FMA-Desert Kiss(Shounen-Ai)(Pg-13)(Critisism Wanted!!!)(Session 1 Finished...Session 2 Comming Soon! =3)

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luffyluffy A crisp pack of tobacco death NeoXtreme total posts: 9820 since: Jan 2006	Aug 24, 07 at 9:52am FMA-Desert Kiss(Shounen-Ai)(Pg-13)(Critisism Wanted!!!)(Session 1 Finished...Session 2 Comming Soon! =3)
	^ Picture that started it all! I got really bored... Its about Fullmetal Alchemist RoyXHughes I've been itching to write one of these forever. OK and if you complain I'll beat you with a cat. CHAPTER 1! "Come on Roy come on! You just have to see this!" Hughes said loudly dragging the dark haired man by his hand. He laughed "Alright Alright Maes stop pulling on my arm!" "Right right sorry !" They went on for a little longer when Hughes stopped pulling for a moment. "We're here..." Roy looked up and smiled. "Ishbal sure is lovely at night...isn't it Maes..." Hughes sat down and brought Roy down with him. Roy closed his eyes and let the soft rising and falling of Hughes's chest to lull him happy. Hughes smiled and put his hands up Roys shirt and rubbed his stomach soothingly. Roy opened his eyes and kissed Hughes's jawline. "Maes...?" "Hm?" "Why do we do this every night...?" Hughes looked down at the black haired man nestled deeply in his arms. "Because we love each other!" Roy blinked and stood up out of Hughes grip. "Love Eh?" A Devouis smirk formed on his face... "How could you be in love with me...When I do...THIS!" Roy tackles Hughes down onto the sand tickling him like nothing else. They laughed and rolled around in the sand before Roy pinned him with his arm. His eyes were alight and they darted around like crazy. GO! Hughes put a hand on Roys cheek and Roy drew close. They pushed there mouths on top of each others eagerly drinking the other in. They broke the kiss Roy collapsed into Hughes's chest both of them panting slightly. "Lets go back" Hughes led them both back to the camp hand in hand. They found Roys tent. "Well here you are...i have to go start my rounds now...I'll see you later." Roy nodded and gave Hughes a tight happy hug. "Night Roy!" "Night Maes!" Roy threw himself in the pile of blankets on the corner and drifted off into a restless sleep. Now if you must know...People in the Military must never fall in love with other people in the Military. Roy and Hughes had especially broken this rule. They were in love..and they were both men. If Fuhrer Bradly found out he'd have them both thrown out of the military for sure... Roy opened his eyes and sighed... How long can me and Maes go on with this charade...i just don't know anymore... He then closed his eyes and settled into a fitfull sleep. OK and that's the end of the first chapter if people like it I'll go on! Later Loves! Edit:This is my first time doing this so be easy on my soul... Edit 2:Also you can give pointers just no flaming Pweezeys! Edit 3:And no posts saying: "3WWWWW I G4Y THR34D!" Edit 4:Sorry about the Spam War last night peoples!!1 Edit 5:Now at the beginning of every chapter there will be a HUghesXRoy picture. I've got complaints that People couldn't imagine Roy or Hughes so now you of Pictures of them! Enjoy! This message was edited by luffyluffy on Aug 24 2007. This message was edited by luffyluffy on Aug 24 2007. This message was edited by luffyluffy on Aug 24 2007. This message was edited by luffyluffy on Aug 24 2007. This message was edited by luffyluffy on Aug 24 2007. This message was edited by luffyluffy on Aug 24 2007. This message was edited by luffyluffy on Aug 24 2007. This message was edited by luffyluffy on Aug 25 2007. This message was edited by luffyluffy on Aug 25 2007. This message was edited by luffyluffy on Aug 25 2007. This message was edited by luffyluffy on Aug 29 2007. This message was edited by luffyluffy on Aug 29 2007. This message was edited by luffyluffy on Sep 10 2007. This message was edited by luffyluffy on Sep 22 2007. This message was edited by luffyluffy on Sep 29 2007. This message was edited by luffyluffy on Oct 19 2007. This message was edited by luffyluffy on Oct 30 2007. This message was edited by luffyluffy on Nov 14 2007. This message was edited by luffyluffy on Dec 17 2007. ------------------- Code Geass: BOKU WA ORENJI-KUN
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the sims addict no-stoppin-me-now since: Jul 2007	Aug 24, 07 at 2:18pm re: FMA-Desert Kiss(Shounen-Ai)(Pg-13)(Critisism Wanted!!!)(Session 1 Finished...Session 2 Comming Soon! =3)
	Preaty good! Do some more!
