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Exxmaniac *pewchkchkpew* high on "N" total posts: 776 since: Aug 2009	Oct 22, 11 at 12:46am ^ re: .:Soul Silver Spriting Contest:.:Current Round: Open:.
	Log in to remove this sponsored message JUDGING quote Theme: Body Type: Make a Pokemon with one body type, into a different kind. (Example making suicune stand on two feet) This can be hard to make it look natural, but that's what you are aiming for. So sorry about the lateness of this, but Homework and swimming and GRAWR COLD WATER N POOL ARGH. So yeah, the first two entries were already saved, thankfully. ONWARDS TO JUDGING! quote NickAlert A I like the idea of a quadrupedal Wurple, even if it would scare the hell out of me in real life. My main problems are with the back and chest. First off, the back looks a bit cluttered and messy, with the spiny things sticking out randomly. The chest ridge thing (Jeez, I'm bad at names of anatomy ) looks like it starts from the top of its front-right leg and curves into the neck. There should be a line seperating the chest and the leg, some examples would be on Sawsbuck or Ponyta. Its front-left also looks like it's bending unnaturally. quote Deoxor B- At first, it looked great, but after looking at it for a minute I found some things. Most of the sprite looks like you just pasted parts of Arceus- The head and Ring-Thing (derp)- onto Dragonair's body. I know that you can do better than that. Anyway, the ring looks very copy-pasted and the neck looks WAY too skinny where it connects to the head. The tail end, from what I can tell, is from Arbok's sprite? If so, I don't understand why. It's put on awkwardly and just doesn't fit. Again, I know you can do better, I've seen your sprites. ~~I know where you live...~~ Err, ignore that last statement. quote Exxmaniac (Judged by Brodeo) ~ A(-) ~ Very Good Sprite, but one thing that really bothers me about it is how bright it gets on the right side of it. It get's to be the same color as the bottom of it. Which is too bright. If anything it should get darker because it's head would cast a shadow.(REALLY NIT PICKING NOW) but another part with that area that bothers me is that it looks like it's lifting it's... body up. That isn't the wrong part though, because some sprites (like milotic) have it done nicely. I just feel that on this sprite it looks uncomfortable for the pokemon. quote Lost Eventide A+ Doesn't seem like you're rusty at all! Only minor problems I see are that its front-left leg could use some shading, and the dither-shading could be gotten rid of, since barely any sprites in BW use it. quote Kanon C+ Even though it looks like the most unintentionally-cutest thing ever cause of the snout, "c:", it still has some faults. First off, the body looks very flat. Maybe change the grey to white and add some grey shading or something along those lines. The leftmost (Our left) ear-wing looks as if it's coming off the front of the face, not the side. It also looks longer than the one that's supposed to be closer to us. Finally, the horn looks very flat and the tail-orb-things (There goes my horrible anatomy naming again! ) look like there's a light source coming from the bottom-right. Remember: there's only 1 light source! quote 4EverSeaMusic B+ It looks great, and I like how you used Gastly's main body as a base! The main problem I see is with the black rim around the smoke. Even though the gas is supposed to be like its wings, the rim looks like a really bad glow around the sprite, no offense. It also looks very choppy around some of the gas, like on the top-right smoke blob. Also, the dither-shading on the head-body should be smoothened. First-Lost Eventide Second-NickAlert Third-Exxmaniac Spoiler:Scoreboard Lizz: 91 FourthBeat: 87 Exxmaniac: 61 Shadow Wolf 10: 51 Aether: 47 Anti_Righteous: 43 Pheonyx: 41 GoldenDarkrai: 40 CJames21: 37 ElectricArcanine: 34 Vollando: 32 NeffoneR: 29 Brodeo: 25 Remorse: 22 DangerDamage: 20 JosiePika: 19 4EverSeaMusic247: 16 Jjoploo: 