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Kesh
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Hooligans Don’t Deserve To Play Football. |
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Hooligans Don’t Deserve To Play Football. ![]() With a cigarette in my mouth, and my jacket placed over my muscular shoulders, I coolly walked onto the school’s field. Surrounded by what seemed to be about a hundred school students, I saw my victim. It was just him and me now. He walked slowly towards to me. “What’s he playing at?” I thought to myself. I shouted out to him, “If you wanted to get battered, you should have gone to the fish and chip shop.” Yeah, it was one of those embarrassing teenager jokes but hey. Anyway at full speed, I ran towards him and punched around the nose. Blood spurted out of it; I kicked him in the stomach. I spat out my cigarette on him and he got up. He tried to fight back, but he was no match. “FIGHT, FIGHT” bellowed the crowd. We were throwing punches, kicking each other and swearing. I grabbed his hair, and threw it down to my knees. He was out of it. There’s two things I love in life, well make that three. I like beating the crap out of people, drinking and football – of course, it’s in that order... | |
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Mark_W
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This looks great, interested in seeing where this is going, KUTGW
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foxyboy478
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Great start Kesh mate, hopefully it will be as good as the abused child. And with this start it looks pretty promising
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Dec
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Oh Kesh <3.
You don't need anyone to tell you how good you are because you know it and this will be the same standard as the abused child. You also don't need me to tell you I am here to graphics slave for you again D | |
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Smithy
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Great start Kesh. This is going to be as good if not better than the Abused Child.
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MikeyGrea
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Nice start, I enjoyed the abused child, and this looks like it could be even better.
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stato
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Great start. Can't wait for more (Y)
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Kesh
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Thanks for the comments guys.
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Kesh
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![]() I sat outside the head teacher’s office with one of my hands over my head and the other twiddling with my phone. My shirt was torn, and my school tie was hanging loosely off my neck. My names Tom Smith, I’m sixteen years of age and am in the last year of school. To be honest I can’t wait to leave here; I’ll be able to do what I want with no-one telling me what to do. Two days of suspension, wasn’t too bad I suppose, I mean I’d had worse. I strolled out of the school gates and headed to King Georges Park, Once at my destination; I chucked my jacket onto the ground and entered the fray of players. After school, I and a few of the other lads come here to the KG to have a kick-about. Anyway, I launched into a tackle and took the ball off my opponent, a dummy here, and a step-over there. I nut-megged a player and attempted an audacious chip. Unfortunately, it cannoned off the crossbar and the ball was headed away. I’ve got to admit, I’m pretty decent at football and I really don’t know why. I mean I don’t work hard enough or train – yet it all comes naturally to me. Still, I’m not one to complain... | |
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Mark_W
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Another great update, love your layout and the detail is great, it all seems pretty realistic so far, KUTGW.
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stereo441
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Good start so far Kesh, intersting story and well written. nice to see you starting this. KIU
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stato
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You shoot like Kanu for west brom! :-P
Great update again | |
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J Baliski
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This is a good start here Kesh, i have a feeling this may earn you another SOTM eventually! KUTVGW!
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adelaidecrowsrdabest
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Good job Kesh except the villan is the hero this time
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Kesh
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Update to come shortly
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