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Aug 11, 10 at 8:23pm ^Team Erebus
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- CHAPTER ONE -
He looked out upon what could be his from the large windows behind his desk. It was 11:46 PM, 14 minutes until he was told how today's recruitment had gone.
The region of Sinnoh was a calm place since Team Galaxy had been disbanded, most people got along, hostility was at a minimal, this made it easier for him to be able to complete his plans, he'd take the world by shock, he could see the headlines now, "Terrorist Attack on Sinnoh". He could smell the fresh paper being printed, and he couldn't wait. There was a swooshing noise as the sliding doors of his office opened. He spun around his chair to look at the tall, blue haired man that'd entered. "How did it go, Ice?" He enquired.
"There were alot of applicants from Sinnoh, several from Johto and Hoenn, Kanto was abit dry, but there was a couple From Orre, Fiorre, Almia and Oblivion." Ice replied, sitting down on the opposite side of the desk to his superior.
"Was there anyone that held particular potential to be the replacement for Heath?"
"Several, I'll leave you with their files, I've taken the free time I've had today to gather as much information on them as possible, like Family Trees and such."
"Thankyou, Ice. Recruit anyone you feel is good enough to be grunts. We need an Army." Ice nodded, and then headed towards the door, he rotated on the ball of his heel.
"Check out the guy on top, he seems particularly promising" Ice winked, and then left the room. Nero looked down at the pile of 10 files Ice had left on his desk. He picked up the one on top and began to read.
quote File #1"Intriguing... Me and this boy's father were good friends" he thought to himself. He read further along the page and then picked up his phone and punched in a number.
"Ice, come back to my office, I'd like to talk about A.Faraday" He said down the mic of the his Cell Phone, he hung up and within seconds, Ice walked back through the door.
"He's perfect, I want him recruited and watched under close eye, employ the others and place them in Lavana's team."
"Why Lavana's, sir?" Ice replied, questioning his superior.
"Because Lavana would enjoy teaching a group of 18 year olds" A cruel smile spread across Nero's face, Ice nodded.
"I'll make the calls now, I requested those to await my call this evening."
"Will they still be awake?" Nero enquired
"Is Alexander local?" Ice walked over to Nero's chair and crouched next to him, facing the window looking over the city.
"See that house there with the lights on? Next to the Game Corner?"
"That's Alex's house."
"Pay him a personal visit, and bring him back here, I wish to witness his battling techniques."
"As you wish sir, I'll return soon" Ice walked out and headed right, down the Corridor. Nero rotated in his seat and stared at Veilstone City.
"Soon, Sinnoh. Soon. You will be mine" Nero let out an evil, maniacal, bone-chilling laugh. This was going to go excellently to plan, now that that traitor Heath had been captured.
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Aug 11, 10 at 8:34pm ^re: "This is gonna get really messy, isn't it?" "No, it's just gonna be difficult to clean."
Yeah, I'm doing that annoying thing where I read things really quickly. You should be proud though, you distracted me from some Dolce Piccante fanfiction.
Lovely start, Zach, leaves just enough mystery to get people reading more.
Altar boys Altar boys
We're the thing that love destroys
Aug 11, 10 at 8:37pm ^re: "This is gonna get really messy, isn't it?" "No, it's just gonna be difficult to clean."
Haha, thankyou ^^
I'm trying to keep some mystery around it, several mysteries'll be brought in. Like "What did Heath do?" and "Why're the three from Ranger in Sinnoh?"
They're the only Mysteries to be let off right now, but there is more to come, plenty more to come
Aug 14, 10 at 1:50am ^re: "This is gonna get really messy, isn't it?" "No, it's just gonna be difficult to clean."
- CHAPTER TWO -
I lay down in my bed, my mobile phone on my chest as I waited for a call from that Ice guy I'd met at the pub earlier that day. My eyelids began to fold in on themselves as I slowly, but surely began to drift into sleep. Suddenly, I heard 3 booming knocks on my front door, I ran downstairs and answered to be met by a tall man with Baby Blue hair. Ice.
