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Oni s-e-e-k-e-r total posts: 1838 since: Feb 2003	Jun 25, 06 at 4:39am Oni [Elfen Lied Banner]
	User Name: Oni Real Name: Brandon Programs GIMP Photoshop CS3 Experience: Since 06 Theme/Style: Anime/Games This message was edited by Oni on Jun 25 2006. This message was edited by Oni on Jun 25 2006. This message was edited by Oni on Jun 27 2006. This message was edited by Oni on Jun 27 2006. This message was edited by Oni on Jun 27 2006. This message was edited by Oni on Jun 28 2006. This message was edited by Oni on Jun 29 2006. This message was edited by Oni on Jul 01 2006. This message was edited by Oni on Jul 11 2006. This message was edited by Oni on Jul 11 2006. This message was edited by Oni on Jul 11 2006. This message was edited by Oni on Jul 11 2006. This message was edited by Oni on Jul 11 2006. This message was edited by Oni on Jul 11 2006. This message was edited by Oni on Jul 11 2006. This message was edited by Oni on Jul 21 2006. This message was edited by Oni on Jul 30 2006. This message was edited by Oni on Aug 22 2006. This message was edited by Oni on Aug 22 2006. This message was edited by Oni on Sep 08 2006. This message was edited by Oni on Sep 13 2006. This message was edited by Oni on Sep 17 2006. This message was edited by Oni on Sep 17 2006. This message was edited by Oni on Sep 17 2006. This message was edited by Oni on Oct 17 2006. This message was edited by Oni on Jan 15 2007. This message was edited by Oni on Sep 29 2007.
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Rawl hawk yay is bored. starting to like it total posts: 73 since: May 2006	Jun 25, 06 at 4:44am re: Oni [Elfen Lied Banner]
	they're pretty good. alittle plain on the 1st one. you could add a 1 pixel border to em' too. you just need a bit of practice. other than that, good job is that a pentegram on the last one ?
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BassDeluxe Resident Neo total posts: 3245 since: Aug 2004	Jun 25, 06 at 4:50am re: Oni [Elfen Lied Banner]
	They are both good, but...It looks as though they both have a point where one image stops and another starts. On the first, It's on the left. On the second, it's on the right. Edit: Whoops, reverse that. First, right. Second, left.
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Oni s-e-e-k-e-r total posts: 1838 since: Feb 2003	Jun 25, 06 at 4:57am re: Oni [Elfen Lied Banner]
	This is my first offical work. Sure, I overused the cheap Supernova effect but I think it looks ok for a first attempt. Basically I slightly changed the BG render I used, inserted the pic I chose and added a couple supernova's. I finally learned how to use the transparency tool in this Hellsing banner. The dark render I used in back of this is nearly non-existant because of all of the images involved. I'm glad I learned another feature, though. ----------------- EDIT: Oh thanks everyone for your comments. ----------------- quote Rawl hawk yay is that a pentegram on the last one ? That one is Hellsing themed and since that concerns vampires and such, it probably is. This message was edited by Oni on Jun 25 2006.
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Insanity Prevails (neocrs) (moderator) Site Contributor's Forum User Reviews Critiques and Help total posts: 14984 neopoints: 7118 GameGrep pts: 414 since: Feb 2003	Jun 25, 06 at 12:29pm re: Oni [Elfen Lied Banner]
	For the first one, why is there so much white over to the right? The BG looks incomplete. Also, those supernovas aren't good. They're distracting. If you must use them, lower the brightness. Second piece, I don't like it. There doesn't appear to be a focal point, and it just looks like you slapped several pictures together and played with opacity settings. Finally, add borders to all your works. A 1 pixel black border works well. I suggest checking out some tutorials for GIMP to learn some tricks. From there you can go onto experimenting and thus develop some great works. GIMP Tutorials
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Oni s-e-e-k-e-r total posts: 1838 since: Feb 2003	Jun 26, 06 at 1:32am re: Oni [Elfen Lied Banner]
	Thanks IP, this time around I used a tutorial to create this piece of work. 1 GIMP crash () and a couple hours later... voila! Hope everyone likes it better than my last two works.(I know... the cut on Kenshin's hair was a bit sloppy... ) ------------------ quote Insanity Prevails Second piece, I don't like it. There doesn't appear to be a focal point, and it just looks like you slapped several pictures together and played with opacity settings. You... could tell? >.>
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Insanity Prevails (neocrs) (moderator) Site Contributor's Forum User Reviews Critiques and Help total posts: 14984 neopoints: 7118 GameGrep pts: 414 since: Feb 2003	Jun 26, 06 at 11:23am re: Oni [Elfen Lied Banner]
	quote Oni You... could tell? >.> No, I guessed. >.> This one is better, but the cutting needs work. I can still see white around the render.
