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Justin True Addiction total posts: 19420 since: Aug 2009	Aug 19, 10 at 7:21pm ^ re: PokéFiction Reviews!
	Log in to remove this sponsored message Thank you for the positive feedback you two Though i reject to being a good writer. (: I'm hoping to get another one out in a week or so, though i don't want to rush into making too many at once.
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Kubrick moderator PokéLounge Pokémon X & Y total posts: 10026 since: Feb 2008	Aug 20, 10 at 6:45am ^ re: PokéFiction Reviews!
	But your an epic writer. D: Your like, uber duber awesome at writing. 8D Can't wait, jd.
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musab ahmed pathan true seeker total posts: 1119 since: Apr 2009	Aug 20, 10 at 4:45pm ^ re: PokéFiction Reviews!
	quote LeafeonPrincess O rly? OBJECTION! One of the first comics I remember reading in Pokefiction was posted on June 30, 2008. It was a 3D comic, titled Pokemon: A Half-Life Adventure. This was followed by The Fugitive Trainer on July 1st. Five months later, an upsurge in comics was seen, including comics such as The Twinleaf Trainer's Revenge, A Sneasel, an Idiot and a Journey, and, of course, Rescue Mission X. This surge continued in the following months. BUT! I happen to know that even before I came, there were dozens of others made, albeit less frequently. And, of course, we mustn't forget that the only reason Pokefiction is here is because of all the souls who wrote, roleplayed and likewise in the other Pokemon forums. Okay, splurge over. Shiny, you well deserve that rating, anyway. Here's looking forward to the 2 year party on Dec 27!!! I thought you were very jealous of the Almighty "Shiny"... BTW,Congrats Shiny.You Deserve it,man!
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w111j Maid of Heart (moderator) PokéFiction total posts: 5316 since: Jul 2008	Aug 20, 10 at 6:01pm ^ re: PokéFiction Reviews!
	quote musab ahmed pathan quote LeafeonPrincess O rly? OBJECTION! One of the first comics I remember reading in Pokefiction was posted on June 30, 2008. It was a 3D comic, titled Pokemon: A Half-Life Adventure. This was followed by The Fugitive Trainer on July 1st. Five months later, an upsurge in comics was seen, including comics such as The Twinleaf Trainer's Revenge, A Sneasel, an Idiot and a Journey, and, of course, Rescue Mission X. This surge continued in the following months. BUT! I happen to know that even before I came, there were dozens of others made, albeit less frequently. And, of course, we mustn't forget that the only reason Pokefiction is here is because of all the souls who wrote, roleplayed and likewise in the other Pokemon forums. Okay, splurge over. Shiny, you well deserve that rating, anyway. Here's looking forward to the 2 year party on Dec 27!!! I thought you were very jealous of the Almighty "Shiny"... BTW,Congrats Shiny.You Deserve it,man! LP and Shiny have known each other for a long time. There'd be no need for her to be jealous of Shiny. Good job, jdl22, and I hope to see more from you.
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Eclipse Asking Alexandria <3 Seeketh Maximus total posts: 5250 since: Feb 2006	Aug 20, 10 at 8:18pm ^ re: PokéFiction Reviews!
	They'll be 3 reviews every week, guys. So keep an eye out and maybe your Fan Project will be reviewed next week? Also, if you'd like to put in a request for your Fan-Media to be reviewed, PM PokeFiction Reviews Asking us nicely and providing us with a link to what you want reviewed.
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Boo Neoholic since: Aug 2007	Aug 22, 10 at 7:35pm ^ re: PokéFiction Reviews!
	I'd like to thank you for the review on behalf of me and Zacherie, we're both very pleased with our outcome. Raises hand guiltily I have been told before about my semi-colons. I use way too many of them. Oh and I must applaud you on the organisation of this thread, it's very pleasing to see three people contribute to the forum so greatly. Hopefully it will bring nothing but inspirational and determined writers.
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PokeFiction Reviews just getting started! total posts: 103 since: Aug 2010	Aug 23, 10 at 6:08pm ^ re: PokéFiction Reviews!
	There will be 3 reviews, as stated this week, however no Role-Play review for Request Reasons. During the course of the week, we will try and work on refining the review system as much as we can and making it run as smoothly as we can. Upcoming Reviews: Dyon, Glion and the Golden Lion by GuitarMan91. Covet with Compassion by Boo Waiting for the third review to be confirmed. Watch this space!