"Good Evening, Mr Faraday. You'll need to get dressed as you're coming with me this evening." Ice said with a sharp, yet soothing voice.
"Aye, I will. But first, would you like to come in and have a Coffee? You look knackered and I need to rejuvenate the systems abit." I asked, stepping back from the door to invite him in. He titled his head and then smiled before stepping into my house.
"Milky, 3 sugars, please." I closed the door and began to run around the kitchen, making us each a hot drink.
"Here you go." I said as I placed his cup infront of him. "I'm just gonna get dressed." I ran up the stairs, threw on my Purple hoody and black shirt, black jeans and purple Skater Shoes before charging back down the stairs.
"I must say, Alex." Ice placed his Coffee down on the coaster. "That's possibly the best I have ever tasted." I smiled, sat down on the bar stool-like seat and began to drink my Coffee.
"So Ice, if you don't mind me asking. Where're you from?" I enquired. He looked at me weirdly. I should have never asked.
"The Almia Region, I was part of an Evil team there too. Team Dim Sun, they were called."
"Oh yeah? And how did that work out?"
"The boss was crazy, he wanted a world full of Darkness. But then this Rookie Pokémon Ranger interfered and took us down. He was a talented boy, that kid. Real Talented."
"So what happened after he took you guys down?"
"Me and 2 Colleagues escaped before the police got there. Cowardly thing to do, but we realised we were just pawns in the boss' chess game" Ice said with a frown. We finished our Coffees and then left the house.
"So where exactly are you taking me?" I was worried, real worried.
"And that is..?"
"There" He said, pointing up at the building looming up above us. "Boss wants to see your battling techniques. He was impressed by your files." I nodded and just kept quiet. All the way up to the 'Battle Deck', I didn't say a word, I was too scared to. We arrived, I stepped out the lift to be greeted by a huge, empty cavern like building with just a few lines painted on the floor. With two people standing on the other side of the room
"Good evening Ice, Good Evening Mr. Faraday" Said an old, aging man with a diminished figure as he strode towards us "Or can I call you Alex?" The man said, holding his hand out to greet me.
"Yes sir" I gulped. I was petrified. The Man smiled and shook my hand.
"My name's Nero, I'm the boss here at Team Erebus. And this" He said, gesturing to the man dressed in Black on the other side of the room "is Agent Vulcan. He's the most gifted grunt on my team of Protectors. I'd like you to Battle." Nero turned on the ball of his heel to face Ice "Ice, follow me so we can get a better view" Him and Ice ventured to the sidelines of the Battle Arena and I took up a battle stance.
"Onix, go!" Bellowed Agent Vulcan, he sure wasn't messing around.
"Blade, I choose you!" I threw my Pokéball in the air before me and Sneasel materialised in a crimson red light. He growled at the Onix looming over him. "Ice Shard!" I commanded. Sneasel jumped in the air and started to do a flip, throwing shards of Ice out of nothing at the Onix, who wasn't taking the damage lightly.
"Onix, use Rock Slide!" Vulcan's Onix shook of the ice shards and conjured big heavy Rocks above Blade's head.
"Blade, Protect" Blade closed it's eyes, and as the rocks above him dropped, he timed it perfectly. The rocks hit a force field that had formed around the Sneasel and they all ricocheted back to Onix, every single rock hitting it hard all over it's rocky serpentine body. Onix growled in pain before hitting the floor with an almighty crash. It had fainted. There was a slow clap coming from the sidelines.
"Excellent, truly remarkable" Nero shouted. "But it isn't over yet."
"Return, Onix. Ninetails! Don't let me down!" I smiled as he sent out the Ancient fox pokémon, I actual felt winning this wouldn't be too hard.
