East Clock Town

"This...does not bode well..." Weldar muttered to himself as he took notice of the looming blackness overhead. Foxy had a few choice words about this latest development as well. Foxy was clearly freaking out about it, and that only made Weldar more nervous.

Everything was finally starting to go well, too. The number of monsters was steadily dwindling. Exhausted as they were, Foxy and Weldar could finally see some clear progress being made, and it livened their spirits. The end was near, or so they thought.

"W-Weldar?!" Foxy called out,"Could you do me...a huge favour?"

Weldar looked at him warily. "What is it?"

"I need you to be my torch. It's going to get awfully dark around here." Foxy looked thoughtful for a moment. "Did you ever see the movie 'Pitch Black?'"

Weldar, who was just deciding which character would be best suited for the job, was taken aback by the question. "Uh...no, why?"

Foxy shrugged,"No reason."

(helloooo! anyone there? i want to type but i dont know what 2 type 2 not offset your storyline][do you guys(and grls if there are some) decide on these things early?)

two ?s : 1could i vanish[literally vanish] with Qoryl at the end, or do u alrdy have that planned out? 2what if there was an organization pulling the strings behind Shadow link, omega, and Qoryl? just asking, heh heh

apologies to all who read this: hello b.

(three !s: don't double post. you're unregistered (you should though, it's free!) so you can't, but edit your posts, secondly we do plan these out but only partially, the detail isn't worked out until we get there, and no there can't be an organisation behind Omega, Dark Link and Qoyul as they are as different a characters as they could be and two are never going to appear again)

Soon the entire barrier was pitch black and not a trace of sunlight penetrated the barrier but Foxy laughed, there were so many torches and lights around that the nocturnal variaty of these creatures would hardly survive, why didn't he see it sooner, but then he saw why this wouldn't be a flaw, the sunshield wasn't just on the barrier it wasn't even truly a sunshield, the darkness rolled in more like a thick fog that was so thick that they couldn't even see, the Jegaxtii however were not hindered in the slightest due to most of ther vision coming from heat, Weldar however seemed to have realised this with a little help from his scan visor, he planned to disorientate every Jegaxtii in one swoop, summoning Charizard, Bowser and a fire flower he shot fire everywhere he could it worked the Jegaxtii found themselves stumbling around tackling the fire and overheating the acids, that's when Weldar felt something hit him, not a Jegaxtii, this felt more scaly and clawed, "stop, you can't do that, if they pop you'll melt the whole city!" Yelled his attacker, the voice was rough and Weldar tried hard to stare into the mist, "these creatures, whether you know it or not are the work of bioengineering of epic proportions, every form of attack was though of and those that do work often have disasterous results, I should know, I helped make them..."

50 years ago, 30 light years away

Lizer walked through his school yard if his species could cry he would be, he was always picked on, but alas, such was the way of the planet, the two dominant species usually co-existed peacefully but whenever a hybrid were to occur they'd be shunned from the community, Lizer stood behind what an Earthling would assume to be a tree, sitting down he started to wish he was never born, but suddenly he heard the noise of others coming his way, looking around his hiding spot he saw a number of kids hurling rocks at one other who was running in fear, Lizer suddenly stood up and jumped between the attackers and their target, being a cross-breed he was as agile as one but as strong as the other, catching one of the rocks he crushed it in one hand causing the rest to fall as their holders fleed, "are you alright?" Asked Lizer in his alien language,
"I think so..." Replied the young Qoyul,
"Why were those kids picking on you?" Lizer asked softly,
"My father once was the head of the science and research center but he recently declared he would work on a kind of ultimate lifeform, indestrucable and unoutwittable but he was then fired for fear that this creation would be a problem in the wrong hands!" Qoyul said a note of bitterness in his voice.

