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Nov 02, 08 at 11:00pm
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Nov 03, 08 at 4:12am
re: knb (sword)

    Yours, "Look Ahead" piece looks really nice, but there is a lot of blank space, and the text colour of your username stands out more than the piece title .

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Nov 03, 08 at 6:16am
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I love that Milky Way and Anime (.hack) banner. Pretty good for a person with only two and a half months of experience. I especially love the colors.

The Look Ahead banner is also nice as well, but I'd have to agree that there's too much white space and the background cuts off too soon. Also I don't like how the abstract render works on this one, sorry.
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Nov 03, 08 at 10:44am
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If the height of the Look Ahead one was knocked off about 50px, then I think it would look much better.

Also, I have to say this... There's no way you've only been doing this for 2.5 months. I'm sorry, that's basically impossible. Unless you're following tutorials step by step, there's no way you could make this caliber of stuff in such a short amount of time. Unless you're in a graphics design, or art course that is.

But whatever, that's not the point. You're good.
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Nov 03, 08 at 11:12pm
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Thanks for the comments, guys.
Archangel: I have friends on MSN that have been teaching me from day one. They taught me all the basics and how to make a decent signature in about a week. Plus, my uncle knows all about this kind of stuff so I gathered some knowledge from him as well. I really wanted to get into this kind of stuff, plus I knew all of the tools before I even got Photoshop, so it wasn't too confusing for me. Sure, the first batch of signatures weren't too good, but I got the hang of it and started to improve quickly. I try to work on Photoshop as much as I possibly can. That being said, the signatures that I have posted up there aren't the only ones I have ever made. I didn't just start out like this.
Thanks for the comment.

Latest;
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Can't say too much about this..certainly not my best effort but I was playing around with my new pack of effects that I downloaded and this piece came together. Just noticed that yellow on her back..oh well. Couldn't find any spot that would look nice with text.
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Nov 04, 08 at 9:31am
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I meant nothing against you, just so you know. I just find it hard to believe that someone so good hasn't been doing it for very long. Knowing the tools though does help a lot, and I guess if you're constantly getting advice from friendly and family, then it can really speed up the process a lot.

As for the new piece: Love the bottom, hate the left. Also there's a few blue pieces that stick out a bit too much. She looks super creepy...
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Nov 04, 08 at 10:45pm
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Alright, thanks for the tips.
A few new things.

Header:

Simple and easy to make. Not sure if I should keep the Play. Explore. Relax. part.

Signature:



Going for a simple but pleasing look. Should I keep the circle or ditch it?
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Nov 04, 08 at 11:18pm
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I never knew you were into Graphics =o. haha

@Header: Simple, yes. I like how you gave the screenies a button type look. Not much to critique, but nothing looks bad. Maybe you can incorporate some overlapping, not sure if it'd look better but hey, just throwing it out there. lol

@Sig: Its lacking a border. 1px around the the edges would work wonders haha. I think the background is a bit too chaotic. It draws attention away from the actual stock. The lighting however helps it stand out more, but I still think that too much is going on. And about the circle, doesnt really make a difference to me. Actually looks fine with and w.out.
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Nov 05, 08 at 5:07am
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Simon!

I love that signature you made there!
I sure hope that wasn't made to be for Neo..X3
Or yourself....hinthint..

Where'd you get the stock?


I love the lighting and the whole feel of the banner! ^~^ GJ.
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Nov 05, 08 at 6:17am
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I'd say ditch the circle on your latest signature. The blurred duplicates on the left and right look really nice here. It gives it a bit more depth. And of course the trendy effects look trendily trendy.

As for the header...hmmm. Personally I'm not a fan of the boxes nor the sharp bevel (makes me think of those websites that still use those trends) and I'm not sure about that balloon-present thing floating on the right side either. It just looks detached from the rest of the header. Also, why not use the AC:CF logo? If you just use the logo instead of just plain text, you can make it much more interesting.
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Nov 05, 08 at 11:15am
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Definitely without the circle.

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Nov 05, 08 at 5:49pm
re: knb (sword)

    Your hoodie signature is nice, but the only thing I dislike blurriness of the left and right sides. I would also cut a lot off the signature, to actually make it a nice size, not saying it's bad though .

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Nov 05, 08 at 10:57pm
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sumazndude: Yeah, I'm into graphics. Thanks for the comments.

Phenomena: Haha, thanks. I got the stock from a stock photobucket that someone posted on another site.

The Answer: Alright, thanks for that. I'll be sure to edit the header a bit later.

Archangel: That's what I was thinking.

Starborn: I like my sizes. For the blurriness, I was trying to make it have more depth.

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I was trying to give this a realistic feel for a battle somewhere else. Yeah, yeah, no border. I'm not into those. 1 or 2?
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Nov 05, 08 at 11:01pm
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I like one. It's quite intense really... I don't know if it's just because I'm extremely tired, but it also looks 3Dish to me. Some parts of him look a tad oversharpened, like his back, but other than that, I like it.

If you were going for a realistic feel, then the colors may be a bit too vibrant for that.
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Nov 05, 08 at 11:07pm
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Looks squished.

Only criticism I can offer without repeating Archangel.

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