I'm kinda bored any1 wanna star in a spyro story? like how some ppl do with the pokemon ones?

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name:
colour:
Age:
power:(1 or 2 olny)
Personality:
past:(optional or can be included in the prelogue.)
Prelogue:
and anything else you want to add.


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2: you are allowed to use other players dragon (unless they say otherwise)

3: If you are going to do something physically with somes charicter, then you have to ask them beforehand.

[b}Plot[/b]

Spyro and cinder are recruiting young dragons for an unknown reason and are taking them to the dragon temple.

current players

Name: Alison.

Color: dark blue with star-like dots on wings and belly.

Age: 15

Personality: shy, caring, hard to understand, a big temper, bit of a loner.

History: mother left for unknown reason and father was killed shortly after. lives on school rooftop.

Power: psychic.

prelogue:
“Ok class, today we shall try to draw out your element” says Fezzan, my teacher. He was an ice dragon with horns down his back. The class cheered beside me, while I groaned to myself. “Ok now I want you to feel inside yourself” the teacher continues, “inside the very deepest part of yourself, is your element. Search for it” the entire class closes their eyes. “Now I want you to release into the air, breathe out your element, make it a relief doing so” he finishes and watches the whole class with optimism. Almost at once, the class gets filled with fire, water, earth, ice, and lightning. The class cheered, except for me. Then the lunch roar goes, so they head out to lunch. “Allison? Come here please” Fezzan asks calmly. I walk over. “Was it today?” he continues. I immediately know what he means, “no my element did not come today” I answer. Truthfully, I do have it. But it’d probably be better if I didn’t have it. After Malafor, such powers were considered dark.

So I head to the lunch grass and sit down in a spot, away from the others. “Hey no-element-dragon is still here” says one kid. I sigh. “But you know what’s better news? I heard Spyros’ back!” and the rumor spreads fast. “I heard that cinder’s still with him!” it was always like this, rumor, rumor, rumor, Always the same thing every day. The front gate starts to creek open and a hush falls over the crowd. Two dragons with a yellow ball floating around them were walking in the gate. Everyone gropes with their eyes. Then we hear them. “This is going to be pointless” the black she-dragon mutters. The purple he-dragon answers “this is the last place we need to look”. And then he falls over. Not seeing the step up to the school. A couple of dragons approached the two travelers. “Ummm…..Mr. Spyro? Are you ok?” one of them asks. Spyro nods, “as soon as we find Alison I will be”. The whole school gasps and turns to me. I open my mouth and utter a squeak. “Cinder?” Spyro asks the black she-dragon. Then cinder starts coming toward me. Ok I was getting creeped out. And the next thing cinched it. “We must find her element out” Spyro mutters. I howl and open my wings and turn around. Then I flap with haste and fly away.

Questions ran through my mind as I flew past the school borders. What did I do? Why me? What do they want with my element? And I wasn’t watching where I was going. I banged into something and landed on my back. They landed next to me. The yellow ball comes next to me and says “oh so NOW you land” and I whack it with my wing in fright. I look at Spyro, then I growl my question “what do you want!?”, “We want you” Spyro answers. I stamp my foot, “WHY!!?” I yell. “We can not talk here” he answers. My head starts to hurt from confusion. I ask again “why?” and cinder starts walking closer. “That’s it” she says, lunging for me. I turn around and open my wings, hoping to get away, only to find that everything is black.

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Name: Ollie

Colour: Black with Gold belly

Power: Shapeshifter and Telekinetic

Age: 15

Personality: Clever with a sharp wit, lone wolf, impatient and quite a temper:)

Prelogue:
8:00am
"Oi! Ollie! Brekkers is ready!"
Oh dear. My life is going to take a turn for the worse. My dad is in sixties mode. And he's taking me to school. Kids are gonner laugh. Maybe i should pull a sickie. Or escape while i can. But i don't. I drag myself out of bed and settle to putting nutella, sugar and honey on some whaffles. I stuff them in my mouth. All 5 of them. So call me a pig.("Your're a pig Ollie!") but i don't care. You wouldn't be able to anyway. I'm thin as a dragonfly. Dax, a young dragon school who idolises me, says i billow out soon as i turn 13 in a couple of months. Well so what!
8:15
PHEW! My dad is NOT, i repeat NOT taking me to school. Success! My life is not over.

