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Recently I have been getting into Fanfiction. For those not in the know these are stories based in the universes of games, movies, books or anything basically. Anyway I have been doing a series of Fanfiction's for R:FOM and posting them on the community site MyResistance. And I thought I might share them with the wonderful community here at Neoseeker as well. As well as receiving more feedback and ideas. I have currently created two major works and plan to make three more for this series. They are based on the tales of the Black Ops who follow Hale throughout the game. A combination of facts and events in the game mixed in with my imagination. The first is titled Black on Black. I will release more if anyone is interested.
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mon then
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WOW that was pretty good
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Bale Fire
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Thanks, would you be interested in the second piece?
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Stefan
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sooo is this pre resistance 1 or post?
but very good, thoroughly enjoyed the read and would appreciate a second one. ------------------- ![]() quiver and shake,hypnotized, in your cotton-mouthed ecstasy | |
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Bale Fire
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Actually it is neither. These occur at or around the same time as the Campaign levels, just from the Black Op's point of view. This one occurred in York where Hale and all the American soldiers are attempting to hook up with the British in order to obtain the Angel. Of course to increase drama I changed a few things around.
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Stefan
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right that makes sense.
cant wait mate. ------------------- ![]() quiver and shake,hypnotized, in your cotton-mouthed ecstasy | |
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Qwowner
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You should put these up on fanfiction.net its a good sight for this stuff, plus theres fictionpress.net for any original stories you write.
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Ajax
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Not bad,
Did anyone hear about the RESISTANCE novel they're writing? There is meant to be a preview to it in the RESISTANCE 2 Collectors edition, which Australia doesn't get! ------------------- ![]() Jak and Daxter IV: The Lost Frontier GreaterAjax :PSN-XBL: DynamicAjax | |
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Bale Fire
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quote QwownerI never thought of that. Thanks for the idea. Okay here is the second piece. This one takes place in Cheshire aka Northern Command and is called 'The Grey Zone. The Black Ops are now pursuing Hale and the 'secret weapon' in the base. It probably isn't quite as interesting as the first one, but it does set a lot of the ground work for later chapters. Thanks for all the comments and praise. Feel free to tell me things you think the stories lack or could be approved upon as well. I'm always looking to improve myself ------------------- | |
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Bale Fire
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Had to break this up into two pieces. Since Neoseeker's limit would'nt let me do it in one
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Linkin Park Fan
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I also suggest posting this in the writers forum, unless fanfiction is not allowed.
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quote Linkin Park FanI actually thought it wasn't allowed, but looking at the rules as long as the writing is well put together fanfiction is fine. So I guess I'll post it there soon as well. ------------------- | |
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Here is the third piece in the series. Enjoy! Oh and again comments and criticism (constructive mind you) are welcome.
Green Fields Green fields stretched out in every direction, the pale moonlight playing across the blades of grass as they rustled back and forth in the silent wind. There was no noise, no activity; even the animals seemed to have forsaken the area, whether because of some natural occurrence or the Chimera was unknown. Finally a dot emerged on the horizon, solidifying into a LYNX jeep as it came closer, its green hide blending almost perfectly into the foliage around. Upon closer inspection one might see that two people manned the small vehicle. One in the driver's seat, another in the gunner's, both clothed in black armour from head to toe, the kind which obscured any trace of humanity. Dark suits for dark work. Karl scanned the landscape, looking for any sign of their quarry, the Grayskin. He had been close to capturing him at Somerset, but Command had been foolish enough to place another man in charge. A certain Captain Fumer, who had been a solid enough man but had forgotten the goal. Karl Manex had been forced to watch from the sidelines, evacuating a friendly American task force, while Captain Fumer had led his own men to doom. Upon seeing the vulnerability of the Chimera facilities at Somerset Fumer had ordered charges set, Goliath's dismantled, for his men to take any and all available targets. He had been largely successful, much of the base now lying in ruins. However he had forgone the objective, allowing the Grayskin to again escape and out spending his welcome, Chimeran reinforcements swooping in and killing dozens of Sentinels, Fumer himself finally dying and his second in command giving the order to retreat. Bracknell had been a failure as well, Karl and the remaining men having been lumbered with the responsibility of evacuating yet more American troops working nearby, stopping them from committing