"Blade, Take a rest" Blade tottered to side of me. "Kratos, It's your turn." Kratos appeared out of nothingness, the beautiful sheen of his snowy white coat made Ninetails look like a Feebas. "Kratos, Water Pulse" I was serious this round, no messing around. Kratos Waved it's tail visciously in Ninetails' direction and he began to pulse off Water. Ninetails became confused, now was my chance. As Vulcan's poor, defenseless pokémon spun around drunkenly in the middle of the arena, I took my chance "Iron Tail, now!"
"AAAAAB-SOOOOLL!" Kratos jumped in the, tail glowing platinum, it smashed down hard on Ninetails' Cranium.
"Now, Night Slash!" The scythe on top of Kratos' head went blacker, and then made three fluid slashing motions out of the darkness, Ninetails yelped and then was flung back towards her trainer.
"Ninetails!" Cried Vulcan. All that went through my head was 'Oh yes, good first impression on the boss"
"I think that's all I need, fellas. Agent Vulcan, you may return to your dormitory. Alex, You can return to your home. Ice, do me a favour and escort our newest recruit back to his house" Nero ordered, then leaving Ice standing there, awkwardly.
"Well then." He said "Better get you home."
Aug 16, 10 at 6:23am ^re: "This is gonna get really messy, isn't it?" "No, it's just gonna be difficult to clean."
- CHAPTER THREE -
One month later
I stared into her piercing blue eyes and ran my hand through her silky, Cosmic Blue hair. “Alex” She said, grabbing my wrists and placing my trembling hands in her lap. “We can do this, together. Leave Team Erebus. We can run away together, leave this country, for good; Come on Alex, this isn’t like you.” She stared at me intently; the defiant look in her eyes egged me on to run away with her. I bit my lip slightly, and took a deep breath in.
“You don’t understand… I couldn’t possibly leave Team Erebus.” My voice had little power in it, I didn’t want to hurt her, but this had to be said.
“Why not?” She raised her and let go of my wrists.
“The money’s too good, I’m getting paid a lot. How’re we supposed to run away without money?”
“Daddy will give you money”
“Ha, yeah right” I turned my head to the side and cracked my neck, before looking back at Anabel’s perfectly symmetrical face, which was now grimacing at the sound of my neck cracking. “My dad killed his brother. He’s really gonna give me money isn’t he?” Anabel frowned. “And it’s not just the money, I enjoy what I’m doing at the moment, and so do Kratos, Shadow, Blade, Scorpio and Venom. You can’t make me leave.”
“If you don’t come with me” She put her hands around my wrists again. “I’ll break up with you.” My eyes widened. Would she really be so pathetic?
“I’m not leaving Erebus.” I stood up and looked at her for a couple of seconds, just so I could witness the impact of those four words I’d just said. Her eyes welled up with Tears and started sobbing. “I’m sorry” I said as I began to walk off. I got to bottom of the hill before I heard her shout something through her tears.
“You just made a big mistake Alexander James Faraday. A big mistake!” I turned round just one more time to see her still crying, tearing up the roses I’d bought her earlier today. Make up running down her face. I frowned and a single tear ran down the left side of my face.
“I’m sorry” I yelled back at her, She stood up and started signalling vulgar gestures and shouting several curses at me. I kept on walking back to Veilstone. The walk seemed to go by Quickly, but it wasn’t a long walk from Valor Lake to Veilstone, I entered my house and sat on the sofa, starting to think of everything I’d done so far. My first assignment for the Team was to lead a team of Grunts to Mount Silver and Attempt to recruit the great Pokémon Master Red. He said he’d assist us if one of us could defeat him in a one on one battle. ‘Agent Vulcan’ destroyed his Pikachu with his newly evolved Steelix. Red is now working as Nero’s right hand man, or as me and Ice liked to say “Nero’s bitch”. Suddenly my train of thought was broken by the loud ringing of my new Cell Phone, which was like a PokéGear, but better. The screen displayed Ice’s name, so I instinctively picked up the phone. “Hey Ice, what’s up?”
