Welcome to Jak's Review Thread, where you people can read my reviews without needing to go into my profile, and also where you can comment on my reviews.

Keep in mind, these reviews are final, but I will include your suggestions in future reviews.

So without further ado, here are...Jak's Reviews!

I read through the Brawl review. I'm very impressed by it. It conveys a tremendous amount of information. You draw comparisons to previous versions and yet the review can stand on its own. Your opinions come across really well. The layout is excellent too. It was a great read.

For a reviewer who tends to break down his reviews into pieces, I thought that you did well with continuity between the sections as well as keeping people reading by staying away from more boring writing styles.

I think the correct term is Active Writing, but I'm not sure. =P

Added Mario And Sonic At The Olympic Games (WII) to the list.

I know it wasn't on my "Working On" section, but I played it a few days ago and I was disgusted by it.

Edit: Got my Metal Storm review accepted, it's in the index under the NES section. Would love people to read and critique it.



This message was edited by Offendr on May 09 2008.

I've only seen two of your reviews, one of which I thought was very good and the other of which I thought was let down only by being a bit immature in places. The Mario & Sonic review did seem more mature than the Shadow review, which seemed to have parts which were great review material (the last line of the first paragraph of the "Graphics" section is great) and parts which weren't (in particular the bit where you use seven words and four of them are "s***"). That said, I do realise there was a gap of nearly two years between them.

quote Galacticdramon

The Mario & Sonic review did seem more mature than the Shadow review, which seemed to have parts which were great review material (the last line of the first paragraph of the "Graphics" section is great) and parts which weren't (in particular the bit where you use seven words and four of them are "s***"). That said, I do realise there was a gap of nearly two years between them.

Okay, the review for Buck Bumble is up. Any comments?

Updated with Sonic And The Secret Rings review.

Don't worry guys, I'm going to try and review more often here.

This message was edited by Offendr on Jul 21 2008.

...I guess I kinda broke my promise there but I've been busy with life, okay?

Anyway, here's Legend Of Zelda: Majora's Mask.

This message was edited by Offendr on Aug 24 2008.

That is excellent. You went indepth on a lot of things and covered practically everything the game has to offer. I had expected a bit more on how the game saves (since it's so different from OOT in that you can't just save anywhere) but that's a little nitpick.

quote Insanity Prevails

I had expected a bit more on how the game saves (since it's so different from OOT in that you can't just save anywhere) but that's a little nitpick.

Ghosts and Goblins review in the cue. Quality may not be as high as Majora's Mask, but I had to vent a bit, plus I didn't want to waste any more time on that game.

I remember that game. I played it years ago and distinctly remember never getting past the second level. I so completely sucked at it.

So I read your review on it. You covered basically everything I could think of. A nice job on really driving home the sheer difficulty the game is know for.

I noticed that on your majoras mask review, under sound, you said that there is no zelda theme, but that is false, the termina field overworld theme is a remix of the original theme.