As promised, this is a fanfic. It will not be Pokemon related until a little bit further on. I have added two lines also so for those who have already read it read the last pharagraph again.

Anyway non-story content will be in bold.

A young girl stood alone in the countryside. Her hair was dead black which fell in long streaks over her shoulders and behind her back. She had large, vulnerable, ruby-red eyes which glowed in the darkness. She was rather short making her look younger then she really was, a young age of ten. She wore black trousers, a dark blue shirt and a black jacket which was usually unzipped. Her runners were black and dark blue and she had a dark blue headband.

A small ball of silver mist hung in the air as the girl strode down the lane. The mist seemed to follow her but that didn’t bother her. Creepy things happened down this road and she was never ready to find out why it happened. Owls peered out at her as she passed the evergreen trees. Dead bushes were lined along the long, deserted road. There was a muffled scream in the distance. It made the girl jump but she didn’t really care. As she continued on the scream grew louder and clearer. The only thing about it out of the ordinary is that its highly doubted someone can scream for longer then five minutes. That’s the length of time it takes to walk down the road.

The silver mist suddenly changed direction and went down the road where the scream could be heard. The girl shrugged and continued on.
“Diana, why’d you leave me” ,someone whispered.
The girl jumped at her name and glared around. No one was around.
“You left me of all people” ,the voice whispered again.
Diana recognised the voice. Her friend that had disappeared long ago. She had abandoned Diana when Diana needed a friend most. She never wanted to meet her old friend in the eye again.
“What do you mean I left you! You left me!” Diana shouted.
There was no reply, just the usual light wind that weaved in through the trees.
“That’s not how I remember it” ,the voice said.
“Shut up!” Diana screamed glaring at every bit of life.
Crows cawed before flying away. The owls hooted and disappeared into the branches. The mist appeared again. Diana glared at it before turning her back and stomping away.
“I’m always here” ,the voice said, quietly yet easy to hear.
“I said shut up” ,Diana yelled and dashed down the lane.
Tears pricked her eyes which she blinked away. Those words flowed through her head. She blocked out every noise from outside, in the real world.

Diana barged through the door and ran up the steps.
“What’s wrong dear?” her mum shouted upstairs.
“Nothing” ,Diana snapped back and slammed the door shut.
She shoved her earphones in her ears and put on her music full blast. Bullet for my Valentine blared through her ears as she lay on the bed. The same words rushed through her mind over and over. Her songs flicked on and off until all of the songs had played. Diana clutched her pillow and sobbed into the material. She remembered a time when she had all the friends she needed.

All of Diana’s class had once been one big group, girls and boys alike. Times have changed since then. Something had occurred at school and she had many fallouts during that small period of time. She was left with one friend, the one that she trusted, the one that she always wished to be by her side. That person however had went missing. She changed, she pretended to be someone she wasn’t. There friendship, slowly but surely disappeared. She was left an easy target for bullies and felt to afraid to tell anyone about it.

Its been three years since that time and the bullying still continues. They’ve threatened to kill her, bringing a knife to school to intimidate her yet more. She felt paranoid and depressed. She was thinking maybe it would be best if she killed herself.
“Not a bad idea” ,she thought silently.
She opened the door and crept downstairs. Her parents were snoring peacefully in bed.
“They have no idea” ,she thought as she headed into the kitchen.
She took a large knife, its dark blade glistened by the moonlight seeping through the curtains. She held the devilish blade facing towards her and quickly drew it closer to her body. Everything flashed white before her eyes and the blade dropped from her hands. She shook all over at the stab mark in her chest. Blood poured out and spilled onto the ground. She stood, motionless as the blade bounced on the ground before resting in place.

The floor now had a coat of red blood. She saw her mothers kind face come into the room. Her mum screamed as her dad rushed into the room and slid on the puddle of red. He took a first aid kit as her mum dialled treble nine. Everything passed so quickly. Things began to blur.
“Can you hear me?” he dads familiar, deep voice asked.
A slur of words left Diana’s lips before everything went black.