the full extent of their forces. Karl had moved on before the target had even exited from the base, he knew when a battle was lost. Better to prepare for the next one than to fruitlessly waste effort on one already over. The Grayskin was moving towards the centre of all Chimera operations in England, the Central tower, codenamed Pandora's Box. Karl had to give it to their target, he thought big, though why they were still chasing him was beyond him, they had lost dozens of men for this man. What was Command playing at? Karl had men patrolling every route from Bristol to London, if the Grayskin so much as sneezed in this area, he would know about it. He was currently in the piece surrounding Bracknell, an area he would likely have to pass through, but Karl was beginning to doubt himself, so far this man had proven himself a master of evasion, had this move itself been nothing more but another feint? It could be. Pulling out his binoculars Karl again examined the surrounding landscape, it was getting lighter, a few more hours until dawn. If he hadn't come this way by then he wasn't coming at all, they would have to extract and start tracking again, one step behind just like before. "I've got someone wanting to talk to you Karl." Daniel yelled from the front seat, "Acknowledged." he replied simply tuning in his radio to the standard radio frequency used by offsite military. He was surprised when a voice answered him straight away. "Hello Captain Manex I am Intelligence Officer Alexander," a luth voice supplied over the channel. "I am the correspondent your section has officially been designated for this operation, considering recent setbacks." Karl raised an eyebrow behind his visor; they even had their own personal Intelligence Officer now? Where they chasing the descendent of the king or something? "Hello Alexander, what do I owe the pleasure?" Karl responded after a few seconds thought, best to always be polite to those working for Intelligence, they could make life very unpleasant for you if they wanted to. "I was shifting through some of your recent reports on this mission," Alex began "getting to understand the op better, when I came across that query you posted not too long ago, about that potential new strain you encountered at British Northern Command." Karl's ears pricked instantly, he remembered the beast all too well, lightning blue eyes, teeth as long as his fingers, and the speed of a jackal. He wouldn't forget that monster any time soon. "Well anyway," Alex continued upon his silence "Considering you got no response I thought I might fill you in, while there is no evidence to verify the existence of these creatures there are other soldier's reports which are similar to yours, a Hybrid with blue eyes, extra strength and agility, and most interesting of all intelligence. What I and other officers here have theorised is that these Hybrids have a sort of telepathy like the Angels do, allowing them to coordinate directly not only with the Angels themselves, but with other troops, increasing coordination and efficiency." He then coughed, though for some reason to Karl it seemed almost like he did it on purpose, like a habit. "As I said officially they don't exist, but unofficially they have been designated the nickname 'Immortal', due to the fact we have yet to ever have found a body of this strain. Watch out for these guys Karl, their the elite of the elite, whenever you see one of these you know the Chimera are committed." "Interesting," Karl replied "a Hybrid which could think huh?" That would explain the strange behaviour of the other Chimera, using cover and guards effectively when most Chimera could barely screw in a light bulb, a dangerous strain this one would be in battle. He only hoped he didn't run into any more of them, these Immortals sounded even deadlier than he had guessed. "Thanks Alex," he said his voice expressing his gratitude, "I know you didn't need to tell me all that." he meant it too; it was nice to see a man in Intelligence which was so dedicated, as well as friendly. "No problem." the man answered happily, before cutting the connection. Karl turned his attention back to hills, when almost instantly a cloud of dust appeared to the West, the trail of what could be a LYNX jeep. "All X-Ray units report," Karl barked into the com, turning his barrel around harshly to point in the direction of the vehicle. They were motionless now, and in this light and at that distance would be all but invisible. It was only a question of whether this vehicle was friend or foe. "Is anyone approaching Team Leader's position?" He got a list of negatives from each of his squad members, and the same from the survivors of the Somerset attacks. The vehicle was closer now, definitely human, and manned by military personnel by the looks of it. No British patrol would be out here, it had to be him. "All forces rally at the Kilo rendezvous point." Karl commanded loudly for the benefit of the no doubt listening Daniel. "I have located the Grayskin, everyone lock and load. I doubt he'll go down easily." Turning off the mike he checked his aim on the Grayskin, it was no longer moving directly to them now, flanking out to the side, moving towards the vast series of canyon's and galley's which dominated that direction. A shortcut which would save him an hour's driving time, but also allow him to be easily herded. Cocking the machine gun, Karl's LYNX gave chase. ---------- Karl had put good use to the extra planning time they had before their target had approached. He had planned out a dozen likely scenarios, the first of which had been the Grayskin's entrance into the canyons. Long twisting alleys with cliffs of tough brown rock producing from either side for hundreds of metres, the paths twisted, met and separated seemingly on a whim, a maze of low lying ground. It must have been a shock for the man when out of nowhere six fast moving jeeps, all manned by a driver and a gunner came tearing up behind him, but if he panicked he did not show it, he neither slowed down nor sped up. Perhaps unsure whether