Pokemon White Sprite Contest [New Thread in Black 2/White 2 Forum!] - Page 20

quote Whitephoenix

It's basically mew,victini,celebi and jirachi.
I hope you like it!
I made it about may last year and Thought it would be perfect for this theme!

Next time save it as a .png.

I think I'll work on an entry.

Eh, not all that happy with it. Feels like I could have done more, but I ran out of ideas half way through. Groudon's a pain to recolor with too.

Groudon and Zekrom.

Last minute (I think) entry.
A gingerbread woman made entirely of legendary pokemon. (not sure if non legendary colors are allowed so I took colors from some and edited them)

Scratch that, I didn't feel like studying, so I JUDGED!

Dragon Arbock


B+
Well, the wings. I think the blue color on the wings is to bright and stands out too much. Also, why is there a row of blue pixels right next to the neck? I mean, I get it why, but you could have hidden it behind the neck, it would look a bit better:3. The tail doesn't really go with the rest of the body, perhaps a recolor? You can see that the tail is from a steel type, but the rest of the body isn't, so it doesn't really fit. Same thing on the neck with the Dialga pieces. You could have reshaped them a little or recolored. I just don't dig the color scheme... The sprite just isn't screaming Unity; you can tell all the Pokemon you used. Since the theme was a legendary fusion, you did good... but it's just.. plain, you took no risks.

Pheonyx


A-
You like to give yourself a hard time?
It's a great fusion, and I absolutely *takes deep breath*... hate the arm over the tail. I know Zekrom's tail looks like that in original, but you could have altered it. As soon as I saw the sprite I got lost in the arm/tail pattern. I couldn't distinguish where the arm begins, and where it ends. Maybe I'm overreacting, but you could have removed the patterns either on the tail, or the arm, just so it looks clearer. Anyway, that's the main problem on the sprite. Otherwise it looks pretty good, maybe just a pixel here or there

loulybob


C+
It looks extremely FLAT; not just due to the shading, but more because it's so 'naked'. Combined with the back, neck is too long, so the sprite looks unbalanced too. Naked? Well, the only thing on the sprite are the crystal piece on the head and the stripes. You definately should have put smth on the back (perhaps Suicine's hair, since you fused the two). The right ear looks uneven, like under a wrong angle. The sprite just looks poor. You just should have added more, but nice try.

Pokefan2002


B-
The only thing I recognise here is Jirachi. Anyway, the dress is too croooked on one side, just fix a few pixels to make it smoother. It looks like it's bending down to take a s*** (Pardon me for the expression:P). I don't know if it was your intention to make it look like it was bending - the position of the legs also made me think of that. The legs don't look centered enough. Too much black outline on the hands too. In some places it looks a bit flat too. Also, the lower pattern on the dress doesn't seem to go across that smoothly; it's also a bit jagged. Anyway, it looks good, like a new Pokemon! But, I don't think that's a good thing this time, since the theme was to fuse legendaries, and I don't see any (maybe you fused them too well^^). Could you just give me a list of legendaries you used?tnx

Whitephoenix


D
As said, you should have saved it as png. This format just messes up your sprite. And, I can't really judge it, since it looks so blurry. From what I can see, it looks pretty messy. :S

4EverSeaMusic


Pheonyx?

NEW THEME: Make a Sprite based on a HipHop or R&B Song or Singer. It can be a Trainer, Pokemon or Mugshot.
DEADLINE: April 9th
JUDGE: Pheonyx

The Scoreboard will be updated when my Sprite is judged too...

quote 4EverSeaMusic

[A-] You really like that Mewtwo/Raquaza combination, don't you? I think it's going to be the new Aether's Dragonair repose... Anyway, to make your sprite a little more dynamic, it would help to include parts from other Pokemon that change the base shape of the sprite. You're on the right track with the bird legs and Rayquaza arms and Dialga head, but there's still a smidge more Mewtwo than any other Pokemon. The fire on the hand was a nice touch. Dynamic, but now overly so that it looks tacky.

Don't worry about the scoreboard, I did it myself.

T-Boz from TLC - the best R&B/HipHop group ever, and my favourite group<3
She's dressed as in the video for Waterfalls<3
It's my first trainer sprite ever!

*Poke poke* Going to leave this open a bit longer. Let's see some more entries!