[Fan-Fic]Monster Hunter:Final Frontier

Alittle opening for myself ^.^

This is the new Monster Hunter story I am writing at the moment. I would like to say I'm very very happy with it,and I hope you will be also.MH:FF also includes brand new monsters,and beast.I'll provide picture refrences at certain times. So without futher talking I present to you Monster Hunter:Final Frontier!

Monster Hunter: The Final Frontier

Chapter 1
Cave of the dead

"What is this!" Rogger shouted into the fog

John walked up to him "What is it?"

"It looks like a…stone slab that covers a entrance to a cave!"

"That's odd this one isn't on the map at all."

"You sure your looking at the right one?"

"Yah it's the map of the swamp,and this cave isn't marked."

"Then by goly we discovered something new!"

"Be careful! I have the feel that we should go on there."

"You worry to much John come on!"

Rogger pushed the huge stone slab out of the way,and revealed a large entrance to a cave. It was pitch black,and no light could be seen down there.Rogger pulled out his Iron sword and slowly walked into the cave. Soon followed by John who wielded a Iron Sword. As they started to walk through the cave bones of dead dragons,and other things that once lived. The ground was moist,and slushed as they walked through the mud.They slowly looked around and Roger pulled a stick out of his pack,and used a stone to light it. However it was not enough to push back the darkness as it just seemed to consume them. The air and a ominous blow to it like it was blowing but wasn't. The stench of the dead got stronger the further they went into the cave. After awhile of walking they reached a lake,what seemed to be filled with water,but it didn't smell like water.

"Rogger stop!" John shouted

"What is it?" Rogger asked annoyed

"Point your torch at that water."

"But its just water…"

"Do it!"

"Fine..ok…HOLY SHIT!"

The lake was not water infacted it was blood fresh blood. It seemed to be endless.Roger looked over at the wall and blood was smeared all around them,and dead hunter bodies laid scattered around them. Arms ripped off,heads ripped from the body,and even the toreso was ripped from to shareds.The smell of the dead got extremely strong now,and they almost suficated as the air blew the smell around. They looked around and realized that they were in a large dome shaped room.On the sealing there was a huge fossil of a unknown wyvern. There was also a huge dragon bones sticking up out of the blood pool.

"Looks like we weren't the first to be here." John said with a since of humor in his voice

"Where the hell?"

"Rogger I have a bad feeling about this! Lets get out of here."

"Hold on we could be onto something here look theres a center platform in the center of that lake with a bridge connecting it."

"I think this is warning that we should leave here."

"Your to chicken come here."

"Ok…"

Jogn walked over a piece of paper and it was staned with blood. It read "Don't go further,please if you should find this please don't go!." Rogger and John walked along the path that lead to the center platform.When they arivved at the center platform a hole was dug in the ground with a shining stone in it. Rogger nelt down to pick it up but felt a force around it and it stoped his hand.

"Is this it?" John walked up behind Roger

"What this stone? It seems to have some sort of barrier around it." Roger asked with question.

"I've never seen a stone like that in my life."

"It looks like blood or red liquid is moving around in it…"

"Welllll Wellll looooks likkke wee havvve guesssst.."

Roger and John turned around and readied there weapons for combact,but all they saw was the darkness.

"Hummman dooo yooou thiinnnk yooou thiinnnk yooou cannnn takke ourrr stonnnne?"

"Whoever is out there show yourself!"

"Verrry Wellll…"

Out of the darkness revealed a cheata looking monster. It's fur was yellow~ish orange with spots place randomly on its body. It has two extremely long wiskers on both sides of its face.It had skiny but long legs that look like they could be used for jumping. It had black hair sticking up out of fur shaping its spine.It had a long black tail with a touch of dark yellow.Its claws were sharp that as it walked wholes were left in the ground createing a scratching noise.Its fangs were of a wolf short but very sharp. Its last striking feature was its Lime Green eyes that seem to stun you if you look into them.

"I've never seen anything like this before!"

"What the hell is it!"

"Mmmy nammme isss Ose,alllpha leeedaer ooof thhhe Coeurl clllan, yooou thiinnk yooou cannn walllk innn herrrre?"

"It was by a mistake we didn't mean to come."

"Dooo I Loook likkke Immmm Dummb! Yooou cammme bbby choicccce!"

"Wow its true…Its smart…we'll leave now!"

"Yah we wont ever come back!"

"Thattt isss righht yooou wonnn't."