8:30
I fly to school. Hee hee. I love my exalted status as the only dragon in my year able to fly. Most dragons don't learn to fly until they're a couple of years older than me. When i get to school though, there's a commotion in the yard. I spot Dax and land next to him. He doesn't need to know what I'm going to ask him. He's a psychic.
"It's Spyro and Cynder" he says matter-of-factly. Nothing bothers him. Or me. A nearby dragon spots me and calls to a yellow ball foating in the air. I think it's Sparx.
"Here she is"

??!!!

The crowd parts to present Spyro and Cynde walking towards me. I am totally confuzzled. Spyro turns to Cynder
"Here she is indeed. We've found her!" Cynder smiles at me and says
"Hello Ollie. We've been looking for you"
"Wh...What? How do you know my name?" Cynder just smiles at me. Spyro laughs. I sigh. A couple of jokers. Just what i need to start my day. I repeat my question. Spyro decides to take pity on me. He beckons me and takes to the air, Cynder following. Curiosity aroused, i follow.
"Ollie! Where are you going?" I hover. It's Dax. I look at Spyro. Spyro nods. Dax joins us.
"Where are we going?" Dax asks.
"The Dragon Temple" Me and Dax nearly fall out the sky in shock. The Temple was where the greatest warriors were trained. Why were we going there?

Name- Boltar
Color- An orange body, black tipped tail, gray horns, and red talons
Age- 27
Power- Frozen Electricity(Electricity that will freeze the opponent and use the volts from the breath to shock the stunned creature)
History- Abandoned at a young age, Boltar considers himself king of all electric dragons. He tried to become part of the Dragon council in Warfang, but was denied a spot. He now goes to the school in order to train with Volteer, his long lost cousin.
Personality- he prefers to stay outside during thunderstorms and other disasterous nature storms. He is never found around anyone except Volteer. If someone were to have him take a quest to get something, he will take all credit. He is not one to fight as he is a son of an ice dragon and an electricity dragon, making him a dangerous creature.

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Name: Luke
Age: 15
Appearance: Light blue with even lighter blue wings.
Personality: Shy but friendly with people he knows. Also hates boredom and is very active
History: A normal dragon child, growing up and attending dragon school. Gets bullied at school.
Element: Wind, although hasn't discovered it yet, also planning on giving him electricity along the line.
Prelogue:

"Haha, it's Pukey Luke! Coughed up anything today?" One of the bigger dragon bullies said from behind, accompanied with his usual cronies.
"Can't you just leave me alone?" Luke said, turning around.
"Leave a pathetic fool like you? Can't even fly!"
"Yet..." Luke muttered.
"Lets see what you've got for me today." The bully came up and shoved Luke.
"No, just go!"
"Just go!" The bully imitated in a whiny voice. His friends laughed. "Come on. I'm waiting."
Luke tried to run, but they were too fast. The bully flew over him and wacked him across the face with his tail. The blew stung, sending Luke crashing to the floor. Everyone laughed once more.
"I'VE HAD ENOUGH!" Luke yelled, standing up.
"Oooooohoooohh! I'm so scared."
Luke beat his wings, and released all his anger. A gust of wind gathered in the spot before where he was hovering, slowly growing bigger and stronger. For the first time the bully had a worried look on. He breathed a blast of fire but it never made it through the wind shield.
"Time for payback." Luke closed his eyes and unleashed his fury. The wind pushed outwards, causing a small tornado to appear, engulfing the bully and his friends, spiralling them in the air, then finally sending them flying, scattering them to different areas of the grounds.
"Woah..." Luke breathed, amazed. His sight was disorientated, he felt dizzy and his head pounded....then he blacked out.