these people meant him harm, or just unnaturally composed. Karl leapt to the front of the LYNX as they followed along the windy path, the phalanx of vehicles behind and to the side still keeping perfect formation. It was not the full brunt of their forces, Karl had more in reserve, but he wanted to keep them a secret for now. As it was they had enough force to overawe him, but to still work efficiently in the confined space. If things grew out of hand Karl could call in fresh troops to finish this. "To the driver," he called out cupping his hands to his mouth, "We are of the American Black Op's division, we have orders to take you in, do so willingly and you will not come to harm." He waited for the response, he was a little unprepared to be honest, they had more than enough men to take him fair and square, any ordinary soldier would have surrendered by now. The LYNX continued its steady pace for a second, as if deciding, or perhaps pausing for effect, and then with a screech the jeep was off, gunning its engines as fast as they would go. It was all the answer Karl needed. "Break formation," he bellowed "Move in and secure the Grayskin, use non-lethal force." He jumped into the gunner's seat as he said the last part, the target himself couldn't be shot, for fear of his death, whatever his abilities where. His vehicle however was another matter, he was perfectly happy to rip that 4-wheel drive to pieces. As one the six LYNX's separated, like a pack of wolves working together to hunt a Moose. Karl was at the forefront of the charge, trusting Daniel to get the shot he needed. Pulling up of the left of the target's he sighted and fired the machine gun, cutting a line of bullets holes along its left flank, trying to shoot its wheel off. He was surprised to find that fire was being returned in kind, the man firing his carbine one handed. The attack was erratic and poorly aimed, but Daniel backed off all the same. Seeing the gap two more of the Sentinels jeeps moved in, both gunners pelting the back of the vehicle with more bullets. With angles on either side the attack would have been successful, but out of nowhere a narrow of series of bumps struck all the vehicles, surprising the until now steady drivers, one edging too close to the Grayskin's vehicle in the confusion. Seeing his chance the target rammed his rear bumper into the side of the poor Sentinel's car. Sending the barely under control vehicle into the side of the cliff face. Fine, injured or dead Karl had no idea, they could be retrieved later. The pathway without warning divided into two, a sharp corner hiding it until it was almost upon them. Swearing Daniel pulled into the right lane, along with three of the other jeeps, One Sentinel jeep and the Grayskin taking the other route. Karl thought they had lost them for good when he caught a glimpse of them to the left. The two paths ran parallel, and seemed to cross and divide at will. Without prompting Daniel dropped into the left road. Ahead of them the remaining Sentinel vehicle was putting up a good fight against the Grayskin's. With a shock Karl realised it was Steve and Jack, Jack being the gunner. Steve was on a rampage, driving like a mad man, sweeping back and forth and ramming the vehicle in a violent display of road rage. Jack was no better, laughing and cheering as he let loose. Engine revving they came up on the Grayskin's other side. He was just about to fire when Jack in a move which Karl thought surprised everyone leapt from the gunner's seat to his car's front bonnet, and then just as quickly onto the back of the Grayskin's car, Rossmore pointing at the man's neck lazily. Yells of "Surrender!" and "Give it up!" were shouted and it appeared the young Australian might have the man beat, but a second later he was sent flying, the Grayskin having sent the gunner's seat violently spinning, upon which Jack was resting upon. He hit the ground with a thud but not awkwardly, nothing truly hurt except his foolish sense of pride. Befit of a gunner Steve too had to back off, slowing his wheels and fading out of the fight and into the star riddled night. With only one on one the Grayskin's boldness went to new lengths. Still driving he deftly aimed the back mounted armament one handed. Karl was forced to duck as swathes of fire hit the rock to his right. He could not believe what he was seeing, a three man vehicle being effectively operated by a single person. They exchanged fire, Karl's in short tight bursts, the Grayskin in random sweeping movements. Daniel kept the man guessing, and sometimes Karl as well, the car bounding over the ground seemingly with a mind of its own. They ripped up the foliage as they continued the battle, bushes and grass finding destruction in the LYNX's gripped tires. Finally the Grayskin's firing stopped; looking closely Karl saw his finger still pulling the trigger, before he removed it and smashed his fist against it in anger. Now was their chance, but to do what? Karl had been shooting more out instinct than any specific goal; his bullets had done no good so far. The problem bounced inside his brain as they tore across the shadowy canyons. Daniel had apparently considered the same problem, making a tight swerve he came alongside the rogue soldier's transport, sitting neck and neck. His intentions clear even before the words "Board him, go, go." left his mouth. Karl just stared at them. It was crazy, suicidal, and something Jack would do. Oh why not? Leaping into the air his hands went out, seconds away from grasping the side, but when two objects are speeding along at almost a hundred kilometres an hour a few seconds can do a lot. Seemingly the car sped forward, and his hands which were streaming for its flank now were now clinging to its rear fender, his feet dragging along the ground. Karl gritted his teeth as his armour around his legs began to disintegrate before his very eyes. Calling on all his upper body strength he pulled his feet up and braced them against the back of the LYNX, moving up from a crouching position to a standing position. He was now up