“Uhhh, you know that abandoned building in Eterna?” Ice replied nervously.
“Why did I just over hear a conversation between your girlfriend and an Estate where she handed over a Cheque for £500,000?”
“I don’t know, we broke up about an hour ago.”
“Oh… right. Well, we’ll soon see what comes of it. Talk to you soon dude. Are me and Lavana still having Dinner at your’s tonight?”
“Yeah, Spaghetti Bolognese sound good?”
“Delicious, see you at 8.” The line went dead. I stood up, put on my Apron and began cooking.
Nero stepped cautiously into the freezing cold room and surveyed the area. An array of different weapons lined the walls of this room that seemed to be filled with a glow of pulsating green light and a quiet humming sound from the machinery. Nero walked deeper into the room, passing the rack of guns and knives before stopping at a glass cabinet that contained a whip that resembled a Black Dragonair. He carefully opened the cabinet and removed the whip before turning toward the centre of the room, where a well built man with bright blonde hair was tied by his hands and feet to drain pipes. “Good evening, Heath.” Nero smiled cynically, cracking the whip in the air. “Going to tell me why you did it? Or am I just going to give you your daily, much deserved beating?” Nero was circling the blubbering mess that was Heath, running the whip through his hands softly. He pulled up a chair and sat in front of the prisoner. “Oh Heath… You had it all going for you, one of the Big Three of Team Dim Sun, escaping the Almian Police successfully and then” Nero stood up, spread arms out wide like a bird and circled his chair “Second in Command of the glorious Team Erebus” He walked away from Heath a few paces, before abruptly running back towards the tortured man and getting up in his face “What happened… to you?” Nero back up, and ran the whip across Heath’s already scarred chest. The man yelped in pain and Nero gave a bone-chilling, sinister laugh. Heath began to sob gently. “Don’t cry, you pathetic imbaseel!” Nero bellowed as he again snapped the whip against Heath’s bare skin. Nero got up close to his face again before grunting and turning towards the glass Cabinet where he had retrieved the whip from; gently placing the whip back in the case and striding out of the room.
“Sir, what did he do?” Red inquired
“He killed my wife.”
Aug 16, 10 at 8:37am ^re: "This is gonna get really messy, isn't it?" "No, it's just gonna be difficult to clean."
Admittedly, the long title threw me... but this is a great looking story! I'm intrigued to see where this goes next, the writing is really great stuff and the plot is very unique and interesting. Keep up the great writing, or I may have to hunt you down and force you to write more!
Aug 16, 10 at 12:41pm ^re: "This is gonna get really messy, isn't it?" "No, it's just gonna be difficult to clean."
Nice work, Zach lad, but one thing.
Altar boys Altar boys
We're the thing that love destroys
Aug 16, 10 at 2:05pm ^re: "This is gonna get really messy, isn't it?" "No, it's just gonna be difficult to clean."
But word didn't correct it for me. D=
Aug 16, 10 at 3:26pm ^re: "This is gonna get really messy, isn't it?" "No, it's just gonna be difficult to clean."
Nevertheless it is imbecile.
'Cause Neo's spell checker agrees with me.
Altar boys Altar boys
We're the thing that love destroys
Aug 16, 10 at 4:17pm ^re: "This is gonna get really messy, isn't it?" "No, it's just gonna be difficult to clean."
Yeah... well... Nuhhh! *sticks tongue out immaturely*
Ladies and Gentleman, boys and girls, I'd like to announce that I will be joined by a secondary writer for large piece of this fan-fiction.
Who is it? Wait and see
Aug 16, 10 at 6:09pm ^re: "This is gonna get really messy, isn't it?" "No, it's just gonna be difficult to clean."