name: Kalona
color: black with hint of silver in wings
power: see into the future and controls night
Past: was a revered member of the shadow council, and was twisted by malefor. was killed in the war. but was reborn when malefor died.

name:Lagrock
colour: Jet black with shining eyes.
Age: 16
power:To become Invisible, in her highest form she can make herself Truely gone by messing with her molecular sctructure and turning into particles.
Personality:shy, caring, hard to understand, a big temper, bit of a loner.
past: A mystery to all!!!


Npc's

Name: Dax

appearence: white

Person who controlls him/her: Ollie


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This message was edited by Pokemon_Spyro_fan on Oct 19 2009.

Check with the mods before making them in a moderator-less forum.

I have an RP about Spyro, but it is closed at the moment to allow me to catch up on the games. If you would like, I will PM you when it is restarted.

ok thanks

And a writing tip:

Always make a new paragraph when someone is about to speak. Don't make it like this


Albert walked around in a circle, wondering where to go."Hey Allen, where are you?" Allen stepped out from behind a tree."Here I am!"


Instead, it should be like this

Albert walked around in a circle, wondering where to go."Hey Allen, where are you?"

Allen stepped out from behind a tree."Here I am!"



See how it is easier to follow on with the story when it is like that?

wow thanks, i'll try to remember.

Name: Ollie

Colour: Black with White belly

Power: Shapeshifter and Telekinetic

Personality: Clever with a sharp wit, lone wolf, impatient and quite a temper:)
8:00am
"Oi! Ollie! Brekkers is ready!"
Oh dear. My life is going to take a turn for the worse. My dad is in sixties mode. And he's taking me to school. Kids are gonner laugh. Maybe i should pull a sickie. Or escape while i can. But i don't. I drag myself out of bed and settle to putting nutella, sugar and honey on some whaffles. I stuff them in my mouth. All 5 of them. So call me a pig.("Your're a pig Ollie!") but i don't care. You wouldn't be able to anyway. I'm thin as a dragonfly. Dax, a young dragon school who idolises me, says i billow out soon as i turn 13 in a couple of months. Well so what!
8:15
PHEW! My dad is NOT, i repeat NOT taking me to school. Success! My life is not over.

8:30
I fly to school. Hee hee. I love my exalted status as the only dragon in my year able to fly. Most dragons don't learn to fly until they're a couple of years older than me. When i get to school though, there's a commotion in the yard. I spot Dax and land next to him. He doesn't need to know what I'm going to ask him. He's a psychic.
"It's Spyro and Cynder" he says matter-of-factly. Nothing bothers him. Or me. A nearby dragon spots me and calls to a yellow ball foating in the air. I think it's Sparx.
"Here she is"

??!!!

The crowd parts to present Spyro and Cynde walking towards me. I am totally confuzzled. Spyro turns to Cynder
"Here she is indeed. We've found her!" Cynder smiles at me and says
"Hello Ollie. We've been looking for you"
"Wh...What? How do you know my name?" Cynder just smiles at me. Spyro laughs. I sigh. A couple of jokers. Just what i need to start my day. I repeat my question. Spyro decides to take pity on me. He beckons me and takes to the air, Cynder following. Curiosity aroused, i follow.
"Ollie! Where are you going?" I hover. It's Dax. I look at Spyro. Spyro nods. Dax joins us.
"Where are we going?" Dax asks.
"The Dragon Temple" Me and Dax nearly fall out the sky in shock. The Temple was where the greatest warriors were trained. Why were we going there?

awsome!!! you're in but do you know anyone that would like to join?

This message was edited by Pokemon_Spyro_fan on Jul 27 2009.

thnx. do you want me to finish my story?

sure go ahead do you know anyone that might like this thread?