When Diana’s eyelids flicked a movement again she was in the hospital. Unfamiliar objects and people were around her. The only people there familiar were her parents. Her dad gripped her hand as her mum cried on her dads shoulder.
“She’ll be ok” ,he kept on mumbling. Whether it was to himself or his wife was unknown.
Diana opened her mouth to speak but no words left my mouth. Umpteen stitches were plastered into the cut in her chest. The pain was unreal. It felt to her that she had just survived a gunshot to the head except lower down. Diana tried to sit up but was pulled gently back downwards.
“Rest dear” ,a woman whispered in my ear soothingly.
She nodded her head slightly and rested it against the feathery pillow.

Those words weaved through her brain again and again. They just wouldn’t go and leave her to rest. Happy memories seeped from her mind as she tried to remain conscious.
“She’s having a mental overload” ,a doctor explained to her parents.
After that Diana didn’t hear anything. She didn’t want to live anymore. No one loved her, there was no reason for her to believe anyone did.


This message was edited by Charizard_Girl on Aug 13 2008.

Like i said earlier, this is absolutely brilliant. No surprise, coming from such a wonderful writer. Can't wait until the next update.

I shall wait for one more comment and maybe I'll ipdate today if I can break away from my party. Its starts in four hours but I'm busy with the cake and all. I may be able to show my friends my expert writing skills, XD

Yeah, okay.

bump, almost forgot about this one =-)

WOW! MUNCHY LIKE!
Lol@ Bullet for my Valentine on her ipod
But more pokemon or Munchy will cry.... i need to think up another thing for Munchy...

I shall quickly update before I faint from this major headache.

She awoke to find herself afloat on pure white clouds. She opened her heavy eyelids. The morning dew was all over the white ballls of fluff which soaked her. She motioned her head up to look around.

The saw a large golden gate which stretched up out of her eyes reach. Somewhere around just above her hight of the gate was a large slab of silver in an oval shape. Engraved in it she read 'Heaven'.
"Heaven" ,she thought trying ot think through the thuding in her head.
The gates creaked drawing her attention back towards the golden bars. They slowly opened. She lifted her body with her hands support and stumbled towards the gate. She could hear screams of delight but saw nothing. Just before her was a white light white blurred into a grey color swirling around into a giant vortex.

She took a couple more steps getting closer and closer. She reached out her hands towards the swirling vortex and suddenly her foot was stook. She attempted to yank it free but her other foot became stuck also. She became impatient. She grabbed one foot and began to tug at it. The feathery fluff turned grey and then black which seemed to infect the air. It oozed up and began to flick like an angry cats tail.

Diana stared at this strange sight. She didn't think and the next thing she knew it was clutching her hand. It spread up her arm and onto her neck. She arched her neck away from instinct but it did nothing. It spread over her other arm and down her chest, onto her stomach and down her legs. Thin, red, vein-like lines now formed along the now dark skin.

Diana felt petrified but could do nothing as she felt frozen like a statue. The only thing that showed that she was some form of being and not a motionless object was the fact her hair blew back and forth in the now formed wind. She felt herself sink into the ground and the black clouds jump up like angry fish and take hold of her legs, hands and arms. When she was low enough it clung to her neck, hair and face. She eventually disappeared from sight.

Thats a good half a A4 page although it dosent look it

Does! And is she going to hell? That's a bit harsh...

She was falling for what felt like forever. Her hair blew up into the air. The pitch darkness made her feel closterphobic. She eventually slowed down and her hair lowered and rested on her shoulders again. Her feet were soon firmly on the ground. Her legs wobbled slightly but she found she was able to stay upright on the soles of her two feet. She noticed her skin wasnt black darkness any more but its normal color.

Diana stared around and saw many red creatures. They had small horns on there head and a long tail with a spade shape on the end. They wore a ragged brown T-Shirt which was ripped here and there and torn blue trousers. They were all looking at her, staring with bright red eyes. Two grey fangs, stained slightly by blood came from there mouth and rested on there bottom lip.

"Coming through, coming through" ,a deep, hard voice sounded.
A 'larger then the rest' creature apeared. He was the same as them but his clothes were blue jeans, a black T-shirt and a brown leather jacket with a comb placed in a pocket. His horns were bigger also as was his tail and fangs. He stared hard at Diana scaring her.
"Wh-who are y-you" ,she dared to ask him.
His eyes narrowed suspiciously.
"I am, the devil!" he exclaimed proudly.

