quote messa113

I bit my tongue and walked away. "C'mon you dick!". Again i carried on walking, breathing very heavily now. "Ye go on. Walk away ya' fagot!". Right that was it. I swiveled on my heels on walked back to the lad, anger coursing through my veins. i forgot there were 20 other players, the ref and a bunch of parents including mine from both sides all watching me. I reached the lad and without thinking swung for him. I hit him right in the jaw and he fell to the floor. Immediately there was pushing everywhere, everyone running to get involved. Parents on the pitch. One of our team pulled me to one side, away from everything. As i began to calm down i realised what i'd done. My goal was taking us to the final, and my stupidity was going to mean i'd miss it. The ref walked over to me and as expected he showed me a red card. Great. Fcking great. My temper had cost me again. I walked off the pitch with my held hung low. I walked past the ball that 5 minutes ago had brought me so much joy when it hit the net from my foot. The manager didn't even give me a pat on the back. I knew i'd let him down. Again.

Good intro very detailed and informative, enjoyed reading it. I bolded your mistakes in relation to a capital I but if they were on purpose as if the young angry boy was writing then I apologize my bad Other than that KIU