flat against the back of the careening car. He climbed slowly and carefully over the top spider like, moving one limb after the other. The man still had his back to him; Karl slowly pulled his carbine from his back holster and with a grin undid the safety. No ordinary man could've heard that small click which announced the change from safety to firing mode. But as Karl was soon to find out, this was no ordinary man, he was something far more...alien. He turned and with an ungraceful but serviceable kick knocked the gun from his grasp, losing it to the vastness of the world outside their little bubble. Karl stood to his full height, from his position on back towering over the target. He leaped from his post, bearing down on the man in a tackle. They both went to the floor of the Jeep in a pile, jammed amongst the metal and cushioning. They rose slowly from their positions on the Jeep's cushioning, Karl struggling to stand in such a tight place with such bulky armour, the Grayskin because without the helmet which had protected his adversary he taken a nasty blow to the forehead. As he rose Karl noticed a spanner jammed on the accelerator, so that was why they were still moving. It was just lucky the path had hit a nice straight, thank god for small blessings. Karl looked into Grayskin's eyes, never having a chance to examine the man up close until now. He did not see hate as he expected, or anger, merely a sense of determination. They flashed gold for a second, and Karl twitched, whatever others said, he still saw those with the Chimera virus in them as slightly unnatural. Putting his palms outwards facing the man he said "I won't hurt you." The man's eyes narrowed "I have a job too do, as do you, nothing else needs to be said." he advanced on Karl then, his gruff voice fading into the wind. Karl took a step back; he knew that any chance of convincing him was lost. Violence was the only way this rogue soldier would submit. Unsheathing his knife Karl thrust, forcing his foe back. When he did he leaped back on the rear of the car, once again securing the high ground. The Grayskin was not fazed; he pulled his own blade from its place on his arm. Wielding it with what Karl could already see was practiced skill he attacked. The first blow was from Karl, a small tight swing lightning fast, a feint nothing more. This was followed from a counter from the Grayskin, then a series of quick jabs and thrusts of his own. Their blades met there, the serrated edges catching. Going on the offensive he bombarded the man with knife work, only to be blocked at every turn. In close quarter combat few could match Karl, but possibly for the first time ever he felt overwhelmed. It took all his concentration to keep up, slowing he was being beaten back, pushed to the edge where the ground tared past. His foe did not show emotion, just a hardened determination and... Fear? Karl was clearly losing now, conceding ground with every step. It must have been obvious to everyone around him that he couldn't win. And Daniel raced to his rescue, out of the corner of his visor Karl saw his jeep come around behind him. "Karl catch this!" Daniel yelled hurling something, leaping Karl caught it, it was another knife. Caught by the handle and gleaming wickedly in the darkness. Turning Karl faced the Grayskin again, ready to reverse their positions. Karl had not had much experience fighting with two knives at once, but he found he warmed to the style with little trouble. Now it was his enemy's turn to fall back, forced to stay on the defensive in the face of two weapons. Karl kept up the attack, slicing and whirling the blades in savage swordsmanship. A bump unbalanced him; the car had been travelling so smoothly Karl had almost forgotten where they were. The distraction was all it took, a second and then the Grayskin had both knives out of his fingers and had his own placed against his throat, the threat no less intimidating despite the armour his suit offered. He held his breath, completely still and at the man's mercy. He held no fear, unlike those of his enemy, he had done everything he could have done to achieve his mission, he was only sad that he was going to let his teammates down, to abandon them when they needed him most. The Grayskin hesitated, indecision on his face. Karl realised he did not want to hurt them, so far he had not killed any of them, at least not intended to. A dangerous killer who took no pleasure in killing? Strange. Then the world decided for them. This message was edited by Silver Mirror on Jan 20 2009. ------------------- | |
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Seeing as Neoseeker's limit prevents me from putting it all on one post here is part two.
Green Fields P2 Suddenly the man let go, standing from his crouched hold to grab the wheel and kick out the spanner he had jammed in the wheel. The confused Sentinel stood, picking up the discarded knives as he did. The man offered his back to him, desperately trying to control the LYNX, Karl turned to see what he was trying to avoid. It was a sheer cliff face, the path turning so narrowly it was nearly at a 90 degree angle. Without hesitation Karl bounded to the back of the car, and into the vehicle which Daniel still kept waiting at his own risk. Diving into the front seat Daniel hit the brakes, bringing the 4-wheel drive down to a fast but more manageable speed. The Grayskin however had less time and even less finesse, the vehicle still moving towards the narrow corner at a massive speed. There was no way he could survive, Karl's heart sunk. The jeep hit the wall, metal and sparks going everywhere, but somehow the thing stayed in one piece. The Grayskin gunned the engine and took off, by all the looks of it unhurt. Karl felt happiness and anger at the same time, happiness at the Grayskin, the one who had let him live had not died. But anger at once again being evaded; he'd had enough of this. Jumping into the gunner's seat again he called in his reinforcements. Jack and Steve were once again behind them, and the other three vehicles fell in as