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Justin True Addiction total posts: 19420 since: Aug 2009	Aug 24, 10 at 4:16am ^ re: PokéFiction Reviews!
	I'm too lazy to log on to that account right now, so i'll just tell you all what my plans are In the next couple weeks i plan to review both W111j's Advent of Dark Arceus/Return of Shadow Mew, and also DDD2's Adventure of a boy named blarg/epic adventure of a boy name blarg. Also wanted to thank Boo/Jon for putting the announcement up on the header : D
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Eclipse Asking Alexandria <3 Seeketh Maximus total posts: 5250 since: Feb 2006	Aug 24, 10 at 11:51am ^ re: PokéFiction Reviews!
	I did try and edit the link in to the post, but it said there were too many URLs D=
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Boo Neoholic since: Aug 2007	Aug 24, 10 at 12:02pm ^ re: PokéFiction Reviews!
	Yay! I'm excited! :) And slightly nervous. XD Anyway, you're welcome about the announcement. Hopefully it will draw the attention. You can thank Lauzi for the code, I found it in my neohome. XD
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w111j Maid of Heart (moderator) PokéFiction total posts: 5316 since: Jul 2008	Aug 24, 10 at 12:52pm ^ re: PokéFiction Reviews!
	quote jdl22 DDD2's Adventure of a boy named blarg/epic adventure of a boy name blarg. The first one was the Epic Journey of a boy named Blarg, and now it's called the Awsomesauce Journey of a boy named Blarg. Just wanted to help you out so that you'd get the review right.
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PokeFiction Reviews just getting started! total posts: 103 since: Aug 2010	Aug 24, 10 at 6:48pm ^ re: PokéFiction Reviews! - Latest Review: Dyon, Glion, and the Golden Lion by GuitarMan91
	------------------------------------- Fan-Media: Fan-Fiction Title: Dyon, Glion, and the Golden Lion Author(s): GuitarMan91 Review Date: 23^rd of August 2010 Rating: 4.5 out of 5 ------------------------------------- Initial Thoughts. The name isn’t one that would usually attract me to reading something, and screams Narnia to me. However, a quick look over the first post and I must say, it looks a better prospect already. And I didn’t know Glion was the Japanese name for Gliscor… You learn something new everyday. Originality - 4.25 out of 5 marks. It’s a very unique way of putting the usual Pokemon “I GOT A STARTER I’MMA WIN BADGES” favored by many (including myself, once upon a time, before I got bored of my own predictability, and… stopped writing… ;;>>). And I like the way you have changed the story slightly to send him through Sinnoh rather than Kanto after Johto. However… It’s still a Journey, so I’ll have to reflect that in your score, purely because of the amount of them floating around. Plot - 5 out of 5 marks. The plot has an amazing twist. What I want to know when reading this is who is the golden lion? I’m guessing the MVP is a Gliscor, and the Golden Lion must be Shiki but… What has he done? It’s got an interesting air of mystery and it makes me want to read more. Grammar and Spelling - 4.5 out of 5 marks. You’ve already stated that your grammar isn’t the best, but I have to say, you’re not that bad at all. You have few spelling mistakes and your grammar is very easy on the eyes, there aren’t random brackets and semi-colons dotted everywhere. Quality of Writing - 4.75 out of 5 marks. You write very well, and it’s clear in the length and the effort put into your chapters is clear in their quality. There aren’t many fanfictions written like this any more, and it’s a breath of fresh air. However, when you use a Japanese character name, you might want to explain who it is for those who don’t. Final Rating = 4.5 out of 5 marks.
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Boo Neoholic since: Aug 2007	Aug 24, 10 at 10:46pm ^ re: PokéFiction Reviews!
	Nice, short and to the point review. I may read that now. ^^
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Justin True Addiction total posts: 19420 since: Aug 2009	Aug 24, 10 at 10:50pm ^ re: PokéFiction Reviews!
	I concur. This thread is also a great way to attract people to your role play/comic/fanfic. In fact, i had no idea that that latest story was on pokefiction. Sometimes the newer threads push it back, as in this example : D Definitely a great way to get an easy description to tell you about the thread without taking the time to read all the way through it first. Lovely review, name goes here Dx
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Morrigan Seeketh Maximus total posts: 5949 since: Mar 2009	Aug 24, 10 at 11:01pm ^ re: PokéFiction Reviews!
	I don't do too badly once I steal people's mark up. ;D
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