Ose jumped forward and landed on Rogger then and looked at him.John came up to help Roger by swinging at Ose but Ose glared at him and his body became completely imobile.Ose turned his attention back to Rogger. Then took its back claw and swipe his chest then bit him on the neck,and tossed him next to John. Ose jumped again on Rogger without and effort with its front claw sepearted Roggers legs from the rest of his body.John could do nothing but sit there and watch as Ose ripped apart Rogger from limb to limnb like a blood thristy monster.When Ose was done with Rogger it turned its attention to John and circled around him like a shark stalking its pray. However John was still imobile and couldn't move even a muscle.

"Yooou seee Hummman thisss isss thhe prrrice yoou pppay forrr walkkking onnn mmy territtory."

"You Bastard! Look what you did!"

Ose walked up to John and got in his face and lifted its claw and held him by the chin. "Lettts nottt bbbe callling nammes." Ose let go of him and pushed him on the ground and smiled with its fangs open."Mmay thhhe paccck feassst onnn yooou!" ..........

Picture of Ose:

Chapter 2
The Guild Manager

"WHAT!? WHAT DO YOU MEAN NO HUNTERS RETURNED!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!" The guild manager yelled and through one of her daggers at the news reporter.

"Easy there Naja im just doing my job…" the reporter said scared

"THEN GET YOUR ASS OUT OF MY OFFICE! DON'T COME BACK TILL YOU GOT SOME GOOD NEWS FOR ME!"

The news reporter ran like never he had before out of her office.

"Drake! Get in here!!!!" Drake, Naja asistant ran to her from his desk.

"Yes, Naja?"

"You have some good news for me right? BECAUSE I CAN SURE IN THE HELL USE SOME!"

"Profit has increased by 1.2 Naja."

"YAY! Money! Money! GIVE IT TO ME!"

"Umm no can do Naja its not for us to use…"

"WHAT THE HELL! Its my guild!"

"Yes, but…all the money is being put into the village like you said.."

"WHEN THE HELL I SAY THAT!"

"Yesterday Naja"

"I NEVER SAID SUCH!"

"You even signed it here…"

"WHO GIVES A DAMN ABOUT A STUPID PAPER!"

"The village.."

"WELL WHO FREAKEN CARES!"

"Everyone in the village this guild has done a lot to help people."

"WELL NO DIP DUMBASS, or eles we would have all these people asking us."

"Well im going back to my desk I got gold to count out the money today."

"YOU GO DO THAT! Leave me be!"

"Yes…Naja…" Drake went back down to the stairs and to his wood desk.

"WHAT THE HELL IS UP WITH TODAY GAH!"

"Naja we have some people that want to see you." Drake shouted.

Naja sighed " Send them in….."

Two guys came walking up the stairs dressed in battle armor,and had great swords on their backs.

"Can I help you SO I CAN GET ON WITH MY LIFE!"

"Lady Naja we came to report that we found something very…interesting…" one of the men said.

"OH REALLY! Do tell." Naja's pupils grew large.

"Well me and my friend were traveling in the swamp and we happen to cross a cave on a map that wasn't marked. However we did not go in it but we thought it mite be of importance." The other man said.

"Lets us talk more on this matter." Naja gestured and offered them a a chair

"Ok….." One of the men sat down.

"You see………" The other began

Chapter 3
Prelude

Seas invite in the evening sun
to light the somber abyss.
Clouds dance up with the heavens' stars,
chanting an air of joyous bliss.

Water fades back from blue to jade,
guiding young rainbows high.
Flowers bloom into red and whites,
quenching our hearts when they run dry.

Angels chained by a beast locked in slumber.
Sin washed away by the swift flow of time.

I may know the answers.
Journeys over snow and sand.
What twist in fate has brought us
to tread upon this land?

Blessed by light and the burden of shadow.
Souls abide to an endless desire.

I may know the answers,
though one question I still hear.
What twist in fate has brought us
to roads that run so near?

Distant worlds together.
Miracles from realms beyond.
The life light burns inside me
to sing to you this song.
To sing with you…


I jumped down, off the top of a large jagged rock set beside the edge of a cliff, landing in the soft, green grass. I stared into the clear blue sky, watching the clouds roll by. I gently pulled back my long black hair, while wipping off the dust that collected on my Kirin Armor. I slowly walked at the edge of the cliff, lost in the beauty of the world while the monstrous waves crashed against the wall, sending a light mist that covered my body. I took a deep breath and reached to take out my Pokke Flute from my pack. It was the treasure of my mothers, the present she passed to be before she passed of unknown cause. A disease that spread throughout this whole continent. My father always told me that I was the most beautiful women in all the land, being the calm and caring person I was. He said I always placed the well being of others in front of my own. Everyone said that I inherited all these characteristics from my mother, I always laugh when I thought about it.

