Pokemon White Sprite Contest [New Thread in Black 2/White 2 Forum!] - Page 40

Pheonyx, do you mind if i still enter the normal round?
i know you've been really busy, so if its too much i wont post it. lol

i wanted to make a sea turtle
water/rock type:

i know there's carracosta or whatever, but sea turtles are green, not blue.
C+C is welcome from anyone

I know, I'm sorry I'm working on it really. First week back in school can really kick the work ethic right out of you. I'll try and have it done before the weekend.

Judging!
Thank you everyone for your patience, getting back into college really took longer than I thought it would. Unfortunately I'm only doing a quick judging this round, as I really don't want to keep you guys any longer than necessary. As always, if you'd like a more in-depth explanation and critique, then shoot me a PM and I'll answer when I can.

quote PwnageMaster67

[C+]
*Careful when doing pixel overs of non-official art, the original owner may consider it stealing.
*I know it's in the original art, but the teeth are in the place in the mouth.
*Shading on the back legs looks good, but the front, face, and chest still looks flat.

quote Dragon Arbock

[A-]
*Good fusion of Pokemon I wouldn't have thought went well together.
*Head looks overly big on Ninetale's body
*Difficult to see which way the neck and chest are pointing, they don't seem to match up.

quote CJames

[A]
*Excellent use of texturing
*Wings could use more contrast
*Um... really quite cute.

quote pbrockercc18

[B]
*Great fusing on the head, though recognizable the different parts work well together to make the head overall look original.
*Shading's a bit flat, especially on the tail.
*The shape of the body is odd, it looks like a bipedal Pokemon with no front arms at first glance.

quote Wombat

[A+]
*Impressive fusion between two very different Pokemon.
*Technically no errors from what I can see.
*Wurmple gets lost in all the Giratina parts. Could easily pass as a baby Giratina.

quote Kimonio

[B-]
*Some good scratching
*Needs black outline
*The side of the head needs shading, like a rounded box.

quote Brodeo

[A+]
*Animation's really smooth
*The sprite looks simple but I can tell you used multiple trainers to make it.
*There's just a small line of black on the top of the hand that is a bit distracting.

quote ben101

[C+]
*Welcome to the White Spriting Competition!
*Animation's pretty choppy, though you only had three frames to work with. Work with the timing between frames to match the animation in the game.
*Pretty much just a recolor in the end.

quote Shmexie_x_Deoxys

[B+]
*Good scratch work
*Too much black outline, especially on the shell.
*Front fin doesn't need that much shadow.

quote DaDarkNinetales

[A-]
*Neat new Pokemon, great scratch work.
*Purple colored outline is too dark
*Shape of the belly is shakey

quote Lizz

[A+]
*Love how the two are interacting with each other in the sprite, rather than just being separate poses next to each other.
*Very lovely, no technical mistakes.
*Well, Latios seems a bit expressionless.

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Winners
1st: Wombat, Brodeo, Lizz
2nd: CJames
3rd: Dragon Arbock, DaDarkNinetales

New Theme: Take a Pokemon, and change its body shape. This can be a repose from a quadrupedal Pokemon to a bipedal Pokemon, turning a Pokemon with legs into a fish or snake, making a fat Pokemon skinny or vice versa, etc.
Deadline: Sept. 22nd
Judge: 4EverSeaMusic

This is all I could do on short notice!

Wow that's really good
I need more practice though.