HEY YOU GUIZ
Anabel's POV Capter 4, I suppose
I walked down the centre of the pedestrianised wlakway, heart in my throat and eyes downcast. My Espeon walked beside me, glancing up surreptitiously every now and then to see if the tears that terrified him had stopped. I felt eyes on me from all directions, the worried glances of the people staring at the girl whose face currently resembled from a horror movie: a melted waxwork of a face with the corners of her lips twisted into a cruel, half crazed smile. Let them stare. They didn't know me. They didn't care.
My Phone buzzed against my hip and I took it out, glancing at the caller ID. When I saw his name, a single, bitter bark of laughter escaped me, a sound that was harsh in the quiet evening air. I dropped the phone, my smile becoming more embittered and cruel as I raised a foot and crushed it on the cobbles.
"Yes, Aoife, it really is over."
I stuck my hands in my pockets, then inspected the handiwork that was once a mobile phone, the pieces shattered by the weight of my foot. I flicked a lock of hair from my eye, and then strode off, heading towards Eterna.
I turned slowly, glaring in the direction of the voice. I was not a child. Far from it. Sure, my actions in the last hour had been, but at the moment, I felt older, colder, and far more dangerous than this person could give me credit for.
"That boy's pretty high up in Team Erebus, isn't he?"
"What's it to you?"
The stranger was a silhouette when we began speaking, but then he emerged. I couldn't help but shrink back: one of his eyes was totally gone, and a harsh scar was stretched across it, meeting with the corner of his mouth, twisting his full lips into a cruel eratsz smile that was completely at odds with the dead look in his eyes. I swallowed dryly, my hand straying to the Pokeballs at6 my belt.
"I have a proposition for you, my dear. You hate Team Erebus."
I spat at the ground, anger plain on my waif like features.
"So does everyone else. They're scum."
"Yes, but you want to destroy them. Few have the courage to even admit to what they are. I myself am running a group, and I seek people like you to be my close assistants."
I straightened, lips curling with ill-hidden contempt. "A group? In other words, a Team just like those bastards?"
He shook his head indulgently, the way one would at a child who has just suggested that the moon is made of cheese.
"A team to defeat them."
He had my intrest. "And what would I have to do to... join a group like that?"
He clapped his hands together and a figure emerged, a monutain of a man with spades for hands, a short, thick neck and blunt eyes.
"Defeat my friend here."
I wasted no time in shifting into battle. Anger made my reactions faster, so I unleashed it first. "Aoife, Psychic!"
She didn't hold back and lunged forwards. The man only just madaged to release his Pokemon to deflect the attack away from himself. A huge Aggron filled the remainder of the alleyway, and took the brunt of Aoife's attack.
"One on one, the scarred man called. Let's see how you do, girly."
Rage blossomed further. Girly? Who did this prick think he was?
"Aggron, Iron Tail!"
The Aggron's own momentum carried him over the twisted blades, and it tripped, falling with an earth shattering thud to the floor of the alley. "Aoife, Dig!"
I took advantage and chose a move that would be super effective, preparing as the Aggron rose unsteadily to its feet.
"Aggron, prepare Focus Punch."
I smirked. "Too late."
Aoife erupted from the earth, sending the Aggron flying. "Finish this! Zen Headbutt!"
The move struck the Aggron dead on, and it didn't rise again. The gorilla cursed, returning his Pokemon to his Pokeball.
"Impressive, young one... Tell me, what is your name?"
I returned a tired Espeon to her Pokeball, then clipped it to my belt. "Anabel."
"Anabel, I am Sisyphus. And you my dear, are welcome to join Team Helios."
Altar boys Altar boys
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Aug 23, 10 at 7:08pm ^re: "This is gonna get really messy, isn't it?" "No, it's just gonna be difficult to clean."
- CHAPTER FIVE -
I swung open the door and was greeted by the smiling faces of Ice and Larvana; I sat them down at the table after taking their coats; pouring us each a glass of wine and setting the dinner out. We sat quietly while eating, with the occasional slurp from one of us as we sipped the wine or sucked the spaghetti into our mouths. We all finished eating and settled down in front of the fire and began to chat. The chat was mainly social; we discussed Ice and Larvana’s wedding next year, our families and training techniques for Pokémon. “You scared about the mission tomorrow?” Ice asked.
