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hyronsilver true seeker total posts: 1196 since: May 2003	Jan 15, 06 at 3:28am ^ SOMEONE DELETE THIS THREAD GAWD UGH
	Log in to remove this sponsored message *Author's Intro:* (10.15.08) I started this little thread about three years ago. And it's been a hell of a three years. Most of the poems on pages 1-2 are kinda sophomoric. I just started writing. But trust me, in those terribly written words, I felt personal truth. Let's fast forward, to my new stuff.It's all about anger, frustration, isolation, self-pity, human nature-pity, and love. Always love. I hope you can find yourself to enjoy my poems of introverted nullification! *Author's Commentary:*(7.21.09) Hey, if you read my stuff, be sure to comment or something. That'd be super nice of you. __________________________________________________ SAVE THE DAY A thread or less than one bound me to this reality you are in my head no one else is there not even me you kill me everyone is leaving why is this my fate? my best friend his lips on yours the thought haunts me brokenhearted, broken spirits life in abandon please, save the day... my life depends on it. Edit: Sep 08, 11 1:50am poetry -------------------
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hyronsilver true seeker total posts: 1196 since: May 2003	Jan 19, 06 at 2:24am ^ re: SOMEONE DELETE THIS THREAD GAWD UGH
	TRUTH IN YOUR LIES is he beating me in your heart? another triathalon for your love I'm a geek, not an athlete what do you want? I just want you to say my name again not as aquiatences, but as special friends like it was last summer like it was last summer what was it like to break away? was it a relief? Did it hurt all day? Did I leave a mark in you? Was your lies true? -------------------
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hyronsilver true seeker total posts: 1196 since: May 2003	Jan 19, 06 at 2:37am ^ re: SOMEONE DELETE THIS THREAD GAWD UGH
	this one is pretty straight forward. BED PHILOSOPHY I sit in bed, it's half past two, I can't bleeping sleep it's because of you your smile melts me, your deep brown eyes kill, I don't wanna sleep, there is no will, I wanna think of you, the brown eyed girl, the one who helps me dream during the day, and procrastinate for a while, I hear your pretty voice, saying my name with that whiny tone, like I heard last week, over the phone, I love you so much, and it's a quarter 'til three, and all I can think is, ARE YOU THINKING OF ME? -------------------
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hyronsilver true seeker total posts: 1196 since: May 2003	Jan 19, 06 at 2:45am ^ re: SOMEONE DELETE THIS THREAD GAWD UGH
	SUGGESTION BOX how about a suggestion? please listen to me, Dump the other guy, you were made for me, we have brown eyes, use our left hands, same color hair, and both in band, and you love me, but not in that way, I wish you would, cuz that would be the day, all my poems are for you, but cannot be read, for if they were, my social life is dead, Just ignore my again, tommorows the same, another Thursday in winter, but, please remember my name. -------------------
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hyronsilver true seeker total posts: 1196 since: May 2003	Jan 19, 06 at 3:00am ^ re: SOMEONE DELETE THIS THREAD GAWD UGH
	The Apathetic Conglomeration of Sub Average Citizens just three word I wanna hear, scream them out or whisper in my ear, you are the one I want them from, before I face another setting sun, does the love triangle kill me, apparently, I can see, I'm not the one you'll ever choose, why do I try? What's the use? Leave me here to stare across the room, I feel the coldness crawl with doom, your eye catches mine, you turn away, this is one of those damn days, -------------------
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hyronsilver true seeker total posts: 1196 since: May 2003	Jan 19, 06 at 3:09am ^ re: SOMEONE DELETE THIS THREAD GAWD UGH
	THE HATE POEM (don't look at this if you are a christian) i bet your boyfriend shit his pants, bleeps his dad, pisses on his mom, and molests his cat, I bet your boyfriend fellates kids, bleeps old people, bleeps goats, and bleeps bleeped people. I bet yor boyfriend touches his sister, shits on his mom's chest, licks his uncles dick, and sucks on cow breasts. bleep YER BOYFRIEND! bleep YER BOYFRIEND! bleep YER BOYFRIEND! but I don't even know his name. -------------------
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hyronsilver true seeker total posts: 1196 since: May 2003	Jan 19, 06 at 3:13am ^ re: SOMEONE DELETE THIS THREAD GAWD UGH
	LOVE TRIANGLE you are on top, he's next to you on the right, I'm on the left, wanting to be Mr. Right. You are so beautiful, he wants you cuz yer older, why are you so chilled? Why did the room get colder? unbelief is your game, All I say is truth, but why do I talk so much, when my words are no use? you will be mine, I'll find a way, bleep Mr. Right, why can't we run away? -------------------