All the other smaller creatures bowed before him. She stepped back a little at a time but found something in her way. It wrapped around her legs and up along her body. It forced her arms right up against her body. It kept going to her neck where it lightened its grip so she could breath. She saw the spade like shade at the end and noticed it was the devils tail. It lifted her up so her feet no longer rested on the ground.

Diana was pulled closer to him. She could hear his heavy breath. It seemed calm, yet harsh at the same time. She could smell his horrible breath which filled her nostrils. It made her want to get sick.
"You wish to leave this place, don't you?" he said with an evil grin.
Diana's eyes widened at him. He was far taller and more powerful the she. She nodded cautiously making the grun widen on the devils face.

"A contest is in place then!" he exclaimed in delight.
He released his grip altogether and she tumbled towards the ground. She held out her hands to support her fall. She hit the red cobbled ground which grazed her hands. She shook them to force the small stones of of them. She wondered what contest the devil was talking about but darent ask.

The devil towered over her with two fiddles in his hands.
"A fiddle contest?" Diana thought to herself.
She had loved playing the fiddle at school. The teacher commented that she was the best in the class. He extended a fiddle and bow towards her.
"This contest will be judged fairly" ,he saud kindly.
Diana always recognised the devil as an evil sly demon.

Another one of those creatures, which by now Diana recognised them as demons, hoped over to them with a whisle in its mouth. He blew it once and the devil began to play a lovley, expert tune from the fiddle. He drew the bow across the strings expertly releasing a sound that Diana was completely loved. She was also wondering what the rules were but just decided she would wait till the devil was done and she'd play her piece.

The devil was interupted by another whistle which he stopped at. Diana paniced and didn't know what to do.
"Play" ,a demon near her whispered.
She began to move the bow lightly across the strings up and down the fiddle. It was larger then the average one she played and she found in uncomfortable under her chin.

The sound she released was utterly fabulous. The devil looked down at her and suddenly raised his hand. The whole room went slient and Diana stopped playing.
"Your skill's with the fiddle are fantastic" ,he said, "And with that, I will send you out of this place to a new world"
Diana smiled and placed the fiddle on the ground.

Before Diana could say anything she found herself traveling through a purple and black vortex towards unknown land. What was going to happen to her this time?

She awoke on soft grass and she looked around. A town was layed nearby. A small, fluffy, borwn creature bound towards her.
"Eev" ,it screeched in glee.

Now, where is she? >.>

GASP! So THIS is how the Mystery Dungeon games start!
Or, she's gone to pokemon world! YAYZ!

What emporer_caopi thought. More!

Call me EC or ECP, and yeah MOAR! we need more! I can't take a cliffhanger this cool!
New, Munchy on a block(Munchbox xD) wants more!

Okay, EC. Yes, More!

Diana sat up and stared at the fluffy brown creature. It jumped on her knee and waved it silky tail in the air. Its black eyes made it look all the cuter.
"Ee" ,it screeched happily again.
She reached out a hand to stroke the small fox like creature. The tickled behind its ear and under its chin. The ran her hand down the length of its whole body. It was still a baby.

The brown fox jumped into her arms when she withdrew her hand. She cradled it for a minute or two. It flicked its ear playfully. Diana smiled and brought her head down onto the light fur of the creature. It was soft and silky. It made her feel better.

Diana stood up and began to walk towards the town still cradling the creature. She passed other strange creatures. Like one was an oversized yellow mouse with red cheeks, a spikey thunderbolt shaped tail, black ear tips and brown strides on its back. She thought they were facinating. She also saw a brown caterpillar in a tree with a horn on its head but the rest of its body was concealed under the many leaves of the tree.

Diana reached the town. It was small and was inhabited by few people. She noticed a large building with a sign outside it. It said 'Pokemon Lab'. She examined the word Pokemon. Someone places a hand on her shoulder making her and the fox in her hand jump.
"Vee" ,it cried.
She turned her head and saw a tall man with grey hair. He wore a white lab coat, a purple T-shirt and brown trousers and shoes.