16 Lost Eventide: 16 Shmexie x Deoxys: 15 Albatross: 14 White_Knight319: 14 Bond007106: 9 GothicUnicorn: 9 Parasect047: 9 Squirrel Lord: 9 Surfer1020: 8 Insert Joke Here: 7 Loulybob: 7 Aragornbird: 6 Armless_man: 6 Artirtico: 6 BloodWolf: 6 Caboose: 6 Deoxor: 6 Elegy: 6 Hugs 4 Hackers: 6 Nanikyon: 6 Polardirt: 6 Katteyla: 6 NickAlert: 6 Bgg1996: 5 Luxor007: 5 The Killer Fish: 5 Denny the Fisher: 5 Innit Bled: 4 Megamaster37: 4 Samkuro: 4 Insert Username Here: 3 Nanners14: 3 Rascal Lover: 3 Squirtleguy1: 3 SwiftBlade: 3 WhiteGold: 3 Corey13: 2 Euben0: 2 Flyingfish27: 2 Foge: 2 Fossilhunter: 2 Futomara: 2 JiZZi: 2 Kryssa: 2 Nitro: 2 N1ghtmare: 2 Ophion: 2 PIDGEOT: 2 Ravine: 2 Ripulse: 2 Ryath: 2 Shy: 2 TehRandomBoi: 2 Zoroark: 2 Absolved: 1 Argetgarm: 1 Awsomeness: 1 Boo: 1 Blank The Ostrich: 1 Blinded_by_Fate: 1 Celestial_Pichu: 1 Dark Arcanine: 1 DeoxysRocks: 1 Ghgf095j: 1 Glaxor: 1 Gumboy: 1 Halofire: 1 Hearts: 1 HiHi: 1 Ingoe: 1 Jak920: 1 Jazz: 1 Joekikas: 1 Lynxx: 1 Mewtwo55: 1 Moony Jay: 1 Necromancer Wii: 1 Pokefan 2001: 1 Pokefan2002: 1 Rubix64: 1 Simon1987: 1 Skitzer309: 1 SpudSr: 1 Supergorilla2: 1 TwilightWolf23: 1 Theme: Cartoons Create a sprite or pixel-over of something from another cartoon that is not Pokemon. Judge: Brodeo Date: My Birthday, Oct. 30th :3 Edit: Oct 23, 11 12:07pm ------------------- I have the strangest interests: Includes The Walking Dead, Pokemon, Doctor Who, Ace of Spades (Original one), MLP(Current one), Minecraft, Glee, and Prof. Layton.* Jeez, I'm an odd guy.*
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Deoxor Elan: August 1st - November 30th high on "N" total posts: 779 since: Apr 2011	Oct 22, 11 at 10:47am ^ re: .:Soul Silver Spriting Contest:.:Current Round: Open:.
	Yeah, definitely not my best. But I was pretty clueless for what to do, and I hadn't used legendaries in a really long time. Other than the Suicune Cosplay, I guess. But that sin't a Pokemon, it's a trainer. Obviously, I should stick to non-legends. ------------------- Huh. I wonder how they use the snorkels in the desert...
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Shmexie_x_Deoxys I AM MRS. NESBIT member: postin' posse total posts: 545 since: Jul 2008	Oct 22, 11 at 3:33pm ^ re: .:Soul Silver Spriting Contest:.:Current Round: Open:.
	oh man, i wish i had entered... anyway, the new theme seems like it could be a lot of fun i'm definitely entering this round
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Albatross I jike my lob Two much Neo since: Jul 2010	Oct 22, 11 at 6:02pm ^ re: .:Soul Silver Spriting Contest:.:Current Round: Open:.
	Ice King pixel over.
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NickAlert annoying ron paul supporter s-e-e-k-e-r total posts: 1683 since: Dec 2008	Oct 22, 11 at 9:31pm ^ re: .:Soul Silver Spriting Contest:.:Current Round: Open:.
	Here is the result of hours of work. No it's not a pixel over, it is a trainer sprite. It took so long, but to me it looks good. -------------------
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Brodeo Say Fuzzy Pickles! seek-o-holic total posts: 996 since: May 2011	Oct 23, 11 at 5:09pm ^ re: .:Soul Silver Spriting Contest:.:Current Round: Open:.
	quote Exxmaniac ~ A(-) ~ Very Good Sprite, but one thing that really bothers me about it is how bright it gets on the right side of it. It get's to be the same color as the bottom of it. Which is too bright. If anything it should get darker because it's head would cast a shadow.(REALLY NIT PICKING NOW) but another part with that area that bothers me is that it looks like it's lifting it's... body up. That isn't the wrong part though, because some sprites (like milotic) have it done nicely. I just feel that on this sprite it looks uncomfortable for the pokemon. ------------------- [deviantART] [XY Contest]
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CJames Greatness Dies s-e-e-k-e-r total posts: 1977 since: Jan 2011	Oct 26, 11 at 7:32pm ^ re: .:Soul Silver Spriting Contest:.:Current Round: Open:.
