Neoseeker.com Forum Thread: Make your own Pokemon Stories - page 10

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Author:   OverLord of Chaos
Date:   Oct 06, 07 at 5:27pm (PST)
Subject:   ...
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The machine arc, Part 7: The toughest Chaos General

All the sea dramon machines except the Cygonairs looked surprised at the differently colored MetalSeadramon who had just come out of the sea's surface. "ChaosMetalSeadramon!" said MegaSeadramon as he looked at the huge ChaosMetalSeadramon. "MegaSeadramon... GigaSeadramon... You look beaten up" said ChaosMetalSeadramon. "We were fighting this machine, ChaosLord..." said MegaSeadramon. "ChaosLord..." said ChaosMetalSeadramon, as he looked at ChaosLord. "I knew I would find you here" he continued. "And how did you know that?" said ChaosLord. "I know everything!" said ChaosMetalSeadramon confidently. "So, you are the famous machine who defeated MetalMewtwo. And on top of that, you managed to survive GAIA's attack and a lot of other fights and still make your way here. Interesting" he continued. "But, this little game of yours has just reached its end. Cygonairs, eliminate him" said ChaosMetalSeadramon. "Okay, ChaosMetalSeadramon" said a Cygonair. Then all the Cygonairs formed a wall and looked at ChaosLord, who was standing still waiting for their move. "Charge!" said all the Cygonairs together, and then the sphere parts on their necks all started to glow in a bright light! The light became blindingly bright, and then all the Cygonairs pointed their horns at ChaosLord. "Thousand Beam!" said all the Cygonairs together then, and then suddenly all one thousand Cygonairs fired a Hyper Beam each at ChaosLord! The Hyper Beams were huge and they all headed at ChaosLord with extreme speed like a single enormous beam! Some sea dragons in the area had to move out of the way, as the one thousand Hyper Beams landed right on ChaosLord, covering him entirely in their energy and pushing him diagonially downwards to the ground, hitting him hard there and causing an extremely massive explosion! The explosion also blew away some sea dragon machines who were caught in its huge range, and then the entire place was filled with dust! ChaosMetalSeadramon, the Cygonairs and the rest metal sea dragons watched as the dust faded away, revealing a huge crater that had been created by the explosion. But suddenly, they were surprised to see ChaosLord still standing on his feet in the center of the crater! "So, you were able to survive yet another powerful attack. You are tougher than I thought... But how much more will you last?" said ChaosMetalSeadramon. "Forever" said ChaosLord. "Hmph. At this point, I should let the machines beat you, but I guess I'll take care of you, myself" said ChaosMetalSeadramon. Then he flew up in the air, partially covering the Moon-like planet from ChaosLord's perspective, and said "I, the toughest Chaos General, the great ChaosMetalSeadramon, will crush you!". "I'd love to let you try..." said ChaosLord, and then he suddenly teleported and appeared right next to ChaosMetalSeadramon, with his cannons pointing at his body! "But I'm actually not here for you. Goodbye" said ChaosLord, and then he suddenly used Hyper Cannon at point-blank range! A huge explosion happened, blasting both ChaosLord and ChaosMetalSeadramon back at huge speeds! ChaosLord used his psychic powers to stop his flight quickly, while ChaosMetalSeadramon was blasted away, and flew for some distance until he fell into the ocean in a huge splash! Then all the machines and ChaosLord, who was hovering above them, watched as some waves were travelling across the water's surface from the place where ChaosMetalSeadramon had fell in, but ChaosMetalSeadramon was nowhere to be seen! "Now, machines, that Chaos General of yours certainly was tough. I am actually surprised he did not get shattered to pieces instantly after getting hit at point-blank range by my Hyper Cannon. Even so, I doubt he is in any condition to battle after that..." said ChaosLord, as he looked at the location on the sea where ChaosMetalSeadramon had fallen. "Do not underestimate ChaosMetalSeadramon. This attack was actually nothing to him" said GigaSeadramon. "What did you say?" said ChaosLord, as he looked at GigaSeadramon with his left eye. Suddenly, a whirlpool appeared in the sea, and then the whielpool extended above the sea's surface and flew up in the air while still being connected to the sea! ChaosLord and the machines then all watched as the whirlpool suddenly exploded, and out of it came ChaosMetalSeadramon, without a single scratch on his body! His metal was shiny and clear as if he had not been damaged at all by ChaosLord's attack! ChaosLord was surprised to see that, while the other machines smiled to see the Chaos General hovering in the air above the sea, facing ChaosLord and smiling as he was in perfect condition! "Such defense... This machine..." said ChaosLord. But suddenly he was interrupted by ChaosMetalSeadramon, who said "What's wrong? You didn't really think this gentle wave of energy you blasted at me would actually hurt me, did you?". "I'll show you how to do a proper attack!" he continued, as some yellow energy became visible inside his nose-cannon! "Hyper Beam!" said ChaosMetalSeadramon then, as he blasted an unbelievably huge Hyper Beam at ChaosLord! ChaosLord flew up and avoided the attack, while the Hyper Beam kept going and hit the ground, blowing it up in a huge explosion, and creating a crater that was twice as large as the one that had been created by the Cygonairs' Thousand Beam previously! "He's more powerful than all of those Cygonairs together..." said ChaosLord, as he looked at the huge crater ChaosMetalSeadramon's Hyper Beam had created. "Hm!" said ChaosMetalSeadramon with a confident look on his face as he looked at ChaosLord. "You said you would last forever previously... are you starting to have second thoughts?" said ChaosMetalSeadramon. Suddenly, ChaosLord smiled as he heard than. Then he looked into ChaosMetalSeadramon's eyes. "I like your confidence, ChaosMetalSeadramon. You certainly seem strong. However, let me tell you this. Not even one such as you can defeat me, ChaosLord..." said ChaosLord, and then he suddenly teleported to the right of ChaosMetalSeadramon, who widened his eyes as he saw ChaosLord disappearing! "...the Ultimate organism!!" said ChaosLord excitedly as he suddenly delivered an unbelievably powerful kick on ChaosMetalSeadramon's body! ChaosMetalSeadramon was sent flying diagonially downwards towards the ground by ChaosLord's kick, and he hit the ground with extreme speed and force! ChaosMetalSeadramon slid on his body very fast, creating a huge cloud of dust as he slid on the ground, and then he fell in a small forest and started bringing down many trees on his way! After destroying more than a hundred trees while sliding, ChaosMetalSeadramon stopped in the forest, having raised a huge cloud of dust on his way. The sea dragon machines watched at the dust in the forest, and then suddenly they were all surprised to see ChaosMetalSeadramon emerging from it, jumping upwards at ChaosLord! ChaosMetalSeadramon flew diagonially up at ChaosLord and slammed him with his huge tail. ChaosLord blocked the attack with his right arm, however he was still pushed backwards in the air. ChaosMetalSeadramon then flew with extreme speed and wrapped his body around ChaosLord, starting to squeeze him! Then ChaosLord used Explosion, creating a massive explosion around his body, which was wrapped by ChaosMetalSeadramon! However, the explosion was nothing to ChaosMetalSeadramon, who kept ChaosLord wrapped in his long body despite the huge force of the attack! ChaosMetalSeadramon then pointed his nose-cannon right above ChaosLord's head, and then he blasted an enormous Hyper Beam at point-blank range! The Hyper Beam was of unimaginable power, shaking the entire atmosphere around because of its power! At the same time as he fired the Hyper Beam from above ChaosLord, ChaosMetalSeadramon also let go of him, letting him get blasted downwards at the sea by the enormous beam of yellow energy! ChaosLord was blasted down at the sea by the Hyper Beam, and then he fell inside it in a gigantic splash, which sent large tidal waves towards all directions! The Hyper Beam also pushed ChaosLord down to the bottom of the sea, and then after ChaosLord hit the sand at the bottom the Hyper Beam pushed him even more and buried him deep underground! Above the sea, ChaosMetalSeadramon flew and watched his Hyper Beam disappearing into the sea, which, after the huge tidal waves that had been caused, started to calm down slowly. The other sea dragon machines watched that too from out in the land, where they still were after ChaosLord had thrown them out. "Wow... that guy took a Hyper Beam from ChaosMetalSeadramon at point-blank range... and he actually survived!" said a Seadramon. "Well, he did say he was the Ultimate organism. It would have had been disappointing if he had been destroyed instantly by the beam. I wonder if he can come out of there though, after such a powerful attack" said WaruSeadramon. The sea dragon machines and ChaosMetalSeadramon then waited a bit, watching the sea calm down as they waited for ChaosLord to come out. However, ChaosLord was nowhere to be seen. "So it seems that was it. The so-called Ultimate organism died by a single Hyper Beam" said ChaosMetalSeadramon. "I guess it's time to get going then. Let's go, machines!" said ChaosMetalSeadramon, as he turned around ready to leave. But suddenly, he barely noticed two yellow lights from the depth of the ocean. Then an earthquake happened and the entire sea started to tremble, and then two huge Solar Beams came out of the water in two huge splashes and flew straight up at ChaosMetalSeadramon! The Solar Beams were extremely powerful and they had opened two holes in the sea as they travelled from its bottom to its surface because of their massive energy! ChaosMetalSeadramon got hit with huge force from below by the Solar Beams, which blasted him upwards at the sky at incredible speed! ChaosMetalSeadramon got lost in the clouds in front of the amazed sea dragon machines' eyes, and then ChaosLord emerged from the sea before them in a large splash! The machines all looked at him surprised as he had no signs of harm by ChaosMetalSeadramon's previous Hyper Beam! "Impossible! Such endurance and power... you can fight evenly with ChaosMetalSeadramon!" said an Ebidramon. "Actually, you should be surprised that ChaosMetalSeadramon is even able to stand against me for such a long time" said ChaosLord. "Don't overestimate yourself!" everyone heard a voice from above then. Then ChaosLord and the machines looked and saw ChaosMetalSeadramon descending from the clouds, where he had ended up by ChaosLord's attack. "Even if your power is so great... you should know that it still is not enough!" said ChaosMetalSeadramon, as he hovered in the air and his body seemed to be unharmed by ChaosLord's attack! "Such impressive endurance! But I wonder how a being of the sea such as you will defend against electricity" said ChaosLord, as he aimed at ChaosMetalSeadramon with his cannons and used Zap Cannon. Two huge bolts of electricity flew off ChaosLord's cannons at ChaosMetalSeadramon, hitting him in two shocking explosions, which zapped ChaosMetalSeadramon's entire body! ChaosMetalSeadramon closed his eyes as electricity was sparking all over his body, while ChaosLord looked at this with a smile on his face. Suddenly, ChaosMetalSeadramon opened up his eyes, and then all the electricity on his body disappeared! "So even electricity has no effect. I guess you wouldn't be calling yourself the toughest Chaos General if you had a weakness such as that" said ChaosLord, as he looked at ChaosMetalSeadramon, who had received no damage from the Zap Cannon! "Well then..." said ChaosLord, as he suddenly teleported! "Let's see if this will work" said ChaosLord, and then ChaosMetalSeadramon felt ChaosLord grabbing his body with his right claw from behind! "Extermination Hold!" said ChaosLord as he fired a Hyper Beam from his right arm at ChaosMetalSeadramon! The Beam was fired at point-blank range since ChaosLord was holding ChaosMetalSeadramon with his claw, however it did no damage! "Hahaha!" laughed ChaosLord as he then blasted flames from his right claw, setting a part of ChaosMetalSeadramon's body on fire! Then he also started blasting electricity on ChaosMetalSeadramon's body, while he fired some Solar Beams at the same time! ChaosMetalSeadramon turned and faced ChaosLord, and then he tried to slam him with his tail from behind, but ChaosLord blocked with his own tail! ChaosMetalSeadramon then blasted some flames at ChaosLord from his mouth, setting him entorely on fire! However, ChaosLord kept laughing and performing point-blank range at ChaosMetalSeadramon, ignoring the fire! Then he also raised his cannons and aimed at ChaosMetalSeadramon's head, firing two Hyper Beams at him! The beams hit ChaosMetalSeadramon's face in an explosion, and as soon as the explosion's dust faded away ChaosMetalSeadramon saw ChaosLord also using Fire Blast on his face with his cannons! "What do you... think you're doing?" said ChaosMetalSeadramon, as the stream of flames was flying on his head. ChaosLord then stopped using Fire Blast and did another Double Hyper Beam attack from his cannons, hitting ChaosMetalSeadramon's face again. "Ha!" said ChaosLord then, and he was ready to use another attack from his cannons. "Enough!" said ChaosMetalSeadramon, as he looked at ChaosLord angrily and blasted a Hyper Beam from his nose-cannon, hitting ChaosLord from close and blasting him away. ChaosMetalSeadramon then shook his body, removing some electricity and flames which were covering it from ChaosLord's previous attacks. Then he looked and saw ChaosLord flying at him with his spinning arm-drill! ChaosMetalSeadramon immedtately waved his attack at ChaosLord's right hand, making him miss his attack. Then ChaosLord also tried to stab his left claw on ChaosMetalSeadramon. But ChaosMetalSeadramon waved his tail at this attack as well, stopping it, and then he downward slammed his tail at ChaosLord, hitting him hard and pushing him back for some distance. ChaosLord then aimed his cannons at ChaosMetalSeadramon and blasted two Hyper Beams at him, but ChaosMetalSeadramon furiously waved his tail at both of the beams, dispersing them in the air! "Quit it already! Your attacks have no effect!" said ChaosMetalSeadramon, as he fired a Hyper Beam from his nose-cannon at ChaosLord. ChaosLord then placed his left claw as a shield, letting it get hit by the beam, which got deflected and fell into the sea in a huge splash which also threw some sea machines out of the water and then they fell back in again. "Your attacks aren't having any effect either" said ChaosLord. "Is that so? Try this!" said ChaosMetalSeadramon then, as he waved his tail to the left. Then a huge tidal wave was created to the left of ChaosLord and it hit him! "I got you now, ChaosLord!" said ChaosMetalSeadramon, and then he looked at the tidal wave in which ChaosLord was in, and his eyes turned ice blue for a second! Then, the tidal wave of water turned to ice, along with a large part of the sea around it! ChaosLord was trapped in the ice, and all the sea dragon machines at the land watched with amazement at the frozen tidal wave in which he was traped in. "It's over!" said ChaosMetalSeadramon then as he flew above the frozen tidal wave, and then he slammed his tail hard at it, shattering it entirely to pieces! The pieces of ice all fell into the water, and then they floated close to each on the water's surface, while ChaosLord was nowhere to be seen.



Author:   Dragon Swordsman
Date:   Oct 07, 07 at 2:38am (PST)
Subject:   re: Make your own Pokemon Stories
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Chapter 56: The Gates of Hell


"It seems most of you had your lives taken away by either a crowd of people trying to promote ChaosLord as their God, a seadragon or a pierrot with swords, am I correct?" said Fred, and then everyone nodded. "It's obvious that this is all ChaosLord's doing in an attempt to be recognized by everyone as their God. But the fact that you guys all made it here proves that you do not acknowledge ChaosLord" said Fred. "Hm? How do you know?" asked a man. Then Fred said "Judging from what I've heard from some of you, there have already been many people in the living world who were brainwashed into believing that ChaosLord is really their God. If you were one of those people, then you would not be sent here to Heaven by the Shinigami or whatever being of Heaven who sent you here. Instead, you would have been sent to Hell instead".

Meanwhile, in the living world, it was just early morning in the region which used to be covered by the black barrier before. At the city with the ancient, wooden buildings and the two towers, to the West of the lake where ChaosBlackWarGreymon fought with Lance before, there were hundreds of corpses everywhere, and many houses and other buildings were destroyed due to all the fighting which went on in the city, which was now filled with dust due to all the chaos earlier, and even now, some people were still fighting within the city! "Haaaaa!" a Japanese man screamed his battle cry as he jumped at a black man, trying to kick him while flying, but the black man blocked the kick with his right arm. Then he tried to punch the Japanese man in the stomach with his left fist, but the Japanese man jumped back and avoided the attack. "Haa!" the Japanese man then screamed again as he did a 360 spin, ending it with a horizontal backhand slap, trying to hit the black man across the face with his right hand, but the black man blocked the attack with his right arm. "For PokéGod ChaosLord!" said the black man as he punched the Japanese man in the side of his stomach hard, knocking him back. Then the black man did a spin kick which landed straight in the Japanese person's right cheek, knocking him down. Then he was about to kick the Japanese man while he was down, but then a man with short blonde hair and wearing sunglasses went behind the black man and smashed him across the back of the head hard with a baseball bat, knocking him out, and then the blonde man said "Go fuck your ChaosLord!" as he stomped the black man in the neck, killing him.

At the same time, the souls of many dead people were wandering around the town where the black man, the Japanese man and the blonde man were, although the few living people in that town were completely unaware of the existance of those dead souls, as they could not be seen or heard by those among the living. "Man, what the hell's happening? Are we dead?" asked the soul of a muscular man with short, spiky purple hair as he walked at a house and passed right through it, ending up at the other side of the house! "It seems we are... After all, we can go straight through walls and shit... and we can't even interact with this world..." said the soul of another muscular man, who had long red hair tied in a ponytail as he tried to punch the blonde man, who had just killed the black man, but the red-haired man's fist just went straight through the blonde man's body without doing anything! Then the purple-haired man walked up to the blonde-haired man, put his mouth right up to the blonde man's right ear and shouted in a loud voice, "Hey, y'know what, you stupid blasphemous piece a' shit?! Fuck you! How fucking difficult is it to accept ChaosLord as God, you stupid shitmuncher?! How stupid can you be?! Have you ever seen Kyuutsune, Kylorados, Exrai, Hinakaze, Magmegalosaurus or Dragonaurus in real life? Are there any actual proof that they're real? How do you know that the story of the Ancient Pokémon War is even real and not just some made up shit, you imbecile? Oh noes, you don't. And the Pokémon Gods aren't real. The only God who's real is PokéGod ChaosLord because he actually appeared before us less than a week ago! Fuck you! Fuck your crappy Pokémon Gods!", but the blonde man couldn't even hear him at all and just kept walking as if nothing had happened! At the same time, the soul of a thin boy wearing a black hat backwards, a pink shirt and white shorts was watching. "Man, this guy's really starting to piss me off" said the boy. Then the soul of a pink-haired girl with large green eyes and wearing a red dress, who was standing next to the boy said "But I think we should be more worried about what happened to us rather than those people...". Just then, three Shinigami started entering the city, although the few people who were still alive could not see them. "It looks like there are some more souls here to be buried..." said a Shinigami with spiky blonde hair and green eyes as he and two other Shinigami who were with him pulled out their swords and each approached the soul of a dead person in the town. "Yeah, but it's just funny to see those people thinking they're right and everyone else are wrong..." said the thin boy as he looked at the girl next to him. Then suddenly, two Shinigami walked up to the two kids. "Huh?" said the boy as he stepped back, while the two Shinigami each hit one of the kids. "Alright, children, it's time to leave this world..." said one if the Shinigami, and then they both tapped the children on the forehead with the hilt of their sword, and then the two kids both dissapeared in a flash of blue light.

Meanwhile, the purple-haired man followed the blonde man who was walking away from him. "Hey, are you deaf? I'm tellin' you that no one's ever proven that Kyuutsune, Kylorados, Exrai, Hinakaze, Magmegalosaurus or Dragonaurus are real before! Therefore, they don't exist!". But then suddenly, the purple-haired man heard a voice coming from the side. "Did you hold that belief even before you started causing all the chaos here?" "Hm?" said the purple-haired man as he looked and saw the blonde-haired Shinigami walking towards him, with his sword over his shoulder. "I asked... did you doubt the existance of the Pokémon Gods even before you arrived at this city and started beating up the citizens?" said the Shinigami. "Yeah, so what? PokéGod ChaosLord's already proven his own existence! Why should I believe in any other God?" said the purple-haired man. "So... It looks like someone's going to Hell after all..." said the Shinigami. "What...!" said the purple-haired man. "Well, atleast I can send someone to Hell this time while knowing what I'm about to do... I just hate being surprised every time I perform the Soul Burial on someone and then the Gates of Hell just pops up out of nowhere in my face..." said the Shinigami. "Who are you?" asked the purple-haired man as he looked at the Shinigami. "I am... a Shinigami" said the Shinigami. "Shi...Shinigami? And who's going to hell?" said the purple-haired man as he stepped back. "Those who have committed sins... and that includes those who have committed blasphemy against the Pokémon Gods. And to be more specific about who I am, my name is Rai... Just to let you know the name of the man who will be sending you to Hell..." said the Shinigami, known as Rai as he smiled while he pointed the blade of his sword at the purple-haired man. "A Shinigami? Send me to hell? Hah! Don't fuckin' mess with me!" said the purple-haired man as he charged at Rai and tried to punch him, but Rai calmly swung his left hand at the purple-haired man, and then Rai's hand hit the side of the purple-haired man's arm, sending him flying high up in the air, and then he landed on the ground much further away. "G-Guh... What the hell..." said the purple-haired man as he got up and looked at Rai. Then suddenly, the purple-haired man gasped as he saw Rai dissapearing out of his sight, and then he suddenly reappeared right next to the man! "What!" said the purple-haired man as he looked at Rai, while many souls around the town were looking at Rai surprised. "Wait, I can get hit again...? I thought I had just gained the ability to go through walls..." said the purple-haired man, looking surprised as he looked at Rai. "You can still go through walls... But what makes it so that I can't hit you? After all, you are a spirit, and I am also a spirit" said Rai as he raised his sword. "STOP!" said the purple-haired man, but Rai ignored him and hit him on the forehead with the hilt of his blade. Immediately after that, a gigantic purple gate with a huge skeleton attached to each of the two doors of the gate appeared behind the purple-haired man. "What's that's?!" said the purple-haired man, looking shocked and frightened as he noticed the shadow of the gate covering him, and then he immediately turned around and saw the huge, creepy gate standing before him! "They're... the Gates of Hell..." said Rai as he, the purple-haired man and all the other souls in the city watched as the two skeletons attached to the two doors of the gates pulled the gates open, revealing some bright red light and a strong wind coming from inside the gate! The red light was so bright that it covered half of the city, and there were also two chains forming an "x" inside the gate. Then suddenly, a gigantic hand holding an equally large sword came out of the Gates of Hell and stabbed straight through the purple-haired man's stomach! "Aaaaarrghhhh!" the purple-haired man screamed in pain as the gigantic hand holding the sword started retreating back into the Gates of Hell, while carrying the the purple-haired man along with it! All the souls in the city watched stunned as the bright red light coming from the Gates of Hell was shining on their faces, while the purple-haired man was being dragged into the Gates of Hell!

Meanwhile, another Gates of Hell also opened up at another location. It was in the destroyed town where ChaosBlackWarGreymon fought with Team Rocket before. Most of the buildings in this town had already been burnt to the ground, but there were still some fire covering some of the buildings. There were the souls of many dead Rocket Grunts, Koffing, Weezing, Rattata, Raticate, Zubat, Golbat and other Pokémon standing around the city, looking at the Gates of Hell, while the soul of the purple-haired Team Rocket member with the Houndoom who ChaosBlackWarGreymon killed before was impaled by a large hand holding a sword coming out of the Gates of Hell! "Th-The Gates... of Hell, you say?" said the man as he looked at a female Shinigami with long, light purple hair and large purple eyes. Then the Shinigami said "As its name implies, it is the gate which leads to Hell. I'm sorry to be the one who'll send you there, but I'm just doing my job as a Shinigami". "Guh... B... But why am I going there?" asked the purple-haired Rocket. "When I perform the Soul Burial, I don't decide whether the soul goes to Heaven or Hell. That is decided by how much you've sinned in your life. By joining this Team Rocket organization, you probably know you've done a lot of wrong things... right?" said the Shinigami. Then the souls of the other Rockets who were in the town looked at the Shinigami angrily, and one of them said "So basically, you'll perform that Soul Burial on us as well and we'll go to Hell too?". "I don't know... Most likely..." said the Shinigami. "D-Don't fuckin' screw with us!" said the Rocket, and then he and all the other souls in the town, who were Team Rocket Grunts started charging at the Shinigami angrily. Then the Shinigami winked as she turned around and looked at all the souls charging at her, and then suddenly, she radiated a huge amount of sea-blue spirit energy from her body, which hit all the souls when they got close to her, knocking them all away! The spirit energy also sent many rocks flying out of the ground! "Aaaaarrgghh!" the Rockets screamed as they got sent flying back by the girl's spirit energy. "Dammit! What the hell's with this chick? She knocked us all back without even moving?!" said a Rocket as he was on the ground. Then the purple-haired Rocket, who was about to be dragged into Hell, looked at the Shinigami and said "A... And what will happen to me once I get to Hell...?". "I have no idea, since I don't know your life. But once you get there, you'll eventually meet a man named Yama, who will judge you based on the sins you've committed. And then I assume you'll be given an appropriate punishments for the wrongs you've done..." said the Shinigami. "F-Fuck! G-Get me down now!" said the man as he struggled to try and free himself from the sword impaling him, but he was just causing himself more pain! "Sorry" said the Shinigami as she closed her eyes. "Aaaaaaarrrgghhhh!" the man screamed as he got dragged into the Gates of Hell, which then closed and dissapears. All the other Rockets were then looking at the Shinigami, shocked. "Are you guys ready?" said the Shinigami as she turned around and looked at the Rockets, who were trembling in fear.