This message was edited by Pokemon_Spyro_fan on Jul 27 2009.

i doing it anyway!
9:40
Are we there yet? This is THE longest flight i have ever had. My wings are really tired. I wonder whether i could wipe that smile of Cynder's face by saying 'are we there yet?'. Dax shakes his head at me. Clearly saying 'Don't'. Get out of my head, Dax. He just smirks.
5 minutes later.
"We're here" Cynder calls to us, i can barely hear her, the winds picked up. But i smile with relief. We land and a patch of stone in the middle of a swamp. But i can't see any sign of a temple.
"Where is it?" i ask, confuzzled. Cynder smiles that infuriating smile. She is really getting on my nerves. Like my grandma. Ugh! Dax splits into laughter at my thoughts. I said GET OUT OF MY HEAD DAXESH! Hah! Bet ya didn't realise i knew your full name. Now it's Spyro and Cynder's turn to look confuzzled.
"He's psychic" I growl, for their benefit.
"And what's the joke?" SPyro says with a half-smile. Before i could stop him, Dax had to say,
"Cynder is getting on Ollie's nerves like Ollie's grandma. And even i admit that Ollie's grandma is annoying!"
Cynder's face darkens, and she springs at me. I react instinctively. A tree snaps over(courtesy of my telekinesis) and lands in front of Cynder. WHAM! She runs right into it. I just can't help it. I double over laughing. Dax is laughing and even Spyro can't stop smiling. Cynder shakes herself off, but she can see the funny side and starts laughing.
"Who blocked the path with a tree?" an amused voice booms suddenly. I stop laughing and look at the dragon who the voice belonged to. It was a large green dragon, even bigger than my dad. But then my dad grew sideways, and this dragon grew lengthways and upwards.
"It was Ollie!" said Dax, pointing to me. The traitor. Dax's mouth twitches. The green dragon peers down at me. I stare back up at him, daring him to attack. My shapeshifting power would let me turn into a nice big animal. I knew many that would bigger than him. He laughs at my audacity.
"So what is your power, young one?" he asks in his deep voice. I decide to show him. First i shapeshift to a eagle. He blinks. I shift back and lift the falle tree with telekinesis and put it to the side of the path. Suddenly i remember a question.
"Where is the Temple? I don't see anything!" Spyro leads me on, saying that the big dragon was Terrador, the earth guardian. Ah. That explains his size. Dax nods. ( By the way, i forgot to mention that Dax is a white dragon). We turn a corner. Dax and I gasp. OMG! The Temple is before us. It's AMAZING! And i can't believe we're going in! OUr claws make a clacking noise on the yellow marble floor. We go through a round archway with vines carved in. Cynder, noticing my awe, said
"The Temple was made with the help of the moles. They are good stoneworkers, don't you think?"
Stupified, i can only nod. We take so many turns, that i get completely lost. How do they find their way around? Dax nods in sympathy. Then we enter a chamber. It has a pool at the centre with two other dragons stood to it's side. One is yellow and the other is blue. I can hear the blue dragon speaking:
"Yes, I see, Volteer, you can't stop that tongue of yours from wagging, can you? You nearly cost us the seabirds support!" Terrador sighs, and calls to the blue dragon:
"What happened, Cyril?"
Cyril, the blue dragon, turns from Volteer, the yellow dragon, and replies:
"It WAS going well, till Volteer opened his mouth. We only just-"
He breaks off when he spots me and Dax.
"Huh! I thought you only were getting one dragon?"
Spyro shrugs, and points to me, clearly saying 'her fault'. Oops. Maybe Dax shouldn't have come. I sense Dax agreeing with me. Was he going to be kicked out. I didn't want him to go. Truth be told, i was scared. Why did they want me? Why me? A darker thought entered my mind. Did they want to use me? If so, why? Vaguely, before i blacked out, i saw Dax shaking his head as the ground rushed up to meet me.13:28
"Ollie...Ollie. Ollie WAKE UP!" I open my eyes blearily. Dax is peering at me with a worried look on his face. When he sees i'm awake, a smile appears on his face.
"You wouldn't believe what sort of stuff went through your mind while you were out."
My head is POUNDING. Really badly. Don't they have any painkillers? Dax shook his head.