	I made the Dark Knight: Yay. ------------------- Your true emancipation is a fantasy.
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Brodeo Say Fuzzy Pickles! seek-o-holic total posts: 996 since: May 2011	Oct 30, 11 at 2:38pm ^ re: .:Soul Silver Spriting Contest:.:Current Round: Open:.
	Exxmaniac I think we're gonna have to change the theme :/ I'll still grade the current sprites since if i didn't, that would be unfair. ------------------- [deviantART] [XY Contest]
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Exxmaniac *pewchkchkpew* high on "N" total posts: 776 since: Aug 2009	Oct 30, 11 at 4:00pm ^ re: .:Soul Silver Spriting Contest:.:Current Round: Open:.
	Hmmm... You're right. We shan't let this die. ~~Yet.~~ New Theme: Open! But it it has to be a sprite that you've never posted here yet. Judge: Brodeo Date: What's next week? Nov. 6th? Nov. 6th then. THERE WAS NEVER ANYTHING ON THIS PART. EVER. NOPE. Edit: Oct 30, 11 10:05am ------------------- I have the strangest interests: Includes The Walking Dead, Pokemon, Doctor Who, Ace of Spades (Original one), MLP(Current one), Minecraft, Glee, and Prof. Layton.* Jeez, I'm an odd guy.*
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NickAlert annoying ron paul supporter s-e-e-k-e-r total posts: 1683 since: Dec 2008	Oct 30, 11 at 4:20pm ^ re: .:Soul Silver Spriting Contest:.:Current Round: Open:.
	Exxmaniac Ask Brodeo? Shouldn't it be automatically allowed since you changed the theme? Ask? Really? And no, I'm not going to, as it hasn't been judged yet. -------------------
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neffoneR Split Complex Resident Neo total posts: 2724 since: Dec 2010	Oct 30, 11 at 4:49pm ^ re: .:Soul Silver Spriting Contest:.:Current Round: Open:.
	Then I'll use this one!! I made it for fun, but never got it into any contest as I couldn't find a theme where it was fitting... I bet some of you know her already, but she's Lynne, from the DS game Ghost Trick: Phantom Detective. -------------------
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CJames Greatness Dies s-e-e-k-e-r total posts: 1977 since: Jan 2011	Oct 30, 11 at 4:57pm ^ re: .:Soul Silver Spriting Contest:.:Current Round: Open:.
	Brodeo / Exxmaniac, would you allow me to post an improved version of my entry? I've just cleaned up the head, and added some depth to the cape. ------------------- Your true emancipation is a fantasy.
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Exxmaniac *pewchkchkpew* high on "N" total posts: 776 since: Aug 2009	Oct 30, 11 at 5:04pm ^ re: .:Soul Silver Spriting Contest:.:Current Round: Open:.
	Derp. Sorry Nick, that was me being an idiot. Let me just get rid of that one thing... CJames21, if it's generally the same sprite, then no. But then again, I'm erasing all existance of that part of that post. ------------------- I have the strangest interests: Includes The Walking Dead, Pokemon, Doctor Who, Ace of Spades (Original one), MLP(Current one), Minecraft, Glee, and Prof. Layton.* Jeez, I'm an odd guy.*
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Albatross I jike my lob Two much Neo since: Jul 2010	Oct 30, 11 at 5:07pm ^ re: .:Soul Silver Spriting Contest:.:Current Round: Open:.
	Wait, so I can just enter my un-judged sprite from last round, right?
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Brodeo Say Fuzzy Pickles! seek-o-holic total posts: 996 since: May 2011	Oct 30, 11 at 6:50pm ^ re: .:Soul Silver Spriting Contest:.:Current Round: Open:.
	quote CJames21 Brodeo / Exxmaniac, would you allow me to post an improved version of my entry? I've just cleaned up the head, and added some depth to the cape. i'd say yes. Since we changed the theme it's like you never entered. You never had it judged and it's a new theme so it's like a brand new sprite ;D I'll grade it if you enter it, but I would prefer a new sprite. If you enter the edited version it WON'T hurt your grade though. EDIT: Might as well enter now Beletric EDIT AGAIN: ATTENTION CJames21 Albatross. If you don't re-enter another sprite I'll just grade the ones you already have entered for the previous round. Okay? ------------------- [deviantART] [XY Contest]
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