He smiled kindly at her whish soothed her.
"I haven't seen you around here. Are you new?" he said gently.
Diana nodded cautiously. The man smiled again.
"I'm Professor Oak, please to meet you" ,he said to her holding out his hand.
She looked at it and held the fox in one hand to shake his hand with her other.
"I'm Diana"
"Thats a lovely name" ,he said kindly.
"Umm, what is this...creature" ,she asked him a little embaressed pointing at the fox.
Oak smiled, "Follow me"
She did so and he led her into his lab. It was filled with books a machines that she had never seen in her life. On the spine of the books she read 'Pokemon History' 'Breeding' 'Type advantages' and many more one that she couldn't see.

"That creature you have there is known as a Pokemon" ,he told her beckoning her to sit down.
She did so on a soft blue chair and listened intentionally.
"There are many different types of Pokemon. That one you have there is known as an Eevee" ,he explained.
Diana nodded taking every ounce of infomation in.
"Pokemon each have different types. That one is a normal type. Depending on the type depends on how it will do against other Pokemon. Trainers use Pokemon for multiple reasons. They use them as pets, to battle, to enter contests, etcetra. They also run wild out in this land. There are several regions where different Pokemon live. This is Kanto" ,he stopped to take a breath.

"Pokemon have many mysteries that I work to find. Here" ,he pointed to a small red device that flipped open, "is a pokedex. It records pokemon infomation. I get trainers to go out with these and discover Pokemon life. They catch and train these Pokemon to travel to new regions. In return for these help I store there Pokemon here and look after them. You can only carry six Pokemon at a time you see and trainers usually want to catch more then that"
Just the the door opened and Diana and Oak looked over at it. In walked a young boy with spikey black hair and a red and white hat. He wore a blue jacket and black T-Shirt with blue jeans.
"Sorry I'm late professor! I overslept" he cried running up to the professor.
"Ah Ash, how have you been? I will have a Pokemon for you in a second. Sit down and relax for a minute" ,he said pulling Ash over to Diana and making him sit next to her.
He was shaking from excitment. Diana didn't get what the big deal was but continued to listen to professor.

"Now Diana, that is the most infomation I can give you about Pokemon. The rest you have to go out and find yourself. If you want, I can give you a Pokedax and a few Pokeballs to start you on your journey. That Eevee looks quite attached to you" ,Professor Oak said looking at the fluffy fox.
Diana considered the question for a minute then nodded.
"Ok, I'll give it a shot" ,she said enthusiastically.
"Excellent!" he exclaimed handing Diana five Pokeballs and a Pokedex.
"Here, try and withdraw that Eevee. Just hold out the ball to it and press this white button" ,the Professor said handing her another Pokeball.
She did so and the Eevee got zapped by a red light and disappeared. In a moment however it appeared again looking angry.

"Strange" ,Oak said looking at the angered Pokemon.
"Maybe it dosen't like Pokeballs" ,Ash suggested.
"Maybe" ,Oak said placing the Pokemon on Diana's shoulder. "I think you'll have to travel with it out of it's Pokeball"
Diana nodded, "Ok then"
"Off you go then and discover the mysteries of Pokemon" ,he said pushed Diana off slightly.
Diana skipped away happily. When she exited she came face to face with another boy. He had Brown spikey hair, a black T-Shirt and purple trousers.

"And who might you be?" he asked unimpressed at the new trainer.
"I'm Diana, you?" she replied not hearing the sarcasm in his voice.
He looked surprised at how cheeky she seemed to be to him not realsiing that she didn't get it. He looked closer at her and shook his head.
"Do you need a tarveling partner. It looks like your a little lost" ,he asked, "And by the way, I'm Gary"
Diana went red slightly but nodded, "Yeah I'm a little new"
Gary nodded in understanding and lead her around the lab.

whew, that took a while to type. And yes, I'm starting ALL the way back to the first episode =P

! SWEET! i thought you'd gone forward in time to when it's proffeser GARY oak lol, until I read ash coming in lol. AWESOME story! Now post in mine so i can write the first chapter