“No, not really. Not a lot could go wrong to be honest.” I replied with a smile, eyes not leaving the TV screen. “Unless of course there’s something in the water in Mt. Coronet making all the Pokémon ridiculously evil” I joked around, it was the only thing I could do to take Anabel’s face when I left her out of my mind. We were all just mindlessly staring at the TV set, watching repeats of Friends shown on E4. Suddenly our concentration was broken by the ringing of Ice’s telephone. He picked the phone of the table and curiously looked at the screen.
“It’s Nero, I better take this” Ice stood up and walked out the room and spoke in a hushed tone.
“So Larvana, what’re your feelings for the mission tomorrow?” I enquired of the girl with bright pink hair sitting on my sofa.
“I’m not really worried about it, if something goes wrong, something goes wrong, but I’m trusting my team to complete their objective with no fuss” She replied happily.
“What type does your team specialise in?”
“Fire” She replied with a certain tone of pleasure in her voice. The mood changed relatively quickly when Ice walked into the room, his face as white as a sheet. “What did Nero want, baby?”
“Erebus headquarters has been infiltrated by a team called ‘Team Helios’, they think they’re being quiet in doing it, but Nero has just overheard the Mole in the labs, he needs us there now.”
“Well it’s a bloody good job I only live over the road from the HQ.” I jumped up from my seat and switched off the telly, I collected my jacket off of the coat rack and exited the door with Ice and Larvana, we ran to the HQ and casually walked in the doors, we strode to the lifts and stepped in; “Agents Faraday, Frost and Aduro”
“Voice recognition confirmed as Agent Alexander Faraday, Welcome to Team Erebus Headquarters, to which floor may I take you?” The emotionless voice on the elevator spoke from the speakers that lined the metal canister.
“Floor 15” The lift jolted upwards and began to ascend to the top floor of the colossal structure previously inhabited by the failures Team Galaxy. The lift halted.
“Floor 15; Nero’s Office and Headquarters” The cold, emotionless voice spoke again, before the heavy metal doors prised open down the centre, allowing us to leave. We all walked into Nero’s office, Red was sitting in at a small desk by the door, and our leader sat in a tall, looming leather chair at a long, curved, black metal desk. His back was to his us as he stared out the window over the city.
“Good Evening, I apologise for calling you in so late, but the notion was necessary.” Nero said with a cool, monotonous voice. “The Mole goes by the name of Devon Charter; he has given us a lot of information on Team Helios.”
“What information is there?” Ice questioned as Nero turned round and gestured to three seats on the opposite side of his desk to him. We all sat down and prepared to listen.
“Team Helios is a team built hell-bent on destroying us, they have 3 leaders. Anabel Greenwater, Sisyphus Diabolous and Samantha Odio. Tomorrow, you three will infiltrate their Headwuarters in Eterna, and kill them. You are assigned one each. Alex, you must kill Anabel. Ice, you have Sisyphus and Larvana, You have Samantha.” Nero paused for a second to take a breath, he then carried on “You must formulate a disguise for yourself, you can go to whatever extreme you wish with disguises; you must have reported back their deaths by midnight tomorrow. I’ll leave you to just imagine what your fate will be if you don’t. You may now leave.” Nero smiled cynically and watched as we all began to walk out the door. “Alex, could you come back for a second please.” I turned around and walked back towards the desk; I sat opposite him again and prepared myself for what else he had to say. “I understand it may come as a shock to you that you have to kill your girlfriend; but doing so will reward you handsomely.”
“What’s that supposed to mean, sir?”
“The deal is simple. Kill her, you become second in command, at a higher position than Ice, you basically have all the powers I have, however you cannot fire me. You will also be given the rarest Pokémon that is known to mankind.”