12 years later 29.9999999998 light years away

Qoyul finally put the finishing touches on what would be his father's legacy, "now the community will see how much they would have benefitted from my design, it's time to make our research public!" Qoyul said, Lizer smiling and pressing pressing some buttons on a screen, in less than ten Earth minutes a news crew had arrived, "Hello people of the world, you shall now understand the way you would have benefitted from my father's research, you shall all regret having banished him from the science community, I give you the ultimate lifeforms!" at this command four cylinders rose up from the ground in front of him, "the Jegaxtii an ultimate being with no weakness, my father only planned to have these creatures guard the dome that protects us from the red star but you didn't give him a chance, you know why this was your biggest mistake? Because I don't plan to use them for that I plan on, DESTROYING! YOU! ALL!" the cylinders suddenly drained their liquid and the four Jegaxtii left their state of suspended animation, all four of them broke their containers to tiny shards of glass, the Jegaxtii attacked and killed the entire news crew eating whatever came into contact with their teeth, Lizer ran up to Qoyul, "Stop this, it's insane! How could you abuse our research, everything we worked so hard on?" Qoyul looked at Lizer no expression showing,
"Why I'm only doing you a favour, the community that picked on you is now doomed, they won't attack you unless I command them to, but I'd never do that..." Qoyul said not mockingly at all,
"You, you monster!" Lizer yelled punching his former friend in the face,
"You've done it now, JEGAXTII ATTACK THE TRAITOR!" Lizer ran for it, Qoyul and the Jegaxtii not far behind, Lizer knew where he was going, his only chance was to get to the long distance space pod, turning through the halls he finally found it, climbing inside he quickly pressed the activation, the gravity thruster started warming up but Qoyul was right behind him pointing at the ship he signalled the Jegaxtii to attack however the dome protecting the planet suddenly openned allowing in a light of which the planet rarely saw, Qoyul suddenly found the creatures first weakness the creatures could not survive intense light, the Jegaxtii exploded the acid inside flying back burning off his right arm, "MARK MY WORDS LIZER, I WILL CORRECT THIS PROBLEM AND WHEN I DO, THE UNIVERSE IS MINE!!!"

(the younger (darkness hating) variaty are created in an attempt to solve the problem however it makes them soft and when he tries to balance it all he manages to do is make the young one kind and the old the other)

Weldar grabbed his attacker's arm and pulled him over his shoulder. He placed his foot on the beast's neck. "If you created them, then why shouldn't I kill you right now?!"
Lizer smirked. His fears had been well founded. "Because I gave them a flaw even that egotistical excuse for a hybrid doesn't know about, and I'm the only who can tell you it!"

(Qoyul isn't actually a hybrid only your character is)

"I know how to defeat them, just expose them to the sun and they'll melt away and my friend Zeld can expose themselves to their own acids" Weldar said not trusting the stranger,
"there's one other way, I always feared deep in my mind that Qoyul might turn on us my heart always rejected the idea but I was sure to make one fail-safe, if a certain sound were to be made then the acids would vibrate and bubble until it literally pops, this X sound is almost unattainable but not too long ago I heard it, if we can find the bell and sound its chime loudly all the Jegaxtii will be destroyed, unfortunately I don't know which ship it resides on so any attempt to get it would be foolish!"

(isn't anyone gonna do Bro/Sheila?)

Link rolled under the Jegaxtii, he could only just use the lens of truth to see through the fog but it eliminated him from his shield, rolling around a Jegaxtii he sliced at its back but suddenly he heard the sound of snapping leather, a Jegaxtii right behind him had snapped his belt right off, his quiver, shield and bottomless shieth all fell to the ground, unarmed other than the Master Sword he was forced into a corner, he did everything he could to stop them approaching but his sword just couldn't penetrate their hard scythes, completely surrounded he ducked into a cowardly Goron, he felt the rock shield on his back crack from the blows until he realised that he was doomed until suddenly all the Jegaxtii hadstopped walking towards him their fore-most limbs lay bleeding on the ground, he looked around where he saw none other than his rival, Miyahon, "What are you doing here?" Link asked,
"Saving your life so I may take it another day, we won't let the world be destroyed unless we're the ones doing the destroying!" Miyahon's twisted logic seemed vaguely familiar to Link but he aloud his new partner to carry on but Link learned that slicing off the arms was not a good idea as the acid now leaked constantly and when it turned sharply it would erupt like a volcano.