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gonzab true seeker (2K Remix) since: Aug 2004	Jun 26, 06 at 2:40pm re: Oni [Elfen Lied Banner]
	Hmm... You need to practice the cutting indeed. Nothing more to report though, I think it's not very bad.
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The Pursuit I seem to be all kerscuffled? Hooked on Neo total posts: 4561 since: Apr 2006	Jun 26, 06 at 3:01pm re: Oni [Elfen Lied Banner]
	Yes you do need to practice cutting and maybe alitle more with brushes so the background is more exiting also you dont have to but its alws good to write something on it.
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Oni s-e-e-k-e-r total posts: 1838 since: Feb 2003	Jun 27, 06 at 4:54pm re: Oni [Elfen Lied Banner]
	My latest work. It's Noir themed and I took my time with this one and experimented with a lot of different brushes. I'm just glad someone on photobucket had a beautiful image that already had a transparent BG, saving me time and sanity. Thanks for commenting everyone, please continue!
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Insanity Prevails (neocrs) (moderator) Site Contributor's Forum User Reviews Critiques and Help total posts: 14984 neopoints: 7118 GameGrep pts: 414 since: Feb 2003	Jun 27, 06 at 5:16pm re: Oni [Elfen Lied Banner]
	Very nice background but the colour scheme doesn't really seem to match up with the stock image. I'd probably go with a colour closer to yellow or orange.
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Oni s-e-e-k-e-r total posts: 1838 since: Feb 2003	Jun 27, 06 at 6:05pm re: Oni [Elfen Lied Banner]
	I don't really like this one as much as any of my other works. I made this because I was bored and wanted to do something. Since there was a bit of text on the border of this pic, I had to position this in a wierd way, but I do like the color scheme I came up with.It's D.N. Angel themed if anyone's wondering. IP: Yeah... I thought about that... Kirika (the character's partner) was supposed to be the focus of this one, but I couldn't find any good pics of her, so I ended up using Mireille, and never changed the BG.
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Insanity Prevails (neocrs) (moderator) Site Contributor's Forum User Reviews Critiques and Help total posts: 14984 neopoints: 7118 GameGrep pts: 414 since: Feb 2003	Jun 27, 06 at 6:17pm re: Oni [Elfen Lied Banner]
	quote Oni I don't really like this one as much as any of my other works. You're... kidding, right? Because I find this to be the best one so far. Too much white over on the left, so I'd suggest shortening the width to get rid of it. Maybe also lower the brightness slightly on the stock to see if that would make the stock better defined. However, the BG has a great design and suits the stock image.
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Oni s-e-e-k-e-r total posts: 1838 since: Feb 2003	Jun 28, 06 at 5:04am re: Oni [Elfen Lied Banner]
	Really? Thanks! I knew the color scheme, if anything, would be better but I didn't see much else in this, but I guess it's better than I thought. This message was edited by Oni on Jun 28 2006.
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Oni s-e-e-k-e-r total posts: 1838 since: Feb 2003	Jun 28, 06 at 5:43pm re: Oni [Elfen Lied Banner]
	Finished the Digi-port header! Is it just me or does this one seem a bit... crowded...? Also this was my first time taking a shot at trying to add text, so I know it's not perfect. This message was edited by Oni on Jun 28 2006.
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