Meanwhile, back in the town where Rai was, the purple-haired man also got dragged into the Gates of Hell, which closed and dissapeared too. "Alright, time to clean up the rest of the souls here..." said Rai as he walked towards some more souls, ready to perform the Soul Burial on them.

Meanwhile, Liquidman was flying towards the East. Then he noticed the Lightning Temple, as well as a huge mountain with a waterfall coming out of it and leading into a river before him. "That's... the Lightning Temple..." said Liquidman as he looked at the Lightning Temple. "So that must mean Moku Village and the Shinigami Cave are just South-East from here..." he continued as he kept flying.

Meanwhile, Ryuumaru was still in front of his computer, with Dragonaurus, Rika and his six Pokémon. "It seems I've lost sight of that liquid android..." said Ryuumaru as he was scrolling around the screen, which was displaying a long, mountainous route in the living world. "What should we do?" asked Rika. "It doesn't matter. We should focus on the case regarding the machines who Kuroi is currently researching on right now" said Ryuumaru. "In any case, you guys should return to your PokéBalls for now" he continued as he looked at his six Pokémon, and then he returned each of them to their PokéBalls. Then he looked at Rika and said "Rika, after Kuroi returns to give his report, I'll most likely have to leave this world again. When I do, can you please monitor the living world using this WorldMap program to make sure nothing else strange is happening there?". "Okay" said Rika.

Meanwhile, at the place where Fred was in Heaven, a man looked at Fred and said "I see... so had we sinned too much during our time on Earth, we would've been sent to Hell...". "And all those guys who were supporting ChaosLord were sent to Hell?" asked a woman. "That's right" said Fred. Then a man said "Wait, if this is Heaven, then where are the Pokémon Gods? Do they live here too?". Then Fred said "Well, of the six Pokémon Gods, only one of them lives in Heaven, and that is Lord Dragonaurus. As for the other five, they actually live deep inside their respective temples in the Pokéia Region", and then everyone were surprised. "Really? So... if we go deep inside the Fire Temple in Pokéia, we could actually meet Lord Kyuutsune? Cool!" said a boy. "So, where does Lord Dragonaurus live? I want to see him!" said a girl. Then Fred said "Well actually, you can't... because the place where Lord Dragonaurus lives is actually forbidden for all everyone in Heaven except for the Shinigami, angels and Holy Creatures. Well actually, since you guys are newcomers here to Heaven, I think I should first explain to you how Heaven works". "Wait, never mind, Fred. I'll explain it for them. I think I know enough already to explain" said Ben as he stepped forward. "Alright then, I'll let you explain, Ben" said Fred as he smiled at Ben. "H-Hey, you... you're Ben... the boy who got hit by that mysterious flying needle in Airport City in the Chaos Region, right? You know, when all the flames mysteriously fell on the city?" said a man. "Wait, come to think of it, that's right... You're that boy from Airport City who died from that needle coming down from the sky, right?" said a woman. "Hm? How do you know?" asked Ben. "I remember you... I saw you on the news once back on Earth..." said another boy. "Wow, so despite the fact that you no longer live on Earth, I guess you're quite famous there, Ben..." said Fred. "Heh" Ben laughed. "So I guess this boy only came here to Heaven recently..." said a man. "So anyway, about Heaven, right..." said Ben as he looked at everyone before him...

To be continued




Author:   OverLord of Chaos
Date:   Oct 08, 07 at 1:34pm (PST)
Subject:   ...
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Here is the newest part of my story. Just in case this is not clear, the move where ChaosMetalSeadramon spins around himself and forms a whirlpool around him is the same as that Lugia does in this video.

The machine arc, Part 8: Battle of Endurance

"That's what you get for challenging me, the great Chaos General, ChaosMetalSeadramon!" said ChaosMetalSeadramon, as he watched the pieces of ice floating on the water. "What are you talking about?" he heard a voice from behind him then. "Huh?" said ChaosMetalSeadramon as he turned to see who had spoken, but no one was there! "I'm here" he then heard a voice from behind him again. ChaosMetalSeadramon once again turned to see who had spoken, but once again he saw nothing! "What is..." said ChaosMetalSeadramon, and then he suddenly got his body slashed from nowhere! ChaosMetalSeadramon widened his eyes in surprise, and then suddenly he started getting slashed at many parts of his body at an incredible rate! In just six seconds, over a thousand invisible slashes had hit him, and ChaosMetalSeadramon hovered back a bit out of reaction. "What is going on?" said ChaosMetalSeadramon. "Surprise" he heard a voice from behind him then, and then he looked and saw ChaosLord pointing at his face with his open right arm! ChaosLord then blasted a Hyper Beam on his face at point-blank range, blasting him back in an explosion! "Argh! You..." said ChaosMetalSeadramon, as he flew back a bit and then stopped. "That was a teleportation technique, wasn't it?" said ChaosMetalSeadramon. "Exactly. But unlike normal teleportation, my technique allows me to attack during it as well" said ChaosLord. "So pointless and annoying. I'll crush you" said ChaosMetalSeadramon. "You'll have to catch me first!" said ChaosLord, as he teleported again and slashed ChaosMetalSeadramon at the stomach! "This little trick... it won't work anymore!" said ChaosMetalSeadramon, as suddenly his body got surrounded by a thick yellow energy! "Energy Blast!" he said then in a loud voice, and then many huge beams of yellow energy brightly exploded out of his body and headed towards all directions around him! The explosion of the beams was so powerful that it shook the entire atmosphere, the sea and the land! Some of the beams ChaosMetalSeadramon unleashed fell in the sea, causing enormous tidal waves, some fell on the beach, causing gigantic explosions and craters and raising huge amounts of dust, and others just flew up in the sky and dispersed any clouds they came in contact with! Some of the beams also hit some machines nearby, damaging them badly in some huge explosions! Also, one of the beams hit ChaosLord at point-blank range while he was just about to attack ChaosMetalSeadramon! The beam blasted ChaosLord away and threw him into the sea in a huge splash! "There you are!" said ChaosMetalSeadramon as he saw that, and then he dived after ChaosLord! ChaosLord was travelling diagonially downwards and backwards in the sea, and then he saw ChaosMetalSeadramon diving in the water after him and charging at him! Immediately, he aimed his cannons at ChaosMetalSeadramon and fired two torpedoes at him, but ChaosMetalSeadramon dived head-first at them, letting them explode on him and then he continued swimming normally as if nothing had happened! Then he wrapped around ChaosLord's body, while at the same time he froze the water around ChaosLord solid, trapping him in the ice! ChaosMetalSeadramon then squeezed the ice in which ChaosLord had been trapped in, trying to shatter it along with ChaosLord. The ice then got shattered, but ChaosLord wasn't! ChaosLord then smiled as he pointed his right arm upwards, and then he spinned it extremely fast, forming a huge whirlpool! In the center of the whirlpool were ChaosLord and ChaosMetalSeadramon, who had wrapped his body with his own body, and they started spinning fast around themselves! "What are you..." said ChaosMetalSeadramon, as he was spinning around together with ChaosLord! "Hahahahaha!" laughed ChaosLord excitedly as he then unleashed a massive amount of electricity from his entire body, filling the entire whirlpool with it! ChaosMetalSeadramon then widened his eyes as he watched ChaosLord laugh, while they were both spinning extremely fast in the whirlpool and getting electrified at the same time! ChaosMetalSeadramon then let go of ChaosLord and swam out of the whirlpool, and then he stood far and watched it spin underwater and filled with electricity, while ChaosLord was still in its center! The whirlpool spinned for a while and then it exploded, and many bubbles flew to the sea's surface as they revealed ChaosLord standing, with an evil smile on his face, looking at ChaosMetalSeadramon. "Something's wrong with you! You're crazy. Why did you use such an attack even though it also affected you?" said ChaosMetalSeadramon. "I'm crazy?" said ChaosLord. "No... I'm just... Invincible!!" he continued, as he suddenly dived at ChaosMetalSeadramon with huge speed, and with a huge smile of excitement on his face! Then he tried to stab ChaosMetalSeadramon with his left claw, but ChaosMetalSeadramon blocked with his tail, and then ChaosLord started attacking ChaosMetalSeadramon with stabs of his left claw and drill attacks of his left hand, although ChaosMetalSeadramon was either dodging or blocking every attack. "How'd you survive all those attacks without a scratch... How you can still battle as if you haven't even been tired at all... You're the strongest opponent I've come across so far, ChaosMetalSeadramon!" said ChaosLord, smiling and looking at ChaosMetalSeadramon excitedly. Then he used Chaos Cannon on ChaosMetalSeadramon, blasting two yellow energy beams at him, hitting him in a powerful explosion of energy. However, ChaosMetalSeadramon still seemed unharmed! "Your endurance is indeed as impressive as you said! I wonder how you could reach such a high level of power... but for now, that doesn't matter! For now, let's enjoy this fight!" said ChaosLord, as he excitedly looked into ChaosMetalSeadramon's eyes. ChaosMetalSeadramon then dived fast at ChaosLord and tried to slash him with his the blade-horn on his head, but ChaosLord moved to the back and avoided the attack. ChaosMetalSeadramon then kept going, and he started swimming fast in circles around ChaosLord, forming a huge whirlpool around him! ChaosMetalSeadramon started to swim extrenely fast in the whirlpool, in speed which the eye could not follow! Then, as he swam around ChaosLord, he started to occasionally slash him with his blade-horn! "Hahahahahaha!" laughed ChaosLord as ChaosMetalSeadramon's horn slashes harmlessly sparked off his metal body. Then a thick, powerful yellow energy surrounded ChaosLord, who then used Energy Blast! Energy beams flew off ChaosLord's body towards all directions around him, destroying the whirlpool that was surrounding him and also hitting ChaosMetalSeadramon and pushing him until he hit a large rock and crushed it to pieces. The machines outside the water watched as the sea's surface shook very much when ChaosLord used Energy Blast, and then they also saw some yellow energy beams flying out of ChaosMetalSeadramon's whirlpool, destroying it in the process, and heading to the sky at a high speed! "A huge battle must be going on down there... I have to see this!" said a Cygonair. "I wouldn't do this if I were you. Do you want to get hit by another Energy Blast?" said a Seadramon. "Uh... I guess that's right... the power of those two will obliterate anything that gets close..." said Cygonair. The machines then kept watching at the sea from outside. Under the water, ChaosLord was facing ChaosMetalSeadramon, who was getting up from the sand of the sea's bottom after ChaosLord's last attack. ChaosMetalSeadramon looked at ChaosLord with an angry look on his eyes. "What's wrong? Don't tell me you can't continue battling" said ChaosLord. "This... will never happen!" said ChaosMetalSeadramon, as he swam up and started spinning around his body with unbelieveble speed, forming a huge whirlpool around himself! ChaosMetalSeadramon then dived at ChaosLord, and the whirlpool around his body took the shape of a drill! ChaosLord placed his left claw in front of him as a shield, and ChaosMetalSeadramon crashed on him with huge force, and started to push him backwards fast! ChaosMetalSeadramon's whirlpool drill spinned against ChaosLord's left claw with huge force, and ChaosLord was pushed at the sea's bottom and crashed through several large rocks, smashing them all to pieces! ChaosMetalSeadramon then spinned even faster and pushed ChaosLord even harder, and ChaosLord raised his right arm too as protection! ChaosMetalSeadramon then pushed ChaosLord diagonially upwards in the sea, until he pushed him out of it in a huge splash! But even after that, ChaosMetalSeadramon furiously continued his whirlpool drill attack, which extended out of the sea while still being connected to it and pushed ChaosLord unpwards towards the sky! ChaosLord pushed hard with both his hands against ChaosMetalSeadramon, but ChaosMetalSeadramon pushed even harder and carried ChaosLord towards a mountain! "This is it! Goodbye, ChaosLord!!" said ChaosMetalSeadramon then in a loud voice, as he pushed with all his power against ChaosLord, breaking through his hand defenses! Then he fired a Hyper Beam at him while his guard was down, hitting him at the chest from point-blank range! In the moment ChaosMetalSeadramon fired his Hyper Beam, a massive amount of energy radiated from his body, which dispersed the entire whirlpool which was around him into a huge rain of water drops! ChaosLord was hit by the beam with extreme force, and he was blasted flying back towards a mountain by the beam with incredible speed! He then crashed on the mountain, decimating entirely, and then he fell on another mountain behind the previous mountain, decimating it as well! The two mountains collapsed in a huge cloud of dust, burying ChaosLord beneath their soil and rocks! The sea dragon machines that were on the land watched stunned at the huge cloud of dust, while ChaosMetalSeadramon hovered down at them. "It seems like it's over" said GigaSeadramon, as he watched at the collapsed mountains and the huge amount of dust around them. But suddenly, all the machines were surprised to see ChaosLord appearing from inside the dust, slightly hovering above the ground surrounded by a round barrier of psychic energy! "Hahahahaha..." laughed ChaosLord quietly with his eyes closed, as he landed on the ground and the shield around him disappeared. ChaosLord also didn't have a scratch on his body! "Impossible! Just how powerful is he?" said a Cygonair in surprise. ChaosMetalSeadramon then started flying at ChaosLord to continue the battle. "ChaosMetalSeadramon... can he win?" said a Seadramon. "This is a battle of endurance. Of course he'll win!" said MegaSeadramon. ChaosMetalSeadramon then flew close to ChaosLord, an an ice-blue aura started to appear around his body, while his eyes also turned ice blue. "Sheer Cold!" said ChaosMetalSeadramon as he reached right in front of ChaosLord! "Overheat" said ChaosLord at the same time, as an orange flame-like aura appeared around his body! Then, a massive explosion of freezing cold happened at ChaosMetalSeadramon's side, while an incredible explosion of heat happened on ChaosLord's side! The explosions collided, and they were equal in force, cancelling each other out in the area between ChaosLord and ChaosMetalSeadramon, however the areas behind them were affected by their attacks. An insanely huge area behind ChaosMetalSeadramon turned entirely to ice, while the place behind ChaosLord in a huge range burnt all to ashes and fire by the extrenely hot heat wave ChaosLord had created! The machines then watched as ChaosLord was standing in the huge flames while ChaosMetalSeadramon was hovering above the frozen ground, and they were looking at each other. ChaosMetalSeadramon then used Flamethrower on ChaosLord, and then ChaosLord used Hydro Pump from his right hand to counter his attack. However, ChaosMetalSeadramon froze ChaosLord's Hydro Pump with his powers, and then his flames melted ChaosLord's frozen attack and also hit ChaosLord! ChaosLord took a step back by the extremely hot stream of flames which ChaosMetalSeadramon had blasted at him, but then he stopped and a light blue psychic energy momentarily flashed on his body, putting out the fire. Then ChaosLord aimed his open right arm at ChaosMetalSeadramon and said "Terra Force!". He then formed an enormous sphere of extremely compressed yellow energy, which he blasted at ChaosMetalSeadramon! ChaosLord's attack was incredibly powerful, hitting ChaosMetalSeadramon with incredible force and pushing him flying diagionally upwards towards the north! The energy ball pushed ChaosMetalSeadramon with extreme speed towards the north, for such a huge distance that he reached above the frozen part of the planet at the northest point of the planet! The energy ball then exploded in a massive explosion, and ChaosMetalSeadramon kept flying diagonially upwards for a while, and then he started falling diagonially downwards until he fell on the hard ice on the northest reach of the planet, crashing hard on it and sliding on the slippery ice for a long distance until he hit a small hill of ice and stopped! As he saw that, ChaosLord flew with his cannons as rockets towards the direction where ChaosMetalSeadramon had fallen, and the sea dragon machines who were watching the battle also followed him through the sea. ChaosMetalSeadramon got up from the ground and saw ChaosLord flying at him. Then his eyes shined ice blue and he waved his tail a little, summoning a storm that rained huge ice needles! The ice needles fell from the sky on ChaosLord, but he was only losing a little height. Then ChaosMetalSeadramon shook his tail violently as he increased the power of his attack and the ice needles greatly increased in size, some of them becoming as big as ChaosLord himself! Some huge ice needles fell on ChaosLord, and as they crashed on him with huge force, ChaosLord fell hard on the frozen ground of ChaosPlanet's northest part, cratering it a bit while also raising a mist of snow and ice. "Hahaha..." laughed ChaosLord quietly, as he slowly got up from the ground, facing his opponent. ChaosMetalSeadramon then flew close to ChaosLord, who was smiling evily. ChaosMetalSeadramon then did an upward movement of his tail, and then suddenly a huge mountain of ice emerged from beneath ChaosLord, striking him from below with its pointy top, and it pushed him up fast and sent him flying. As ChaosLord was flying upwards, ChaosMetalSeadramon flew with extreme speed right above him and then he started blasting many sharp icicles from his nose-cannon at him. The icicles all hit him successfully, lowering the speed at which he was flying upwards. ChaosMetalSeadramon then dived at ChaosLord with huge speed, tackling him with huge force and sending him flying downwards, back towards the pointy top of the iceberg he had created previously! Then ChaosMetalSeadramon blasted an incredibly huge blast of water down towards ChaosLord, and then he shaped the water into the form of a large, sharp icicle, and then his eyes shined ice blue for a second, and the icicle-shaped water blast froze and turned into a huge icicle heading towards ChaosLord at huge speed! During all that time, ChaosLord was smiling with his eyes closed, and then he fell right on the pointy top of ChaosMetalSeadramon's iceberg while at the exact same moment the large icicle ChaosMetalSeadramon had blasted at him also hit him from above! ChaosLord was hit from both sides in a crushing explosion of ice and snow, and then some red energy gathered into ChaosMetalSeadramon's nose-cannon, who then blasted a huge laser beam straight down at ChaosLord! The laser beam hit him and pushed him down through the entire iceberg, which then exploded all in a massive explosion of ice and snow, which sent many variously sized and shaped pieces of ice and snow flying outwards towards all directions! The sea dragon machines, who had arrived to the north and were watching the battle, protected themselves from some pieces of ice which flew at them, and then they looked at ChaosMetalSeadramon flying in the air, with a frozen mist covering the area below him, where the iceberg used to be. The mist faded away, and everyone saw ChaosLord still standing in the center of a huge crater in the ice ground, but he was unharmed!

This message was edited by OverLord of Chaos on Oct 10 2007.



Author:   Dragon Swordsman
Date:   Oct 09, 07 at 2:19am (PST)
Subject:   re: Make your own Pokemon Stories
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quote OverLord of Chaos
Here is the newest part of my story. Just in case this is not clear, the move where ChaosMetalSeadramon spins around himself and forms a whirlpool around him is the same as that Lugia does in this video.
That's also the same move Dragonaurus used twice against ChaosLord in chapter 22 of my story.

Here is a post I once made on the GameFAQs boards for fun, but it got deleted when someone reported it to a moderator. I'll include this in the Pokémon game which I am making, although it is completely irrelevant to the "Heaven and Chaos Planet" story I'm writing.

After defeating Drag on Dragon Island in the Pokéia region, you can go to the Space Station in Kanbura City, and the scientists there will tell you that they have discovered a new planet in space, which unlike normal planets, does not orbit a star like Earth does. This planet's surface has 33% water and 66% land, and it just floats in the middle of nowhere in space and does not belong to any solar system. Some scientists can take you there on a spaceship.

When you get there, you can explore the planet, which is inhabited by many powerful machine-like beings which you can battle. The planet mainly has mountains and plains, but there is a desert area, an ice-covered area, an ocean which takes up one third of the planet's surface as well as a black forest known as the ChaosGraveyard, which is inhabited by many dark beings such as zombies, skeletons and ghosts. The beings here soon reveal to you that this planet is called ChaosPlanet.

After exploring the planet for a while, you will soon stumble upon the Kernal Zone, where there is a huge black tower with 100 floors known as ChaosTower. Inside ChaosTower there are four machine-like beings, known as ChaosLord and the three Chaos Generals. The Chaos Generals are known as ChaosBlackWarGreymon, ChaosMetalSeadramon and ChaosPiedmon, and they are known as ChaosLord's most trusted subordinates.

On the 25th floor of ChaosTower, you will fight with ChaosBlackWarGreymon, the first of the three Chaos Generals, a powerful, confident, eager, fearless and very experienced warrior who specializes in giving his all into killing the enemy. His Ultimate Attack, Terra Destroyer is extremely strong and has the power to obliterate planets with ease.

ChaosBlackWarGreymon - Chosen Champion

Picture: http://upload.wikimedia.org/wikipedia/en/thumb/7/7e/CBWGmon.JPG/275px-CBWGmon.JPG
Battle music: http://youtube.com/watch?v=oElYi2tBkjo

Type: Dark/Steel

HP: 415
Attack: 406
Defense: 318
Speed: 278
Special Attack: 358
Special Defense: 278

Attacks:

Move name: Black Tornado
Type: Flying
Power: 180
Accuracy: 100%
PP: 10 (16)
Effect: Has a high chance of critical hitting.
Description: Spins at the speed of a tornado and rips through the enemy.

Move name: Dark Impact
Type: Dark
Power: 80
Accuracy: 100%
PP: 15 (24)
Effect: Is a physical attack despite being Dark-type
Description: Smashes the enemy with the back of his hand, creating a dark explosion on impact.

Move name: Nova Blast
Type: Fire
Power: 120
Accuracy: 100%
PP: 10 (16)
Effect: Has a 10% chance of burning the enemy.
Description: Forms a large ball of flames and throws it at the enemy.

Move name: Terra Destroyer
Type: Steel
Power: 140
Accuracy: 100%
PP: 5 (8)
Effect: None
Description: Forms a dark red sphere of negative and energy and throws it at the enemy.

During the fight, ChaosBlackWarGreymon seems confident that he will win, but at the same time, being an extremely experienced fighter, he concentrates well on the battle and does not underestimate you. After defeating ChaosBlackWarGreymon, he falls on his knees and wonders how he could lose. He then says "I'm sorry... OverLord of Chaos..." as he dies. You then advance on.

At the 50th floor of ChaosTower, you fight against ChaosMetalSeadramon, the second of three Chaos Generals. Unlike ChaosBlackWarGreymon, ChaosMetalSeadramon is known for his diamond-hard defensive abilities, earning him the nickname of "The Hardened King of The Seas". But despite that, he sees no reason to play around with you, and, being more impatient than ChaosBlackWarGreymon, your previous opponent, ChaosMetalSeadramon aims to eradicate you as soon as possible. His Ultimate Attack, River of Power is made up an unbelievably huge compressed amount of ChaosMetalSeadramon's destructive power.

ChaosMetalSeadramon - Hardened King of The Seas

Picture: http://upload.wikimedia.org/wikipedia/en/thumb/3/37/CMSmon.JPG/275px-CMSmon.JPG
Battle music: http://youtube.com/watch?v=oElYi2tBkjo

Type: Water/Steel

HP: 415
Attack: 318
Defense: 406
Speed: 278
Special Attack: 278
Special Defense: 358

Attacks:

Move name: Giga Ice Blast
Type: Ice
Power: 120
Accuracy: 100%
PP: 10 (16)
Effect: Has a 10% chance of freezing the enemy.
Description: Shoots some big and sharp icicles at the enemy from his nose-cannon.

Move name: Poison Divide
Type: Normal
Power: 180
Accuracy: 100%
PP: 10 (16)
Effect: Always goes first.
Description: Flies at high speed and tackles the enemy with huge force.

Move name: River of Power
Type: Steel
Power: 140
Accuracy: 100%
PP: 5 (8)
Effect: None
Description: Shoots a beam of sea-blue energy at the enemy.

Move name: Tidal Wave
Type: Water
Power: 80
Accuracy: 100%
PP: 15 (24)
Effect: None
Description: Summons a huge tidal wave and sends it at the enemy.

Unlike ChaosBlackWarGreymon, ChaosMetalSeadramon is arrogant, looking down on you and losses his patience easily when you get the better of him. He will very often launch his most effective attacks at you in an effort to finish you off quickly. After ChaosMetalSeadramon is defeated, he will fall on the ground, shaking it a bit due to his massive weight. He then curses you as he dies. You then move on.

On the 75th floor of ChaosTower, you fight against ChaosPiedmon, the last but not least of the three Chaos Generals. ChaosPiedmon relies on strategy, trickery and delusional psychic abilities which drives his opponent to despair, unlike the other two Chaos Generals, who aim to overpower you with their strength, endurance and experience. His Ultimate Attack, Trump Sword, has the ability to cut through diamond effortlessly.