well. "Additional X-Ray units move in." he called his men once again falling into a formation. The Grayskin would be caught between the battle groups and netted, there was no way out now. It must have been a hell of a shock as another pair of jeeps along with four more side car mounted motorbikes erupted from the passage before the Grayskin. They like Karl's group were in a perfect block formation, jeeps in the middle bikes at the flanks. With men before him and behind him the man was trapped, it was over. Or maybe not, in flurry of dirt and grass the LYNX made a sharp turn into a shadowed passageway, the vehicle almost scraping the sides as it entered. His Sentinels were trained for unexpected outcomes though, and without hesitation plunged into the new road. This was a risky move; if they moved too fast they could crash and cause a pile up, moving one by one as they were. But if they went to slow the lone and more agile target might get away. The task force poured through the winding path, headlights often revealing a turn or obstacle just seconds before they were upon it as they attempted to navigate the gloomy corridor. Foliage and brush littered the clearly unused way, scratching at the men's visors and vehicles as they swept by. Karl was standing from his position in the gunner's seat, trying to catch a glimpse of the Grayskin's headlights, but it was no use, if they didn't come across him soon he would escape. Finally they cut into a wider canyon. The first car speeding along the straight didn't see the wall in time, it collided with it, smashing so hard that the fuel tank exploded, Karl looked at the wreckage hopefully as they passed it, but after several seconds and no movement he turned away. Yet more men lost for this cause. He was just glad it wasn't part of his squad. But that thought was gone, as he saw the flashing of headlights before them. Daniel seeing it also gunned the engine, they were close now; Karl could smell it in the air. But as they gave chase he sniffed the air, there literally was something funny about it, a sweaty, grimy stench. He froze in an instant; he had spent enough time fighting them to know the smell of Grayjack's. This place wasn't as quite as it seemed, and at the same time this thought ran through his head his radio filled with the sounds of Lina's and then Tom's voice, the people he had assigned as scouts, crying out in warning, and the air filled with the sounds of engines. Before him their target's LYNX came to a stop, its tires almost ripping under the pressure. Before them, suspended between the two walls by its humungous legs, was a Goliath, bearing down upon them. Below it Stalkers and Widowmakers along with swarms of Howlers waited, forestalling any small hope of passing underneath it. The Grayskin's vehicle revved, about turning and heading straight for them, swerving through their stalled mass of vehicles and moving the other way as fast as its wheels would take it, the move seemed to break the spell on the rest of them merely standing there, unable to take their eyes off of it. "Move move!" Karl yelled coming crashing down to reality. Daniel was the first to react, sending the wheel spinning and turning their khaki coloured vehicle in the other direction. The other's both mounted on bikes and cars followed suit, but not fast enough, behind he heard the bellowing of cannons, and the jeep closest to him exploded in flames. He swore as the wreckage burned behind them. The guns fired again and the earth in front of them exploded, sending earth clods and grass blades everywhere, knocking one of the motor bikers off. They drove through the flames, sending dancing patterns of light across their visors. Finally sweet protection came from the natural corner in the path, blocking them from the machine's weaponry. But there was no time to relax; he had to get the rest of his men to safety, while they still could. "Captain Manex," Lina called to him over the radio "There are huge amounts of Chimera moving in on the canyons, I have no idea how Tom missed them up until now, forget the objective and fall back. Трaxhutecb" she swore in Russian abruptly, the sound of Chimeran screams and gunshots filtering in over the com. Then it went dead. All this time they had been moving along the path unmolested. But as Karl turned off the radio he looked up to see a Chimera barricade, scores of Hybrids and Sentry guns protected by metal fortifications. He opened fire as they closed; cutting down those foolish enough to stray into the open, but it wasn't enough, the defences too strong. Daniel obviously thought the same, seeing a passage veering off in another direction he took it, nearly coat hanging them on the rocky point separating the two roads. The rest followed, except one unlucky four wheel drive moving too fast to make the turn; he could hear them trading shots with the Chimera, before going silent. Karl hunched his back against oppressive quiet. They erupted into a valley, a true one this time. A large secular bowl surrounded by rocky outcrops, only one narrow exit on the opposite end. Karl's heart sunk as he saw it too was blocked by Chimera barriers and guns. There was no way out, they were trapped. The vehicles clustered together in the center, rallying about his command jeep, already many looking downcast, they were too far away from the exit to be shot at, but busting through wasn't an option either. Already Karl could see Widowmakers, Howlers, Stalkers and Hybrids welling around the way they had just come, blocking both sides, leaving them out in the middle. And to make matters worse he could already hear the distant thumping of the Goliath's four black titanic feet, lumbering towards them. The perfect trap, the Chimera would hold the exits while the Goliath moved in to bathe them in crawlers, a clever plan, too clever. He scanned the tops of the cliffs which bordered their little hell hole, a strange feeling forcing him to do so, he spotted three tiny dots to the east, and picking up his binoculars zoomed in on them. Standing out in the open, staring straight