
And the planets drift away

Let me embrace you tight
My hands pressed against yours
Until the tears begin to dry
And life starts anew

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Yaaay, 2 poems...




Author:   Chad
Date:   Jan 20, 05 at 11:23pm (PST)
Subject:   re: [Poetry] .Before Today Came. .Comments Accepted.
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Wow that was good, I stink at poems.



Author:   LightningThedgehog
Date:   Jan 23, 05 at 2:50am (PST)
Subject:   re: [Poetry/Song] Before Today Came [Comments Accepted]
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Thank you! They're much more like songs, however. I really can't write a decent poem...




Author:   catastraphe
Date:   Jan 23, 05 at 6:49am (PST)
Subject:   re: [Poetry/Song] Before Today Came [Comments Accepted]
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it's awesome, I right books not poetry but yours is awesome!



Author:   LightningThedgehog
Date:   Jan 24, 05 at 4:19am (PST)
Subject:   Chronicles of Tears
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Thank you! I write books, also, but I'm running out of inspiration so I'm writing poems for fun. ^^

Chronicles of Tears

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A drop
A river
A lake of salty liquid
Why do we cry?

A hug
An embrace
A maze of intertwined arms
Was that hug real?

I cry because of you
Pondering my existence
With what meager love I have

I hugged you for the first time
And last time tonight
Because a promise broken
Is a heart shattered

A word spoken
A sentence
An essay that pulls the heartstrings
Did it change me that much?

A face
A recognizable face
Someone that I looked to for comfort
Destroyed my soul?

I cry because I have no one
Because you're no longer there
Maybe I'll find the sun soon

I wanted to say goodbye
A promise uttered can never be taken back
Run away but the words will stick
Engraved in my mind forever

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No, I'm not depressed and sad. I'm just...having one of my lovey moments...*stares*




Author:   Slayerholic17
Date:   Jan 25, 05 at 5:06am (PST)
Subject:   re: [Poetry/Song] Before Today Came [Comments Accepted]
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Romantic poems are my favorite kinds, especially the sadder romantic ones. Yours are well written, I reallly like them. My favorite is Hold You Tight. It's very cute, and I can really relate to it. Great work.



Author:   Zott SoniChao
Date:   Mar 15, 05 at 10:00pm (PST)
Subject:   re: [Poetry/Song] Before Today Came [Comments Accepted]
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I agree with what everyone said. I really love your beautiful poems. I sure wish I could write love poems! They're the best kind!

Your poems are so beautiful and touching. If there is a song to it, what would the tune be?

BTW, I like you're old banner alot. But the new one is cute, too.



Author:   KittyBijou
Date:   Aug 24, 05 at 5:22am (PST)
Subject:   re: [Poetry/Song] Before Today Came [Comments Accepted]
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I love them!
I started writing in fourth grade. Now, on Monday I'm entering seventh! I write poetry, books, and songs...and you are quite the writer! I should post my poem, "Moonlit Bay" sometime...I wrote it in sixth grade.



Author:   KittyBijou
Date:   Aug 27, 05 at 4:06pm (PST)
Subject:   re: [Poetry/Song] Before Today Came [Comments Accepted]
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I love your stories, too!
I like Sonic and Furuba...and HARVEST MOON! Ok sorry that was obvious... ;


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