The Galaxy is in trouble. Many systems have opted to leave the Republic and join the growing Separatist movement lead by Count Dooku and his unknown higher power. A secret army has been created for a currently unknown reason, but it appears the Jedi Order has taken control of the project and is now using it to fight in the upcoming conflict. The Jedi Grandmaster, Yoda, has landed on the planet Kamino to gather as many of the Clone Troopers he can to fight in the first of many battles in this war. Two hundred Jedi already wait for the clone troopers' aid on the droid processing planet of Geonosis. The elite of the clone army, the Clone Commandos, prepare to take off in their own private platform of Tipoca City, very aware of what is ahead of them.
Rank Info: Senior Jedi General(SJG): Leads Regiments alongside clone Colonel. Colonel(Col): Lead Regiments alongside Jedi General. Major(Maj): Lead Battalions, which are made up of 4-6 companies. Captain(Cpt): Leads a Company, which is made up of five platoons. 1st Lieutenant(1LT): Leads the platoon. Commands the squad leaders, but is a rank lower than Captains, who lead Companies. 1LT's have spent more time as an officer than 2LT's. 2nd Lieutenant(2LT): Lower rank of Lieutenant. The two ranks are used to distinguish which Lieutenants have spent more time as an officer. First Sergeant(1Sgt): Assists Captains and are the most senior non-commisioned officers in a Company. Sometimes referred to as "Top" due to being the top NCO in a Company. Sergeant First Class(Sfc): Is Platoon Sergeant, 2nd in command to the Lieutenant. If the Lieutenant is missing or dead, the Platoon Sergeant takes over with all the same authority as the Platoon leader until a new Lieutenant arrives. Staff Sergeant(Ssgt): One rank higher than Sergeant, acts as Platoon Sergeant if a Sergeant First Class is missing. Sergeant(Sgt): Leads their squad and is one rank under Lieutenant. Corporal(Cpl): Takes position of Sergeant should the original Sergeant be killed. Lowest rank of Non-commissioned officer(NCO, non-com). Private First Class(Pfc): One rank higher than Private but not yet an NCO. Private(Pvt): Has no authority and is led by higher ranking soldiers.
3rd Platoon, Nova Company, 2nd Battalion, 141st Commando Infantry Regiment,
Lieutenant: 2LT. Bolt Platoon Sergeant: SFC. Leet
Black Team 1. 2LT. Bolt* [I] 2. Cpl. Slicer* [T] 3. Pfc. Newbie [M] 4. Pvt. Ven [S]
Red Team 1. Sgt. Taz [I] 2. Cpl. Zone [S] 3. Pfc. Adenla [HW] 4. Pvt. Tick [I]
White Team 1. Ssgt. Crunch* [I] 2. Cpl. Pit [I] 3. Pvt. Lucky [I] 4. Pvt. Watz [T]
Green Team 1. Sfc. Leet* [S] 2. Cpl. Nade* [I] 3. Pvt. Ram [I] 4. Pvt. Zak [I]
[I] = Infantry [S] = Sniper [T] = Tech [M] = Medic [HW] = Heavy Weapons * = Been with Third Platoon since beginning Bolded = Deceased
Other Important Characters:
1LT. Mick - Platoon leader of Second Platoon.
1LT. Palmer - Platoon leader of Fourth Platoon, XO of Nova Company.
Cpt. Stryke - Commands Nova Company, former platoon leader of third platoon.
Maj. Blast - Commands Second battalion.