at him with lightning blue eyes was an Immortal, half its face metallic, an attempted replacement for an old battle wound. Flanked by two Greyjacks the Immortal he and Lina had encountered at Northern Command stared at him, its three remaining eyes rotating in their sockets, with a snarl and waving of its serpent like tongue it walked away from its vantage point. It didn't need to see them anymore, they were soundly trapped, with no where to go. Karl brought his fist down upon the railing next to him, denting the olive green metal. They had been so close, and now everything had been turned against them, the Grayskin's vehicle lay just a dozen metres away, but capturing him would be useless now. Wolves lay to either side and the Reaper was closing in. The dandelions cresting the tops of the small hills in their little basin seemed to cry out to him, their yellow life mocking their coming death. He gazed upon the surroundings, wallowing in silence and hopelessness, until something caught his eye, a small mound of rubble, standing out against the rocks of the cliffs next to it covered a small portion of the canyon's wall. He focused on it intently, was their a hint of wood behind the debris, perhaps an old mine, blocked hastily by the Chimera as they set the trap? It was a chance, and judging by the echoing footsteps of the rapidly approaching Goliath, the only one they had. Using sign language Karl signalled the nearby Jack, giving the fist for LAARK, a pair of fingers pointing towards the rubble for two shots, and then a tight full hand jab for punch out. The Sentinel nodded slowly, easing towards the rocket launcher stored in his back compartment. They had to move carefully, or risk being discovered, if their every move wasn't being watched like a hawk Karl would eat his helmet. Slowly he lifted the device out, hiding it under a piece of tarp. Karl had meanwhile been rapidly communicating with the rest of the group, using the signs to spread the message. He dared not use the radio or even yell. He had a feeling that their radios were being monitored, and an attempt might be made to stop their plans. Finally with everyone ready Karl gave Jack the go ahead, picking the thing up with typical swagger, Jack fired. The missile spilt apart as he soared towards its goal, a whole host of mini rockets joining it as it struck. The rubble exploded in an inferno of man produced ordnance, the Chimera to either side leaping forward at the sounds of battle. The second rocket launched, it too adding to its numbers with a swarm of smaller duplicates. They too struck, almost right where the first had, there was no time to reload and fire any more. Hybrids, Howlers, Stalkers and Widowmakers were charging from their places, either unable to be controlled or realising their quarry may escape. The task force made for the hole, the dust clearing showed a mine shaft, looking just barely big enough to accommodate their cars. They formed a single line as they raced for it, bikes and even the Grayskin falling in. Another bike was blown to smithereens as they drove, a lucky shot from a Stalker, the worst bit was one of the drivers survived it, but they could not waste the time to pick him up, leaving him there to die. They hit the entrance and Karl ducked, the ceiling was just a little to low, and the frame and gun seat had been ripped from their vehicle like it was made of cardboard. He glanced back to see the rest entering the cramped subterranean escape route. He felt relief spread his body like sweet river water, but then harden to ice. They weren't out of this yet. Staying crouched on the now vacant back platform of the LYNX Karl watched as one by one his men passed them, the passage being wide enough for them to move along side by side. Accepting a carbine offered by Daniel and several spare clips he waited, he would watch their back, Daniel falling into place at the back of the convoy. A muffled thump came to his ears as they descended down into the darkness, dust falling from the rafters by the movement. This was quickly followed by a symphony of cries, high pitched Widowmaker screams, long Howler roars, small Hybrid snarls and hissing Slipskull mutters, all descending down towards them. Like a fleeting shadow a Widowmaker emerged from around the corner, its massive frame just barely squeezing into the mineshaft. Even hunched as it was it nearly doubled their speed, spitting out exploding globules as it ran. He fired into its face, ripping a line of bullets into the right side of its merciless snarl; it kept coming though, even after a whole clip. It was above them now, its legs stamping to either side of their car. It smashed them from one side then the other, making him drop his rifle. With sudden inspiration he pulled one of his knives from its sheath and drove it into its throat. It gagged and spat out a reflexive round of exploding balls as it died, falling back into the darkness, its body detonating just as it disappeared from sight. But the Widowmaker wasn't the only strain to squeeze into their exit. Behind the spider came Howlers, their eyes glowing ember in the dark, mounted upon each were Slipskulls, their light frames allowing them to ride and not greatly encumber their mounts. They had evidently hopped onto the Howlers in yet another piece of Chimera intelligence, Karl's mind almost immediatly jumping to the Immortal. They raised their reapers as they closed, standing upon the sweaty flanks of their mounts with ease. Karl sighted the nearest one and fired, puncturing its chest and sending it sprawling into the dust, seeing a flash of light he dropped to his stomach to avoid a barrage from another. He counterattacked, blowing off its head with a trio of well placed shots, but there were just too many. Already dozens of them, riderless or not were swerving to either side, moving up to attack vehicles further up. He felt the car veer to the right and crush something against the wall, Daniel making his own attempt to keep the things back. With a leap one of the Howlers pounced onto the back of the 4-wheel