ChaosPiedmon - Bringer of Despair

Picture: http://upload.wikimedia.org/wikipedia/en/4/4f/CPiedmon.JPG
Battle music: http://youtube.com/watch?v=oElYi2tBkjo

Type: Psychic/Steel

HP: 415
Attack: 318
Defense: 278
Speed: 406
Special Attack: 358
Special Defense: 278

Attacks:

Move name: Delusion
Type: Psychic
Power: 120
Accuracy: 100%
PP: 10 (16)
Effect: Always does neutral damage regardless of type. Has a 10% chance of confusing the enemy.
Description: Casts an illusion on the enemy.

Move name: Shadow Punch
Type: Ghost
Power: 120
Accuracy: 100%
PP: 15 (24)
Effect: None
Description: Punches the air at the enemy's direction and then a shadow punch of psychic energy hits the enemy.

Move name: Thunder Justice
Type: Electric
Power: 120
Accuracy: 100%
PP: 10 (16)
Effect: Has a 10% chance of paralyzing the enemy.
Description: An incredibly huge bolt of lightning descends from the sky and strikes the enemy.

Move name: Trump Sword
Type: Steel
Power: 35
Accuracy: 100%
PP: 5 (8)
Effect: Hits 4 times in one turn.
Description: Attacks the enemy with his four swords, which he controls with his psychic powers.

ChaosPiedmon is the most sadistic of the three Chaos Generals, and he loves to see his enemies in pain. Unlike the other two Chaos Generals, ChaosPiedmon likes to toy around with you and laugh sadistically as he has much fun enjoying the battle and torturing your Pokémon. After defeat, ChaosPiedmon screams insanely and lets out an inhuman cry as his body disintigrates into nothingness. You then move on to your final opponent: The OverLord of Chaos.

On the 100th floor of ChaosTower, you'll fight against ChaosLord, a powerful red dragon machine with two huge twin cannons on his back. As you approach him on ChaosTower's top floor, you tremble under the pressure of his insanely powerful energy which radiates from his body and almost brings you down to your knees and drooling on the ground, unable to stand under such energy force! Known as the OverLord of Chaos and the Ultimate Organism in the universe, ChaosLord is known as the PokéGod among all the machines of ChaosPlanet. He is the most powerful machine on the planet, commands the three Chaos Generals and rules over ChaosPlanet as a Supreme God. But he reveals to you his true and frightening intentions... to become a Solitary King who will devour alone and destroy everyone and everything other than himself.

ChaosLord: "So you are [Trainer Name], the Pokémon Master who snuck into ChaosPlanet and slayed ChaosBlackWarGreymon, ChaosMetalSeadramon and ChaosPiedmon all by himself..."
You: "That's right! I'm [Trainer Name]!"
You: "ChaosLord, I have destroyed all of your men! You're next!"
ChaosLord: "You destroyed all my men? Ha, ha, ha. So what? I was going to destroy them all myself anyway, including the three Chaos Generals! Only the most powerful being can exist in this world, and that is me!"
You: "What?"
ChaosLord: "All living beings strive to reach the peak of evolution! Only the winner of all battles can reach that peak, which will be me! Do you really think you can defeat me, ChaosLord, the Ultimate Organism?"

You then fight against ChaosLord, your most powerful opponent so far. His Ultimate Attack, ChaosCannon, has an extremely high power level, enough to destroy stars upon contact.

ChaosLord - PokéGod, Ultimate Organism

Picture: http://upload.wikimedia.org/wikipedia/en/e/e7/Chaos_Lord_Medium.png
Battle music: http://youtube.com/watch?v=EcEjgi4-L4g

Type: Dragon/Steel

HP: 500
Attack: 500
Defense: 500
Speed: 500
Special Attack: 500
Special Defense: 500

Attacks:

Move name: ChaosCannon
Type: Steel
Power: 140
Accuracy: 100%
PP: 5 (8)
Effect: None
Description: The color of everything in the universe other than ChaosLord gets inverted, and then ChaosLord shoots two extremely powerful beams of black energy at the enemy from his cannons, causing huge damage and devastation.

Move name: Dragon Fire
Type: Fire
Power: 120
Accuracy: 100%
PP: 10 (16)
Effect: Always burns the enemy.
Description: Spits some extremely hot flames from his mouth, which are so hot that water cannot put them out, as water gets evaporated immediately upon contact with the fire, which burns for seven days and seven nights.

Move name: Psychic Claw
Type: Psychic
Power: 120
Accuracy: 100%
PP: 10 (16)
Effect: Has a high chance of critical hit.
Description: Slashes at the enemy's direction with his claw, and then a slash of psychic energy hits the enemy.

Move name: Super Element Blast
Type: ???
Power: 20
Accuracy: 100%
PP: 5 (8)
Effect: Hits six times in one turn. The first hit is a Water-type attack, the second is an Electric-type attack, the third is an Ice-type attack, the fourth is a Grass-type attack, the fifth is a Fire-type attack and the sixth is a Normal-type attack.
Description: Blasts six consecutive elemental projectile attacks from his cannons at the enemy one after another. The attacks are:
1. A Hydro Pump.
2. A continuation of the Hydro Pump, except the water is filled with powerful electricity
3. A continuation of the previous attack, except the water gets frozen, making it an Ice Beam instead of a Hydro Pump.
4. A Solar Beam.
5. A continuation of the Solar Beam, except this one is covered by some huge flames able to engulf entire cities.
6. A Hyper Beam.

ChaosLord's strength is on a completely different level compared to that of the three Chaos Generals below him. In fact, he is so strong that in the long history of the universe, he has never been harmed before! And so, being confident that he is the Ultimate Organism and the Great PokéGod, he sees no reason why he can lose to a mere Pokémon trainer like you who uses Pokémon. And since he is convinced that he is invincible, he will toy around with you during the battle, very much like what ChaosPiedmon does. After you defeat ChaosLord, he falls over and in disbelief of his defeat says "I-Impossible... How could... the Ultimate Organism... lose to a human and some Pokémon...". After that, you cannot head back down the tower, as the door leading to the final floor of ChaosTower closes and locks by itself immediately after you entered it. You are then forced to head to ChaosTower's rooftop. This is the time you should use your healing items such as Full Restore, Max Revive and Hyper Potion to heal all of your Pokémon, as you are about to fight the final and most powerful opponent on the planet. As soon as you enter the stairs leading to the final floor, there will be no time for you to use healing items, unless it's used during the battle with the next opponent, in which case you will just be wasting turns healing your Pokémon. So use your healing items now that you have the chance.

When you get to the top of ChaosTower, it is raining heavily, a huge hurricane is happening, and a thunderstorm is also taking place. You walk to the edge of ChaosTower's top, and from there, you can see all of ChaosPlanet. You witness most of the lands, canyons, valleys and other landforms of the planet are flooded by the extremely heavy rainstorm. Then, as a huge bolt of lightning followed by a loud thunder happens in the sky, ChaosLord teleports behind you with his psychic powers! He is still not dead yet, but he stands coughing and breathing heavily. "Like I'd lose... Like I'd... There's no way... No way I'd lose to someone like you!!!" says ChaosLord, and then he raises both his claws, and then, as several bolts of lightning sparks in the sky, much dark energy radiates from his body. Then he uses his psychic powers to teleport the corpses of ChaosBlackWarGreymon, ChaosMetalSeadramon and ChaosPiedmon next to him. "I'll show the meaning of true power!" says ChaosLord, and then several bolts of black lightning strikes the bodies of the Chaos Generals. Then, the three Chaos Generals' souls come out of their bodies and merges with ChaosLord! Then ChaosLord screams loudly as his body explodes in a huge burst of flames! After the flames, smokes and dust faded away, you see a new machine standing on a crater caused by the explosion before. This machine is known as NeoCrimson.

NeoCrimson - The Blood Knight, Ultimate Form of The Most Powerful Being in The Universe

Picture: http://upload.wikimedia.org/wikipedia/en/thumb/b/b3/NeoCrimsonmon.gif/275px-NeoCrimsonmon.gif
Battle music: http://youtube.com/watch?v=lqeyH4Ve6bE

Type: Steel

HP: 508
Attack: 508
Defense: 508
Speed: 508
Special Attack: 508
Special Defense: 508

Attacks:

Move name: ChaosCannon
Type: Steel
Power: 140
Accuracy: 100%
PP: 5 (8)
Effect: None
Description: The color of everything in the universe other than NeoCrimson gets inverted, and then NeoCrimson shoots two extremely powerful beams of black energy at the enemy from his cannons, causing huge damage and devastation.

Move name: Giga Ice Blast
Type: Ice
Power: 120
Accuracy: 100%
PP: 10 (16)
Effect: Has a 10% chance of freezing the enemy.
Description: Shoots some big and sharp icicles at the enemy from his mouth.

Move name: Nova Blast
Type: Fire
Power: 120
Accuracy: 100%
PP: 10 (16)
Effect: Has a 10% chance of burning the enemy.
Description: Forms a large ball of flames and throws it at the enemy.

Move name: Thunder Justice
Type: Electric
Power: 120
Accuracy: 100%
PP: 10 (16)
Effect: Has a 10% chance of paralyzing the enemy.
Description: An incredibly huge bolt of lightning descends from the sky and strikes the enemy.

NeoCrimson is the final and most powerful boss on ChaosPlanet. He was formed by the mixture of the souls of ChaosLord and the three Chaos Generals. His head is a cross between ChaosLord's and ChaosBlackWarGreymon's, he has ChaosLord's twin cannons, left arm and feet, ChaosBlackWarGreymon's right arm, legs and shield on his back, he has ChaosMetalSeadramon's tail, and ChaosPiedmon's two red ribbons on his back. And because he is a mixture of ChaosLord and the three Chaos Generals, he has their moves. He can use ChaosLord's Ultimate Attack, ChaosCannon, as well as ChaosBlackWarGreymon's Nova Blast, ChaosMetalSeadramon's Giga Ice Blast and ChaosPiedmon's Thunder Justice. And so, under the heavy thunderstorm, NeoCrimson challenges you to a final one on one duel at the top of ChaosTower. In this battle, NeoCrimson appears to be furious, unleashing all his strength and power into defeating you, as if this was his final battle of his life to survive. He attacks furiously repeatedly, unleashes his full power, anger and hatred, does not care about consequences and does not hold back. Once again, defeat him with the power of your Pokémon. After you defeat NeoCrimson, the thunderstorm and rain stops, and everything is silent as a gentle wind blows by. NeoCrimson, with his last breath, starts talking about how he needs to destroy all and become the Solitary King of the universe, he says he must not allow anyone to stand in his way, and he stands breathing heavily and coughing. He then curses you as he blows up in a massive explosion which can be seen from very far away on the planet! The dark clouds in the sky starts to disperse, as a ray of light comes down from a gap between the clouds and shine upon you, making it seem like you are standing within a pillar of holy light. The pillar then grows in width, until it covers the entire width of ChaosTower, and as the storm ends, you stand victoriously in the light before the remains of NeoCrimson, ChaosLord and the Chaos Generals. ChaosTower then crumbles to the ground, as it has become unstable without the power of ChaosLord to support it, and and you need to make your way out of the tower within a certain time limit or else you die and your game file will restart. After successfully evacuating from ChaosTower, you then return to Earth with the scientists. On your way back, you tell the scientists the story about ChaosLord, and this story later becomes a legend as it spreads around Earth.



Author:   OverLord of Chaos
Date:   Oct 10, 07 at 11:39pm (PST)
Subject:   ...
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Here is the newest part of my story. Note that I removed a small part of the end of the previous part (where ChaosLord uses Star Cannon, since I decided to remove this move from ChaosLord's moveset just because I did not like how it sounded - I have not posted the updated moveset yet though, I'll do so later as it is now about 2:40 AM and I should go to sleep after I make some posts) and added it to the beginning of this one, but changed a bit.

The machine arc, Part 9: The decisive attacks: River of Power VS Chaos Cannon!

"Hahahahaha... Hahahahahahaha!" laughed ChaosLord, and then he aimed his cannons up at ChaosMetalSeadramon! "Aeroblast!" said ChaosLord then, as he fired two powerful vacuumed blasts at ChaosMetalSeadramon. ChaosMetalSeadramon got blasted flying diagonially upwards in the air, and then ChaosLord said "Giga Blaster!". Then two red missiles flew off from the part between his cannons and headed at ChaosMetalSeadramon, hitting him in the air in two large explosions! ChaosMetalSeadramon was blasted hard and fell on a mountain of ice, crushing a large part of it, and then many pieces of ice fell from the mountain on ChaosMetalSeadramon, burying him beneath the cold snow and ice! ChaosLord then flew out of the large crater in which he was in and landed on the icy ground outside, and then he started walking towards the ice where ChaosMetalSeadramon was buried. As he was walking, he suddenly saw the pieces of ice moving, as ChaosMetalSeadramon got up from beneath them and then looked at ChaosLord. "Can you continue battling... ChaosMetalSeadramon?" said ChaosLord in a calm voice, as he looked at ChaosMetalSeadramon with an evil smile on his face. ChaosMetalSeadramon, who looked like he was started to getting tired from the battle, looked at ChaosLord furiously and shouted "That's it!!" as his eyes shined blue. Then suddenly, a massive wave of water-like energy was created from the air around ChaosLord, surrounding him and spinning around him! The wave of water-like energy then closed in on ChaosLord, covering him entirely! Then ChaosMetalSeadramon started flying at ChaosLord, who was in the water-like energy that was still spinning with him inside it, although ChaosLord was standing still inside the energy. The water-like energy then suddenly froze to ice, trapping ChaosLord, and then immediately after that, a huge iceberg emerged from beneath the ice in which ChaosLord was trapped in, shattering it entirely! The iceberg also hit ChaosLord after shattering the ice, sending him flying upwards! But just then, ChaosMetalSeadramon was already right next to ChaosLord, and blasted an enormous red laser beam from his nose-cannon at him! The beam hit ChaosLord, sending him flying to the south-east. ChaosMetalSeadramon angrily flew after ChaosLord, and shouted "Die!!" as he blasted a Hyper Beam at him! ChaosLord took the Hyper Beam in the air and continued flying, and then ChaosMetalSeadramon stiull continued flying after him, and he started blasting multiple Hyper Beams from his nose one after the other at ChaosLord! ChaosLord was getting hit from each beam, getting pushed backwards in the air faster and faster, but his height was slowly dropping. Eventually, ChaosLord fell hard to the ground and slid on it, while ChaosMetalSeadramon still chased after him and blasted some more Hyper Beams at him! ChaosLord got hit by the Hyper Beams, which exploded on him and made him continue sliding on the ground, until he crashed through an entire small forest and then hit the lowest part of a mountain, and then he stopped. Then ChaosMetalSeadramon landed on the ground and slammed his tail extremely hard on it, creating a massive earthquake, and also an enormous crack on the ground which extended from him and travelled towards ChaosLord, sucking the entire forest in which ChaosLord had crashed through inside the crack! The crack then opened up hugely and ChaosLord fell in it, while even the mountain where he had crashed on cracked in two, and its two pieces then collapsed and fell inside the crack, and also on ChaosLord, burying him beneath the land's surface! Much dust was caused from the mountain's collapsing, and ChaosMetalSeadramon then watched as the entire mountain had fell into the crack, turning the place in which the mountain previously was into just flat land! ChaosMetalSeadramon stood tired as he watched what he had just done, but then suddenly the ground behind him erupted, and out came ChaosLord! "That was a nice combination of attacks, ChaosMetalSeadramon. It was truly interesting. However, this battle has dragged on for too long. It is time to stop playing around" said ChaosLord, while ChaosMetalSeadramon was watching surprised as ChaosLord had no signs of damage from all his previous attacks! "Let me show you... some real strength" said ChaosLord, as he leaned back his right arm, while a massive yellow energy surrounded it, which was powerful enough to shake the atmosphere a bit! "Superpower" said ChaosLord then, as he delivered an insanely powerful punch at ChaosMetalSeadramon's body! ChaosMetalSeadramon was instantly blasted flying at extreme speed by the attack, which, upon impact, caused a huge explosion of yellow energy that cratered the ground at a huge range! ChaosMetalSeadramon flew with incredibly huge speed and force, crashing through twelve mountains in a row powerfully enough to shatter them entirely to pieces as he crashed through wach one and kept going still! ChaosMetalSeadramon then crashed on one last mountain and stopped, while the mountain was decimated entirely, and it collapsed and fell on ChaosMetalSeadramon, burying him there. ChaosLord, as well as many machines who had seen that, all watched at the huge clouds of dust that had been created bu the collapsing mountains. ChaosLord teleported to the last mountain where ChaosMetalSeadramon had crashed and stopped, and looked at the remnants of the mountain, which had buried ChaosMetalSeadramon entirely. He looked at them for a while, but nothing happened. "So this was it, hm? I guess even he could not take such a strong attack after all" said ChaosLord. "What a boring end" he continued, and then he turned around and was about to start walking away. But suddenly, an earthquake started to shake the ground, while ChaosLord sensed an extremely powerful energy filling the atmosphere! "You call that a strong attack?!" he heard a loud voice then, and then he slightly turned his head to look behind him with his right eye, and saw the land where ChaosMetalSeadramon was buried erupting, with ChaosMetalSeadramon coming out! "I'll show you the meaning of true power!" said ChaosMetalSeadramon then, as an unimaginably compressed blue energy appeared inside his nose-cannon, while a massive amount of energy was also radiating from his body! ChaosLord calmly turned to face him, and saw the energy in his nose-cannon. "River of Power!" said ChaosMetalSeadramon in a loud voice, and then suddenly he blasted a beam of insanely compressed blue energy from his nose-cannon at ChaosLord! A huge earthquake happened at the moment ChaosMetalSeadramon fired the beam, and also many rocks were flying up from the ground because of the energy he was radiating! ChaosMetalSeadramon's huge, devastating energy beam hit ChaosLord with unbelievable force, pushing him backwards seemingly without even getting slowed down after it hit him! The energy beam started to push ChaosLord backwards at incredible speed, and as it travelled above the ground, the beam emitted an incredible amount of energy around it, which was constantly carving the ground below the beam into a river, which had no water, but it was literally filled with the power from ChaosMetalSeadramon's beam! Also, a huge amount of dust was being created as ChaosLord travelled backwards with huge speed, and started crashing through some trees which were barely reducing the beam's speed by an extrenely tiny bit each time they were getting hit by ChaosLord! ChaosLord crashed through several small forests of dead-looking trees and dozens of mountains, destroying everything in his path! After crashing through more than three hundred mountains, ChaosLord finally hit the ground, and then he slid on it for a huge distance at great speed, smashing some structures made by the machines on his way, and then he finally came to a stop, with some dust surrounding him. Some nearby machines had seen ChaosLord sliding until he came to a stop, and they started approaching him to see what had happened. At first, they noticed no movement, but then they saw ChaosLord getting up in the dust, and then he suddenly disappeared!

Meanwhile, ChaosMetalSeadramon was back at the location from where he had fired the River of Power, which was a huge distance away from where ChaosLord had ended up. "This is it. No one exists who will not turn immediately into dust after they get hit by the combined, compressed force of a million Hyper Beams!" said ChaosMetalSeadramon, looking exhausted from his hard battle against ChaosLord. "It was an impressive technique indeed" he heard a familliar voice from behing then. Then he turned around and he widened his eyes as he saw ChaosLord, standing unharmed! "But you seem to have forgotten something I mentioned previously" said ChaosLord, as he aimed his cannons at ChaosMetalSeadramon. "I am invincible" said ChaosLord, as suddenly a huge yellow energy radiated from his body, shaking the atmosphere in an enormous range and making rocks in that range fly up from the ground and then disintegrate in the energy! "Impossible!" said ChaosMetalSeadramon, as he was pushed with much force by ChaosLord's energy, and then he flew backwards, diagonially up towards the sky, looking at ChaosLord very surprised! "It's over, ChaosMetalSeadramon. Prepare to witness the most powerful attack in existence!" said ChaosLord, as suddenly two dark red lights flashed on his two cannons, and suddenly a massive yellow energy shield of unbelievably compressed energy appeared around ChaosLord! The shield was composed of many yellow energy rings of increasing size, which were generated from the air above ChaosLord and disappeared as soon as they reached ground level. ChaosLord's energy was so huge that ChaosMetalSeadramon, who had been pushed very high up in the air, could still feel ChaosLord's huge energy even at such a huge height! ChaosLord's cannons pointed at ChaosMetalSeadramon, and then ChaosLord closed his eyes and calmly said "Chaos Cannon". Then ChaosLord fired two huge beams of yellow energy from his cannons, in an explosion of energy that shook the atmosphere extremely and blew a massive amount of sand around ChaosLord outwards towards all directions! ChaosMetalSeadramon looked at the two yellow beams flying at him fast, and then he said "River of Power!". ChaosMetalSeadramon then blasted a huge sea-blue beam of unbelievably compressed energy diagonially downwards at ChaosLord's yellow beams! However, ChaosMetalSeadramon's River of Power got overwhelmed and just disappeared into ChaosLord's beams, which then kept going towards ChaosMetalSeadramon until they hit him and exploded on his body! The explosion was huge and bright as the Sun, enlightening a large part of ChaosPlanet for a few seconds! An unbelievable amount of energy was also blasted outwards from the explosion, and although the explosion happened very high in the air, the explosion's energy reached even down to the ground and caused strong winds that blew the sand at a huge range! After that, ChaosMetalSeadramon fell from the explosion, with some huge damage on his body, out of which was coming a massive amount of dark energy, which left a trail behind him as he was falling. ChaosMetalSeadramon then fell hard on a large hill, destroying it entirely in an explosion of dust and rocks! ChaosLord looked at the dust for some seconds and saw no movement, and then he started to slowly walk at the place where ChaosMetalSeadramon had landed. By the time he reached there, the dust had settled down, and ChaosLord saw ChaosMetalSeadramon lying unconsious with a very damaged body partially covered by the remains of the hill he had fallen on. "He survived...." said ChaosLord, as he looked at his defeated opponent. Suddenly, some sea dragon machines went between ChaosMetalSeadramon and ChaosLord, facing the latter. They were the same sea dragon machines who had been watching the battle ever since it began. "Hm?" said ChaosLord. "That's enough!" said a Seadramon. "What?" said ChaosLord. "We won't allow you to attack ChaosMetalSeadramon!" said a Cygonair. "I was not intending to do that anyway" said ChaosLord, as he turned his back at the machines. "What?" said a WaruSeadramon. "Whether I kill a weakling or let them live... it makes no difference" said ChaosLord. "So... you weren't trying to to kill ChaosMetalSeadramon?" said a MetalSeadramon. "I did not come here for him in the first place. My true target is the one who created that shield around your planet before... who was also probably the same one who fired a huge beam afterwards" said ChaosLord. "You mean... Overlord GAIA?" said GigaSeadramon. "That's impossible! Maybe you did defeat ChaosMetalSeadramon... but Overlord GAIA is on a completely different level! There is just absolutely no hope in challenging him!" said MegaSeadramon. "After I defeat him, you will understand that what you just said is true only in my case..." said ChaosLord, as he slowly started walking away, heading south-west, towards a huge black forest.

While this had been happening, in the observatory tower located in the middle of some wastelands, ChaosPiedmon and ChaosBlackWarGreymon had been watching the whole battle between ChaosLord and ChaosMetalSeadramon on a screen on ChaosPiedmon's telescope. They watched as the battle ended, and ChaosMetalSeadramon lied defeated on the ground, while ChaosLord was walking up to him. "Well, you don't... see that every day" said ChaosPiedmon with a tone of disbelief in his voice. "I said that ChaosLord was not to be taken lightly... Yet, ChaosMetalSeadramon still just lunged out recklessly" said ChaosBlackWarGreymon as he watched the fallen Chaos General on the screen. Then the screen changed to a picture of ChaosLord, and ChaosBlackWarGreymon saw that and said "Though it is surprising that... this machine could cause so much damage to ChaosMetalSeadramon's almost indestructible body. And it's even harder to believe that he could take so many attacks from ChaosMetalSeadramon, including his River of Power, and yet emerge from the battle unharmed. What is this power?". Suddenly, the two Chaos Generals watched in the screen as the sea dragon machines moved into the scene to protect ChaosMetalSeadramon. "Hm? What are they doing? They obviously stand no chance against ChaosLord" said ChaosBlackWarGreymon. "I guess they got bored of their lives" said ChaosPiedmon. Then, ChaosPiedmon and ChaosBlackWarGreymon watched in surprise as ChaosLord turned around, ignoring the machines, and then he started walking away. "What? He's leaving" said ChaosPiedmon. "He does not seem to care about finishing ChaosMetalSeadramon off. Could it be that he is looking down on him?" said ChaosBlackWarGreymon. "Ridiculous. Who does he think he is?" said ChaosPiedmon. "That is something for us to find out, I guess. In any case, I should inform NeoCrimson about that" said ChaosBlackWarGreymon, as he turned around and headed towards some stairs, which he then started walking down. "There is no need to..." said ChaosPiedmon. "Because I, ChaosPiedmon, will teach ChaosLord a lesson of pain he'll never forget!" he continued with excitement, as he smiled evily and looked at ChaosLord's picture on the screen.