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hyronsilver true seeker total posts: 1196 since: May 2003	Jan 19, 06 at 3:21am ^ re: SOMEONE DELETE THIS THREAD GAWD UGH
	TOOTH AND FAIL I was told you loved me, but that's a load of shit, I can't like a girl, who can't admit, that she can't stay in love, that she's always with two guys, I'm always the second of two, and all you say are lies, fickle hearts and broken lust, something I've seen before, in my friends broken eyes, I see you're a whore, so before I walk off, there's only one thing to say, why love someone, when you know they're gone the next day? -------------------
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hyronsilver true seeker total posts: 1196 since: May 2003	Jan 19, 06 at 3:30am ^ re: SOMEONE DELETE THIS THREAD GAWD UGH
	TIZZYBOMB i was feeling her, she was feeling me, I couldn't ask her out, what's wrong with me? im way too shy, to steal her heart, it belongs to him, and I gotta fart, she's the one, I know she's right, I'll get her number, and she'll get a call tonight, Maybe we'll talk, like old friends, or I'll say something stupid, and the call will end, i was feeling her, she was feeling me, I couldn't ask her out, what's wrong with me? -------------------
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hyronsilver true seeker total posts: 1196 since: May 2003	Jan 19, 06 at 3:42am ^ re: SOMEONE DELETE THIS THREAD GAWD UGH
	GRAPEVINE SYNDROME terrorize my social life, why did you draw that knife, why did you, why did you ruin it all? why did you, why did you make me fall? you heard it through the grapevine no doubt, what you hear, you gotta let out, why did you, why did you ruin it all? why did you, why did you make me fall? -------------------
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hyronsilver true seeker total posts: 1196 since: May 2003	Jan 19, 06 at 3:51am ^ re: SOMEONE DELETE THIS THREAD GAWD UGH
	GRAPEVINE SYNDROME/TIZZYBOMB II PART ONE: How's it feel? when its too real? when their words kill? when you become steel? they critisize the choices made, like OCMS is a bleeping game, like we are freaks for being in lust, because I am with you, why can't they be just? the world is bleeped, I hate them all, but I still love you, you are an early fall... PART TWO: I stopped feeling her, she quit feeling me, I know this ain't right, it's only been two weeks, I want her, but not like yesterday, why is this so wrong? why am I so far away? seperated, by a ply of walls, I would break up, I ain't got the balls, no beauty, left in our love, no way I can feel, the way I was... -------------------
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hyronsilver true seeker total posts: 1196 since: May 2003	Jan 19, 06 at 3:55am ^ re: SOMEONE DELETE THIS THREAD GAWD UGH
	damn, I hope you guys like this stuff. I wrote almost all this in less than 3 hours. I'll make more tommorow. -------------------
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hyronsilver true seeker total posts: 1196 since: May 2003	Jan 19, 06 at 4:07am ^ re: SOMEONE DELETE THIS THREAD GAWD UGH
	TEEN WEINIE (suggestive poem) yeah when it's hard, really stiff, always bulging out, gets on my nerves, want it to go away, always in my way, proding everyone, always in their ass (well, since that last one really wasn't a poem, here's one) BEING A TEEN WEINIE geeks get no girls, that's what my brother says, but I got the cutest one, and she wanted to be in my bed, then she ran away, and took off with my best friend, being a teen weinie, always getting to my head, she had brown eyes, that melts your heart away, and a smile that posions you for the rest of the day, she was mine, and I'm a bleeping geek! suck on that big brother, we've been going out a week. -------------------
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hyronsilver true seeker total posts: 1196 since: May 2003	Jan 20, 06 at 12:42am ^ re: SOMEONE DELETE THIS THREAD GAWD UGH
	THE RAIN, THE LIGHT, AND THE WINDOW how did I survive? It was a war, being alone, ripped and torn. she hated me, as so I did her, but then we cryed, it was over, the rain fell down, so hard that night, another brokenheart, another inward fight, move along soul, are you okay? you should be, you survived another day -------------------
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hyronsilver true seeker total posts: 1196 since: May 2003	Jan 20, 06 at 12:49am ^ re: SOMEONE DELETE THIS THREAD GAWD UGH
	BEFORE AND AGAIN NO MORE! LEAVE IT ALONE! I HATE YOU NOW! bleep THE PHONE! bleep YOUR EYES! bleep YOUR WORDS! bleep THE WORLD! bleep YOUR CURSE! I HATE YOUR FRIENDS! I HATE YOUR GUY! ALL I CAN DO, IS SIT AND FRY?! i see your smile, as it crosses your face, he makes you happy, I've been replaced, I need you now, more than ever before, and when I ask, don't throw me to the floor, I didn't mean, all I said, I now wish that, my words are dead, you call me, just a friend, but that's not, how we should end, I think you're cool, I love you so, but you leave me, no where to go -------------------
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