drive. He kicked it in the face and fired simultaneously, knocking it off the vehicle with a yelp. He was just getting up when the riding Slipskull using its unnatural jumping ability burst forth from the falling Howler, flying straight for him. It caught him by the neck in midair and slammed him back down to the tray. He fired on his back, only for the creature to dart to the side, and when he checked his aim it moved again. Its speed so incredible it almost teleported. Looking up into its four yellow eyes Karl lunged, attempting to grapple the thing, only for it to leap up to the speeding rooftop and bounce back down, and tackling him to the metal deck. He kicked out, this time at its leg, and in the brief respite this attack offered plunged his remaining knife into its chest, killing it as it fell. He rose again, loaded another clip and continued his cover fire against the Howlers and Slipskulls, behind him he could hear and smell the sounds of battle, the rest of the line trying to fight off the raiders. But it was only a matter of time before one of them succeeded in their goals. And finally it happened, one of the LYNX's wheels was lost, the whole thing flipping and tearing into the vehicles behind it. The whole procession fell apart, panic and destruction wreaked upon the Sentinels. Seeing a large piece of wreckage fall towards him Karl leapt from his place, grabbing onto a motorbike's sidecar as it went by, holding on for dear life. His vision swam in and out of darkness, he saw a Howler set alight go screaming past, then a Widowmaker explode, then men firing wildly, all flashing in and out of the obscurity. Finally the world seemed to stop spinning, and he arose, almost falling over in the attempt. He felt a figure support him. "Come on sir, we need to get moving." came Daniel's voice, calm and resolute despite the straining circumstances. Nodding he tried to move, only to stagger once more. He looked at his chest; a large piece of shrapnel had pierced him right through the armour, blood was trickling down his side like a fountain. Dizziness wasn't the only reason for his loss of coordination. Shrugging off more attempts by Daniel to help him he took a step, then two more; unable to find his carbine he grabbed his Magnum. He had learned from his mistakes in Northern Command, he always had a spare gun on him now, even if the pistol wasn't his first choice of weapon. He made his way along with Daniel to where the survivors seemed to be gathered, though admittedly little better than a walk. He cast a look at the circle of men, seeing many more had again fallen. He stepped back grabbing his head, their shadowed visors brought again the vision of that fateful day in Norwich. He cast off the nightmare, now was not the time. "We have to move." he announced, pointing in the direction they had been heading before the pile up. The first wave of Chimera was either dead or had retreated, but more would be coming, there had been hundreds manning those barriers outside. He noticed the Grayskin, standing just outside of group, he should subdue him now, but he would need every solider he could get to survive this; he would keep the man free for now. They moved as if his idea had been an original and well thought out one, when they really had no other choice. He hastened to keep up with, without vehicles they would be moving on foot, and he couldn't let an injury slow him down, slow all of them down. Behind him he heard the cries of Chimera, but he kept moving. He activated the small flashlight on his gun turning the safety off as he did so. Let them come, he would be ready. They marched for several minutes, their flashlights now the only source of illumination as the fires of their transports died away. Karl was quickly panting, but made him self stay focused, checking the rear, keeping the men together, making them turn this way and that as they moved through the labyrinth. It quickly became clear they would have had to lose their vehicles anyway, the corridor narrowed significantly as they walked, soon almost small enough to deny a bike. "Sir." an anonymous trooper called gesturing to a sign. They all gathered around it, it was a directory, faded arrows with labels pointing to significant parts of the place. One which caught all their eyes was Exit, pointing to the right. "Okay men, let's move." Karl announced upon analysing the sign. They quickly set off in the direction the directory stated lead to an exit. He could already feel a slight breeze, once they got out into the open they could radio for pickup or just hike it, the Chimera didn't have the forces to cover the whole region, they were going to make it! But as if God was punishing him for this hopeful thought, Greyjacks erupted from every conceivable direction. On them in an instant. Whether it was the cool breeze or just tiredness Karl was not alarmed, raising his magnum he opened up, puncturing its chest one, two, three times and sending it crashing down at his feet. He ejected the half spent clip and slotted in a new one, limping towards the sounds of fighting. He head shotted two more, distracted by other Sentinels, as quickly as they had appeared the Grayjack's faded, but he could still see their eyes. "Go!" he cried trying to keep them in view as he stumbled backwards, hoping to hold them off. As one the long limbed demons charged again, the Sentinels still walking backwards fired into them, but it was like trying to keep the ocean at bay with a bulldozer, every time they focused on one part the others surged, a malicious horde of insects, never resting, never tiring. The battle began to stretch into minutes and still there seemed to be no end to them, the distance between the two groups closing with every second. Finally the line broke, and the Greyjacks were upon them. Karl unloaded two more rounds into one of the monsters, the detonating bullets scrambling its guts. He reloaded and fired again, but the delay had cost him dearly, he whipped one with the handle and tripped another, firing rounds into the dark bodies as fast as his finger