This message was edited by OverLord of Chaos on Nov 10 2007.



Author:   Dragon Swordsman
Date:   Oct 11, 07 at 7:48am (PST)
Subject:   re: Make your own Pokemon Stories
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Chapter 57: Arrival in Hell! Enter Ox-Head and Horse-Face!


Liquidman flew over a river and a large forest, and then he landed on a village surrounded by many thick bushes, where many birds were chirping in the daylight. The village had many Japanese-style houses with paper windows, and there were many samurai dressed in blue kimono training with their katana in the village. A small creek flowed through the center of the village, and the village's ground was mainly covered in grass and dirt. There was, however, a Pokémon Center and a PokéMart somewhere near the center of the city, and there was also a Pokémon Gym, although it was made of wood and had paper windows, like most of the other buildings and houses in the village. "I see... So this is Moku Village... It seems like a beautiful place..." said Liquidman as he looked around the village. "So... according to the map, the Shinigami Cave should be located a bit to the North of here..." said Liquidman as he walked along a dirt-covered path towards the North of the village. Liquidman followed the path, and eventually, it led him to a large entrance of a cave, although Liquidman could not see what was inside the cave as it was too dark. However, the cave was guarded by two samurai, who were both wearing a blue kimono. "I see... So this must be the Shinigami Cave..." Liquidman thought, and then he tried to enter the cave, but then one of the samurai guarding it said "Stop!". "Hm?" said Liquidman as he looked at the samurai. "Only the inhabitants of this village are permitted to enter the Shinigami Cave" said the samurai. "The samurai...hm... I see..." said Liquidman, and then he turned around and walked away, towards a house. He went behind the house, and then he transformed himself into a samurai with a katana, long black hair and wearing a blue kimono. "Okay" said Liquidman, and then he went back to where the cave entrance was. He walked right into the cave, and the two Shinigami guarding it ignored him as he went inside. Liquidman was now inside the Shinigami Cave. The place was dark, but it was bright enough so that Liquidman could see where he was going. "Hmm... This place looks even more beautiful than the village outside... Although I liked the deeper part of the Earth Temple better... if it wasn't for that damn dinosaur..." said Liquidman as he looked around inside the cave and saw many large blue crystals, as well as some strange writings on the walls. However, the writings were written in a very strange language which Liquidman could not understand. "So... The portal to Heaven should be in here somewhere... Where is it?" said Liquidman as he looked around while walking deeper into the cave.

Meanwhile, Fuu moved at blinding speed and instantly appeared next to the lake where the huge fight between ChaosBlackWarGreymon and Lance's Dragonite took place. "So there's victims even here?" said Fuu as he looked around the lake and saw many souls standing around. He also saw the souls of a Gyarados, two Dragonair, an Aerodactyl, a Charizard and a Dragonite sitting somewhere on a rock by the lakeside. "Even Dragon Pokémon this level became victims to the machines? The machines sure are powerful..." said Fuu as he looked at the Pokémon. Then suddenly, he gasped when he saw Lance's soul standing next to the Dragonite's soul! "L-Lance? The Champion of the Indigo League... So even he was no match for the machines?" said Fuu, looking surprised. Then Fuu instantly dissapeared, as he moved at blinding speed and reappeared right next to Lance. "Lance!" said Fuu as he looked at Lance. "Huh? You can see me?" asked Lance as he looked at Fuu. "Yeah, I'm a Shinigami after all" said Fuu. "Sh-Shinigami? I see... so it's really true... it looks like me and my Pokémon were really killed by that machine after all..." said Lance. "You're Lance from the Indigo League, aren't you? So, what was that machine who killed you? What did he look like?" asked Fuu as he looked at Lance. "You mean that black dragon machine I fought against?" asked Lance. "So you fought against a black dragon machine? I just want to know what he looks like..." said Fuu. "He's a large black metal dragon man machine who stands on two legs, has a white face with a horn on it and large black claws" said Lance. "I see. Thank you for that. In any case, since you are no longer amongst the living, I guess it's my job as a Shinigami to send you to Heaven..." said Fuu as he pulled out his sword, which had a light blue hilt. "You're sending me to Heaven?" asked Lance as he stepped back, looking surprised. Then Fuu said "Don't worry, just about all good souls go there after death... it's not a painful experience or anything... Besides, Heaven is a way better place than here... in Heaven, you never get hungry, there are no bad people, the environment is infinitely cleaner, the waters in the rivers, lakes and seas are crystal-clear and drinking-quality, and the living conditions are way better...". "Wait!" said Lance as he pointed his palm at Fuu. Then he looked to the side and said "There are still many things I need to do on this Earth...". "But there's nothing you can do" said Fuu. "After all, you are merely a soul... you cannot interact with this world anymore, as you may have noticed... Besides, even if you don't want to go to Heaven, your Pokémon will go there..." he continued as he looked at Lance's Pokémon. "You may have been a Pokémon League Champion in the past, but there's no use staying in this world for any longer if no one other than your fellow souls can see you anymore... It's better for you to pass on..." Fuu continued as he raised his sword. "So you're a Shinigami, heh?" said Lance. "The name's Fuu... Now, here you go to Heaven... your Pokémon will join you shortly..." said Fuu as he hit Lance on the forehead with the hilt of his sword, and then Lance dissapeared in a flash of blue light. After that, Fuu did the same to all of Lance's Pokémon, one by one.

Meanwhile, the purple-haired man who Rai sent to Hell before, the purple-haired Rocket who the female Shinigami sent to Hell before and many Rocket Grunts, Koffing, Weezing, Rattata, Raticate, Zubat and Golbat and other Pokémon as well as some other people opened up their eyes and found themselves inside a large, creepy-looking chamber, which was surrounded by four purple walls, each of which had a painting on it. One of the four paintings was of a man with long, spiky red hair, golden eyes and wearing black armor, a dark green cape; another was of a large black dragon with purple eyes; another was of a man with pale white skin, long black hair, snake-like yellow eyes, wears a black eyepatch over his right eye and he was wearing a skin-coloured kimono and a purple sash. He also had an unusually long toungue, and he had an evil smile on his face. On his back, he was carrying an unusual weapon, which resembles a double-sided scythe, with a crescent moon-shaped blade on both sides of the weapon. And the last of the painting was of a muscular angel with long, spiky blonde hair, brown eyes, and he was wearing black pants. However, he was wearing nothing other than a white sash over his upper body. Despite the fact that he was an angel, he had black demon-like wings and carried a pitch-black scythe. There was also a large double door just under the painting of the red-haired man.

"Wh-Where are we?" asked a man as he looked around and saw the four paintings on the walls. "Huh? Was that... all a dream...?" said a Rocket Grunt as he got up from the ground. Then everyone else who were in the room got up from the ground too. "Where's this place?" asked the purple-haired Team Rocket member. "This place looks creepy..." said a female Rocket Grunt. "Wait, so we were sent to Hell... so... this place is Hell?" asked another Rocket Grunt as he looked around, confused. "T-Team Rocket?!" said a man as he saw many Rocket Grunts in the room with him and stepped back. "W-Wait! What are you guys doing here? Are you guys behind all of this?!" said a teenage boy as he pointed at the Rocket Grunts. "Kid, shut up. We have no time to be dealing with you" said the purple-haired Rocket as he approached the double door. "In any case, we need to find a way to get out of here" he continued as he tried to open the door, but he found that it was locked! "Shit, the door's locked..." said the man. "Guys, we need to break down this door!" he continued as he looked at some Grunts who were with him. "Yes sir!" said all the Rocket Grunts together, and then they all started walking towards the purple-haired Rocket. "Man, this is confusing. We're trapped in a room with Team Rocket, yet it seems they're not the ones behind all this? So we're really in Hell after all?" said the purple-haired man who Rai sent to Hell before. At the same time, the Rockets were ramming the double door with their shoulders, trying to break the door down, but the door was extremely hard, and it was not even moved by all the pushing and ramming! "Damn! This thing won't budge regardless of how much we push it!" said a Rocket as everyone else were watching the Rockets hopelessly trying to break down the door! "Geez, those idiots..." said a black man, who was sitting on the ground. The black man was also the same person who was fighting with the Japanese man before and got killed by the blonde man from behind. Then suddenly, the double door swung open right in front of the Rockets' faces, knocking them all back! "Aaaugh!" the Rockets screamed as the door swung open with much force, sending them flying and knocking them to the ground, while everyone else widened their eyes in surprise! "Wh-What the hell..." said a Rocket as he looked at the opened door and saw two beings standing before him! They were both wearing Shinigami clothes and carrying katana, but one of them had the face of a horse, while the other had the head of an ox! "I'd advise against wasting your efforts trying to break down this door. After all, it is infused with the spirit energy of Lord Yama himself. No number of humans have the strength to break down this door, or any of the walls, ceilings or floors in this room, for that matter" said the being with the ox head. "Wh-Who the fuck are you guys?!" said the purple-haired Rocket as he got up from the ground and pointed at the two beings. "You are Ken, are you not?" asked the horse-faced being as he looked at the purple-haired Rocket. "H-How do you know my name?!" asked the Rocket, known as Ken as he looked at the horse-faced being. "So I'm not mistaken" said the horse-faced being. "I asked who the fuck are you guys, horse face!" said Ken as he pointed at the horse-faced being. "What are you talking about? You already got my name right. My name... is Horse-Face" said the horse-faced being, known as Horse-Face, and then everyone in the room were surprised. "Wh-Why are we here?" asked Ken, looking desperate as he was impatiently waiting for an answer. "Do we even need to answer that question?" asked the being with the ox head. "What?!" said Ken. Then the being with the ox head said "So I guess the Shinigami, angel or Holy Creature or whoever who sent you down here didn't have as loud a mouth than I imagined...", and then everyone gasped. "S...So we're... really in Hell after all..." said a female Rocket Grunt. "Are you serious?!" said Ken. Then Horse-Face looked at Ken and said "Ken, if I'm not mistaken, you are the first person amongst all those who are here to be sent down here. Therefore, you are going to be the first to be judged by Lord Yama". "D-Did you just say... Yama?" asked Ken. "So... that girl... was right..." he continued, looking shocked and frightened. "H-How do I get outta here?!" said Ken. "Whether you'll get out of here or not depends on how serious your sins in the living world were" said the being with the ox head. "So... there's still a chance for me to return to the upper world, right?" asked Ken, with a bit of hope. "Yes... After you reincarnate after much torture, that is..." said the being with the ox head. "In other words, after you lose all your memories of this life" said Horse-Face. "A-Are you serious? So you're saying this piece a' shit is the end of my life?!" said Ken angrily. "Assuming your sins weren't all that serious, that is" said the being with the ox head. "And what if they were?" asked Ken. "Then you'll never be reincarnated, and you'll spend the rest of eternity burning in this world..." said the being with the ox head. "Burning, heh? Then where's the fire?" asked Ken, with a fake smile of confidence on his face as he was breathing heavily. "Not in here... but outside of this building... known as the Castle of Judgment. Apart from this castle, the rest of Hell is completely covered in thick flames where those who have committed to much sin will burn for eternity" said the being with the ox head. "Kkkkk... B-Bastard! Get me outta here! Now!" Ken shouted loudly. "We will get you out of here... to see Lord Yama" said Horse-Face. "Fffffff... DON'T FUCKIN' SCREW WITH ME CUNTS!!!" Ken shouted as he started charging at Horse-Face. "I'll flatten that horse face of yours! Tssaaahhhh!" Ken shouted as he tried to punch Horse-Face in the face, but Horse-Face simply caught the punch in his left hand effortlessly! "What!!" said Ken, widening his eyes in disbelief as everyone else gasped as they were watching. Then Horse-Face swung his hand downward while holding Ken's fist, trying to slam him to the ground, but Ken did a front flip and managed to land back on his feet and slid back a bit. "Haaaaaaa!!! I'm gonna get past you no matter what! As if I'm gonna get burnt here in Hell!" Ken then yelled as he charged at Horse-Face again and tried to deliver a heavy sideway kick at him, but Horse-Face backhand slapped Ken's foot, sending him flying back a bit, and then he screamed as he fell on the ground and slid for a great distance before stopping. "Guh... G-Goddamit!!" said Ken as he got up on his knee and started breathing heavily. "It's no use. There's no way the strength of a mere human could possibly match the power of a Holy Creature" said Horse-Face. "In that case..." said Ken, and then he turned his head fast and looked at a Houndoom in the room. "Houndoom! Fire Blast those ugly creatures! Let them burn instead!" he shouted as he swung his arm and pointed at Horse-Face and the being with the ox head, and then Houndoom walked forward and looked at the two warriors standing before it, before it took in a deep breath, ready to charge up a Fire Blast, but then Horse-Face suddenly radiated a huge amount of spirit energy out of his body, without even moving his body at all! The spirit energy radiated all over the room, shaking the room's atmosphere, and then everyone in the room other than Horse-Face and the ox-head being gasped before they fell on the ground and started breathing heavily, and some of them were even drooling on the ground, while they all started sweating, and their sweat were being lifted upward by the insanely strong spirit pressure! Houndoom also fell on the ground before it could finish charging its Fire Blast, and it was on the ground taking deep breaths under the extremely heavy pressure. "G-Gah... Wh-What the fuck is this shit..." said Ken as he was desperately trying to get up from the ground, but the spirit pressure was so strong that Ken could not even move under it! "I thought I already made it clear that it's useless to resist" said Horse-Face as the spirit energy radiating from his body suddenly got much stronger than before! "Aaaaarrgghhhh!!" everyone screamed in pain, and then Horse-Face stopped radiating spirit energy from his body, and everyone else other than the two Holy Creatures were left breathing heavily on the ground, while they were also paralyzed. "It's time for you to come with us... Ken" the being with the ox head then said as he looked at Ken. "Sh-Shut up... already..." said Ken, taking in deep breaths as he struggled to get up on his knees. "Let's just take him away, Ox-Head" said Horse-Face as he looked at the other Holy Creature, known as Ox-Head. "Right. We're only wasting time doing this. Lord Yama is waiting for us" said Ox-Head, and then suddenly, Ken gasped when he saw Ox-Head and Horse-Face suddenly dissapearing from his sight, and before he realized it, he felt some handcuffs being placed around his wrists! "Wh...What the..." said Ken, and then he looked at his wrists and saw handcuffs around them! "No... You bas... tard...ss..." said Ken, struggling to breathe after he just got affected by Horse-Face's spirit energy, and then Ox-Head and Horse-Face, who were now right next to Ken, dragged Ken away, while Ken could not resist as he was severely weakened by Horse-Face's spirit energy. Then Ox-Head and Horse-Face dragged Ken out of the room, closed the double door behind them, locked the double door and then they walked with Ken across a dark, creepy corridor, which had some candles attached to the walls on the side.

To be continued




Author:   OverLord of Chaos
Date:   Oct 11, 07 at 10:27pm (PST)
Subject:   ...
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The machine arc, Part 10: ChaosGraveyard: Enter the Dark Forest!

ChaosLord, after defeating ChaosMetalSeadramon, started walking towards the south-west. On his way, he was occasionally being attacked by various machines, but he defeated them each time with ease. Eventually, he reached a very dark forest which seemed to be filled with dead-looking trees that had little to no leaves. There was also a mysterious mist filling the place, although it was not thick enough to block sight. ChaosLord started walking in the forest, and occasionally he noticed many pairs of red eyes looking at him through the shadows, although wherever he was about to look at them, they disappeared. "Hm. What are they up to, sneaking like that?" said ChaosLord, as he kept walking while ignoring the red eyes. "Well, as long as they don't waste my time..." said ChaosLord, but just then, suddenly, a black dragon with red claws, four red eyes and four wings on his back lunged out of the shadows right in front of ChaosLord! The dragon roared loudly in ChaosLord's face, and then he slashed him at the chest with his claws! "Disappear from my sight, weakling" said ChaosLord, as he pointed his right arm at the black dragon and shot a Hyper Beam at him, blasting him back in the shadows. But then, he felt some things trying to stab his feet. He looked down and saw some huge skeletal scorpion tails emerging from the ground and trying to stab his feet! "Get lost" said ChaosLord, as he raised his right foot and stomped the ground hard, shaking it, and then the skeletal scorpion tails withdrew back into the ground. Then ChaosLord heard a noise of many wings flapping behind him, and then he slightly turned his head to look behind him to the left, but then he got overwhelmed by a massive group of bats which flew out of the forest and flew at him! ChaosLord did not even react to that, and the bats flew at him without damaging him, and then they kept going and disappeared back into the forest. "This forest is full of surprises..." said ChaosLord after that. Then suddenly, he saw some trees of the forest beginning to move at him! "What..." said ChaosLord, as he noticed that the trees had eyes and mouths and slowly closed in on him using their roots as feet, and then they layed their leafless branches on him and started absorbing energy from his body! "What do you think you are doing, weaklings?" said ChaosLord, as he was completely surrounded by the trees, which were rapidly draining energy from him! "Get out of my way!" said ChaosLord then as he spread his arms outward while unleashing a huge amount of blue energy out of his body like an explosion, blasting away all of the trees around him! "It looks like it will not be so easy to travel through this forest..." said ChaosLord. Then suddenly, a BlackGatomon jumped from a tree onto ChaosLord's face and started slashing him! "What a little fool..." said ChaosLord, as he violently swung his head, throwing the BlackGatomon off and then it hit a tree and fell to the ground. Immediately after that, he heard a loud roar, and then a huge Flesh Golem crashed through some trees from ChaosLord's left and tried to punch him! ChaosLord raised his left claw, effortlessly blocking the attack because of his huge power, and then he unleashed a blast of blue energy from his claw, hitting the Flesh Golem's hand! The Flesh Golem growled as it took some steps back, and as ChaosLord watched that he was attacked from behind by a backstabbing attack! ChaosLord turned around and saw a ghost with a white mask which had tried to stab him with some sharp claws it had. ChaosLord then roared at the ghost's face, blowing it back by the very sound pressure of his extremely loud voice! But just then, the Flesh Golem attacked him from behind with a punch between his cannons. At the same time, a Saberdramon flew from a tree and blasted a beam of black energy at ChaosLord from its mouth, while a ShadowWereGarurumon lunged from the shadows to slash ChaosLord with his claws from the left, and a huge mummy Snorlax emerged crashing through some trees from ChaosLord's right and did a Mega Punch at him! "They just keep coming..." said ChaosLord, as he pointed his tail and two cannons at the Flesh Golem behind him, "...even though there is no way they're going to win!" he continued, as he powerfully fired three Hyper Beams from his cannons and tail, blasting the Flesh Golem flying above the forest! The Flesh Golem flew for some time, leaving behind a trail of dust, and then he fell back into the dark forest. "How foolish!" said ChaosLord, as he slashed ShadowWereGarurumon with his left claw, and the ShadowWereGarurumon took some steps back as much dark energy was coming from its wounds. Then ChaosLord looked at the mummy Snorlax and said "Disappear!" as he fired a huge red laser beam at him from his open right arm, which burnt a hole through the dark creature's stomach! Much dark energy came out of the mummy Snorlax's wound, who then fell on the ground and shook it because of his weight. But just then, a DarkTyrannomon appeared from behind some trees, while ShadowWereGarurumon was lunging at ChaosLord again despite his injury. Shortly after, a Deltamon also joined the fight as he appeared from some trees behind ChaosLord. "It seems those creatures do not care about their lives at all" said ChaosLord, as he blocked a slash by ShadowWereGarurumon with his left claw. "Well then, if they won't back down, I guess I'll have some fun with them" he continued. Then he pushed his left claw against ShadowWereGarurumon, pushing him back on its feet, and then ShadowWereGarurumon jumped at him again with his claws, but ChaosLord aimed at him with his open right claw. "Infinite Slick" said ChaosLord, as he blasted a liquid all over ShadowWereGarurumon's body! ShadowWereGarurumon then tried to slash ChaosLord in the air, but his attack just slipped on ChaosLord's body because his claws were full of the liquid ChaosLord had shot at him, which made everything smooth and slippery! ShadowWereGarurumon then landed on his feet, but then he slipped as they too were full of ChaosLord's Infinite Slick liquid! ShadowWereGarurumon then fell and kept sliding on the ground and disappeared into the forest. Then ChaosLord watched as DarkTyrannomon, who was in front of him, opened up his mouth and shot a Fire Blast at him. At the same time, Deltamon, who was behind ChaosLord, opened up his head as well as the two heads on his hands, and charged up some compressed energy balls on them, which he then shot at ChaosLord. ChaosLord teleported, and then DarkTyrannomon's Fire Blast and Deltamon's triple energy ball attack collided with each other, cancelling each other out in a powerful explosion of energy and flames! ChaosLord appeared behind DarkTyrannomon with his back turned at him, and then he swung his huge tail at him, throwing him flying back into the forest where he came from. While he swung his tail, ChaosLord also turned around to face Deltamon, who then opened up his three mouths, ready to charge some energy balls for another attack. But ChaosLord swiftly aimed at Deltamon with his right hand, opened it up, and shot a green sticky liquid at his head-hands. Deltamon's hands got covered in the green liquid, which immobilized their movements! As Deltamon struggled to free its hands from the green liquid, ChaosLord shot a huge blast of green liquid at him, hitting him and sending him flying slightly above the ground, until he hit a tree. Deltamon then stuck on the tree because of the green liquid, then then he started struggling to escape, as ChaosLord watched him while still having his right hand open and pointing at him. "Green Blaster" said ChaosLord then as he closed his right hand, and then the green liquid on Deltamon's body exploded, blowing him up! Deltamon then fell down fainted with some smoke coming from his body because of the explosion, and dark energy coming out of his many wounds. ChaosLord looked down at his defeated opponent, and then he suddenly heard a voice from his right "There you are!". ChaosLord turned and saw a knight with a blue shield and a lance, called ChaosGallantmon, who was riding a metallic Rapidash-like horse with black flames, known as IronSteed. "Your doom is at hand, machine! I shall bring you down by my own hand!" said ChaosGallantmon. "The only doom at hand is yours, if you do not leave now" said ChaosLord. "I will... after I destroy you!" said ChaosGallantmon as he looked at ChaosLord. Then he looked at his horse and said "IronSteed, let's do it!". IronSteed nodded, and then it opened up its mouth and gathered a huge amount of fire! Then ChaosGallantmon pointed his lance at ChaosLord and said "Now!". Then he fired a huge Hyper Beam from his lance, and at the same time IronSteed spat out a huge stream of flames that engulfed ChaosGallantmon's Hyper Beam, creating a powerful Hyper Beam with flames! "Ridiculous" said ChaosLord, as he suddenly disappeared, and the flaming Hyper Beam kept going and hit the sand which was behind ChaosLord, creating a large crater there! "What?" said ChaosGallantmon as he saw that, and then suddenly ChaosLord whipped him off his IronSteed from behind with his tail! "Uh!" said ChaosGallantmon as he fell to the ground, and then ChaosLord walked at him and stomped him so hard that he was entirely buried to the ground! ChaosLord looked down at the ChaosGallantmon under his foot, and then he looked up and saw three more ChaosGallantmons riding IronSteeds looking at him. "Is there an endless supply of foolish machines with deathwishes? Really, where do you all come from?" said ChaosLord. "Do you expect us to give up in the face of such a great challenge? Never!" said one of the ChaosGallantmons. "Even if that means your destruction?" said ChaosLord. "We can't know about that unless we try!" said the ChaosGallantmon who spoke previously, and then he charged on his horse, with his lance pointing at ChaosLord. "Haaaaa!" said ChaosGallantmon as he was about to stab his lance at ChaosLord, but ChaosLord just calmly raised his right claw and grabbed ChaosGallantmon's lance's tip with the three tips of his right hand! ChaosGallantmon's IronSteed kept running, but as ChaosGallantmon held his lance he got violently thrown off his horse's back because ChaosLord had grabbed his lance! ChaosGallantmon fell on the ground, and then ChaosLord turned his body and slammed his tail hard down at the fallen machine! As it saw that, that ChaosGallantmon's IronSteed charged at ChaosLord and tried to drill him with the horn on its head. IronSteed drilled at ChaosLord's left hand, but the attack had no effect! "Go away" said ChaosLord, as he waved his left claw at IronSteed, but IronSteed quickly walked back and avoided the attack. "Let's get him!" said one of the two ChaosGallantmons who were riding IronSteeds, and then he and the other ChaosGallantmon who was riding an IronSteed charged at ChaosLord from his right on their mounts. "How naive" said ChaosLord as he aimed his open right claw at the ground in front of the two IronSteeds' feet, and then he used Infinite Slick. The IronSteeds slipped on the liquid and slid on their feet, until they completely lost their balance and fell down to the ground along with their riders. "Uh..." said one of the two ChaosGallantmons who ChaosLord had just hit, and then he suddenly found himself surrounded by some blue psychic energy! The other ChaosGallantmon who ChaosLord had hit at the same time watched with his eyes widened as ChaosLord had pointed his left claw at ChaosGallantmon, and then he started raising him in the air with psychic energy! ChaosLord then swung his left claw upwards to the left, tossing ChaosGallantmon in the diagonially upwards to the left, sending him flying above the forest! ChaosGallantmon flew very high and then fell back into the forest, very far from where ChaosLord was. Then the ChaosGallantmon who had watched with his eyes widened previously suddenly saw ChaosLord lunging at him with his right hand spinning like a drill, and then he did a powerful jackhammer drilling attack on his chest, shaking his whole body! ChaosLord ended his attack by thrusting his right hand at ChaosGallantmon and creating a powerful explosion of dark energy at the same time, which blasted ChaosGallantmon powerfully into the forest. Meanwhile, the ChaosGallantmon who ChaosLord had hit with a downward slam of his tail before got up, only to be noticed by ChaosLord, who immedtately moved at teleportation speed and did an upward slash of his claw at ChaosGallantmon, sending him flying diagonially upwards, flying above the forest! ChaosGallantmon flew for some time with dark energy coming out from some deep wounds caused by ChaosLord's previous slash, and then he fell back in the forest. At the same time, the ChaosGallantmon who ChaosLord had buried beneath the ground before now got out, but ChaosLord, with his eyes closed, just teleported him at a location far away from there and high up in the air! ChaosGallantmon then fell from a huge height into the forest, hitting the ground so hard that it shook the ground a bit! Then ChaosLord opened his eyes, and as soon as the IronSteeds saw that they fled away back into the forest. "Pathetic weaklings..." said ChaosLord as he stood still. He stood and waited for some seconds, and the place seemed to be quiet with no enemies lunging out of the darkness. "No more attacks? I guess they finally realized it's hopeless" said ChaosLord, and then he started walking. But as soon as he took the first step, he heard some inhumane screams and growls coming from the forest around, and suddenly many ghosts, skeletons, zombies and mummies lunged out of the shadows and assaulted him from everywhere! "What!" said ChaosLord, as he saw many skeletons surrounding him and swinging some old double-handed axes they were holding at him, trying to cut him, while some zombies and mummies were slowly advancing towards him, and many ghosts of various forms were trying to harm him using dark powers! The skeletons were trying to hurt ChaosLord with their axes, while the zombies reached him and started grabbing all over his body, and the mummies were punching and kicking him. Meanwhile, the ghosts still tried to harm ChaosLord with dark powers but they had no effect. "How annoying" said ChaosLord, as he stood still and took all the attacks without getting damaged. "Get out of here!" he said then, as a blue psychic energy flashed on his body, blasting the zombies off him. Then he swung his left claw at some skeletons and mummies, slashing them, while at the same time he drilled two skeletons together with his right hand. But the other undead creatures still kept attacking him, ignoring what was happening to those of them who were getting attacked! ChaosLord continued attacking them, swinging his tail to attack behind, and attacking to his front, left and right with the horns on his head and his two hands. However, the undead creatures were just getting up after ChaosLord's attacks and went back to battle without even caring about the consequenses! Also, they were extremely hard to destroy by physical attacks, and those of them who were skeletons just reformed after getting broken to pieces! "Those things sure are persistent..." said ChaosLord, as he did a few more physical attacks against the undead creatures, only to watch them get back up and return to battle. "This is getting boring. I'll just blow them all up with explosion" said ChaosLord, as he stopped attacking. But just then, suddenly, all of the undead creatures stopped attacking. Then they all together looked at certain location of the forest. "Hm?" said ChaosLord as he saw that his opponents had stopped attacking. Suddenly, the undead creatures started retreating in panic, fleeing away towards the direction opposite to where they had looked at! They seemed as if they had been terrified by something. ChaosLord turned around, and looked at the dark creatures running as fast as they could, and disappearing in the shadows of the forest. "Strange. In all of a sudden, they stopped fighting and started running away" said ChaosLord, as he watched the dark creatures fleeing away. Then he turned around again and looked at the place where the undead creatured had been looking at previously. He noticed a human-like silhouette in the distance, slowly walking towards his location! "Hm?" said ChaosLord, as the silhouette started becoming more visible, and ChaosLord saw that it looked like a differently colored Piedmon! "A machine... was he what caused terror to those undead creatures?" said ChaosLord, as he saw the mysterious character stopping to walk, standing and looking at ChaosLord from far away, with an evil, sadistic smile on his face!