Lizer looked to his left. A single jegaxtii began chewing through a nearby wall. "Hey, go off that way," he motioned to his right, "I'll take care of the loner." Murray looked questioningly at him."How?" Lizer held up an acid eaten claw. "how do you think I've been protecting myself?" Murray walked off. Lizer stopped in front of the jegaxtii. "tell Qoyul I'm keeping them at bay." He smiled as it moved off into the distance. A voice echoed in his head "you can't play a two sided game" He smirked. "you can prove that when you can control your own body."
Strange flecks floated into his vision. He collapsed, unconcious. Murray stood behind him next to ivysaur. "your sleep powder has improved. I knew I couldn't trust that freak."

"hey, what happened?" i asked murray.
"lizer was well... a sandwhich." murray replied with a squeel.
"Weldar?"
Weladar changed back into his normal form.
"Lizer was a fake." he said. "He was trying to keep us here until Qoyul got here.
"Heh i never even met him, Ill stay here with him. You guys go and fight."
"ok" they replied.
The two ran of west, as i began to sit down next to Lizer.

(thanks gangey, I got the names wrong:))
My eyes opened.someone was sitting on my legs, I couldn't get up. I squinted. "Murray?"
"shut up, traitor!" they crossed their arms. "Listen that guy wasn't me!" It was some conciousness these twin-something or other witches put in me, I had no control!" "I'll believe it when I see it!"
I sighed. then my rolled to the back of my head and i blacked out. The other lizer had control...

i turned to look at lizer. He looked like he'd just died. his eyes rolled back and turned white.
"lizer, dont be stupid i no your not dying" I said with a sigh of worry in my voice.
"i hope your not dying anyway!" i thought.
"arrkkgg" screamed lizer.
He started thrashing around kicking trying to get me off him.
"Get off me he hissed... get off, get off, get off!" he screamed.
He kicked me in the head knocking me off him. I jumped bback on him holding down his shoulders. i pulled out a knuckle buster. i put it on my right fist and quicklly jumped off Lizer. Assoon as he jumped up i did a roll behind him A smashed him in the back of the head with the knuckle busters. He quickly turned like he had not felt a thing. i dived back on him holding my forearm in his neck.
"Control yourself Lizer, I know its not you! Snap out of it!"

"You're wrong. that waste of space hasn't been lizer in years!"
He smirked and whipped his fist up, hitting gangey with the same power gangey had just hit him with. Gangey backed up to the wall. " What are you?" All lizer's human features melted away as he was surrounded by a dark aura. "no one you would know, but someone the hero of time might know" A gauntlet of dark aura pinned Gangey to the wall...

sorry to double post again but no I'm not suggesting anything Ganon-ish(I don't know what i'm suggesting)
(delete this after you read it if you can , i know i can with that weird garbage icon.)

(i dont know who you are then? but i want the real you in the story so do we have to defeat you to get the real lizer back?)

"then..then.. who are you?" i stuttered.
"Oh you will find out, When the others come i can tell you then." he replied.
"oh ok but thats to bad because i dont think youll survive until they come.." i drifted out as i swung a big punch at him.

(that "hero of time" part can just be disregarded.My head swoll up an inch and deflated after i posted and reread it. You know the predetermined plot better than i do, maybe you could find a better person. About the "real lizer", the 'real lizer'(in control) is the fake lizer and the real real lizer is fading into oblivion and i guess you have get rid of (rip out, destroy, etc.) the other lizer to get me back(if the happy mask salesman were here, he'd probably put the other in a mask.))
Lizer slammed against the wall. the aura faded "kill me," I cried as the aura overcame me. Lizer smiled "no, no, no, not as long as we share this body." He slammmed Gangey to the ground without touching him and placed his foot on his neck. "So we switched positions didn't we? I'm going to kill you because, it seems, the wasteling gets stronger when you're around." Gangey smiled, even as the aura pressed down in an attempt to suffocate him. "I can get out of this." The aura began to fade. "You won't have to," I said as I removed my foot, "he's right. something about you keeps me in control, the question is for how long?"