quote vicrabbThanks for the advice I'll ammend those now, I'll try differences with paragraphs too.For your last review, about Link's Awakening DX, I'm just feeling hungry about the graphics and the soundtrack. You didn't mention them and I don't know what to think about them... if I was someone who hadn't played that game. I've played it, so, I know what to expect but it would have been nice to see one or two paragraphs about it.
You're very good for explaining gameplay though.
Also, I'm currently being bothered by your paragraphs. The space between some sentences is just unbearable for my eyes, probably because I'm used to review differently.
quote Insanity PrevailsThanks. I try to express what the game is like, I don't know how I do it, it just springs to mind, I review my review, edit it then submit!I've seen some great reviews of your coming through. You do seem to work your way through many of the key points for each one you review. I feel like I got a good impression of your feelings to each product from what you wrote.
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