"The nurse didn't want to give anything that would make you sleepy after you collapsed like that."
I couldn't feel my tongue so i thought what i wanted to say. What happened after i collapsed? They aren't going to send you away? Dax shook his head. Phew. Then he answered my other question:
"They took you to the infirminary. I've only just been allowed in. While i was waiting, they told to me have some sleep. They think you just fainted from exhaustion. I didn't say anything 'cos i thought you would be mad and drop a lightbulb on me or something like that." Too right i would, i thought. Then a old she-dragon bustled in through the door.
"Come on, be off with you, hatchling. Let me tend to your friend." she said impatiently.
"I'm not a hatchling! I'm 15!" Dax said indignantly.
"Son, when you've lived as long as i have, you'll look on dragons your age as hatchlings. Now be off with you!" Ha ha ha, Dax, you got your comeuppance there. Glaring at me, Dax sauntered out of room.
"I heard that thought, Ollie, Daxesh isn't the only psychic in the world" I gulped. She laughed, then introduced herself as Fridgyth, a healer and psychic. She trots over to the stove and takes a pot from on top. She passed it to me.
"It's a small potion that i invented, it should help your headache." Fridgyth said modestly. I drink it. She's right, it does help. It also loosens my tongue a bit. I say
"Why was i brought to the Dragon Temple?" My voice sounds wierd. Distorted. Slurred. Fridgyth smiles in sympathy.
"Don't speak if have to. Just think your questions. As for your question, i know nothing of it. When i say your not going to black out, then you could ask The guardians, or Spyro and Cynder." I remember the guardians. I think, I know Terrador is the earth guardian, and i guess that cyril is ice and volteer is electricity. But who is Fire?
Fridgyth sighs." You remember a few months back in the battle with Malefor?" I shiver. Who coudln't? "Well, during the war, our current fire guardian, Ignitus, died. We still searching for a new fire guardian. Many people want Spyro, but he can't accept the post for two reasons. 1, he's too young, and 2, he has mastered electricity, ice and earth, not just fire." I hadn't known that. Another question popped into my mind. What can Cynder do?
"Cynder controls poison, fear, wind and shadow. Now, how do you feel?" I reviewed my current state. Everything seemed to work. My headache had gone, and i could move my tongue properly again. "All good" i said.
"Then you can go" said Fridgyth. I had a moment of panic.
"Where do i go?" i asked. Fridgyth beckoned, and i hopped of the bed where was lying and followed her out the room. We went down a short corridor, turned left and entered a smaller, but more comfortable chamber than the one with the pool in. The others were there, including Dax.
"Please come in, Ollie. Fridgyth, you may return to your duties." said Terrador. Fridgyth nodded at him, smiled at me and went back to the infirmary. I took a breath and joined Dax.
"It's all right, Ollie. They just want to ask you some questions" he whispered to me. I nodded.
"All right, lets begin" said Terrador" We know what your power are. Shapeshifting and Telekinesis. Tell me, have you ever used those powers in anger at someone in Dragon School?" Thinking back to my seven years at school. I pick out at least 13 different incidents where i'd used and got sent to the Head-Dragon. "13 times, Sir, maybe more." i said, deciding it was best to be respectful, considering the company i was in, and it was The Dragon Temple. Dax twitched his tail in suprise. I'd never called someone 'Sir' before, even the teachers at school. Terrador laughed, along with the other guardians, Spyro and Cynder. I bristled, wondering what they were laughing at.
"So many times? And she called 'Sir'? What a character!" Sparx giggled. Man, was he annoying, or what! Dax nodded, mumuring:" He kept asking me to read his mind."
"Now, Ollie and Dax, do you think you are clever, strong and powerful enough to train here as warriors?" Terrador asked. We both gasped. "YEs, i do" i said. Dax echoing me.
"Good. You will start training in three days time. Now, i think it would be best you both got a good rest. Basic training is very tough. Spyro and Cynder will show you your dormiteries. Good luck!" With that we left.


