Initial Thoughts:

Not much here, honestly. You're a pretty new member to the forum, and your comic is still in it's early stages.

Originality: 4.5/5

First, I'll start with your template. I like it, but you've taken ideas from the others. Nothing too bad, it's just not that much different from everyone elses. Your storyline/characters, however, get your major points in this category. You not only make your own emotions, your characters are changing outfits and such constantly! Very well done, sir.

Plot: 4/5

Your plot's different, but it's definitely... Strange. You've switched plot lines, almost, throughout the story, so that's where you get points deducted. You start with two friends readying for school, and then go off into them being transported somewhere. I won't say too much, as to not spoil anything, but it could be a tad more consistent instead of jumping into things? What's good is that you've been making it much more thick! A definite plus, especially because audiences are always looking for thrill and excitement in a story!

Grammar/spelling: 4.5/5

Nothing too big, but you've got some issues here and there. Just make sure to re-read things over and over until perfection!

Appearence: 5/5

I was about to take away this perfect score section, but I couldn't. I can't stress how you should work on that font ) :< ER, it angers me!), but the overall appearence and organization is just too good not to get 5/5. Well done here. The colors, boxes, and backround image always blend nicely together. Keep that up!