This message was edited by OverLord of Chaos on Nov 10 2007.



Author:   Dragon Swordsman
Date:   Oct 12, 07 at 6:31am (PST)
Subject:   re: Make your own Pokemon Stories
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Chapter 58: The Approaching Shadow


Liquidman walked out of the Shinigami Cave, while he was still disguised as a samurai. "Tch... That Drag guy... He gave me some wrong information... I'm sure I just searched the whole of the Shinigami Cave, and I don't see any kind of portal whatsoever..." Liquidman thought as he was rolling his eyes, while the Sun gradually shined on his face as he left the shadows within the cave. "In that case, there's only one place I should go to now... the Storyteller of Elf Village... Let's see... it's this direction, isn't it..." he continued as he was facing the South, and then he kicked off the ground and started flying at that direction. He flew over the village where he was in, and then he started flying over a huge forest to the South. "Huh? Did that guy... Just fly...?" asked a samurai who was guarding the Shinigami Cave as he pointed at Liquidman's direction, while he looked at the guard next to him. "Huh?" said the other guard, who was looking at some pidgeons before as he turned his head and looked at the man who questioned him. "What guy?" he continued. "The man who just came out of the cave" the man answered. "A man? Fly? I thought only pidgeons could fly..." said the other guard as he turned his head back to look at the pidgeons. "Ah, my eyes must be tricking me..." said the other samurai, and then he looked forward and continued guarding the entrance to the Shinigami Cave.

Meanwhile, in Heaven, Ben had just finished explaining a lot of information to the new souls who had just arrived in Heaven. At the same time, many more people have arrived in Heaven while Ben was talking, and those people includes Lance, who appeared along with his six Pokémon! "So there's actually someone above Lord Dragonaurus? I never knew that... Lord Ryuumaru must be really strong then!" said a boy as he looked at Ben. "But too bad we can't enter his castle... I really want to see his face..." said a girl as she looked at the North, while the giant dragon statue was. "But seriously, a single person seperating the world into three? His strength is no joke... No wonder he's stronger than Lord Dragonaurus... Not that Lord Dragonaurus is weak or anything..." said a man. "Hmm... While I'm sure Heaven is a great place judging from what Ben said, I'm still worried about the living world... after all, I don't know what those machines are up to..." said Lance. "Yeah, it's a worry to know that not even you could defeat them..." said a man as he looked at Lance. "Don't worry. Lord Ryuumaru, the Ten Holy Elites and their subordinates have already started to deal with those machines" said Fred. "Well, if that's really true... then we'd have nothing to worry about... As powerful as that pierrot was, I just don't see him standing a chance against someone who friggin' created three worlds!" said a man. Then another man said "So the spider which sent me here... was a Holy Creature...". Then a girl said "So Heaven is sure a safe world... but are there any interesting places we can explore around here? Like in the living world how we can travel overseas and stuff?". Then Fred said "Ofcourse. After all, this world was once connected to the living world... What makes you think this place won't have beautiful natural places like those in the living world? If anything, it'll have even more beautiful places... due to the absence of pollution thanks to the cleansing Holy Particles in this world which are as common as air...". "Cool! So what interesting places are there in this world?" asked the girl. "Let's see... There's Yggdrasil, the Southern land of Iceia, the Torrent Forest, the Wind Desert, within which there is also the Red Sand..." said Fred. "Cool... I want to visit those places..." said the boy, as Fred was smiling as he was looking at all the people before him. But then suddenly, everyone widened their eyes a bit as they felt a wave of strong spirit energy coming from the North and washing over them! "Hm?" said Fred as he and everyone looked at the direction where the spirit energy was coming from, and then they saw a large, green field of grass, surrounded by some small trees, while the giant golden dragon statue on top of Ryuumaru's castle could be seen in the horizon behind the grass field. Everyone also saw a tiny black figure walking towards them on the grass field very far away, and the strong spirit energy seemed to be radiating from there. "Who's that?" asked a boy as he looked at the black figure. "What's this aura...? It seems to be coming from that figure over there..." said a woman as she also looked at the figure. "That's..." said Fred as he widened his eyes more while he took a closer look at the figure, and saw that it was a black man wearing dark glasses, black clothes and carrying a black katana walking towards them! It was Kuroi, who was walking slowly as his hair and cape were blowing in the wind! "What's wrong, Fred?" asked Ben as he looked at Fred. "This spirit energy..." said Fred. "It's coming from that guy" said Ben as he pointed at Kuroi. "That means he's really powerful, doesn't it? After all, you told me that here in Heaven, the power of one's spirit pressure is proportionate to their level of strength" he continued. Then Fred said "That man... He is... Lord Kuroi of the Ten Holy Elites... and one of the Four Seraphim of Heaven..." as he had his eyes wide open as he was watching Kuroi coming closer and closer towards him. "Huh?" said some people, surprised as they turned around and looked at Fred. "So that man over there is one of the Ten Holy Elites Ben spoke of before?" asked an old lady. "But didn't Ben say that the Ten Holy Elites, the Shinigami, angels and Holy Creatures usually stay within the white circular wall to the North of here? If that's one of the Holy Elites, then why is he coming out this far?" asked a man. Then Fred said "No, that's not the thing... Some of the Holy Elites, such as Lord Rance, Lord Yaiba and occasionally Lord Holyta would come to visit our village... But the thing is... when was the last time we had a visit from Lord Kuroi? Of the ten members of the Holy Elites... No, of all the Shinigami, angels and Holy Creatures within the white circular to the North... Normally, Lord Kuroi would be the last person I'd expect to pay us a visit...". "Wow... So that's a Holy Elite... the aura coming from his body is impressively powerful..." said a man as he and everyone else stood and looked at Kuroi, while feeling his powerful spirit energy blowing across their faces. "And just as I thought we'd never actually meet one of the Holy Elites in person, we actually see one on our first day here..." said a teenage boy. Then a girl looked at Fred and said "Fred, what was it about the Four Seraphim you mentioned before?". Then Fred said "The Four Seraphim... refers to the four angels who are among the Ten Holy Elites... In other words, the four strongest angels... they are Lord Kuroi, Lord Rance, and Lord Seigi". "Wow, so that guy's one of the four strongest angels? Wow, this is really a one in a lifetime moment!" said a man. "Uh, technically we're already dead..." said another man who was standing next to him. "Oh yeah..." said the other man, and then he looked at Kuroi, who was now close to the people. At that moment, a flash of blue light happened nearby, and a tall, muscular man with short brown hair, wearing a red singlet and blue pants came out of the light and landed on the grass. Immediately, he got up from the ground as he felt Kuroi's spirit energy. Then he gasped as he looked at Kuroi. "This guy... Could he be... one of them?" the muscular man wondered as he looked at Kuroi, while feeling his powerful spirit energy. "This guy's really dangerous... I know it..." the muscular man thought. Then he turned around and looked at all the other people, who all had their eyes focused on Kuroi. Then the muscular man grinded his teeth together a bit, and then he said "Don't worry, everyone! I'll take care of this guy!", and then he turned around, looked at Kuroi and started charging at him! "Haaaaa!!!" the man screamed his battle cry as he was charging at Kuroi, with his right fist raised! "Hey! What are you doing?!" said a man as he looked at the muscular man. "Shut up! Watch the hero save you from these chaos guys!" said the muscular man. "Haaa!" he shouted as he swung his fist hard at Kuroi, but Kuroi suddenly dissapeared from everyone's sight, and then he immediately reappeared behind the muscular man, with his back turned to him. "What the..." said the muscular man as everyone else gasped. "Wh-What? How did he... move so fast?!" said a man, looking surprised at Kuroi. "You're right... I couldn't even follow his movement with my eyes..." said another man. "It was instantaneous..." he continued. "What's going on...?" said a woman. "That's... Instant Movement..." said Fred. "Instant Movement?" asked a man. "Yes... It is a famous technique amongst the Shinigami, angels and Holy Creatures. By moving one's foot in a special way, the user can instantly move from one position to another at a speed which the eye cannot follow. The distance this move can cover depends on the skill of the user. This technique is perfect for finishing up a fight quickly provided there is a considerable difference between the strength of the user and the user's opponent. It is what allows the user to instantly dissapear and reappear behind their opponents and take them out quickly. And that's not all... Among all the beings of Heaven, Lord Kuroi is the second fastest when it comes to using the Instant Movement technique, with the fastest being none other than Lord Ryuumaru himself" said Fred. "Wow... That must be an amazing guy..." said a boy as he looked at Kuroi. "And I wonder how you made it to Heaven, brat" said Kuroi as he had his back turned to the muscular man, although it was obvious that he was talking to him. "Sh-Shut up! I'm not gonna worship ChaosLord!" said the muscular man as he swung his fist backward, trying to hit Kuroi with the back of his fist, but Kuroi blocked the attack effortlessly with the back of his left arm, without even getting pushed back by the attack, although he was considerably smaller than the extremely large muscular man. "Wh-What the... How..." said the muscular man. "Hey, stop it man!!" said a teenager as he pointed at the muscular man. Then Kuroi infused some spirit energy into his left arm, before pushing it slightly, with a movement so small that it's almost unnoticeable by the eye against the muscular man's fist, sending him flying high up in the air diagonally! "Aaaarrgghh!" the muscular man screamed, and then he fell on the grass much further away, creating a huge explosion of dust! "He sent that guy almost twice his size flying without even noticeably moving at all?" said a girl, looking surprised at Kuroi, who was standing calmly with his cape and hair blowing in the wind. "Did you just say... ChaosLord?" asked Kuroi as he turned his head slightly and looked at the muscular man, who was lying face-first on the ground. "Sh-Shut up... I'm not gonna worship him..." said the muscular man as he got up from the ground. "Wait" said Fred as he started walking towards the muscular man, while everyone moved out of the way as he walked. "No one here is trying to make anyone worship ChaosLord at all! In fact, it's the opposite!" said Fred. "What?" said the muscular man as he stood up and looked at Fred. Then Ben said "This is Heaven! You're in Heaven right now! Y'know, with the good guys! You're strongly opposed to ChaosLord, aren't you? But we are too! We all are! And God here is even dealing with them himself right now!". "Huh?" said the muscular man as he looked around. Then Fred looked at Kuroi and said "My deepest apologies, Lord Kuroi. But please forgive that man. After all, he just came here. I had no time to explain to him the rules of Heaven". Then Kuroi took one last look at the muscular man, and then he looked at everyone else and started walking towards them, while some people stepped back. Then Kuroi stopped walking, as he had his hands in his pockets. "I am Kuroi of the Holy Elites... Sent down to this village under direct orders from Lord Ryuumaru. All of you are from the Johto region, right?" said Kuroi as he looked at the people. "A-Yes..." said a girl. "So, what happened?" asked Kuroi. "Huh?" said the people, looking confused at Kuroi. "What happened which made all of you come here to Heaven?" said Kuroi. "Uh...Now I understand why Fred said this guy would be the last one from within the white circular walls who he would expect to visit us..." a man thought. "Well, we were attacked... by machines..." said a teenager. "While some of us were killed by some... heretics..." said another teenager. "I see. The machines who attacked you... Do any of you know the purpose behind their actions?" asked Kuroi. "Well, all three of them mentioned ChaosLord, the name of a large red dragon machine who appeared in Vermillion City and destroyed it a few days ago. I think they wanted us to worship ChaosLord or something..." said a woman. "As I thought... So, what do the machines look like?" asked Kuroi. Then a man said "Well, we've pretty much agreed that there were three machines who attacked us. One was a black dragon man machine, one was a large sea dragon machine, and one was a black pierrot machine with psychic abilities". "So there were only three machines...?" asked Kuroi. "Yeah... of all the guys who came here, none of them reported about seeing any machines other than those three..." said the man. "I see... So the other six machines Lord Ryuumaru saw on WorldMap must be the ones who performed that black barrier technique..." Kuroi thought. Then he said "What else do you people know about the machines?". "Well, okay... the three machines were first spotted together in Goldenrod City in Johto, and it seems the black dragon later attacked the Lake of Rage in the same region, while the sea dragon later attacked Cianwood and Olivine, and the pierrot later attacked Azalea Town, Violet City and New Bark Town in that order... in Azalea Town... when that pierrot first appeared before us, he introduced him as ChaosPiedmon... while according to some people, the sea dragon called himself ChaosMetalSeadramon" said a man. "As for the black dragon, we have no idea of his name, although he managed to defeat my Pokémon in combat before I was killed..." said Lance. "You're... Lance, the Champion of the Indigo League?" asked Kuroi as he looked at Lance. "That's right. I'm Lance" said Lance. "So even Champion Lance was defeated... although I guess it isn't surprising seeing as his opponent was most likely... ChaosBlackWarGreymon of the Chaos Generals... So the three who attacked Johto inside the black barrier were in fact the three Chaos Generals? That's interesting..." Kuroi thought. "And one last thing" he said as he looked at the people. "When you were attacked by the machines, how was the sky like?" he continued. "Uh... it was... blue?" said a man. "Did you not see the sky being covered by a large, black barrier?" asked Kuroi. "Nope" said the man. "Well actually, after we got killed, we temporarily saw a large burst of black energy which covered the entire sky... but that only lasted for a few seconds..." said a woman. "What's going on? Did they not see the black barrier covering the entire Johto region during the time when the machines attacked them? Or maybe the barrier was built in such a way so that it is transparent when viewed from the inside... but is completely black when viewed from the outside... but what explains that burst of black energy covering the sky which that woman reported?" Kuroi thought. "In any case, these people will not know anything more" he continued thinking. "I see. Thank you for the information" said Kuroi as he looked at the people, and then he turned around and started walking slowly away, towards the direction where Ryuumaru's castle was. "I'm sure Lord Ryuumaru would find them helpful" Kuroi continued as he was walking with his back turned to everyone, and then he used Instant Movement and dissapeared from everyone's sight in an instant, leaving behind as tiny cloud of dust on the part of the ground where his feet were before, and the presence of his spirit energy instantly vanished along with Kuroi. "He dissapeared..." said a woman as she looked at the place where Kuroi was standing before he dissapeared. "Wow... That was quick..." said a man. "Hm? He left already?" said Fred as he turned around. "They must be researching on the machines..." said a man. "In any case, all of you wouldn't mind becoming members of my village, right?" said Fred as he smiled. "Alright, we'll stay here... After all, I don't think there are any towns or villages nearby..." said a woman as she looked around, and then everyone started heading towards the inner part of the village.

To be continued




Author:   OverLord of Chaos
Date:   Oct 14, 07 at 9:04pm (PST)
Subject:   ...
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The machine arc, Part 11: The performance of power! ChaosPiedmon VS ChaosLord!

