Mark Stretched his gaze wide and took a moment to feel the wind breezing through his dirty blonde hair. He clutched tightly to the ship steering wheel and sailed straight ahead. He took a glance over at his sister, elizabeth perched on a small barella next to the berring ropes of the sail. She was reading a book, mark leaned further from his steering to peek a glance at the colorful book title, Lost on in my dreams it read in dark blue clouded letters. " Elizabeth stop reading and come enjoy the breeze!" called mark smiling, eyes still full ahead of him. Elizabeth groaed softly but forced her book shut. She sat it on the barrell and walked over to the ropes. She touched there cold hard sides and grasped her hand to it then stepped on the bottom ropes. she let her self freely hang from the gap that was supposivily suppose to be a pertection between the ships edge, and the water. She let her self flee over the edge, feet and hands holding tight to the ropes as her body bolted out flying in the wind. She felt the breeze flim over her and smiled. " Beautiful isn't it?" she heard a voice say from behind. Elizabeth turned around to see her brother mark standing from the other end watching the sea too. " I'll say ". But then she relized something, something that scared her so much, she slipped and fell.

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Im Gonna Go On Anyway,

" Elizabeth!!" is all she heard as she faded into the water. she gulped in the nasty water and felt it skid down her throat. she tried not to choke but she couldn't help it. She coughed an coughed, which only took in more water. With all her might she bolted for the surface but faild. She tried one more time but had no good chance. She bolted around and then her foot hit something. It made a loud crack and she went under more. She saw a round looking thing with a gap hit the surface and the presure from it sent the water heading her way. But then, just then she felt something, something soft, nudging against her back and sailing her softly to the little circle. She surfaced and gulped in air. She saw mark with a rope, aparently attached to the little circle shaped object she was in. He pulled and pulled at it and with each pull elizabeth found her self getting closer to the boat, but she pulled back and with what was left of her voice called out " get..get the wheel!!". That was when mark realized nobody was sailing the ship. elizabeth yanked and cursed at the little round floating object around her but it was no use. She couldn't get out. The boat crashed against a rock and all ' heck ' broke loose.

Im still gonna go on :I

Tears rose in elizabeths eyes as she jurked and swaid. Mark couldn't of survived, not with his condishion. Elizabeth saw a hat in the water just under the ropes of the ship as it slowly sank down. Mark. She raced fast still attached to the boat and with all her might jurked straigh to the ropes. She Pulled on the hat only to revile marks head. His eyes wide open and pleeding for air. That's when elizabeth saw that mark was caught and cutting deeply into the ropes. She dived under kicking at the circle life saver raft off and headed deep down to the ropes were Mark's leg was tangled. She cut and kicked at the ropes till Mark's leg was free then they both floated to surface. Hugging each other tight they cried and cursed at there selfs for dumb deeds that had happened. But that's when they both felt. A silky skin slide across there legs. Shark.

[size=2]"Shark!!" squealed Elizabeth and thrust into marks arms. " just stay calm Elizabeth.." he said but even he was shaking. They felt another slide across there feet and in alarm started swimming as fast as they could. They could see a shiny gray fin high tailing it behind them and hurried to a mysteries island in the distance. " Go go!!" cried Elizabeth as she lunged forward, mark by her side. They stumbled on the island but not before mark let out a horrible " Ow!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!". The shark had nipped at his ankle and it was bleeding wildly. " Oh mark!" cried Elizabeth hugging him " I'll go try to find some of those healing herbs, you stay here!" and with that Elizabeth scurried away into the tall grass. Mark sat there supporting the back of his ankle, the blood poured and stained his hand but he didn't care. The ocean water that soaked his shorts sting ed and warned at the cut and mark just toddled it in his hand. Then all of a sudden a girl wearing a ripped up red and white flower skirt, red and white flower top flew out of the tall grass holding a spear. The skirt she was wearing had a long cut in the side so her leg stood out for breeze. She warningly toddled the spear on her shoulder aiming and slipping her aim every few seconds. Her hair was brown and had a flower in it, her face was pretty but trained and she had beautiful green eyes. She stamped forward and stare at me.
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This reminds me of sims 2 castaway...

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