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Oct 30, 07 at 8:16pmChaos_Lucario


The year 2078. Prosthetic limbs, cybernetic nervous systems, metal tissue, RC teeth and the like surround the human race. Life is like a sci-fi film. Tall buildings, floating cars, and every year something new scrapes the breaches of science and astronomy. One day you're stuck with muskets and cutlasses, and the next you have a solar-powered shotgun that shoots poisonous laser blobs that home in on targets. But, and yes, here comes the big but, with all these new gadgets, you can guess it makes haven for shoplifters, criminal masterminds, and assassins. People escape the police, and because of the numerous planets in the Milky Way now inhabited by humans, crime has just grown to a max.

Then, a blustery November day, a scientist discovers that robotic brains and complete fighting machines can be machine and human at the same time. Yes, kiddies, that means your best mate could shapeshift, if his parents were rich enough to get the 'upgrade'. But there was a major, and yes, I mean MAJOR, 'inconvenience', as the papers called it. But it wasn't an inconvenience, it was an epidemic.

Secretly, for the last twelve years, a criminal mastermind with the IQ of three Albert Einsteins, has been working in secret with a half a million man army hidden in a space station somewhere in a galaxy, far, far away was working on a chance to get this. So he virused them.

The first twelve who put on the fully tested and safe model, turned into a robot, and never turned back. The virus gave them enhanced powers, and each fashioned a built in weapon. They traveled to this space station light years away, and were split into three factions, with three in one, four in another, and five in the last. Each faction could merge together with their team to create a 'Z' version, far superior to the normal one. These factions were named after Greek letters; Alpha, Sigma, and Omega.

Immediately after the epidemic broke out, there was news that the virus had spread throughout the town, this time a different but all the more deadly one. This turned the victim into a metallic humanoid in twelve hours, and after thirty one hours, the patient would weaken, and lay paralyzed. After thirty eight, they were killed, stone dead.

Eight teenagers were called to a high building by a mysterious man who later identified himself as 'The Giver Anewed'. He bestowed a power on them that allowed them to counter the robots whilst wearing an armor that he too had fashioned.

This virus that broke out spread to animals, too. If a human caught the virus whilst touching animal blood, the victim would too get superhuman powers, but he would have a prosthetic torso or lower half of the animal he touched. Before the epidemic subsided, four humans caught this. They were known as Oris.

The virus subsided after a week of panic, and death. The population of the country the virus originated in was reduced by 75% of the population before the virus.

The criminal I mentioned earlier has two commanders, known as Bios. They too had superhuman powers, and each a weapon of their own design. They had armor similar to the Alpha, Sigma, and Omega factions, but metallic.

A lot of people. The eight I mentioned before came to be known as 'Neos' and Neo translates in Greek as 'new'. The new warriors. The Neo Warriors.




Thread Recap (last 10 posts from newest to oldest)

Mar 01, 08 at 6:39pm
Darkking


END OF CHAPTER 1



Mar 01, 08 at 6:39pm
SorasSister


"I'm not sure, but i know i did, and we have to end this or we never will" said Marluxia going up to Kain
"And um Kian, Ray wanted you to have this" said Conor as he gave him the giatar
Kain looked at it, then a tear ran down his cheek
"Kain...I know how you feel, losing someone close to you, but you have to be strong" said Marluxia
Kain nodded.



Mar 01, 08 at 6:36pm
C drone


Conor left him alone, he walked out and stood looking over the balcony, but deep down he knew that the was far from over, the synthetic army was still out their under the command of General solice and for some reason he felt like their was something else, like something was watching them, but what, what could it be.



Mar 01, 08 at 6:30pm
Darkking


Kain:that stupid fool!!! it was my job to keep you all safe. damn it.
Kain ran down to the baseent. he came up with whole bottle of wine.
Kain:sorry Grandma i need. oh ya she was not my real grandma.
Kain force open the wine and letting go down his throat.
conor:go easy on it.
Kain:silent!.
Kain again drink the wine. after it was empty. Kain sat in a chair and look up stareing at nothing.
Kain:someone who programmed to kill, can he deny his fate?



Mar 01, 08 at 6:23pm
C drone


"i dont know, it was all a bit quick" said Conor

"wheres ray" said Kain looking round and then back to conor.

Conor shook his head, and a tear ran down Kain's cheek.

"it should have been me" said Kain

"don't worry, whats down is done" said Conor trying to be comforting.

"its just not fair" said Kain storming out.

"should we" began marluxia.

"no..give him some alone time" said Conor.



Mar 01, 08 at 6:11pm
Darkking


3 three to go. guess time end zeig.

Kain:if she is then so am i.
Conor:you are evil.
Kain:maybe...it time to end this Zeig!
Zeig:lets see who strongest clone!
both clash one with each. blade clash one with each other. sparks flying everywhere.after a break in the fight. kain threw something marluxia.
marluxia:what this?
kain:grab conor,rozzie and ray in one spot and think your self on new earth.
marluxia:what?
Kain:im going to blow this place up! only this will happen if someone stay behind. now go!
everyone got in one place.
Zeig:no one going any where!
Zeig ran at the others. kain got in his.
Ray ran at kain. ray punch Kain in the back of the head hard enough to knock him out. ray grab Kain and threw him to the others with one hand.
Ray: it best that i stay here.
Zeig: i said no one going any where.
ray: your done Zeig.
ray made shock against the wall. the big hole open up. the air started to be suck out. ray grab zeig and push him out of the ship. Zeig grab on to Ray pulling him with him in space. Ray threw his guitar conor.
Conor:stop!
Ray:give that to Kain for me. live Kain, you are the proof that i existed. both ray and Zeig fell in the hole. from above they heard a voice.
intercom:all personal must leave. space station will explode in 5 seconds.5..4..3..2..
the group has left. they were inside of kain house.
kain woke up
Kain:what happen?where are we?



Mar 01, 08 at 5:54pm
SorasSister


Marluxia closed her eyes, she felt herself slipping away but then suddenly she felt herself again and then fell uncoius, Kain smiled
"Good!" said Kain
"Well i could of handled her!" said Zeig getting up
Kain smiled
"Marluxia...Is she really evil" said Conor.

OOC: Don't be sad, there is gonna be a secaul





Mar 01, 08 at 5:13pm
Darkking


0oc five more posts to go! then it over:(

Kain watch as the others fight each other. he knew what marluxia was going through.
Kain:look do something unless you want to switch. i take marluxia and you take zeig.
Zeig:how about i take her out for you!?
Zeig ran at marluxia. he took his scythe and swing at her but marluxia jump at of the way. zeig try to attack again but some how marluxia disappear. Zeig look around to find her.
Kain:from below.
at from the ground marluxia uppercut Zeig.
Kain got from behind marluxia and grab her. he wisper in her ear.
Kain:take a deep breath. control yourself or you might in end like me. my life is not for everyone. i know it not for you. take control yourself.



Mar 01, 08 at 5:01pm
SorasSister


A tear ran down her cheek
"YOU HAVE TO, OR ELSE I COULD KILL YOU!" scremed Marluxia
Suddenly she talked in a cold tone
"Come on, fight me" she smiled evilly
Her voice then went back to normal
"Conor get away please" said Marluxia as she punched him into a wall.



Feb 29, 08 at 6:21pm
C drone


"Marluxia" said Conor.

"im im indoctrinated, i...i can't help it" she said.

she stood up and punched Conor in the face, she used her power and through Conor right through a building wall.

"Marluxia what are you doing" shouted Conor

"i...i cant stop" she began

"i wont fight you..i cant" said Conor as she punched him in the face again.



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