ChaosLord stood and looked at the differently colored Piedmon, who was in fact ChaosPiedmon! ChaosPiedmon was smiling evily as he watched at ChaosLord, who was standing far away from him, waiting for his move. Suddenly, ChaosPiedmon disappeared and instantly teleported in front of ChaosLord, surprising him! "Boo" said ChaosPiedmon as he gently thrusted his right index finget at ChaosLord's face, unleashing an insane amount of psychic energy from his finger, which immediately blasted ChaosLord flying backwards at the speed of a comet! "What...!" said ChaosLord, as he was flying backwards at extreme speed, crashing through many trees! Then suddenly, with his left eye, he saw ChaosPiedmon flying right next to him at the same speed, smiling evily! "Hmhmhm!" laughed ChaosPiedmon as he horizontally chopped the air with his left hand at ChaosLord's direction, blasting him down to the ground with a wave of psychic energy! ChaosLord hit the ground while still flying at extreme speed, and started sliding extremely fast, leaving behind him a huge cloud of dust! ChaosLord also occasionally crashed through trees on his way, and then he also hit a large rock, which made him fly a bit above the ground for a second, and then ChaosLord fell back down and started rolling on the ground instead of sliding! ChaosLord rolled extremely fast and left behind him a huge cloud of dust, and then he smashed through some big trees and got slowed down, until he finally stopped after falling and splashing in a swamp. As ChaosLord fell in the swamp, some Numemon, Raremon and Gekomon which were inside it started running away. "That machine..." said ChaosLord, as he got up inside the swamp, and then he walked out, with mud and dirty water having covered most of his body and slowly dropping to the ground. Then he looked to his front and saw ChaosPiedmon walking at him, smiling evily. ChaosLord removed the muddy water from his body with a flash of blue psychic energy, and then he pointed his right hand at ChaosPiedmon, opened it up, and fired a Hyper Beam. ChaosPiedmon stopped walking and raised his right hand at the Hyper Beam, and then the Hyper Beam stopped as soon as it touched his palm! The Hyper Beam was then blasted back to ChaosLord, but ChaosLord stood still and slashed it with his left claw when it got close enough, dispersing it to nothing. "Well, it looks like this is going to be an interesting performance" said ChaosPiedmon then, as he looked into ChaosLord's eyes while smiling evily. "A performance?" said ChaosLord. "Hahaha! Don't worry, your role in this will end soon enough!" said ChaosPiedmon. "Soon, you'll regret ever meeting me, the great Chaos General, ChaosPiedmon!" he continued, as he raised his hands in the air and leaned his head back with a huge smile on his face. "Another Chaos General, hm? Like ChaosMetalSeadramon... In that case, then this might indeed get interesting..." said ChaosLord, and then he suddenly disappeared! ChaosPiedmon got surprised as ChaosLord appeared behind him, and then he immediately teleported away, avoiding a drill attack from ChaosLord's right hand in the last second! ChaosPiedmon appeared some distance away from ChaosLord and to his front and said "Don't be so impatient. Let's take our time and enjoy this!". Then he pointed his palms at ChaosLord, formed a blue fire ball into his right hand and a pink fire ball into his left hand, and then he threw both the fire balls at ChaosLord. ChaosLord then aimed his cannons at ChaosPiedmon and shot two huge blasts of water with extreme pressure, which hit and instantly destroyed ChaosPiedmon's fire balls and then kept going towards him! ChaosPiedmon hovered up in the air, letting the water blasts fly below him, and then he hovered back down to the ground, while ChaosLord's water blasts kept going and crushed some trees. "Such an overpowering attack. Was it really necessary?" said ChaosPiedmon. "I'm sorry. Was it too much for you?" said ChaosLord. "Hahahahaha! Too much for me?" said ChaosPiedmon, laughing. "No technique exists that is too much for the Master of All Techniques!" he continued, as he pointed his right hand at the ground below ChaosLord's feet. "Pump Fountain!" he said then, and then suddenly the ground under ChaosLord's feet erupted, and a huge fountain of water came out at unbelievable pressure! ChaosLord got hit from below and he was blasted by the water at a huge height above the forest! In seconds, ChaosLord had been sent flying very high in the air, and then he saw ChaosPiedmon teleporting in the air next to him! "Thunder!" said ChaosPiedmon excitedly as he raised his hands, and then a huge thunder fell from the sky and hit ChaosLord, zapping his entire body in some extremely powerful electricity! A huge explosion also happened after the thunder fell on ChaosLord, which blasted him back at the ground at comet speed! ChaosLord travelled downwards at huge speed while leaving behind a trail of dust by the explosion, and then he landed on the ground in the dark forest extremely hard, causing a large earthquake all over the forest! Also, many bats flew off the forest towards all directions after the earthquake. ChaosPiedmon hovered down to the place where ChaosLord had landed, and saw a huge, deep hole at that location, which ChaosLord had created by his fall! The hole was so deep that ChaosLord could not even be seen inside it! ChaosPiedmon then stood and waited for some time, and then he said "Oh? Is it over so soon?" as he looked at the darkness of the hole on the ground. But suddenly, he heard the ground below his feet shaking. Then, the ground below ChaosPiedmon's feet suddenly erupted, and ChaosPiedmon immediately did a backflip and avoided an attack by ChaosLord, who dug out of the ground with his horn-drill! "So, you call yourself Master of All Techniques. Certainly, those techniques you just used were of quite a high level..." said ChaosLord as he looked at ChaosPiedmon. "However, you are not the only one who can use them" he continued, as he pointed his cannons at ChaosPiedmon. "Twin Hydro Cannon" he continued, as he then fired two huge blasts of water at ChaosPiedmon. But then ChaosPiedmon immediately teleported and avoided the attack! Then he reappeared somewhere else, and said "You tried this before. It...", but before he could finish talking, ChaosPiedmon was hit from behind by ChaosLord's two blasts of water! "Argh!" said ChaosPiedmon as he was blasted towards the direction of ChaosLord, who then opened up his right arm and charged up a large ball of electricity, which he blasted at ChaosPiedmon! ChaosPiedmon flew towards the electricity ball, which also flew at him, and then they both collided in a huge electrifying explosion! "Argh!" said ChaosPiedmon as he was blasted backwards by the explosion, and then he crashed hard on a large rock, cratering it! Much dust was also created when the rock was cratered, covering the area arounr the rock. ChaosLord then stood and watched at the smoke, and saw ChaosPiedmon walking out of the smoke with a smile of confidence on his face! "So, you teleported your attack to hit me from the back... An interesting combination" said ChaosPiedmon. "But you're not the only one who can teleport his attacks" he continued, as he pointed his palm at ChaosLord. Immediately then, ChaosLord was hit by some Shadow Balls from the back! ChaosLord took one step forwards because of the force of the attack that happened to his back, and then ChaosPiedmon pointed his palms to where ChaosLord just stepped and said "Quicksand!". Then the ground below ChaosLord's feet turned into quicksand, and ChaosLord started to rapidly sink inside because of his big weight! "Hahahahahahaha!" laughed ChaosPiedmon with his eyes closed, as ChaosLord soon disappeared under the ground! "It's over. In a few moments, the dark energy in the depths of this planet will consume you until there's nothing left. There's no escape from this attack. Even if your body is resistant enough to not get damaged by the sand's pressure, the dark energy will completely drain you of your power, rendering you unable to move or even teleport" said ChaosPiedmon, smiling as he evily looked at the quicksand where ChaosLord had been buried. But suddenly, an earthquake happened, and then the ground below ChaosPiedmon's feet erupted, and out came ChaosLord's cannons! "What!" said ChaosPiedmon as he flew backwards and looked surprised at the cannons, which then fired two Hyper Beams! ChaosPiedmon then pointed his palms at the Hyper Beams and formed a rectangular yellow energy shield, on which the Hyper Beams crashed with huge force! ChaosPiedmon was protected by the energy shield, although he was pushed backwards for some distance by the force of the Hyper Beams! The Hyper Beams then disappeared, and ChaosPiedmon lowered his hands while his energy shield also disappeared as he saw ChaosLord emerging from the ground in front of him! "So, you escaped. Well then, if you won't die so easily... It'll be amusing to destroy you slowly and painfully!" he continued, as he waved his right arm upward, an then a vine whip came out of his sleeve! "Vine Whip!" said ChaosPiedmon, as he swung the whip at ChaosLord. An ice blue aura appeared on ChaosPiedmon's whip as he was swinging it, and then the whip hit ChaosLord at the right arm, instantly freezing it solid! "Hm?" said ChaosLord as he looked at his frozen right arm. "Haha!" laughed ChaosPiedmon as he then swung his whip upwards at ChaosLord's face, and then the whip suddenly caught on fire and upward whipped ChaosLord at the chin in a fiery explosion! ChaosLord took two steps back after the explosion, and then ChaosPiedmon whipped the ground hard with his vive whip, and as he did that a massive blast of electricity came out of the whip and travelled towards ChaosLord, reducing the ground to rubbles on its way! The huge blast of electricity travelled fast at ChaosLord and hit him in a large electrifying explosion, which zapped ChaosLord's entire body! Then ChaosPiedmon pulled his whip back to him, and then he stood and watched ChaosLord standing in front of him, with some electicity sparking on his body and his right arm frozen. "A whip that can use elemental attacks... or is it that you can just infuse elements into any of your attacks?" said ChaosLord. "Does it even matter?" said ChaosPiedmon then as he swung his vine whip at ChaosLord, but ChaosLord then opened up his right hand, effortlessly shattering the ice around it, and caught ChaosPiedmon's whip! "What?" said ChaosPiedmon, as he looked at ChaosLord holding his whip in his hand. "You're right. It doesn't matter" said ChaosLord, and then he pulled his hand back, pulling ChaosPiedmon's whip towards him, and ChaosPiedmon was pulled with huge force towards ChaosLord, getting sent flying towards him! "Giga Claw!" said ChaosLord then as he thrusted his left claw at ChaosPiedmon, trying to stab him while he was flying at him! ChaosPiedmon widened his eyes as he saw that, and then he teleported away in the last second, barely avoiding ChaosLord's stab! Then ChaosPiedmon reappeared behind ChaosLord. "Do you think this will be so easy?" said ChaosPiedmon, while ChaosLord turned to face him. ChaosPiedmon then tried to whip ChaosLord with his vine whip, but ChaosLord fended off the attack with his left claw. "This whip of yours is only going to bring you at a disadvantage" said ChaosLord. "Is that what you believe? Then let me show you my Vine Whip's true form" said ChaosPiedmon, and then he raised his arm up in a quick movement, making the whip point at the sky. The whip then spread open and changed from a single-tailed whip to a whip with three tails! ChaosPiedmon then slammed his new whip down to the ground hard, creating an earthquake! Also, where the ground was hit by the whip's three tails, three huge cracks were created on the ground and started extending fast at ChaosLord! ChaosLord, however, just stood still as the ground cracked below his feet, and he hovered in the air with his psychic powers. However, the ground cracking caused some nearby trees to fall towards the cracks on the ground, and some trees from the forest started falling at ChaosLord! ChaosLord, in the last second before the trees could fall on him, disappeared instantaneously, and after the trees fell he reappeared again and hovered in the air in the same position as he was before. "A power-up?" said ChaosLord. "Exactly. This Vine Whip now has three tails, each with the cutting power of an extremely sharp blade!" said ChaosPiedmon, as he swung his whip at some trees, and they got sliced to pieces effortlessly by his whip! ChaosLord then watched as the trees crumbled to the ground, and said "I see. I'm sorry, though. It's still useless" said ChaosLord, as he closed his eyes. "Vine Whip!" said ChaosPiedmon then, as he whipped ChaosLord with his new whip, and some sparks were created as the whip's three tails hit ChaosLord's metal body hard. However, the whip just harmlessly sparked off ChaosLord's body! ChaosPiedmon then whipped ChaosLord twice more, but still his attack was having no effect. Then one more time ChaosPiedmon swung his vine whip, this time at ChaosLord's head, and its tree tails got wrapped around ChaosLord's horn! "Thunder!" said ChaosPiedmon, as suddenly a massive amount of electricity flowed from his right hand through his whip, until it reached the part which had been wrapped around ChaosLord's horn and started electrifying him! However, the electricity was just getting absorbed into ChaosLord's horn! "It's pointless" said ChaosLord, as he started spinning his horn fast, wrapping ChaosPiedmon's vine whip around it even more, and then ChaosPiedmon once again was sent flying towards ChaosLord as the whip in his hand was pulled towards him! ChaosLord then aimed his cannons at the flying ChaosPiedmon and used Hyper Cannon! ChaosLord fired some projectiles at ChaosPiedmon with insane force, and the projectiles insnantly exploded upon impact in an insanely huge explosion, which brought down thousands of trees around! ChaosLord himself was also instantly blasted backwards at huge speed just by the force with which he had fired his cannons, and he was sliding on his feet extremely fast while also crashing on some trees and bringing them down! ChaoLord slid for a large distance and then he stopped and looked to his front, at the location where he had used Hyper Cannon, and saw that all that was left was a large area of devastated land burning in huge flames. ChaosLord looked at the flames, and then he suddenly heard a voice from behind him "To go through such efforts just to defeat me... it makes me wonder of you really are the Ultimate organism as you say". ChaosLord then turned around and saw ChaosPiedmon! "Or do you just always like to cause so much destruction when you're fighting?" said ChaosPiedmon. ChaosLord looked a little surprised at ChaosPiedmon, who was standing unharmed, looking at him with his usual evil, sadistic smile! "What's wrong? You thought you killed me back there, didn't you? After all, you did see your attack hitting me and causing this huge explosion... so how do I stand here? The answer is simple. What you hit back there was not me. It was a clone of me, which I let you attack while I teleported away" said ChaosPiedmon. "So, your defense is your speed and trickery" said ChaosLord. "Isn't it entertaining? No matter how powerful you are, it's useless. You might have broken through ChaosMetalSeadramon's defense with huge strength, but it won't help you here" said ChaosPiedmon, smiling evily. "You will only die without even having scratched me!" said ChaosPiedmon, as he waved his right arm upwards, sending a sonic blast at ChaosLord, which hit him and made him slide on his feet a little, while also creating a cloud of dust. "Is that so?" said ChaosLord, as he looked at ChaosPiedmon. Then he fired two red missiles at ChaosPiedmon from the part between his cannons, and the red missiles started flying at ChaosPiedmon! ChaosPiedmon then teleported high in the air, behind ChaosLord, and said "It's useless!". But then, he saw ChaosLord's red missiles changing direction and heading at him again! "So, those missiles follow the target until they hit..." said ChaosPiedmon, as he looked at the missiles heading towards him. "Is that all you can muster?" he continued, as he pointed his hands at the missiles and was about to fire two Shadow Balls at them. But just before he could do that, ChaosLord teleported behind him and slammed him with his huge right hand! "Argh!" said ChaosPiedmon as he was sent flying towards the red missiles by ChaosLord's attack, and then he hit them and the missiles exploded! The explosions filled the place with dust, which then faded away and revealed ChaosPiedmon still floating in the air. "So, those missiles were only a distraction..." said ChaosPiedmon. "You're not the only one who can do tricks, ChaosPiedmon" said ChaosLord, as he looked at his opponent. "It doesn't matter if you fight like that or not, I'll still win" said ChaosPiedmon as he looked at ChaosLord, ready to continue fighting.

This message was edited by OverLord of Chaos on Nov 10 2007.



Author:   Dragon Swordsman
Date:   Oct 17, 07 at 5:55am (PST)
Subject:   re: Make your own Pokemon Stories
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Here is a story I once wrote a few years ago. It is a story I wrote in my English class back then, as my teacher once wanted us to write a myth/legend. Here is the story, which I found in my English book from a few years ago, as I was looking for notes and stuff in my shelf since I have exams coming up in less than a week, and I happened to find this old book and the story in it.











Author:   OverLord of Chaos
Date:   Nov 09, 07 at 6:06pm (PST)
Subject:   ...
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Here is a small story I wrote for fun today to replace the content in this profile as I didn't like something about the old one:

Once upon a time, there was an extremely intelligent, but bored student known as Yagami Light. One day, he found a Death Note dropped by a Shinigami known as Ryuuk. After starting to use it and realizing the power he had, he decided to use the Death Note to eliminate all evil people on the world by killing them. His ultimate goal would be to create a New World where evil would not exist, in which he would reign as the "God of The New World", or Kira. Yagami Light started killing many criminals, but the police considered those acts murders and went after him. Kira then started to eliminate not just evil people but also innocents who just happened to opppose him, such as L, FBI agents, and other people. He also took advantage of some people who admired him in order to reach closer to his goal. In the end, Yagami Light was eventually discovered by the police. Ryuuk then killed him with his own Death Note because he was bored to wait for him to die in jail. So Yagami Light died without having achieved much more than killing and hurting a lot of people (although, his killing of criminals possibly saved other people from suffering pain caused by the criminals in the future had they lived).

But then another Shinigami was bored and dropped his Death Note to the human world like Ryuuk had done. This time, an entirely different person found the note. It was a mysterious scientist dressed completely in black and wearing black glasses, known as Darkel Dark. This scientist was as withdrawn as possible from society, keeping an extremely low profile to the point where no one even knew his name! Darkel Dark was living in an underground laboratory located at the outskirts of a peaceful town, secretly studying about stuff. The Death Note accidentally ended up somewhere near Darkel's laboratory, and Darkel found it and took it in.

Darkel was a very ususual character. In fact, he was unique and alone in the world. He lived completely on his own, as he simply could not stand being with other people. He hated them all - children, teenagers, adults and old men, all of them were despicable and hateful in Darkel's point of view. There were no exceptions - Darkel hated everyone other than himself. He thought the world was crazy and random and the people were stupid and weak. He disliked people of all ages, races, genders, and generally everyone other than him without a single exception. Because Darkel was deeply irritated by the flaws in the human nature, he learned to live on his own independently. In a remote and quiet location, he created an underground laboratory, in which he just studied about stuff and observed the world interested, but uninvolved.

Darkel's hatred towards humanity was such that he wanted to destroy it entirely to the last living person. In his laboratory, he did some research on how to achieve that goal. With a program he created and some special equipment invented by him, he managed to find the locations of all the nuclear weapons on the planet. After some analysis and solving numerous and various equations, Darkel came to discover a shocking fact: that there had been created enough nuclear weapons and bombs on Earth to devastate Earth entirely! Darkel thought that, if he could gain control of all those weapons, he could kill the humans with the weapons they had created with their very own hands! Darkel became extremely excited and obsessed with this idea, as he wanted to punish humans for their stupidity using their own stupidity (the mistake of having made so many weapons). However, it soon became clear that gaining access to those weapons was almost impossible even for one of such great intelligence and knowledge as him.

With the destruction of the world now looking impossible, Darkel's dream started to become more and more distant from reality. After some time of thought, Darkel came to the conclusion that destroying the entire world was impossible to achieve by a single person, or would require unimaginable amounts of effort. Darkel then started to give up on the idea on destroying the world, and thought that he should just live on his own and ignore those things he does not like but has no power to change, as striving to correct something without power was a pointless waste of effort. In Darkel's opinion, only power could change the world. Not logic, not feelings, not justice, not anything. Only power. And since Darkel did not have enough power, trying would definitely result in failure and a waste of time. So he continued living on his own, ignoring anything his power could not reach.

But it was then when he found the Death Note. Darkel, as all other humans on Earth, had heard of the accomplishments of Kira with the previous Death Note. As he grabbed the note book of death, Darkel felt the power he wanted flowing though his hands! Excited, Darkel took the note book into his laboratory, and started thinking about how to use it. He came up with a way to destroy the whole world just by swinging his pen! With the power to destroy the world once and for all, Darkel then thought if that really was what he should do. Exterminating humanity was a too important and major decision, as was making the Shinigami Eyes deal, which was necessary for his plan. He went out for a walk to breathe some fresh air and clear up his mind, while he observed the people around. But as usual, he just grew annoyed at seeing the people around him. He watched various people, but he finally decided to destroy the world after seeing a group of teenagers talking about having a party.



The words party and fun (in the way the teenagers meant it) sounded pointless and ridiculous to Darkel, who at this point took the decision to delete the world after witnessing the ignorance and stupidity of those young people, who were the future of the planet. Enraged, Darkel walked with haste to his laboratory, slammed the door open, and then he turned his computer open and made it display the locations of various nuclear bomb locations on the planet. Immediately then, he made the Shinigami Eyes deal, and then he he wrote down the names of some scientists who had access to the nuclear bombs and knew how to activate them. He had them activate the nuclear bombs and die by the explosions! Darkel started writing down names on the Death Note rapidly, saying "Devastate" each time he would complete writing down a name. Very soon, huge nuclear explosions started happening all over the planet, eliminating thousands of people at once! The people soon realized that this was the work of none other than a new, insane Kira! They started trying to deactivate the nuclear bombs, but Darkel was faster than them and made them go off before they could be stopped. The humans then started appearing on television and begging Kira to stop and asking what he wanted, but Darkel was not even watching television or caring about the news! He just kept activating bombs, ruthlessly and relentlessly. Using the tools that the humans themselves had created for their nations' power, the sattelites and the bombs as well as other weapons, Darkel destroyed nation after nation, continent after continent. He continued causing devastation for hours, and then, being sure that the end of the world was now inevitable, he sent a message to the world through the internet.

"Do you think you are a good human? Do you believe that some people are superior and some are inferior? Do you think your nation is special? Do you think you are right? Do you think your opinions are correct? Do you fight to get what you want? Do you care about the rest? Do you think you should be forgiven for your sins? Do you even try to be forgiven? Do you think you even deserve to live? You've always strived to achieve your goals no matter what they might have had been and there had never been objective judgement. Judgement is only created and delivered by those with power. Even in a supposedly civilized society like the human one, the laws of nature, such as survival of the fittest, are still true. In this life, all are on their own and have their own opinions and do as they wish depending on what their power allows. So I will do the same, and send you all to hell as I think is good. Now that I have the power, I am Judgement"

Darkel then continued causing huge explosions, devastating huge areas, until all life was erased from Earth. The Earth then became a lifeless planet, just like all the rest in the universe. Also, the Shinigamis in the Shinigami world eventually died too, as there were no more humans to kill with their Death Notes to expand their lifespans. So all life ended everywhere and forever.

The End.



Author:   OverLord of Chaos
Date:   Nov 10, 07 at 8:28pm (PST)
Subject:   ...
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The machine arc, Part 12: Trickery and indirect battle

ChaosLord and ChaosPiedmon were hovering in the air, looking at each other for some seconds. "What's wrong? Aren't you going to attack?" said ChaosLord. ChaosPiedmon then smiled, and then some darkness appeared on his feet. The darkness then moved upwards, and ChaosPiedmon was vanishing in the darkness! ChaosLord watched a little surprised as ChaosPiedmon completely vanished into the darkness! Then he stood still and watched at the location where ChaosPiedmon had been previously, when suddenly a large blast of light energy hit him from behind! ChaosLord was pushed forwards by the attack, and then he turned around to see what was behind him, but there was nothing but air! Then suddenly he heard some noise from above, and saw a large fireball descending down at him, hitting him just after he saw it, and pushing him down to he ground! ChaosLord was pushed by the fireball and hit the ground hard, while the fireball also exploded on his top in a huge explosion of flames that set some nearby trees on fire! ChaosLord then stood on his feet and looked around, but no one seemed to be in the area! "Hahahahahahaha!" he heard a laughter then. "You became invisible?" said ChaosLord. "That is correct" heard ChaosLord ChaosPiedmon's voice then, before some chains covered in purple and pink energy emerged from the ground and his feet and wrapped all around his body, absorbing his energy! Then immediately after that ChaosLord saw a huge drill of energy shaping in front of him, whith then spinned and flew at him, drilling on his body! Many explosions of energy happened as the energy drill was drilling on ChaosLord, who was also covered in energy-absorbing chains! The energy drill drilled ChaosLord for some seconds and the chains kept absorbing energy from him, but then in all of a sudden, they all disappeared! ChaosLord had just made them vanish using his psychic powers! Then ChaosLord suddenly teleported somewhere nearby and punched the air with his right hand. His punch hit ChaosPiedmon, who had been standing there while invisible, and threw him flying horizontally! ChaosPiedmon then got smashed on a tree with huge force, crushing it down! ChaosPiedmon was invisible during that, so it seemed like ChaosLord had just punched the air and a random tree in front of him got smashed in half somehow. "What... How?" said ChaosPiedmon, as he got up, still being invisible. "I see through your technique, ChaosPiedmon" said ChaosLord. "You can see through the Veil of Darkness?" said ChaosPiedmon. "I congratulate you for being able to use such a technique. Truly, being able to hide every single thing about your presence is a great achievement. However, I could still see where you are with my psychic powers" said ChaosLord. "That is impossible. This technique is designed to completely fool all senses!" said ChaosPiedmon. "That is true. However, when you use this technique, it creates some sort of empty space in the environment at the place where you are. That empty space is actually a lack of presence. In the environment, psychic powers can sense the presence of things. Now, from what I can tell, your technique makes it almost impossible even for psychic powers to sense that lack of presence, fooling them to believe that there is actually presence there. However, with the level of my own psychic powers, this did not work, and I was able to find your location by sensing the lack of presence you created when standing at a location" said ChaosLord. Then suddenly, ChaosPiedmon, who was still invisible, teleported behind ChaosLord and blasted a Psybeam at him from his palm. However, ChaosLord just raised his tail, which took the Psybeam for him without harm. "It's hopeless. I can predict all of your moves" said ChaosLord, without even turning to face ChaosPiedmon. ChaosPiedmon then became visible again and said "In that case, I won't even fight you myself". ChaosLord then slightly turned his head to look at ChaosPiedmon with the corner of his right eye. "My dear awesome beasts, show me your power!" said ChaosPiedmon then, as he raised his hands, and an earthquake started to happen! Then the ground started to erupt at three different spots around ChaosLord! One eruption was a huge eruption of water and ice, the other was an enormous eruption of super hot flames and lava, and the last eruption was a gigantic eruption of sand, rocks and mud! The huge eruptions happened for some seconds, and some roars were heard from inside them! Then some huge giants made of elements came out of the eruptions! One giant was made of mud, sand and rocks, coming from the similar eruption, and the other two were a giant made of water and ice and a giant made of lava and flames, coming from the eruptions same as them too! The giants stood huge, even bigger than ChaosLord, and looked down at him! "Beasts!! Attack this machine!!" said ChaosPiedmon liudly, and then the three giants he summoned roared and started closing in on ChaosLord, making the ground tremble with every step! "Giants made of water, fire and sand... Interesting" said ChaosLord, as he looked to the water giant to his front left and to the fire giant to his front right, with the sand giant being right behind him. The sand giant then punched the ground hard with his rock fist, causing a huge earthquake and making the ground crack towards ChaosLord! ChaosLord looked behind him with the corner of his right eye and saw the crack on the ground extending towards his direction, and then he closed his eyes and teleported! ChaosLord appeared right behind the sand giant at the height of his chest, with his cannons positioned to aim at the giant's back! "I'll blow you to dust. Hyper Beam!" said ChaosLord, and then he fired two huge, devastating Hyper Beams from his cannons! The beams hit the sand giant at point-blank range, blowing him entirely to dust which filled the whole place! Some rocks and mud which were on the giant also fell on the ground. ChaosLord then landed on the ground too, with some rocks from the giant still raining, and just as he landed, he saw the water giant walking right in front of him, ready to attack him! The water giant opened up his huge mouth and spat out a huge stream of water at ChaosLord, but ChaosLord aimed his right arm at the giant, opened it up, and then shaped a huge yellow energy sphere, which he blasted at the water giant! The huge yellow energy ball, which was a Terra Force attack, travelled straight through the water giant's water blast, dispersing it on its way towards the giant's head! The Terra Force then hit the giant at the head and a huge explosion of yellow energy happened, which blasted the water giant's entire upper body to water drops and small pieces of shattered ice! The water from the water giant also came in contact with the dust from the sand giant, and the dust settled down as mud. Also, the water giant's lower body collapsed to water and ice that fell to the ground. Then the fire giant saw ChaosLord as there was no dust to block his sight anymore, and then he formed a huge fire ball in his enormous hand, and hurled it at ChaosLord! ChaosLord just stood still and let the fireball hit him in a huge explosion of flames which covered him and a huge area around him! The flames created after the attack were so huge that ChaosLord could not even be seen inside them! But then ChaosLord's voice was heard from the flames "V-Wing Blade", and then a large V-shaped energy blast appeared in the flames, which then flew off at the speed of light and striked the fire giant at the stomach, chopping him in half! The fire giant's upper body then fell on the ground and collapsed to flames and lava, while the same also happened to his lower body. ChaosLord then stood in the flames, and look at his opponent ChaosPiedmon looking at him with an evil smile from away. ChaosLord then was about to make a move, but suddenly he felt the ground trembling a bit. Then he looked and saw the pieces of the three giants moving on the ground towards three positions! The pieces of the fire giant gathered in one position, the pieces of the water giant gathered in another position, and the pieces of the sand giant gathered in the last position, and the three giants were starting to reform! ChaosLord then stood and watched as he was slowly covered by a shadow which was increasing in size, as the tree giants reformed back to their initial forms before him! The three giants then reformed completely and stood betwen ChaosLord and ChaosPiedmon, who was smiling evily! "They reformed..." said ChaosLord, as he looked at the three giants standing in front of him. The fire giant then roared extremely loudly, shaking the atmosphere, and summoned a huge storm of fire, lava and meteorites that rained down from the sky in the area! As much lava drops and flames fell on ChaosLord, a huge meteorite suddenly landed with huge force right next to ChaosLord, creating a massive earthquake and also cratering the ground! An explosion of some power also happened as the meteorite hit the ground, blasting ChaosLord away at huge speed! "This giant could use such a technique?" said ChaosLord as he was flying, and at the same time lava and fire were still raining on him! Then ChaosLord was about to land on the ground, and then the sand giant placed his palms on the ground, and some sort of unknown, invisible energy flowed through the land and went to the location where ChaosLord was about to land! That location then turned into a huge pit of quicksand! ChaosLord fell right in the quicksand and sank into the ground! The pit of quicksand then turned back into normal sand, and also at the same time the rain of file, lava and comets also stopped. Everything was silent for some seconds. But then suddenly the ground shook a bit, and out came ChaosLord in an explosion of sand! ChaosLord then started flying towards the three giants using his cannons as rockets, but suddenly, the ground below him erupted and out came a massive pillar of water and ice! ChaosLord got caught in the pillar, which then instantly froze solid, trapping ChaosLord in an enormous column of ice! But then ChaosLord used Explosion, creating a huge explosion around his body that entirely shattered the ice! Then ChaosLord continued flying towards the giants using his cannons as rockets. The fire giant then started throwing fireballs and spitting a stream of flames and lava at ChaosLord, while the water giant threw huge ice balls at ChaosLord and blasted water and ice at him, and the sand giant threw gigantic boulders, mud and sand at ChaosLord! However, ChaosLord was taking all the hits and flying through the giants' attacks without even getting delayed by their attacks! ChaosLord then aimed his right hand at the giants while flying, and then he opened it up and sharted shooting some Hyper Beams. But the sand giant summoned a huge rock which emerged from the ground, that took all the Hyper Beams before getting destroyed. ChaosLord then got close to the giants, and the sand giant tried to punch him with his rock fist, but ChaosLord raised his left claw and effortlessly blocked the giant's attack! Then some psychic energy flashed on ChaosLord's eyes, who then used Psychic and pushed the sand giant to the water giant, making them collide with each other! The two giants then merged together into a new giant of frozen mud! Then ChaosLord used Psychic on the newly formed giant, throwing him at the fire giant! The two giants merged together this time too, and the fire giant's fire was put out, while the water giant's water and ice turned to steam! The new giant was now made just of sand, rocks, and frozen lava, and was like the sand giant! ChaosLord then flew backwards a bit and looked at the sand giant. "Now, that leaves me with only one opponent" he said. "Not exactly" said ChaosPiedmon, with an evil smile! Then ChaosLord looked and saw the water giant reforming using the steam he had been turned to as well as water vapour in the atmosphere! The ground also cracked and erupted and out came some lava and fire, forming the fire giant, while the water giant turned some of himself into ice. Now, the three giants were back to their initial states! "They're back..." said ChaosLord, as he looked at the giants. "Hahahahahahahahahahahahaha!" laughed ChaosPiedmon with his eyes closed, enjoying what he was seeing and believing ChaosLord was beginning to fall into despair. The water giant then did an ice punch at ChaosLord, but ChaosLord flew to the left and avoided it. But to where he flew was the fire giant, who blasted a huge Solar Beam from his mouth at ChaosLord! ChaosLord was hit by the Solar Beam and was pushed down to the ground, hitting it hard and sliding for some distance while crashing through some trees! Eventually he stopped, and then he saw the water giant's shadow covering him, as the giant walked up to him and raised his right fist in the air, while some electricity gathered in it! The water giant then did an electrifying punch of water and ice down at ChaosLord, hitting him in a massive explosion of water, electricity and ice! After the punch, all that was left was a mass of ice and electricity sparking on it! But then, the ice broke into thousands of pieces of ice, which shined as they fell off ChaosLord's body. ChaosLord then aimed his cannons at the fire giant and blasted two huge blasts of water, hitting the fire giant's upper body and destroying it entirely! But then, the fire grew big again and the giant just reformed! Meanwhile ChaosPiedmon was watching as he smiled evily. "So even if I destroy them, they just reform..." said ChaosLord. "It seems that attacking their physical forms is pointless. I have to attack the energy that controls their elemental bodies" he continued. Then some psychic energy covered his body, and then the psychic energy extended to the surrounding atmosphere, catching the giants and ChaosPiedmon in its range! "What...!" said ChaosPiedmon, as he fell ChaosLord's psychic energy rapidly increasing in power and pushing him down, trying to force him on his knees! Immediately, ChaosPiedmon teleported away, but his giants were not able to do the same. They were struggling to stay on their feet, but then ChaosLord increased his psychic energy even more! The three giants then could not take ChaosLord's psychic pressure anymore, and they exploded and crumbled in fire, lava, water, ice, sand, rocks and mud! After that, ChaosLord stopped his psychic pressure, and as soon as he did that, a few leaves fell from some nearby trees that had also been receiving pressure from the psychic energy. Then ChaosPiedmon watched and saw his giants were not getting up again after having crumbled down because of ChaosLord's psychic attack. It was because ChaosLord's psychic power was so huge that it had shattered the power that was controlling the giants, and this destroyed them. ChaosLord stood victorious over the remains of the three giants, and then he looked at ChaosPiedmon and said "Next".