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luffyluffy A crisp pack of tobacco death NeoXtreme total posts: 9820 since: Jan 2006	Aug 24, 07 at 3:37pm re: FMA-Desert Kiss(Yaoi)
	CHAPTER 2 Roy opened his eyes to the smell of gun smoke. He hated that sme-WAIT! Another smell broke threw the others! "Hey!" Hughes said cheerfully who was sitting down across from Roy. Roy blinked "M-Maes...what are you doing here?" Hughes just laughed "Good Morning to you too Roy!" Roy sniffed the air "You got me coffee?" Again Hughes smiled and pulled out the steaming mug of liquid from behind his back. Roy sat up and took it from his hands and smelled the present aroma drifting up from the drink. "French Vanilla with a piece of White Chocolate...just the way you like it!" Roy smiled and raised the mug to his lips. "Oh YUM! Thanks a lot Maes...Its so good!" Hughes laughed and took the cup from Roys grasp and brought it to his own lips. "Yes it is!" Roy ripped the cup from Hughes's grasp succeeding only in burning himself. "BGDHsTGDhds jfesjgrdatuhytfuaj lhGHJTGJHG FHGDRTFLGTYUfd" Roy screamed jumping up. Hughes started to laugh again and Roy proceeded to scream at him. "DONT MAKE ME TORCH YOU!!!" Later in the afternoon Roy was send to the front lines. "Dont die out there!" Hughes would call. Roy would only raise his hand before running off only the battlefield. Currently he was hiding behind a wall. A few Ishbalan Rebels firing on an Amestrian Squad. he looked out from behind his hiding place. 1...2...3...4 men. He readied his fingers and then jumped out from behind his hiding place. *SNAP! SNAP! SNAP! SNAP!* They never had a chance. They all few to the ground there skin crackling gently. Roy not wanting to see the carnage immediately turned around and walked back to his camp. This message was edited by luffyluffy on Aug 24 2007. This message was edited by luffyluffy on Aug 24 2007. This message was edited by luffyluffy on Aug 25 2007. This message was edited by luffyluffy on Aug 25 2007. This message was edited by luffyluffy on Sep 22 2007. This message was edited by luffyluffy on Oct 19 2007. ------------------- Code Geass: BOKU WA ORENJI-KUN
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the sims addict no-stoppin-me-now since: Jul 2007	Aug 24, 07 at 3:49pm re: FMA-Desert Kiss(Shounen-Ai)(Pg-13)(Critisism Wanted!!!)(Session 1 Finished...Session 2 Comming Soon! =3)
	Your doing preatty good! Although I think you should make the chapters a bit longer.
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luffyluffy A crisp pack of tobacco death NeoXtreme total posts: 9820 since: Jan 2006	Aug 24, 07 at 4:25pm re: FMA-Desert Kiss(Yaoi)
	CHAPTER 3! Roy plopped down on a rock and sighed. "Damn..." He said softly taking a drink from his canteen. Then he pulled out his pocket watch and opened it. "High noon...Double Damn..." He sighed again stood up and continued walking. Back at the camp Hughes was sitting in the sand his leg irritably fidgeting. "DAMN IT! Where is he?!" He muttered under his breath. "If you must know I'm right here Maes..." A thin wispy voice whispered in his ear. He spun around his eyes happy and alight. "ROY!" "Hey there Maes!" They embraced each other like Brothers. "DONT EVER DO THAT AGAIN!" Hughes screamed "Alright Maes Alright...I wont do it again...Now come on...Dinner time!" Hughes suddenly smiled again. "YAY FOOD!" They both laughed. The Mess Hall was-Of course-A mess. The both got there dinner and sat down in the least crowded table. Roy poked his chicken with his fork. It jiggled. "EWWWWWWW!!!!!!! THAT IS SO NASTY!!!!" Hughes taking a leaf from Roys book immediately threw his out. Back at Roys tent Hughes gave Roy a tiny farewell kiss. "See you later tonight?" "Alright Maes!" Hughes kissed him again before running off to his own tent. This message was edited by luffyluffy on Aug 24 2007. This message was edited by luffyluffy on Aug 25 2007. This message was edited by luffyluffy on Sep 22 2007. This message was edited by luffyluffy on Oct 19 2007. ------------------- Code Geass: BOKU WA ORENJI-KUN
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the sims addict no-stoppin-me-now since: Jul 2007	Aug 24, 07 at 4:31pm re: FMA-Desert Kiss(Shounen-Ai)(Pg-13)(Critisism Wanted!!!)(Session 1 Finished...Session 2 Comming Soon! =3)
	Good!
