My Zelda: OoT Story

It's ok, but post this in general discussion, thanks

That's a good story man, nice work. And yes, this can have a thread of its own, but you should also take it down to the writers lounge to get some more professional opinions.

There. I'm almost done the prologue, which provides the backstory for the Dragons and the Great War, plus a huge battle for you Medieval war fans. I'll email it to anyone who wants it.

I started an OoT story but I abandonded it quickly. I may post it one day. i'm not sure though.

Indeed I think it was good.
I would like to do something like that if I wern't so lazy... I hate typing

Well your story has some flaws. First, Ganon is part of a race but they are not dragons. thay are a mixture of a pig and a goat and really huge. Also, you said link was about to be killed by Ganon and was running away, well when link was separted from his mother he was a baby (he wasn't old enough to run yet). Also, Zelda is not, I repeat, not links sister! Link is obviously not the prince of hyrule. Also, you said majora was the keeper of the dragon Ganon, impossible. There never was any majora. Majora's mask was a sacrificial mask of an anceint tribe for thousands of years and was not called majora's mask after the maker of it, but for other unknown reasons. In addition, Ganondorf was a natural born human. Ganon was first born when GAnondorf died. As a matter of fact, the only reason Ganon exists was because ganondorf was too powerful to die but not powerful enough to remain human therefore mutating into thye beast ganon. I rest my case.

Sorry to double post but, I got a story. I should put it in the Writers Lounge but it's just the plot line so...


The Legend of Zelda The Seven Stars

The story is based 14 years after Ocarina of Time. Link is 24, Zelda is 23. Something escapes from deep within the Forest Temple in a room Link never explored. It kills off the Kokori(This will explain the missing of them in LttP) all except for Saria. Link is living in a house on the far side of Death Mountain. A Messenger of Zelda tells link to visit her. When he does she tells him about the evil that escaped the Forest Temple and Link is asked to stop it.

Link has to find the Seven Stars, which are located in:

Forest Star- Forest Temple

Fire Star- Death Mountain mines which are below the Crater

Water Star- Water Temple

Spirit Star- Sky Temple

Shadow Star- Shadow Temple

Light Star- Temple of Light

Dark Star- Shadow Temple

after Link finds thoise he breaks the Seal of the Stars which is located in the Star Temple. Which is underground between Lake Hylia and the destroyed Kokori Forest.

After that Link finds the Sword of the Seven Stars in the Star Temple and uses it in the Battle of the Stars, which will be located between Lon Lon Ranch(Which will be by then completly destroyed) and Hyrule Castle Town. The battle will be between the forces of Hyrule(Gorons, Hylians, Zoras) and the forces of the thing that escaped the Forest Temple(Stalfos, Lizalfos, stalfos on horses, etc...) After that Zelda is wounded badly by the Servent of Evil(the thing that escaped the Temple) Link fights him in a sword to sword then magic to magic battle. Link wins and Zelda dies.

THE END

EDIT" Spelling

This message was edited by DarkLink on Mar 11 2003.