Author:   Dragon Swordsman
Date:   Nov 13, 07 at 6:43am (PST)
Subject:   re: Make your own Pokemon Stories
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Chapter 59: The Judgment of Yama


Ox-Head and Horse-Face were still walking along a dark corridor in Hell, while taking Ken, who was bound by handcuffs with them. Eventually, the three reached a large, purple double door. Then Ox-Head and Horse-Face slowly opened the double door, behind which came a strong, bright light which shone on the faces of Ken and the two Holy Creatures. Then Ken temporarily closed his eyes as the light shone on his face, as his eyes were used to the darkness of the corridor. "Lord Yama, we have brought Ken, one of the top executives of Team Rocket before you for judgment" said Ox-Head, and then Ken quickly opened his eyes wide and saw a huge throne room before him! The first thing which caught Ken's attention was a man with long, spiky red hair, golden eyes, wearing black armor, a dark green cape and carrying a silver long sword sitting on a high chair at the back of the room. This man was the same red-haired man as he one seen on one of the paintings in the chamber where Ken first arrived in Hell! The red-haired man's chair was located above some stairs on the opposite side of the room to where Ken was, and there was also a large, white table placed in front of the red-haired man. There was also a large, purple crystal orb placed on the desk directly in front of the red-haired man. The throne room had dark purple walls, it had many candles attached to the walls, there was a high, purple ceiling, the floor was black with a red carpet leading from the double door to the table where the crystal orb was. The three beings depicted on the other three paintings in the room where Ken first arrived in Hell were also seen standing with the red-haired man. The black dragon was standing to the right of the red-haired man's chair, the pale-white skinned man with the eyepatch was seen standing to the left of the red-haired man's chair, and the black-winged angel was seen standing to the left of the white-skinned man. There were also many Shinigami, angels and hellhound-like Holy Creatures standing around the perimeter of the room, and they were all looking at Ken! "Th-This is..." said Ken as he looked into the room, unable to believe his eyes! "Ken, is it? Welcome... to the Court of The Afterlife. I am Yama, the King of Hell... the one who judge the sins of the dead" said the red-haired man as he looked down at Ken with his golden eyes!

Meanwhile, in Heaven, Kuroi reappeared right in front of Ryuumaru's castle, before a large, golden double door with a huge purple dragon painted on it. Then Kuroi approached the door.

Meanwhile, Ken was in the Court of The Afterlife, standing before the red-haired man, known as Yama. "Th... The King... of Hell?" said Ken, looking shocked. "The fact that you were sent down here... to the Castle of Judgment in the first place... means that you have committed an unacceptably high number of sins in relatively high seriousness... am I correct?" said Yama, smiling as he looked down at Ken, who gasped in fear. "In that case, I shall see exactly in what area your incompetency during your time in the living world lies" Yama continued, and then he formed a hand seal, and then an extremely bright white light started shining out of the purple orb before him! "Argh!" Ken grunted as he closed his eyes while the white light shined upon him. "Dark Dragon," said Yama as he looked at the black dragon next to him. "Hebimaru," he continued as he looked at the white-skinned man. "Warutenshi" he continued as he looked at the black-winged angel. "Let's go" he continued as he looked into the orb, where the white light were shining from. "Yes sir" said the white-skinned man, known as Hebimaru and the black-winged angel, known as Warutenshi together, while the black dragon, known as Dark Dragon said "Rrrraaaarrghhh" (Yes sir") as the three beings all looked into the orb too.

Meanwhile, Kuroi was walking in a corridor somewhere inside Ryuumaru's castle. The corridor had many cells on the side of it. All the cells were empty, except for one at the end of the corridor, where Guardromon was locked up. Kuroi walked up to Guardomon's cell, and then he looked at Guardromon, who had one of his arms chopped off by Kuroi much earlier, during the meeting of the Ten Holy Elites. "Guardomon" said Kuroi as he looked at Guardomon, who looked back at Kuroi with the corner of his right eye. "This is regarding the machines of Chaos Planet... do the machines there practice any techniques which allow them to create a large, black barrier?" asked Kuroi, but Guardomon ignored him and looked away. "Well?" said Kuroi. "Shut the hell up" said Guardomon. "Excuse me? I asked you a question. Please answer it" said Kuroi, but Guardomon gave no reaction. "If that's what you're going to be like... then..." said Kuroi as he placed his right hand in his right pocket, and then he pulled out a pistol, shot it at Guardomon and placed his pistol back in his pocket so fast that the eye could not even see when he pulled out his pistol or put it back in his pocket! And he had done all of that so fast that he had placed his gun back in his pocket before the bullet he fired even reached Guardomon! Then the bullet hit Guardomon in the back. "Aaaarrgghh!" Guardromon screamed, and then turned around and he charged at Kuroi. "Get me outta here, bastard!" said Guardromon as he started punching the bars in his cell repeatedly with his left fist while looking at Kuroi. "Do you want to lose your left arm as well?" said Kuroi calmly, and then Guardomon gasped and stepped back upon hearing that. "Have you already forgotten what I told you before? All dreams are to be thrown away. The only purpose which remains within your existence is that you are merely going to answer all questions which we ask of you". "Y-You..." said Guardomon, but then Kuroi interrupted him. "Do not say anything. Do not ask anything. You have no rights to anything. The next thing which comes out of your mouth will be the answer to my question. Say anything else, and it will result in a swift death... not for you... but for your fellow machines on Chaos Planet... including that Andromon who was accompanying you that other day" said Kuroi, and then Andromon gasped. "Remember, in your hands... you hold the string which keeps the guillotine safely suspended above the necks of Andromon and your other fellow machines. "Now, I'll repeat the question, which failing to answer would be the equivalent of letting go of the string you hold..." said Kuroi. "Do the machines of Chaos Planet practice any techniques which allow them to create a large, black barrier?" he continued. Then Guardromon hesitated a bit, and then he said "Well... the only thing I can think of... is the ChaosDarkHexagonalBarrier technique... practiced by the right-hand machines of the three Chaos Generals...". "The right-hand machines of the Chaos Generals?" asked Kuroi. Then Guardromon said "Well, I forgot to mention earlier, but each of the three Chaos Generals have two right-hand machines. The right-hand machines of ChaosBlackWarGreymon are known as MetalGreymon and SkullGreymon. The right-hand machines of ChaosMetalSeadramon are known as MegaSeadramon and GigaSeadramon. And the right-hand machines of ChaosPiedmon are known as Phantomon and WaruMonzaemon. They are the most trusted machines of the Chaos Generals. Together, they can perform a secret technique known as the ChaosDarkHexagonalBarrier. With this, each of the six machines stand in one corner of a hexagon shape, and they face outward and unleash some dark energies from their bodies, creating a large black barrier which can cover a large area... although the larger the area it covers, the weaker it becomes. Also, anyone who touches the black barrier will instantly be engulfed in dark flames" said Guardromon. "So that's it... the ones who created the black barrier were the right-hand machines of the Chaos Generals... Lord Ryuumaru reported seeing nine machines flying away on his WorldMap program. So the other nine machines besides the Chaos Generals... were their right-hand machines" Kuroi thought. "Guardromon, can you confirm if this is true... although the ChaosDarkHexagonalBarrier appears black from the outside, it is actually completely transparent when viewed from the inside... right?" Kuroi asked. "Well, that's what I heard... although I think it can be seen black from the inside for just a second at the moment when the technique is cancelled..." said Guardromon. "So that was it... that woman spoke of the black energy which completely covered the sky... the Chaos Generals' right-hand machines must have cancelled the ChaosDarkHexagonalBarrier at that exact moment when she saw the energy... Now, that explains everything" Kuroi thought. "Is there anything else you know regarding this?" asked Kuroi. "Not that I can think of..." said Guardromon. "I see" said Kuroi, and then he turned to the side and started walking away. He then entered through a door at the end of the corridor and left.

Meanwhile, Liquidman was flying towards the South, over a large, beautiful forest, which had many unusually large white trees which were not found anywhere else in the world. There were many flowers, long grass, crystal-clear water and waterfalls coming out of the side of a mountain in the forest, and many birds of various colors were sitting on the treetops and chirping. Eventually, Liquidman reached another village. He flew and landed onto a branch of an extremely high tree which was located next to the village, and then he looked down at the village. It was a beautiful village with many wooden houses, although they were quite different compared to those in the village with the samurai, where Liquidman had visited earlier. There were many beautiful plants, gems and sparkling stones found in this village, which was inhabited by many elves, with pointed ears and wearing long robes. The elves were mainly sitting around the village on some logs and talking to each other, or they were working, such as carrying buckets of water around. "So... this must be Elf Village..." said Liquidman as he took out his map and glanced at it. "So, according to that Drag guy, the Storyteller must be over there..." he continued as he turned his head and looked at the East, where he saw a small hill with a single brick house located on top of it. "Alright" he said, and then he jumped at that direction at a high speed.

Meanwhile, in the Court of The Afterlife, Yama let go of his hand seal, and then the bright white light coming from the purple orb faded away. "I see" said Yama as he moved his eyes away from the purple orb and looked at Ken. "Dark Dragon, Hebimaru, Warutenshi... I'm sure you guys all agree with me that the biggest sin this individual has committed in the living world... is greed... right?" he continued. "Right" said Hebimaru and Warutenshi together, while Dark Dragon said "Raaarrrrrhhh gahh" (It's either greed... or murder..."). "He's only killed once, Dark Dragon... all his thievary combined is far worse" said Yama as he looked at Dark Dragon, and then Dark Dragon nodded. "So, you know what that means... don't you, Ken? You have committed countless thievary... having stolen many Pokémon from their trainers, invaded shops and stole items from there... it's sad really... that you've never actually done any of this before you joined Team Rocket..." said Yama. Then he closed his eyes and said "But what's done is done. It's not like it wasn't your fault that you joined the organization despite knowing what they do there... And because of your actions, you shall atone for your sins... in the Chamber of Lightning...". "The Chamber... of Lightning?" said Ken, looking frightened. "You shall see when you get there" said Yama as he reopened his eyes and looked at Ken. Then he looked around at all the Shinigami, angels and Holy Creatures around him and said "I'm sure none of you have any objections?", and then all the beings of Heaven shook their heads. "Well then... it's decided..." said Yama as he looked back at Ken. Then he closed his eyes and said "Ox-Head, Horse-Face. Take him away... to the Chamber of Lightning". "Yes sir" said Ox-Head and Horse-Face together, and then they both walked at Ken, grabbed him and took him away.

Meanwhile, Liquidman landed on the hill, just next to the single brickhouse on top of it. Then he walked to the wooden door in front of it, opened it, and then he entered the house. Inside, he saw that the house itself was quite small, with a couch, a small, wooden table, a round red carpet on the ground, a small bed and a small kitchen with a white table, and a shelf full of old books. The inside of the house had a wooden floor, brick walls, a white ceiling with a fan on the middle of it, and there was a window, as well as a painting of some forests and rivers on each of the four walls around the house. The fan on the ceiling was also rotating slowly, and some morning sunlight was coming in from the windows of the room, while many butterflies were flying around some flowers outside the windows, and the chirping of some birds could be heard, making the atmosphere seem very dream-like and peaceful. There was also an old elf wearing long, black robes, had long, grey hair, green eyes, he had a black hood over his head, and he had his hands behind his back. The man had his back turned to Liquidman, and he was looking out a window, at some bushes below the hill where his house was on. "So I have another visitor... have you come to hear my stories?" said the man as he turned around and looked at Liquidman. "You must be the Storyteller of Elf Village, right?" said Liquidman. "Yes. I am the one who passes on the lore of the elven village to the next generation" said the man. "So, what stories do you want to hear? I can tell you many stories... The legend of the heroic journey of Ryuumaru and the Pokémon Gods in the Ancient Pokémon War Era, the creation of Heaven and Hell, the legends on the hero Trimence and the sealing away of the legendary Dragozard, the stories of the Great Ninja War and the establishment of Pokéia's Shinobi Village, as well as the many other Hidden Ninja Villages around the world, the great battle between PokéKage Shujinshinobi and King Fujishi and many others..." he continued. "I came here to ask you one question, since someone told me you would know" said Liquidman, as the storyteller looked at him. "Please tell me that the Key to Heaven, which can be obtained by gathering six different fragments from the Holy, Fire, Wind, Lightning, Water and Earth Temple, is required to reach Heaven..." Liquidman continued. "Yes, that is correct" said the storyteller. "Thank goodness" said Liquidman as he briefly closed his eyes. "So most of my efforts did not go to waste, after all..." Liquidman thought. Then he reopened them, looked at the storyteller and said "So, let's just say someone managed to gather all six fragments. What would he need to do after that in order to reach Heaven? I heard that you'd need to get to the Shinigami Cave just North of Moku Village, but for some reasons I don't think that's true...". Then the storyteller said "That is indeed false. The whole point of gathering the Key To Heaven in the first place is so that one can open up the dimensional gate within Yggdrasil which leads to Heaven". "The dimensional gate which leads to Heaven? In Yggdrasil? What are you talking about?" asked Liquidman. Then the storyteller pointed out the window, at a gigantic tree which even reached up to the clouds in the North-West, while Liquidman turned around and looked out the window, at that tree. The tree was also surrounded by many thick, white clouds, which gave it a mystical appearance. Then the storyteller said "As you should already know, that tree over there is known as the Legendary Yggdrasil, and it has existed for millions of years. However, unlike most people think, Yggdrasil is actually a lot more than just an overgrown tree. Somewhere on the surface of Yggdrasil, there is a tiny entrance which one can enter. Inside the tree, there is a large maze of tunnels. By making their way to the top of the tree's interior, one will eventually arrive upon a large gate which cannot be entered unless they have the Key To Heaven. At the other side of the gate, there is another gate which is also located within a gigantic tree as big as Yggdrasil, except this tree is located in Heaven. This gate inside Yggdrasil is the dimensional gate which allows one to enter and exit Heaven". "So if I enter that tree, I'll eventually arrive upon a gate, which can be opened if I have the Key To Heaven, right?" asked Liquidman. "Yes. Also, somewhere near the bottom of Yggdrasil's interior, there is another dimensional gate, except that one leads to Hell. However, like the dimensional gate which leads to Heaven, you also need a special item to enter through the gate which leads to Hell" said the storyteller. "I'm not interested in that. But if what you said was true, then how did such a huge tree come to being? And who built that dimensional gate? And for what purpose? You should know, right?" asked Liquidman. "Yggdrasil was originally an ordinary tree planted by Ryuumaru, the Legendary Hero who stopped the Ancient Pokémon War. He planted the tree after he successfully stopped the war and split the world into three, and, using his magic powers, he enhanced Yggdrasil's growth, allowing it to grow to its current enormous size" said the storyteller as he walked to the East window in his house and looked out that window, at the gigantic tree in the horizon. "Ryuumaru was also the one who created the dimensional gates within Yggdrasil, as originally, the gates were the only path which the beings of Heaven could take to travel between Heaven and Earth, or between Earth and Hell or Heaven and Hell, for that matter. But later, Ryuumaru and the beings of Heaven discovered a technique which allows them to open a gate which can lead between the dimensions out of thin air at will, and thus the gate in Yggdrasil became obsolete. And before that technique was invented, humans who have survived against the extremely strong wild Grass-type Pokémon in Yggdrasil would sometimes sneak into Heaven using that gate, which was why Ryuumaru later ordered the gate to be locked and scattered the key to unlock it around in six different locations, each of which were guarded by some fierce Pokémon to ensure that no humans could obtain the key and use it to break into Heaven" he continued. "Ryuumaru? He's the leader of the beings of Heaven, isn't he? He split the world into three? Stopped a war? When? You mentioned before that you can tell many stories, some of which are about the heroic journey of Ryuumaru and the Pokémon Gods in some war, right? I'm curious and want to hear about it. But before that, you mentioned Dragozard before, didn't you? Isn't that the thing... some Team Dragon people mentioned?" said Liquidman, looking confused.

To be continued




Author:   OverLord of Chaos
Date:   Nov 13, 07 at 11:48pm (PST)
Subject:   ...
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The machine arc, Part 13: Trump Sword