I raised the tip of the flute to my mouth, then blew gently into it playing a series of notes, some high and some low. Once finished I returned it to it's spot in my pack as the wind started to pick up. The grass started to wave as the wind reached it's strongest, I had to hold onto the rock to stop myself form being blown away. The sound of a monstrous roar broke the peace as a fully grown Rathalos appeared in the sky. My hair was waving around as the wind only got stronger as the Rathalos turned in the air. My eyes widened as the wyvern got closer to the ground. It folded it's wings as it came down, the ground shook on impact. When the dust cleared, I noticed the Rathalos standing in front off in the distance. It started to walk towards her, each step shaking the ground. I didn't move, I held my ground. The rathalos approached my and leaned over, sniffing me. It opened it's mouth to reveal truly large and fearsome fangs. I stretched out my hand and started to pet the large beast. I felt the Rathalos's muscles become less tense, as I heard the low grumbling of the wyvern throughout the air.

"Don't you wish it was always like this? The world is so peaceful now, though it wasn't always like this. Please listen to my journey, the story of the Final Frontier...
-First person edit by Tiggy Thank you!-

-19 years before-

"Run faster we can't let them get us!" a hunter said running for his life

"They came out of nowhere! A whole swarm of them!"

"Gah wait get the hell off me!" A orange claw went through the back of one of the hunters and he fell to the ground.

"NO! Jack!" one of the hunters turned around and yelled.
Out of nowhere a velociprey jumped out of the brush, and tackled another hunter and cut his throat and continued the chase after the other. There was nowhere to run it was just a straight path with bushes on both sides unable to see what was lurking in them. Right as one of the velociprey jumped out the hunter slid underneath and slashed the raptor in the stomach killing it instantly. "I hope Mil'day Erika is safe!"
The hunter tripped over a root from a large tree and fell breaking his right leg. "Gah!" he yelled out in pain as five velociprey gathered around him. "Please be safe Erika…..GAHHHHHH!!!!"

Further up down the road Erika was running for her life with her newborn in her arms. Her breathing was getting heavy as she continued to run, and she knew she would be unable to continue running much longer. She over stepped and tripped over herself and slams her knee onto the dirt. However it didn't break her and she got back up trying to regain the speed she lost. She arrived at a large clearing area and it was a dead end as far as she could see. Quickly she hid the baby behind 3 huge boulders, and drew her dual blades.

Not far behind three raptors ran into the opening. Erika readied her blades into a striking position ready to strike at any second. Two of the raptors jumped at her and she ran forwards and dunked under both of them while slashing both her blades through them. Blood shot off in two different directions as she brought the blades back into striking position. Three more raptors weren't far behind and entered the battle themselves. Two of them jumped at her while one of them ran and tried to attack her while she was off guard. However Erika knew there plan and jumped backwards letting the two jumping raptors to hit each other killing themselves. The one running toward her picked up speeds and dove at her, she dodged barely but she felt blood on the side of her face where the raptor at cut her. She threw both her blades into the air and turned around catching both of them driving the blades through the raptors head.

She was getting tired and the velociprey knew this and kept going at her. She killed them all doing complex blade maneuvers but they just seemed endless. When she could no longer keep her breath she dropped both her blades and fell clenching her stomach. She had cuts all over her body, and her armor was covered in claw and teeth marks. The raptors ceased their movements and a bigger raptor walked in pushing both the smaller ones out of the way. "Damit the leader" Erika said under her voice. The Drome walked up to her and stared at her then with the blink of a eye before she could react its claw went straight through her stomach. She gasped and looked down at the claw then back at the boulders. "Please…be…safe….." The Drome pulled its claw out of her chest, and Erika passed into the void...

I know this sounds nitpicky but I think this one part would sound better if you said

quote LadyDragon

passed into the void...

Instead of without the "the".

No problem lady I know you'd do the same for me if you read my fanfic.

Ohh not dead after all, though will she make it back to a village for treatment?
That is the question
keep it up, great as always!

well I'm sad too say this is the first fanfic I've actually read... and It was great. I need to go read some other ones... I generally liked te first two chapters better than te third and forth I'm not sure how the first two and the last two tie together at all...

You have to submit it to the fanfic central first of all before you can start it. Now, I'm not too keen on closing it at the moment, but if I still see no entry by tomorrow, I'll be forced to close this thread until you submit it to the Fanfic Central Sticky Thread.