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De Khome Gon Ready for the random... high on "N" total posts: 773 since: Jul 2007	Aug 24, 07 at 5:49pm re: FMA-Desert Kiss(Shounen-Ai)(Pg-13)(Critisism Wanted!!!)(Session 1 Finished...Session 2 Comming Soon! =3)
	This is a great story, luffy. ------------------- "Why do you always feel it's necessary to stir things up?" -Jin
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luffyluffy A crisp pack of tobacco death NeoXtreme total posts: 9820 since: Jan 2006	Aug 24, 07 at 5:53pm re: FMA-Desert Kiss(Yaoi)
	Thankies everyones! CHAPTER 4 Roy stuck out his head and whisted. Hughes looked around and whisted back. Roy starts to jog across the sand running to Hughes he playfully tackled him sending them both flying into the sand. Silently kissing each other for about a minute before helping each other up. "I love you..."HUghes sais breathlessly "I love you too..." Roy returned in an equally breathless voice Then walked slowly Hughes arm around Roys waist Roys head on HUghes's shoulder. They both sat down on the sand Hughes resting his cheek on the top of Roys head. "Maes...I don't know how long we can go on with this..its getting harder and harder everyday..." "Maybe we should te-" "THATS NOT AN OPTION MAES!!" Hughes was taken aback at Roys harsh words. When Roy say the sadness in HUghes eyes he said softly "I Sorry Maes...i don't know what came over me..." Hughes leaned down and kissed Roys neck making him giggle. Then Hughes began to sing Roys favorite song: "Your fragile, folded wings Are just tired from the pure blue sky You don't have to force your smiles for anyone It's okay to smile...for yourself. Hearing your sweet voice didn't always hurt It's too late to block it from the inside I want to take back our time, but luck and karma are against me There are no words, but your eyes can't hide what you want to say I don't even know anymore Try to bury it deep down, okay? We don't need that sky if we're free to swim Even if you won't talk about yesterday I'll still be there to meet you tomorrow Your fragile, folded wings Are just tired from the pure blue sky You don't have to force your smiles for anyone It's okay to smile...for yourself." Roy smiled and pushed Hughes face up towards his own before kissing him gently. Then suddenly there was a camera flash and they both jolted apart panic spread across there faces. They quickly stood up and ran back to there respective camps. There was no goodnight kiss that night This message was edited by luffyluffy on Aug 24 2007. This message was edited by luffyluffy on Aug 24 2007. This message was edited by luffyluffy on Aug 25 2007. This message was edited by luffyluffy on Sep 22 2007. ------------------- Code Geass: BOKU WA ORENJI-KUN
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De Khome Gon Ready for the random... high on "N" total posts: 773 since: Jul 2007	Aug 24, 07 at 6:26pm re: FMA-Desert Kiss(Shounen-Ai)(Pg-13)(Critisism Wanted!!!)(Session 1 Finished...Session 2 Comming Soon! =3)
	Photo evidence. ------------------- "Why do you always feel it's necessary to stir things up?" -Jin
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the sims addict no-stoppin-me-now since: Jul 2007	Aug 24, 07 at 6:45pm re: FMA-Desert Kiss(Shounen-Ai)(Pg-13)(Critisism Wanted!!!)(Session 1 Finished...Session 2 Comming Soon! =3)
	Good job! they keep getting better!
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luffyluffy A crisp pack of tobacco death NeoXtreme total posts: 9820 since: Jan 2006	Aug 24, 07 at 8:41pm re: FMA-Desert Kiss(Shounen-Ai)(Pg-13)(Critisism Wanted!!!)(Session 1 Finished...Session 2 Comming Soon! =3)
	OK so im done for tonight... so how do you like the sorty so far? ------------------- Code Geass: BOKU WA ORENJI-KUN
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the sims addict no-stoppin-me-now since: Jul 2007	Aug 24, 07 at 8:59pm re: FMA-Desert Kiss(Shounen-Ai)(Pg-13)(Critisism Wanted!!!)(Session 1 Finished...Session 2 Comming Soon! =3)
	Preatty good!