This message was edited by Wolf_Lover37 on Jul 26 2009.

WL, what did I tell you about double posting? We don't allow it, so delete your post and edit it into your first RP post.


Here is my character sheet:

Name- Boltar
Color- An orange body, black tipped tail, gray horns, and red talons
Age- 27
Power- Frozen Electricity(Electricity that will freeze the opponent and use the volts from the breath to shock the stunned creature)
History- Abandoned at a young age, Boltar considers himself king of all electric dragons. He tried to become part of the Dragon council in Warfang, but was denied a spot. He now goes to the school in order to train with Volteer, his long lost cousin.
Personality- he prefers to stay outside during thunderstorms and other disasterous nature storms. He is never found around anyone except Volteer. If someone were to have him take a quest to get something, he will take all credit. He is not one to fight as he is a son of an ice dragon and an electricity dragon, making him a dangerous creature.

[size=1][color=#666666]This message was edited by Kimonio on Jul 26 2009.

i did double posts to signfy the end and beginning of a chapter!

If you want to signify the beginning and end of a chapter, do so in one post.

Okay here I go.

I awoke to silence in a room I have never seen, the golden stones on the ground marking a path. I stand up and shake the sleep away. I then have a look around, yup just a room. Then my memories come rushing back, ‘Spyro’.

I open the door and take a look outside, there was another room. But this one was filled with dragons. I could see the masters of ice, lightning, and earth. I could also see Spyro and Cinder, and two other dragons that I didn’t know. A completely white one and one that was black and white. Luckily they were all sleeping.

‘This is my chance to escape’ I think to myself and one of the little dragons, the white one, wakes up. He immediately looks at me. Then he growls, waking up the black and white one. They both growl at me. I frown, why are they growling at me? I decide to check their minds for the answer (physic remember?). Then a mutter a little laugh, they think I’m an intruder. They growl louder, and then a voice interrupts them,

“no need to worry, she’s like you” cinder says. Now it’s my turn to growl. “Bout time you woke up, I mean sheesh!!! You slept for over a week” says the bright bug near my ear. I growl an answer “how bout I eat you for breakfast”. He immediately flies away, I smile.

“Alison we need you to calm down” says Spyro, only half awake. Pfft, the great hero has a bed head. The white dragon laughs. ‘Telepathic are you? Well choke on this’ I think and send him a mental image of him tied up falling down a cliff.


He gasps, and then jumps toward me. “Oh please” I say then take one step out of the way. When he lands I whack him with my tail, thus sending him flying into the wall and also knocking him out. The other one growls and stands weirdly and looks at me.

Then I feel the tug of a telekinesis using his powers. The best thing about being a psychic, if you know how to control it, you can make any type of harm to be put on you null and void. So I just stand there while he tries to fling me aside. I smile evilly, and then I frown. Is this how Malafor felt when he used this power?

I walk back into the room I woke up in, not even paying the black and white dragon attention. I then close the door, and hear him puff with exhaustion. I lie down and think. But I make sure my mind is safe from those who think they are psychic when they are only telepathic. Did Malafor feel this way before he became evil? That all his tricks were only payback for stuff did to him when he was little? What did all this have to do with me? Those questions consumed my head and before I knew it, I was asleep.

Kimonio youre in but i need your prelogue. aslo i need your personality.

Prologue is history. I included Boltar's history in my post.

I'll edit my post with his personality.