quote Pharoronrating 3* I like it but needs fine tuning I would edit the shunpo part and I would go w/ + Agility and +Hakudo strength since it looks like its heading that way w/ using the gauntlets.Zanpakuto's name: ookami no shirotsuki
(Wolf of the white moon)
Release command: Kuki (stalk) ookami no shirotsuki
Look: a sleek white bladed scimitar with a black hilt and a clear yellow jewel on the tip of the hilt
power: it allows takazu, my character to move swiftly and strike with speed that surpasses shunpo, and glistins with white spiritaul pressure, and can unleash reitsu blasts that resemble white wolfs by slashing,
Bankai:ookami no kuroiten
(wolf of the black sky)
Look: the weilders eyes turn apircing yellow and scimitar is now a set of short gaunglets resembling claws of pure white, and he is wearing a cloak resembling a black wolf
power: spiritual pressure is greatly increased with unarelleld speed far surpasing any shunpo and can creat wolfs of white and black at will, while still fighting with his claws
quote XanderMRating 3* I think it needs fine tuning, idk if ya know but I typed the Zanpaktou's name means depression in it.Zanpakuto name: Raiden
Shikai: Shita utsu Raigeki Kaminari Teiou
Bankai name: Shita utsu Kaminari teiou Raiden
1. Raigeki No Yoroi - Lightning Armor- This move surrounds the bankai summoner in an armor made up of pure lightning capable of burning anything that it comes in contact with.
2. Kangoku Raigeki TsugiFutatsu - Stage 2 lightning prision- This move is the second special ability Raiden is capable of. This move shoots electricity out of the tip of the sword and surrounds the enemy in a confined prison of electricity. All at once and upon command(Ikutso), the electricity cage closes in on the victim instantly electrocuting them unmercifully.
3. Hyoumei Kaminari Teiou Raiden - Manifestation of the Thunder Monarch Raiden- This the the Bankai's true form. Raiden is in the form of extremely high volataged electricity that the user commands. The User can control the lightning for offense and at the same time defense.
4. Makai Dendou Dageki Fainaru Dankai- The Final Stage, Electric Strike of Hell- This move compresses all of the users reiastu into the sword. At this point, the user releases it all at once creating an electric aura around the blade of the sword. The user gains an electrified aura. The User then quickly dashes using Shunpo past the victim slicing through them with the sword. This is an instant kill technique.
Normal Katana - The sword looks like a normal katana except for the hilt which is shaped in a lightning bolt with an area in the middle for the User to easily wield the blade.
Shikai released - The blade is totally different in the released mode. The blade is no longer actually seen. Instead a thick layer of lightning energy has enshrouded the blade and making it a golden color. The cutting power is dratically increased.
Bankai Released - The returns back to its normal mode except has a few lightning sparks that flair around the sword every few seconds making a loud cackling sound.
quote grey exileRating for this in is 2*/ 2* all it is, is a fire Hyōrinmaru, If ya want this one to work hit me up and we wll work on itOne More
Name- 火輪丸 (Fire Ring)
Description- A katana with a guard shaped like four fangs pointing upwards, each fang evenly spaced. The cloth around the hilt is red and white.
Inner Spirit- It is a dragon composed of flames on a barren plain with a red sky. It is the opposite spirit of Hyōrinmaru, it too choosing its wielder. It seeks to fight and defeat its opposite.
Release Phrase- Reign Over The Burning Heavens
Description- The blade remains the same except for a chain attached to a wing shaped blade which unravels from the bottom of the hilt to be used as a weapon.
Powers- By slashing the blade fire springs forth in the shape of the dragon spirit. Also anything hit by the chain blade gets burned severely.
Bankai- 大紅蓮火輪丸 (great crimson lotus fire ring)
Description- The sword remains the same except the four fangs of the guard become eight. Fire surrounds the user, forming wings and a tail. A dragons head surrounds his sword arm and a claw surrounds the other arm. The user also becomes immune to most fire damage.
-Dragon Fire Heart, stabs the enemy causing a dragon of fire to devour the enemy, its fangs injects flames directly into the body, burning them from the inside out.
-Thousand Year Fire Prison, creates pillars of fire which surrounds the enemy, trapping them in place while causing nonlethal burns which torture the enemy.
quote grey exileok much better then the 1st one. Rating shikai 3*/ Bankai 3 1/2* still needs fine tuning but betterI reread the ones I made before and I feel they might be a little overpowered. So I am gonna give it another go.
sword names- Seraph and Daemon
description- Seraph is a white katana with a blue metal guard in the shape of angel wings, a ribbon of white cloth with blue runes is attached to the hilt. Daemon is a black katana with a red metal guard in the shape of demonic wings, a ribbon of black cloth with red runes is attached to the hilt.
release- Cease Your War For But A Moment, Turn Your Immortal Eyes Towards This Land, And Unleash Your Fury Upon Our Enemies!
*note- Only one sword can be wielded at one time, the phrase does not need to be respoken, instead all the user has to do is call out its name and the weapons will stich places.
shikai description- Seraph becomes a halberd with a white shaft and angel wing shaped blade. Shining blue runes adorn the rod. The bottom of the halberd bears a spherical weight with eagle talons clutching the sphere. The user uses a defensive fighting style with powerful but precise attacks. Daemon becomes a scythe with a black shaft and demonic wing shaped blade. Shining red runes adorn the rod. The bottom of the scythe bears a spherical weight with dragon talons clutching the sphere. The user uses an offensive fighting style with quick but brutal attacks.
power- Seraph fires beams of light that pierce the enemy. It can create shields of light as well as allowing the user to fire blasts of blue energy from his hands. Daemon fires blades of shadows which rip apart the enemy. It gives the user the power to become shadows, allowing instant like speed. It also allows the wielder to launch red energy blasts from their hands.
named attacks- Seraph- Piercing Light, Heavenly Volley
Daemon- Rending Shadows, Hellish Barrage
bankai- Eagles Talon Seraph, Serpents Fang Daemon
description- Seraph and Daemon become six foot long blades of pure energy in their respective colors of white and black. Seraph's energy resembles light while Demon's resembles darkness. The blades can freely rotate around the users body as well as grow in size to massive proportions. Chains of blue and red energy attach the weapons the users arms, allowing ranged control of the swords.
power- same as shikai. While using Piercing Light and Rending Shadows the attacks take the form of an eagle and serpent respectively.
moves- same, just a lot stronger. Howling Twilight is the only new move. It combines the power of both weapons forming a "X" shaped attack of gray energy that merely obliterates matter.
quote ShouI rate this 3* shikai/ 4* bankai I like it a lot. When reading it I imagined Haku's Demonic Mirroring Ice Crystals from Naurto/ Naruto's multiply shadow clone jutsu/ and Itach's Shadow clone explosion.Shikai name:haretsu (explosion)
ability: uppon contact with another weapon and explosion forces the enemy back.
style: normal katana exept a jagged edge
Bankai: haretsu kikan kuro-n (explosive mirror clone)
description: blade shadders then forms a mirror human sized, then the mirror multiplies into a circle around the enemy and glazing over the top and floor, then multiple clones of myself emerge from the mirrior and attack but if hurt or destroyed they explode.
bankai clothes: long sleeve black jacket that goes down to my feet with white strips on the arms and long black pants.
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