“And if I don’t?”
“You are thrown from this window” He said gesturing to the window behind him “To fall towards your certain death.” There was silence in the room. “Do I make myself clear?” Nero spoke to me like I was a child. I stood up and rested my hands on the table.
“Crystal.” I gave a sinister grin that sent shivers down Nero’s spine. I walked out of the room and returned to my home.
Now's the fun part. I ask of the Audience what Alex should do. Simply PM me saying whether Alex should kill Anabel. Happy voting
Aug 23, 10 at 8:30pm ^re: "This is gonna get really messy, isn't it?" "No, it's just gonna be difficult to clean." - Vote!
The cold steel was pressed against the back of the Erebus member's neck, and the man froze, stopping what he was doing entirely.
"On your knees."
I loved doing this. No mercy was ever shown by Erebus, so why should Helios? Why should we stave off destroying the lives of its members like they destroyed the lives of civilians? We never killed them. No, Helios was better than that. We merely ensured thet could never go home ever again.
"Now, why are you here, sweetie? Why have you crept into our base, like the little rat you are?"
The man swallowed, and I took pleasure in the way sweat ran down his forehead forming a tacky sheet over his skin and features. The beretta was merely a prop I had procured to scare him, and it was clearly working. How was he to know it wasn't loaded.
"Orders to spy on the higher ups."
"Oh? Well sweetie, I'm a higher up. Come with me."
He twitched in position, refusing to move. I kicked him roughly, snarling.
"On your feet!"
The corridors were relatively empty at this time of night, and those who say me smiled weakly. They knew why I had hardened. They knew why I was so cold, so aloof. They knew I had a single goal, and that was to see Team Erebus' leader dead, in the most violent way possible, for destroying all that I had.
I propelled the man into my office, then snapped at him to sit. He did so warily, looking around at the drab grey walls and thin brown carpet, and the Venus flytrap that was the only splash of colour in my otherwise drab office. I rarely spent time in it: why should it be pretty when all I did within its four walls was work?
"You know we're going to have to destroy you for coming here, don't you?"
He swallowed weakly, then looked me in the eyes, a weakness and desire for sympathy appearing.
"I do it for the money, I only want to see my kids clo-"
"Shut up. You want to care for your children? You should never have joined Erebus, because that's what is losing some kids a father."
He blanched and opened a mouth to speak, but I silenced him with a wave of my hand. "No point in pleading. It won't be me who does it."
I pressed a button on the intercom, and ordered for some of the grunts to get rid of him. Once he had been dragged off, I sat back, and looked up at the ceiling.
"You really need to decorate in here, Anabel."
I sat up, and looked at Sisyphus, who had performed his usual silent entry trick, coming in without making a sound.
"It's the way I like it."
He sighed and moved closer, perching on the edge of the recently vacated chair. "You're not like me and Samantha, Anabel. You're... harder. Angrier..."
"and that, Sisy, is none of your business."
i sat up and released Espeon, making to move around the desk and leave. Sisyphus shot me a worried look, and I smiled wryly.
"I'll be back later. Something's going on in Hearthome, and you know me... Anywhere close to the action."
He ran his hand over his face and smiled weakly. "Be careful, anabel."
"I always am."
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We're the thing that love destroys
Aug 23, 10 at 9:32pm ^re: Team Erebus
I like it so far! I like how you use Greek words for things, like how Erebus means Dark and ect.
I also like how you're putting real delinquency into it, and how each character is already developing nicely.
One thing I DON'T like, though, is Red being evil. How could you.
Is Anabel the same as Salon Maiden Anabel from the Battle Frontier?
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Aug 23, 10 at 9:42pm ^re: "This is gonna get really messy, isn't it?" "No, it's just gonna be difficult to clean." - Vote!
As easily as he just did. :L
Uhhh, I don't actually know. All I know is that I'm writing as Anabel.
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