Col. Fit - Commands the entire 141st Regiment alongside Jedi General Brax
SJG Brax - Jedi General and co-commander of 141st CIR, brother to Jedi General Knix
Jedi General Knix - Brax's younger brother and commanding Jedi of the 303rd Airborne Infantry
Pyn - Former member of platoon, went AWOL, still secretly in contact with platoon members
Boom - Former member of platoon, currently MIA
Missions For 3rd Platoon:
Battle of Geonosis(Victory) - 1 Dead
Attack and Defense of Kessel(Victory) - 6 Dead
Mission on Acatal(Success) - 0 Dead
Mission on Kessel(Success) - 0 Dead
Battle of Fest #1(Victory) - 1 Dead, 2 MIA
Corellian School Crisis(Success) - 0 Dead
Defense of Kamino(Success) - 1 Dead
Assault on Shamon, Chandrilla(Success) - 1 Dead
Defense of Byuno, Chandrilla(Success) - 2 Dead
Capture of airpad(Success) - 0 Dead
Destruction of droid supply bridge(Success) - 0 Dead
Attack on Hanna City, Chandrilla(Success) - 0 Dead, 8 Wounded
Mission to Nikto Spacecraft(Success) - 3 Dead
Unofficial Mission to Nikto arena/base(Success) - 0 Dead
Unofficial Mission to Kentip(Success) - 0 Dead
Assassination of King Vanozick(Success) - 0 Dead
Invasion of Kentip(Success) - 0 Dead
Defense of Bosh(Success) - 15 Dead
Former Members Of Third Platoon:
Private Snap*-Dead, killed in attack on Geonosis
Corporal Hawk Eye*-Dead, killed in attack on Kessel
Private Vek*-Dead, killed in attack on Kessel
Sergeant Pyro*-Dead, killed in attack on Kessel
Private Teck*-Dead, killed in attack on Kessel
Private Healer*-Dead, killed in attack on Kessel
Private Sick*-Dead, killed in attack on Kessel
Lieutenant Stryke*-Promoted to Captain of Nova Company
Sergeant First Class Bolt*-Promoted to First Sergeant of Nova Company
Private First Class Pan-Dead, killed on Fest
Private First Class Rip-MIA since attack on droid outpost on Fest
Private Pyn*-MIA since attack on droid outpost on Fest
Corporal Reg*-Dead, killed in Defense of Kamino
Lieutenant Ray-Dead, killed by Boom in attack on Shamon, Chandrilla
Corporal Boom*-Arrested for killing Ray in attack on Shamon, Chandrilla
Private Tank-Dead, killed in Defense of Byuno
Sergeant Tide*-Dead, killed in Defense of Byuno
Sergeant Bam*-Dead, poisoned in Nikto arena
Corporal Shooter*-Dead, killed in Nikto arena
Private Strat*-Dead, killed in Nikto arena
Private Dral-Dead, killed in defense of mansion
* = Been with Third Platoon since beginning
List of Changes to Platoon:
Bam promoted to Sergeant of Blue Squad
Boom promoted to Corporal of White Squad
Slicer promoted to Corporal of Black Squad
Newbie added to Black Squad
Tank, Lucky, Pan, Rip, Ram, Zak added to Platoon
Stryke and Bolt removed from list. Leet made Platoon Sergeant.
Taz, Tick, Pit, and Watz added to list
Zone added to list
Boom and Ray removed from list
Bolt added as second lieutenant and new leader of platoon
Tide & Tank removed from roster
Ven, Dral, Adenla added to roster
Bam, Shooter, Strat removed from roster
Dral removed, Lucky moved, Blue Squad deleted
Zone demoted, Taz promoted
List of All Company Codenames
Alpha Bravo Cado Delta Echo Fox Guarder Hero Item Jango Kari Lava Mando Nova Ordo Planet Quarren Rancor Skirita Twilight Under Venom Wookie Xeron Yoda Zero
[color=#666666]This message was edited on 2011-09-30T16:45:53-07:00.
Thread Recap (last 10 posts from newest to oldest)
Apr 07, 09 at 3:08am
XD Yeah I remember. Still sad though. lol
I'm in the process of re-reading it and am very much looking forward to you continuing the second.
Apr 04, 09 at 7:22pm
Haha. Thanks Goyun. As for Bolt dying, well, it was your choice afterall.
Pretty much anybody who ever had their own character, I PM'd and asked them what they wanted to ultimately happen to them. Same with Double Decker/Zone, although he wasn't created until after it became a fan-fic.
So in a way, you guys pretty much laid the groundwork for the sequel.
Apr 04, 09 at 1:57am
Bloody hell Grievous, well done mate. I've not read this for a while, its such a shame everyone dropped out but you really did do it justice carrying it on.
Shame my character died (Bolt) XD Oh well. At least he went out in style. And at least one of my other characters lived (Pyn).
Feb 07, 09 at 10:46pm
Um, shush to that too.
I wasn't sure what to put there, although if you have something sardonic or witty to want me to put up underneath your thread just tell me and I'll put it there. ;D
Jan 26, 09 at 5:26am
LOL at the subtitle. It's the only fanfic.
Jan 17, 09 at 7:41am
Still, not bad for the first time we've seen you toss your hands into this sort of project, and you walked away fairly well. Seeing how your project compares to your first will be well worth it. =D
Jan 15, 09 at 11:03pm
That's pretty much the gist of what the "sequel" is.
I'm going to finish it entirely before I post it, that way I can take my time and polish it as much as I can. Because as much as I loved writing this story, I'll be the first to admit it had a lot of flaws. There were too many characters, a lot of the posts were rushed, etc. Not to mention that horrible stretch at the end where the posts were pretty much brief summaries of the events.
I'm about 3/5 of the way through writing the sequel. I'd like to post it soon though and get some feedback.
Jan 15, 09 at 11:25am
You could do short stories on the clones that stayed alive and what kinds of stuff they did. Maybe a story that makes their destinies intertwine once more?
Jan 14, 09 at 4:54am
I loved it, Grevious.
Jan 14, 09 at 4:12am
That's another problem. This forum is about as dead as it can get. And when I tried moving this thread to the Writer's Lounge it got pretty much 0 traffic.
I'm a man without a country.
I do enjoy writing, but I also like to see that people are reading. Especially considering how much time I put into this story.
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