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luffyluffy A crisp pack of tobacco death NeoXtreme total posts: 9820 since: Jan 2006	Aug 25, 07 at 4:36pm re: FMA-Desert Kiss(Yaoi)(Pg-13)
	CHAPTER 5 Roy woke up from his shallow sleep scared and alone. His eyes darted around scanning everything. He got changed and took a step outside the Ishbalan sun blinding him almost instantly. Some soldiers were looking at pictures when they saw Roy go over to him they quickly moved out of the way. One was foolish enough to drop his picture on the ground. Roy bend down and picked it up before falling to the ground his face stricken in sadness crying softly. "Y-You saw it...didn't you Roy..." Roy looked his lover in the eye before jumping up and running to him tears flowing freely from his eyes. "Hey now Hey Now Shhhh Shhhh no crying." Roy looked up and sniffled. "We probably deserve to be discharged..." Roy leaned his head onto Hughes chest and listened to his breathing, He was crying too... "Execuse me Sirs!" They both looked toward the source of the voice. Riza Hawkeye. "Oh Its only you R-Riza..." Roy said softly "are you hear to tell us off?" She shook her head. "I have a message from the Fuhrer. The both of you are here and on discharged from the military" Roy sobbed again "Unless!" Roy looked up at her "Unless you can spend one month apart. if you can you may show affection during all hours of the day with out penalty." Roy was bewildered "Let us think about it OK Lt.Hawkeye?" Hughes said softly rubbing Roys back. She nodded and walked a distance off still watching them. "What do you want to do Roy?" "I-I don't want to leave the military..." "Then We'll-" "and i don't know if i can keep away from you even for a month." "We have to try!" "Yes...Lets try Maes...Lets try" Hughes sat Roy down and walked over to Hawkeye. "Well sir?" Hughes nodded. "very well sir..." and with that Hughes turned around and went back to Roy embracing him and calming his heart. This message was edited by luffyluffy on Aug 25 2007. This message was edited by luffyluffy on Aug 25 2007. This message was edited by luffyluffy on Aug 25 2007. This message was edited by luffyluffy on Oct 19 2007. ------------------- Code Geass: BOKU WA ORENJI-KUN
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luffyluffy A crisp pack of tobacco death NeoXtreme total posts: 9820 since: Jan 2006	Aug 25, 07 at 11:46pm re: FMA-Desert Kiss(Yaoi)(Pg-13)
	Chapter 6 "You have one last evening together. Please use it to your will." Rizas words rang in Hughes ears... "SO Roy...what do you want to do?" Roy looked up and nuzzled his lover "Want to feed each other dinner?" "Hells YA!" In the overly messy Mess Hall They both got lunches and sat down at the most crowded table. "Open WIDEEEEE" Roy opened his mouth and before he could contend Hughes tackled him and happily french kissed Roy. He melted. "M-Maes that was wonderful..." HUghes smiled and kissed him softly. "SO what do you want to do now?" "lets go back to my tent and cuddle!" when they got to Roys tent Hughes took off his jacket and laid down on the pile of blankets looking like a sexy muffin. Roy couldn't help but drool a little. he took off his jacket and joined his lover in bed. They cuddled awkwardly for a few moments before they both settled into a natural rhythm. Hughes rolled over pinning Roy gently. Roy threaded his fingers threw Hughes collar before yanking him down. After making out for what seemed hours Lt.Hawkeye walked into Roys tent. Both men had managed to get both there shirts off and the heat from both threr breaths has fogged up Hughes's glasses. "Its Time..." Hughes looked down at Roy who was sad. "I Promise that we'll get threw this Roy...WIll you promise?" "I Promise Maes..." They hugged each other tightly. HUghes got up and put his shirt and jacket back on before walking out. This message was edited by luffyluffy on Aug 26 2007. This message was edited by luffyluffy on Aug 26 2007. ------------------- Code Geass: BOKU WA ORENJI-KUN
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the sims addict no-stoppin-me-now since: Jul 2007	Aug 25, 07 at 11:50pm re: FMA-Desert Kiss(Shounen-Ai)(Pg-13)(Critisism Wanted!!!)(Session 1 Finished...Session 2 Comming Soon! =3)
	Preaty good! Again!
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