event The Comic Olympics - Page 16

quote Hmszelda

I like the bar-tending monkey thing :>

Well then, say hello to Amigo, my new best friend.



I made the sprite myself. Does it look good?

It also gives you guys time to have some hug time with your special someones on Valentine's Day.

WELL THEN.
That's not what I expected. D:

Well, I managed all of the remaining issues in time AND according to the calculations!
As I said, this is two more brownie issues and then 30-31-32 is the finale.
You'll probably think that I went a bit crazy with stuff in these issues, but this was all planned from the start. Anyway, hope you like them!!

Neon Acid ID#28
Neon Acid ID#29
Neon Acid ID#30
Neon Acid ID#31
Neon Acid ID#32

As you can see, there's some loose ends. This might mean there's going to be a second season, or an epilogue or whatever...

Awh, guys! It's over! I've had a lot of fun working on this comic! I hope you have all enjoyed it as much as I have. Thanks to the DDD2, w111j and Shiny for judging, and every other contestant for competing! Especially neffoneR for putting up with my slack. All the best to you!

Spoiler:Issue 10

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Spoiler:Issue 11

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Spoiler:Issue 12

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Feedback:

neffoneR
Your entries were certainly full of action. I commend you once again on your nice effects. Very fancy and professional. However, as a whole you rely on them too much. There's always a little bit too much action in any comics you make and your mini-series has suffered from this.

Since the aim of this final round was the make a finale issue, it should basically bring things together in some extent. Your ending was certainly different from usual. However, you left a lot hanging. Suddenly these two are duking it out and out of nowhere comes someone else with another plan. He easily destroys both the good guy and the other bad guy and becomes king. Exit story stage left. This would have been perfect for a pre-final battle climax. And that's what it felt like. So to see it here at what is supposed to be the END of your series was very confusing and left me with a feeling of incompletion. As a whole, try to tone down your action scenes and whatnot. Mix in some slower story parts and let things build. I understand that you didn't really have time for this since it was a mini-series (and you stretched even that truly), so just consider this for the future. There's a saying that I'm sure you've been told over and over again. Everything in moderation. So just keep that in mind and you'll be doing great.

Denny the Fisher
You took a simpler route than your opponent to resolve things and it was quite effective. It was clear from the issues that it was a finale. One wouldn't need to know the theme to work that out. The music was a nice touch. Adding a link to a piece of music may not be much work, but if you find something that fits the issue it can still considerably add to the experience of reading it. The music you posted fitted the issues very well.

The ending to your mini-series was not incredibly exciting or aesthetically overwhelming, but it was good for clarity and you did a reasonably good job at making it emotional. I felt you over-did it with the full body pictures in the last issue though. I also noticed the incorrect spelling of the word relieving. Always be on the watch for spelling errors and typos, especially when it's a finale issue. In this kind of issue, readers will expect everything to be of a high standard. Overall I was happy with your resolution.

Yeah go stranger!