"I was going to take my time in killing you, but this is becoming too tiresome. I will finish you off now" said ChaosPiedmon, as he looked at ChaosLord with an evil look in his eyes. Then he did a spin around himself, in the end of which he had drawn out all four of the swords on his back, holding two in each of his hands. "Trump Sword!" said ChaosPiedmon then, as he threw his swords at ChaosLord! The swords flew at ChaosLord, who then raised his left hand as a shield. However, as the swords were about to hit ChaosLord's hand, they were teleported! Then ChaosLord saw the swords flying to his left, but then they disappeared again! Suddenly, ChaosLord was slashed from the back by some of ChaosPiedmon's swords! "Hm?" said ChaosLord, as he looked back with the corner of his right eye and waved his tail at the swords behind him, only to see them disappear again! Then the swords appeared in front of ChaosLord's chest and slashed him again before teleporting to his right and flying around in circles around him! Then suddenly the swords disappeared once more! "How pointless" said ChaosLord then, as the swords appeared to the back of his head, ready to slash him once more, but then they stopped moving! ChaosPiedmon then looked at his swords annoyed, realizing that ChaosLord had stolen them with his psychic powers! "I'll return those to you" said ChaosLord then, as ChaosPiedmon's swords pointed at him, and then they flew at him extremely fast! However, ChaosPiedmon jumped in the air, and avoided the swords, which flew below him and effortlessly slashed some trees in half before getting stabbed to the ground! "So normal psychic attacks will not work. How about this" said ChaosPiedmon, and then four swords appeared in front of him, pointing at ChaosLord. "Trump Sword!" said ChaosPiedmon then, as the swords started flying fast at ChaosLord. Then ChaosLord tried to use his psychic powers to control the swords, but nothing happened! "Hm?" said ChaosLord. Then the four swords flew at him and disappeared as they touched his body! Then ChaosLord was slashed from behind by four swords! "What?" said ChaosLord as he looked behind, but there was nothing there. "Hmhmhmhmhm" laughed ChaosPiedmon evily, and then he sent four more swords flying at ChaosLord! ChaosLord was then watching the swords, but before they even reached him, he was slashed in the right arm by four swords, which he barely noticed before they disappeared again! Then the four swords which ChaosPiedmon had sent against ChaosLord previously flew at him and disappeared once again right after touching his body! "Trump Sword!" said ChaosPiedmon then as he summoned four more swords in front of him and sent them flying at ChaosLord! ChaosLord watched the swords and said "I see. So those swords are fake, serving only as distractions, during which ChaosPiedmon teleports his real swords to attack and then teleports them back again instantly. In that case...". Then ChaosLord closed his eyes, ignoring ChaosPiedmon's four swords that were flying at him. Then suddenly, as ChaosPiedmon's four swords were travelling at ChaosLord, four other swords appeared to the left of ChaosLord. "There" said ChaosLord as he opened up his eyes and saw ChaosPiedmon's swords with his left eye, immediately taking them over with his psychic powers! "What!" said ChaosPiedmon as he saw that. "So you combined your previous attack with a delusive trick to cause confusion" said ChaosLord. "Hmhmhm..." said ChaosPiedmon then, smiling. Then the four swords which ChaosPiedmon had sent at ChaosLord in the beginning flew at him, and two of them disappeared as they touched him, while the other two slashed ChaosLord at the chest! "What?" said ChaosLord as he saw the two swords then disappearing and reappearing into ChaosPiedmon's hands right after their attacks. "I see. You mixed up your real swords with the fake ones to make your attack even more unpredictable" said ChaosLord. Then he controlled ChaosPiedmon's swords with his psychic powers and had them fly at him. "I will use no such tricks" said ChaosLord, as he tried to did a downward slash at ChaosPiedmon with one of his swords, but ChaosPiedmon formed an "X" above his head with the two swords he was holding, blocking the attack, which was powerful enough that the ground below ChaosPiedmon's feet was cratered! Then ChaosLord attempted to slash ChaosPiedmon with the other sword he was controlling, but ChaosPiedmon quickly blocked the attack with his left sword, although he was pushed back for some distance by the force of the attack! ChaosLord then tried to slash ChaosPiedmon from both the right and the left, but ChaosPiedmon blocked both the attacks with his swords. Then ChaosLord tried to slash ChaosPiedmon a few more times with the swords he was controlling with psychic powers, but ChaosPiedmon was blocking every attack. Then ChaosLord suddenly smiled evily as he tried to do two slashes on ChaosPiedmon's body from both the left and right again, but ChaosPiedmon blocked both attacks from both positions. However, the attack from the left was from a fake sword, which disappeared upon impact with the sword ChaosPiedmon was holding! The real sword then appeared behind ChaosPiedmon's left shoulder, and then flew to get stabbed through it! However just then, ChaosPiedmon smiled evily as he jumped in the air, in a way that his sword ended up in its sheath on his back, and then he landed back to the ground! "Hm?" said ChaosLord as he saw that. Then ChaosPiedmon smiled as he quickly moved and slashed the other sword ChaosLord was controlling with his two swords, and then it fell to the ground. "Good reflexes... But the next time you use those swords against me, it will be the last" said ChaosLord. "Very well, this time will be the last!" said ChaosPiedmon, smiling evily! Then he controlled all four of his swords with his psychic powers and made them float around him, and then he said "Substitute!". Then suddenly, his swords started multiplying at an extremely fast rate! Soon, hundreds of swords were created, which floated in four huge ring-like rows around ChaosLord and ChaosPiedmon, with the swords pointing at the ground! "Another trick?" said ChaosLord. "No. This time, each of these swords is real!" said ChaosPiedmon, surprising ChaosLord a bit! "And now, the end! Sword Whirlwind!" said ChaosPiedmon. Then all of his swords, except his four original ones, started flying around extremely fast like a whirlwind! Also, they closed in on ChaosLord, so that he was in the center of the whirlwind! The swords then started flying around extremely fast, creating a massive whirlwind filled with swords, and ChaosLord was sucked into the whirlwind! Inside the whirlwind, ChaosLord started spinning extremely fast, and the swords inside the whirlwind started slashing him extremely fast inside the whirlwind from all sides! ChaosPiedmon watched at the huge whirlwind, which started to cause devastation in the forest, soon growing big enough to rip trees from the ground and suck them inside! Also, many bright sparks could be seen inside the whirlwind, which were caused by the swords slashing ChaosLord hundreds of times in seconds! "Hmhmhmhmhm..." said ChaosPiedmon, as he looked at the huge whirlwind, and then he grabbed one of his four swords and pointed at the whirlwind. "Fire!" he said then, and then suddenly flames came out of all his swords, setting the whirlwind on fire! The whirlwind caught easily on fire since many trees had been sucked in it, which were easily burned by the flames! Soon, the whirlwind turned into a huge, orange and red whirlwind of fire that was travelling inside the forest and its bright flames in the night started burning any trees of the forest they touched, setting some part of the forest on fire! ChaosLord was still inside the whirlwind, spinning around very fast while getting slashed and burned at the same time! ChaosPiedmon then said "Lightning!" and then suddenly electricity came out of all the swords in the whirlwind, filling it with electricity as well as fire! Now ChaosLord was slashed, burned, spinned, and zapped at the same time, and at extreme rates! ChaosPiedmon then said "Ice!" and then suddenly, the entire whirlwind turned to ice and froze solid! The fire that was on it suddenly disappeared as the temperature dropped to extremely low, and the whirlwind stopped spinning as it turned into a huge mass of extremely solid ice, with ChaosLord in the center! Some electricity was also still sparking on the ice! Then ChaosPiedmon pointed his sword at the sky and said "And now, Solar Beam!", and then, a huge Solar Beam descended vertically from the sky straight down to the frozen whirlwind! The beam hit the frozen whirlwind with huge force, shattering it to thousand pieces of ice, which also instantly turned into water because of the solar energy that warmed them up instantly after hitting them! Then while the Solar Beam was still descending like a pillar of yellow light from the sky, a huge water happened all around it, which put out all the fire that had been started before on the forest! As the water fell on the forest and put out the fire, the Solar Beam also finally ended, and a huge cloud of smoke was created where it had hit the ground! ChaosPiedmon then smiled as he sheathed his four swords, and then he turned his back at the place where the Solar Beam had started, ready to start walking away. But then he heard a voice "Where are you going?". Surprised, ChaosPiedmon turned around and saw the dust fading away, with ChaosLord standing unharmed in the center of a gigantic crater on the ground! "What. You're still alive?" said ChaosPiedmon as he looked at ChaosLord. "Hahaha..." laughed ChaosLord quietly, as he suddenly disappeared from ChaosPiedmon's sight! ChaosPiedmon then widened his eyes and unsheathed two of his swords, placing them above his head in an "X" formation to block a downward slamming attack of ChaosLord's right arm, who had teleported behind him! The attack had huge force, and the ground under ChaosPiedmon's feet was cratered because of that! ChaosPiedmon then slashed away ChaosLord's right arm, and then he turned around to face him while also gaining some distance from him. "That was an interesting attack, ChaosPiedmon. Just as expected from a Chaos General. Show me more!" said ChaosLord, excited for battle. "Substitute!" said ChaosPiedmon then, and this time, he created hundreds of copied of himself! "Double Team" said ChaosPiedmon and all his clones then, and then all of them created many fake copies of themselves! Then all of ChaosPiedmon's copies and fakes looked at ChaosLord and said "Trump Sword!". Then thousands of swords flew at ChaosLord, some of which were real and some were not! But ChaosLord stood still without even trying to dodge, and the swords hit him from the front, the back, the left, the right and from above! Also, the swords were so many that they covered ChaosLord entirely! "Giant Power!" said ChaosLord then, and then he unleashed a huge explosion of blue energy from his body, which instantly disintegrated all of the swords around him! It also hit all of ChaosPiedmon's copies, destroying them all, but ChaosPiedmon himself teleported away before getting hit by the attack. Then he waited until ChaosLord's energy faded away, and then he pointed his right sword at the place where ChaosLord was stepping on and said "Eruption!". Then a gigantic eruption of super hot lava happened beneath ChaosLord's feet, blasting him up in the sky! ChaosLord flew up in the air, and then ChaosPiedmon teleported right in front of him holding his two swords ready to attack! ChaosPiedmon tried to slash ChaosLord with his right sword, but ChaosLord blocked the attack with his left claw. ChaosPiedmon then tried to slash ChaosLord with his left sword, but ChaosLord blocked with his right claw. ChaosLord then opened up his mouth and blasted a huge stream of flames at ChaosPiedmon, but he did a backflip in the air, avoiding it. Then, at the end of his backflip, ChaosPiedmon pointed his right sword at ChaosLord and said "Solar Beam!". Then a huge Solar Beam descended diagonially downwards from the sky at ChaosLord, hitting him from the back! ChaosPiedmon watched as ChaosLord got blasted down to the ground and crashed hard on it, creating a huge crater at the place where he landed! Then he hovered down in front of ChaosLord. ChaosLord watched him, and noticed he was not holding his swords! Immediately, he guarded himself with his tail, left hand, right hand, and horn, blocking four attacks from all sides by ChaosPiedmon's swords! ChaosPiedmon's swords then returned to him, and he sheathed them two by two in two moves of his hands. Then he pointed his palms at ChaosLord and said "Dark Explosion!". Then a huge explosion of darkness happened at ChaosLord, which created some dark fog after it. But out of the fog suddenly lunged ChaosLord, trying to stab ChaosPiedmon with his left claw! However, ChaosPiedmon dodged. ChaosLord then tried to stab ChaosPiedmon with his right hand, but he dodged again. ChaosLord then kept doing stab attacks with his hands at ChaosPiedmon, who kept dodging them, but then suddenly ChaosLord did a kick, which hit ChaosPiedmon with huge force and sent him crashing through two trees and then on a large rock, cratering it and raising some dust! ChaosLord then approached the dust, but suddenly ChaosPiedmon appeared behind him and said "Psycho Boost!". Then he unleashed an insanely massive amount of psychic energy at ChaosLord from point-blank range! A huge explosion of energy happened upon impact, which blasted ChaosLord flying at extreme speed, making him crash through the rock on which ChaosPiedmon had crashed previously, and then he kept going and also smashed through a hundred trees before falling to the ground and sliding, still smashing some trees on the way, until he came to a stop. Also, while sliding, ChaosLord had created a large cloud of dust on his way. ChaosLord then got up from the ground, and saw ChaosPiedmon walking towards him in the dust! ChaosLord then pointed his cannons at ChaosPiedmon and said "Beams Devastation!" and then he started firing many Hyper Beams from his cannons at him! ChaosPiedmon smiled evily as he jumped up in the air to dodge, but then ChaosLord smiled evily too as he used his psychic powers to immobilize ChaosPiedmon in the air! Then he aimed his cannons at him and continued to use Beams Devastation, blasting ChaosPiedmon with several Hyper Beams before letting him go and get blasted away by the last Hyper Beam! ChaosPiedmon then flew in the air, above the forest, for some distance and then he fell back to the forest. ChaosLord looked for a while and then started walking towards his direction. But suddenly, as he was walking in the dark forest, a large creepy-looking teddy bear jumped from behind a tree to block his path, and then a scythe-wielding ghost also made itself visible! The two creatures stood in ChaosLord's way, looking at him with an obvious intent to fight.



Author:   Dragon Swordsman
Date:   Nov 14, 07 at 3:52am (PST)
Subject:   re: Make your own Pokemon Stories
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Chapter 60: Legendary Hero


"Dragozard is a legendary Dragon Pokémon from the ancient world. Many people consider it to be the dragon which caused the second most destruction in history... next to the rampage of the infamous Pokémon God Dragonaurus way back, during the time of Ryuumaru's journey in the Ancient Pokémon War. Dragozard was said to be extremely powerful, being able to bring down entire towns and cities and not even the most advanced weapons at that time could bring down the powerful green dragon. That was, until the great hero Trimence arrived. Trimence was a brave and strong Pokémon Master... possibly one of the strongest at that time, and he managed to capture three legendary Pokémon... Articuno, Zapdos, and Moltres. Despite the fact that he holds the firm belief that legendary Pokémon are not to be caught as that would upset the balance of nature, Trimence caught the three bird Pokémon for the sole purpose of using their combined power to seal away Dragozard into a planet in space, known as Planet Dragozard nowadays. After sealing away Dragozard, Trimence released Articuno, Zapdos and Moltres again. And it was after sealing away such a dangerous being which was when Trimence was known as a hero at that time. However, Team Dragon, a modern criminal organization, seems to want to destroy Planet Dragozard and set Dragozard free, as the organization's leader, Drag, an ambitious man with the dream of someday conquering the world, wants to gain the power of the legendary Dragozard. To do that, it seems he needs the legendary Articuno, Zapdos and Moltres under his command, as they are the only Pokémon capable of unsealing Dragozard, as they were the ones which sealed Dragozard away in the first place. At this day and age, it seems the police are constantly after Team Dragon and know them as a simple criminal organization similar to Team Rocket, as they are known for commiting various crimes such as stealing for their own benefit, but seeing as even the police themselves have no idea of Team Dragon's real goal, I'd say things are a real worry" said the storyteller. "This guy... he's really, really knowledgeable, it seems... Not only does he know so much about Team Dragon and history, but he even knows about Ryuumaru and mentioned the name of Dragonaurus... Despite the fact that the boss has fought with Dragonaurus and encountered Ryuumaru once before, it wouldn't be surprising if this guy knows even more about Dragonaurus and Ryuumaru than the boss does..." Liquidman thought as he looked at the storyteller. "Since this man knows so much, maybe it would be beneficial to us machines, who are about to take on the beings of Heaven if I ask for some information about Ryuumaru and told them to the boss and the others... After all, it is best to know more about the enemy before fighting them. However, I've experienced enough with the machines back at Chaos Planet that just because someone talks a lot does not neccessarily mean that they know a lot. Could all the things this guy are saying be rubbish? No, that's impossible... after all, he even agrees that there are six fragments to the King To Heaven, and I've already collected them all. I'm certainly not going to doubt this man's credibility, but it would be better to make sure than to betray the trust placed upon me by the boss and the Chaos Generals..." he continued. Then he said "Umm, Mr. Storyteller... I'm just asking... but... how do you know... all this information?". Then the storyteller said "This knowledge was passed down to me from my father, who was the previous Storyteller of Elf Village. The story of Trimence and Dragozard were originally told by a distant ancestor of mine, who actually witnessed the events I spoke of, while the stories dating back further in history, such as the legend of Ryuumaru, the Pokémon Gods and the Ancient Pokémon War were passed down from even further. It is our duty as storytellers to pass these stories on to the next generation". "I see... how many generations of storytellers have there been?" asked Liquidman. "Not as many as you'd expect, as us elves can live for much longer than ordinary humans can. Being told these stories countless times by our fathers, it is difficult for any of this information to change, so you should not question their validity" said the storyteller. "I see. So anyway, just who was Ryuumaru anyway? How did he split the world into three and stuff? I'm interested in knowing" said Liquidman. Then the storyteller said "Well, none of my ancestors have actually witnessed all of this information about Ryuumaru's journey which I am about to tell you. The earliest ancestor of mine who told the legends of him simply gathered his information from various humans and other beings at the time of the Ancient Pokémon War who knew Ryuumaru, and he arranged all the events which took place in Ryuumaru's life together in a chronology which he believes makes the most sense. However, I'd say this story should be fairly accurate, as the people that ancestor of mine gathered the information from include those who live in the Holy Forest, which is Ryuumaru's birthplace, as well as the witnesses of Ryuumaru's battle with the legendary Dragonaurus, and the people of various towns who have witnessed the amazing feats of Ryuumaru, although most of these towns of the ancient world no longer exist. So anyway, onto my story... Ryuumaru was born during the time when the Ancient Pokémon War took place". "The Ancient... Pokémon War?" asked Liquidman. The stoyteller said "Don't you know? It's the biggest event in Ancient History. At the dawn of time, the Earth was a world of peace, where humans and Pokémon have lived together in harmony for innumerable years, but the Ancient Pokémon War was the very event which terminated this peace. Back during that time, people were divided between three races, which later split up to create the many different races of today. These genetic differences in people led to discrimination, and discrimination led to the war. The people split into three different sides based on the color of their hair, eyes and skin, and the three sides were later known as North Forest, East Sea and West Desert. They fought against each other each and every day, with their weapons, fists, and even Pokémon... which was how the war later got its name. The war lasted for centuries, and countless people were killed. While many people were totally absorbed into the war, others fled and roamed from place to place, trying to find peace, but the war spreaded until it took place in almost everywhere in the world. One couple, who were travelling the blood-filled Earth with their new-born son looking for a place to live in harmony, were shot by a group of archers from the East Sea in a forest, before the archers themselves were killed by a Meganium which came out of the forest. With their last breath, the couple begged the Meganium to take care of their son, who they named Ryuumaru. And so the story of the Legendary Hero Ryuumaru begins. Ryuumaru was raised as an orphan by the Meganium in the Holy Forest, a sacred forest of the ancient world where many young children and Pokémon, whose parents were all killed in the Ancient Pokémon War, were raised together by the same Meganium which killed the murderers of Ryuumaru's parents. This Meganium took care of all those who lived together in the Holy Forest. Due to being raised by a Meganium, the humans who were raised in this forest grew to understand the language of Pokémon too. And so, everyone in the Holy Forest, whether they are humans or Pokémon, lived together and thought of each other almost as a family, despite not being blood-related. However, Ryuumaru's closest friends in his childhood were said to be a Dratini and a boy named Max. The Holy Forest itself also has some properties which allow those who grow up in it to develop special spiritual powers. The Pokémon which grow up in this forest are said to be able to reach unseen, higher levels of evolution than their species normally would not reach, while the powers developed by the humans who grow up in this magical forest are said to manifest into the shape of a sword, which grants the user unimaginable power. The Meganium, which also grew up in the forest itself too, knows about this power. And so, as the Meganium raised up the children and Pokémon in the Holy Forest, it informed them about the powers which they will gain as they grow up. Among all those under Meganium's care, the first to find their spiritual powers was in fact Max, one of Ryuumaru's closest friends at the time. And so Ryuumaru lived a strange yet enjoyable childhood... playing with his friends, hearing stories told by Meganium, fishing, training in hope of unlocking his spiritual powers and such, although Meganium forbade him and the others which it raised from leaving the forest, as doing so would put them in danger due to the raging war outside... That was, until the day when Meganium was killed". "It got killed?" asked Liquidman. The storyteller said "Yes. It was a tragic day for not only Ryuumaru, but for Max, Dratini, and all the others who lived with them in the Holy Forest. Despite the forest being a peaceful place for decades, it was soon caught within the spreading range of the battle of the Ancient Pokémon War. On that day, the men from the East Sea and the West Desert took their battle inside the forest, and Meganium tried to protect those under its care by fighting off the strangers, but it was soon defeated and killed by a well-trained Scyther belonging to a highly-skilled Pokémon Trainer from the West Desert. Devastated upon witnessing the death of the one which had raised him since birth, Ryuumaru was filled with emotions, and it was at that moment when he developed his spiritual powers, which manifested into the legendary Dragon Sword which he was seen wielding throughout his journey. Filled with a new power flowing through his entire body, Ryuumaru managed to defeat the Scyther which had killed Meganium, but its trainer managed to escape with the rest of West Desert upon defeating their opponents from East Sea. Ryuumaru and the others then mourned over Meganium's death. After all, to the children and Pokémon of the Holy Forest, Meganium was like a Father to them. Overcome with emotions, Ryuumaru and Max both decided to leave the Holy Forest to seek revenge on the trainer responsible for Meganium's death. However, while Ryuumaru believed that only Meganium's murderer should be killed, Max insisted that the entire army of the West Desert are trash and should be destroyed. And since their views conflicted, the two friends decided to split paths, each trying to reach their own individual goals. And so after the tragedy which had happened, along with Ryuumaru leaving the Holy Forest, Dratini saw no purpose in remaining in the forest, so it decided to join Ryuumaru on his journey. After days of travelling, the two eventually reached the West Desert's closest base of operation. Considering the high chances that Meganium's killer may be within the base, the two decided to infiltrate the base, where they eventually fought and defeated the man who was indeed inside, successfully avenging Meganium. Although never proven, it is believed that Dratini had also evolved into a Dragonair during this battle". "So that's what Ryuumaru did..." said Liquidman. Then the storyteller said "That's not all. It's some time after Meganium was avenged, which was when the events which would make Ryuumaru legendary began. After being exposed to the world outside the Holy Forest for a while, Ryuumaru realized just how seious the war really is after witnessing so many deaths with his own eyes. It seems that it was during this time when Ryuumaru made his resolve to stop the war, and so he travelled with Dragonair on a heroic journey to put an end to the Ancient Pokémon War. Day after day, the two fought with all their efforts to eliminate those absorbed into the war in an effort to bring it to an end. At one time, when the two were just about to be finished off by an army they were going against, two powerful legendary Pokémon appeared and destroyed the army, saving the lives of Ryuumaru and Dragonair. These two legendary Pokémon were none other than Kylorados and Magmegalosaurus, now known as the Pokémon Gods of Water and Earth, respectively". "Magmegalosaurus... the God of The Earth? Judging from its name, it sounds like a dinosaur of some kind... Wait, could it be... that thing..." Liquidman thought. "Fascinated by the strength of these two legendary Pokémon, Ryuumaru somehow managed to catch them with some PokéBalls he apparantly bought in Hima, a town he had visited prior to encountering the legendary Pokémon. Now, with Dragonair, Kylorados and Magmegalosaurus by his side, Ryuumaru continued on his journey. He eventually encountered Dragonaurus, currently known as the Highest of the Six Pokémon Gods. Back then, Dragonaurus was none more than an extremely powerful wild Pokémon who resided deep under the seas, and its existence was entirely unknown before the day when it surfaced from beneath the waves and wreaked havoc, destroying entire towns and cities with his powerful physical and elemental attacks. Not even the powerful and deadly weapons which were developed at the time of the Ancient Pokémon War were enough to bring Dragonaurus down. Many people, whether they were innocent or were active participants in the war, fell as victims to the rage of the ferocious dragon. With Dragonaurus being an even greater threat to the nearby towns and cities than even the ancient war itself, all hope was lost, until the Legendary Hero Ryuumaru appeared before it. Back then, Ryuumaru's strength was obviously nowhere near as great as he was from the point after he ended the war onwards, and so he was just barely able to defeat the dragon with the help of the three Pokémon on his side. With both sides severly weakened, Ryuumaru managed to catch Dragonaurus within an Ultra Ball" the storyteller continued. "So Dragonaurus was really a Pokémon..." said Liquidman. Then the storyteller said "Yes. Although Dragonaurus did not get along with Ryuumaru or any of his Pokémon at first, it seems that as Ryuumaru continued on his journey, he somehow managed to tame Dragonaurus under his control. Along the journey, Ryuumaru encountered his old friend Max again, who revealed that he had joined North Forest, the strongest of the three armies at that time in hopes of living up to his dream of annihilating West Desert completely someday. However, since Ryuumaru's goal involves the destruction of all three armies, including North Forest, conflicts arose, which, upon numerous encounters throughout the journey, eventually developed into a rivalry between the two friends. Sometime after the first reunion between Ryuumaru and Max, another human, who, like Ryuumaru, also hoped to see the ancient war come to an end, joined Ryuumaru too on his journey sometime later on after the town she lived in was attacked by the forces of East Sea, which wanted to kidnap people and force them to join their side. It was sometime within the next few months which was when Ryuumaru also managed to capture Kyuutsune, Exrai and Hinakaze, three other legendary Pokémon who later became the Pokémon Gods of today. Dragonair, which was still travelling with Ryuumaru at the time, was also said to have evolved into a Dragonite sometime during this period. Now, with seven Pokémon and one human by his side, Ryuumaru went on and later managed to fight and destroy the leaders of East Sea and West Desert at that time, known as Tom and Luke respectively in order, and he also encountered Brenten, the leader of North Forest at one point during this time. Sometime after he killed Luke, Ryuumaru encountered Max again. Knowing the evil of his actions after killing countless innocent people under the command of North Forest's leader, yet believing that his goal of destroying West Desert was justice, Max challenged Ryuumaru to a final fight which would take place in the deepest level of their home, the Holy Forest, in order to settle things with his past. The two met there, and with all the other humans and Pokémon who, like Max and Ryuumaru were raised since birth in the Holy Forest watching, the two rivals clashed with their swords in an epic battle to the death. With his last breath after his defeat, Max regretted his decision of joining North Forest, and he begged Ryuumaru to kill his leader, Brenten and ultimately end the war. After revealing to Ryuumaru the location of North Forest's main base of operation, Max died and was buried in the Holy Forest, where the humans and Pokémon mourned over his death. Knowing what he should do, Ryuumaru headed for the North Forest. While various minions under Brenten's command, which include various Shadow Pokémon he had developed fought against Ryuumaru's companions, Ryuumaru headed straight through the castle-like base, and, under the raging thunderstorm of the dark cloud-fulled sky, eventually came face-to-face with Brenten, the later which was said to be killed in another battle of epic proportions in North Forest's main base of operation according to witnesses, who had put faith in Ryuumaru and gathered around the castle where Brenten commanded his troops, and the people who had gathered around there watched in hope of Ryuumaru's victory, the end of the war, and ultimately eternal peace. After a long battle, Brenten fell defeated, and a ray of light shot down through a gap between the dispersing dark clouds upon Ryuumaru's victory. In order to prevent the war from continuing, Ryuumaru made use of his powerful magic abilities which he had developed throughout his journey, and by amplifying his magic powers with his weapon, the Dragon Sword, he managed to split the Earth into three sections, two of which were sealed within another dimension. By doing this, Ryuumaru had seperated the three sides of the war so that they no longer have contact with each other, and the main bases of the three armies were seperated into three different worlds. The world where the North Forest's main base of operation was later became the Heaven of today, while the world where West Desert used to be is Earth, and as for the world where East Sea used to be, it was a part of the ancient world which was damaged beyond hope, and so Ryuumaru decided to name that place Hell, where sinful souls are said to go after death. As for Dragonaurus, Kyuutsune, Kylorados, Exrai, Hinakaze and Magmegalosaurus, Ryuumaru made them known as the Six Pokémon Gods, worshipped in the Holy Temple, the Fire Temple, the Water Temple, the Lightning Temple, the Wind Temple and the Earth Temple, respectively. They were made as Gods who watch over this world to ensure that something as foolish as the Ancient Pokémon War would not happen ever again. So this concludes the story of the Ancient Pokémon War, the Legendary Hero Ryuumaru, the Pokémon Gods and the creation of Heaven and Hell" said the storyteller. "So Ryuumaru... was a hero... someone like that... huh...?" said Liquidman as he looked out the window at Yggdrasil. Then he looked at the storyteller and said "I see... thank you very much for telling me the story". "May the Pokémon Gods protect you" said the storyteller, and then Liquidman headed out the door of the house.

To be continued



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