could pull back, but with a cry one seized him, pulling him up into the air, its clawed hands already beginning to pull, to rip him into two. He looked into its eyes and pulling up his handgun fired a single shot into its face, one last act of defiance before dropping it, the gun's ammo spent. All the angrier for the wound the beast began pulling, Karl already feeling his muscles begin to rip, his skin stretch. Then out of no where appeared the Grayskin, pouncing upon his would be killer and firing dual reapers into its face as it fell. Pulling Karl to his feet he handed him one of the reapers and then shoulder to shoulder supported him as they ran, firing bullets into any which got into their way. Rounding one final corner the Grayskin stopped, a shaking of his arm and a grunt urging him on. Turning around himself he drew something from his belt, a pair of hand grenades. Karl seeing his intent moved as fast as his injured leg would take him; he had only seconds to get as far away from the explosion as possible, and at his slow pace would need every moment of it. Behind him he heard the clink and heavy thud as the small hand held bombs were thrown, a sign of what was to come. The frag grenades exploded, and together the Grayskin and Karl Manex leaped into the air, the air behind them suddenly filled with fiery death. The Howls of the Chimera following them as they realised and experienced their doom, the tunnel itself moving and shifting from the force of the explosion. They landed together on the rocky floor, their armour being pelted by steaming rubble. Finally the explosion and resulting cave in stopped, and Karl dragged his battered body to his feet. Reaper still in hand he looked fearfully around, expecting more Chimera to rush them and finish what the others had started. But the Grayskin had timed the attack well, the way they had come was almost entirely decimated, it would take the Chimera hours to dig through it all, if there were many left. He turned around and looked at how the surviving Sentinels were doing. Steve had a wounded leg, but the rest of the squad were fine. More of the other Sentinels had fallen, they had lost two more and had several more wounded. He turned to see the Grayskin prop himself up just like he had, he gave Karl a brief nod before pulling himself to his feet and walking off calmly, perhaps to inspect the rest of the men. But he angled towards one of the exits, and from his hand came a grenade. Karl leaped forward, yelling for someone to stop him, but it was too late. They had grown too comfortable with his presence, forgotten they had fought less than half an hour past. There was a gentle chink as the grenade hit the floor, followed by the sound of running feet and an almost unnatural silence. And then just like before the doorway exploded, the tunnel collapsing and sealing the way the man had escaped as easily as it had worked on the Chimera, the perfect getaway. Karl picked himself up for the second time. The target could wait, he had to attend to matters with his own team first. Pulling out the first aid kit he set to work, already activating the radio for a pick up. ---------- With a whir the last wounded were loaded onto the VTOL and away, now it just him and the small group who had come through still with the ability to fight. There task force had been cut in half, the only reason they still reached that statistic was because of the scouts, out on the borders and spared from the slaughter they had gone through. They were waiting on them now, then they would be airlifted to one of the nearby tunnels and begin searching, wherever the trail led them. Something moved out from the wilderness, and reflexively Karl raised his weapon, but then lowered it and with a shout ran to Lina, he had forgotten all about the violent end to their last communication. She looked horrid, her helmet was missing, exposing her white skin and dark Russian features, bloody wounds were all over her suit, cut clean through in at least three different places. He tried to support her but she cast him off, she would die before showing weakness. She gave a small salute, and then staggered over to a convenient rock, leaning on it with barely concealed relief. So distracted was he that he didn't even notice Tom approaching him until he tapped him on the shoulder. He had been another one of his scouts, along with Lina they had been patrolling the Western verge, the nearest Chimera base in that direction and the most likely place to show activity if they were discovered. He had wanted no one else but his own men to take such a responsibility, and yet still the Chimera had come. "Karl, could we talk in private?" Tom asked glancing nervously around; he eyed Lina in particular, which he found odd. He nodded though and they walked a short distance from the others, Karl waiting for Tom to say what he wanted to say. "Sir I'm going to be truthful with you, I wasn't at my post in the last half hour before the op." Tom announced. Karl took a step back, his face contorting behind his mask with rage. Tom had willingly abandoned his post! This whole damn fiasco was his fault, at the very least they would have got a few minutes warning. "Why?" Karl demanded his voice cold, his fingers grasped his Reaper tightly, he had half a mind to shoot him right now for dereliction of duty. So much blood had already been spilt, what was a little more? "Sir I had a good reason," Tom replied his nervous, no doubt imagining the anger Karl was engulfed by. "I've had some suspicions for some time, but now I have proof." And he pulled a small pellet from one of his many pouches and placed it in his leader's hands. Karl looked at it, he recognised it, and it was a Chimera signal emitter. All a Hybrid had to do was twist the top and a silent signal was emitted, marking a place for an attack, calling in reinforcements, or signalling an ambush. "I think," Tom said hesitantly "Lina is a traitor." This message was edited by Silver Mirror on Jan 20 2009. ------------------- | |
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