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LightningThedgehog Effloresce of Love Hooked on Neo total posts: 4440 since: Apr 2003	Dec 27, 04 at 7:56pm ^ [Poetry/Song] Before Today Came [Comments Accepted]
	Log in to remove this sponsored message All right, this is my poems...Well, the thread with my poems. oO; Before Today Came Like every other day you left me behind Like every other day you shunned me Like every other day you told me lies Like every other day you turned away In this world there are a million truths But just as many lies In this world you said I won't make a difference Even though I saved your life Before today came I used to smile Before today came I was tantalized by your words But that was the melody of yesterday And not the tune of today I tried to shield you from danger The incoming bullets and slashing swords But you pushed me off And ran away In this world there are more lies than truths To use against a person In this world the truth was that you didn't want me near And the lie was that you did - - - - - That was my first poem. ^^ Not the best, but I was...a little bored. Two words that describe me: Hopeless Romantic Live with it. This message was edited by LightningThedgehog on Jan 22 2005. ------------------- . poetry \| art \| fanfics .
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DarkAngelsRhapsody Art: Music: Poetry: Three sins Resident Neo total posts: 2688 since: Nov 2001	Dec 30, 04 at 5:33am ^ re: [Poetry] .Before Today Came. .Comments Accepted.
	It is good to be a hopeless romantic sometimes. Just don't become too hopeless.. ------------------- ~Angel Wings~ Even the darkest Days Can Change!
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LightningThedgehog Effloresce of Love Hooked on Neo total posts: 4440 since: Apr 2003	Jan 16, 05 at 12:47am ^ Hold You Tight
	Heh, I'm always too hopeless...Kind of. >_< -------- Hold You Tight -------- The snow is falling Draping around my shivering shoulders But I know that I'm lucky And you're not quite so Stowed away in a dark corner Dwelling in your own misery You cry yourself to sleep And forget that I'm ever there Let me hold you tight And never let you go Until the earth stops turning And the sun dies out Let me embrace you tight My arms around you Until your heart thaws And happiness dominates all The stars are twinkling above But I can't feel their heat Later on I realize I'm not the only one A mournful silence of tears Has become your life A million icy fragments Has become your eyes Let me hold you tight And comfort you when all is wrong Until the day grows old And the planets drift away Let me embrace you tight My hands pressed against yours Until the tears begin to dry And life starts anew -------- Yaaay, 2 poems... ------------------- . poetry \| art \| fanfics .
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Chad Legendary Seeker neocrs total posts: 16123 neopoints: 24405 GameGrep pts: 1360 since: Dec 2004	Jan 20, 05 at 11:23pm ^ re: [Poetry] .Before Today Came. .Comments Accepted.
	Wow that was good, I stink at poems. -------------------
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LightningThedgehog Effloresce of Love Hooked on Neo total posts: 4440 since: Apr 2003	Jan 23, 05 at 2:50am ^ re: [Poetry/Song] Before Today Came [Comments Accepted]
	Thank you! They're much more like songs, however. I really can't write a decent poem... ------------------- . poetry \| art \| fanfics .
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catastraphe Remember what made you strong. Resident Neo total posts: 2562 since: May 2003	Jan 23, 05 at 6:49am ^ re: [Poetry/Song] Before Today Came [Comments Accepted]
	it's awesome, I right books not poetry but yours is awesome! ------------------- Memory is a burden, To forget; Sin. Remembrance: The eternal tragedy.
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LightningThedgehog Effloresce of Love Hooked on Neo total posts: 4440 since: Apr 2003	Jan 24, 05 at 4:19am ^ Chronicles of Tears
	Thank you! I write books, also, but I'm running out of inspiration so I'm writing poems for fun. ^^ Chronicles of Tears ------ A drop A river A lake of salty liquid Why do we cry? A hug An embrace A maze of intertwined arms Was that hug real? I cry because of you Pondering my existence With what meager love I have I hugged you for the first time And last time tonight Because a promise broken Is a heart shattered A word spoken A sentence An essay that pulls the heartstrings Did it change me that much? A face A recognizable face Someone that I looked to for comfort Destroyed my soul? I cry because I have no one Because you're no longer there Maybe I'll find the sun soon I wanted to say goodbye A promise uttered can never be taken back Run away but the words will stick Engraved in my mind forever ------ No, I'm not depressed and sad. I'm just...having one of my lovey moments...stares ------------------- . poetry \| art \| fanfics .
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Slayerholic17 You're just so pretty in your pain... Hooked on Neo since: Aug 2003	Jan 25, 05 at 5:06am ^ re: [Poetry/Song] Before Today Came [Comments Accepted]
	Romantic poems are my favorite kinds, especially the sadder romantic ones. Yours are well written, I reallly like them. My favorite is Hold You Tight. It's very cute, and I can really relate to it. Great work. ------------------- Our lives begin to end the day we become slient about things that matter.
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Zott SoniChao Uh... I like Zelda too. starting to like it total posts: 62 since: Feb 2005	Mar 15, 05 at 10:00pm ^ re: [Poetry/Song] Before Today Came [Comments Accepted]
	I agree with what everyone said. I really love your beautiful poems. I sure wish I could write love poems! They're the best kind! Your poems are so beautiful and touching. If there is a song to it, what would the tune be? BTW, I like you're old banner alot. But the new one is cute, too.
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KittyBijou Just call me Lutearina. :3 no-stoppin-me-now total posts: 261 since: May 2003	Aug 24, 05 at 5:22am ^ re: [Poetry/Song] Before Today Came [Comments Accepted]
	I love them! I started writing in fourth grade. Now, on Monday I'm entering seventh! I write poetry, books, and songs...and you are quite the writer! I should post my poem, "Moonlit Bay" sometime...I wrote it in sixth grade. ------------------- You may know me as Lutearina! has no midget signature to put because of the size limit O:
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KittyBijou Just call me Lutearina. :3 no-stoppin-me-now total posts: 261 since: May 2003	Aug 27, 05 at 4:06pm ^ re: [Poetry/Song] Before Today Came [Comments Accepted]
	I love your stories, too! I like Sonic and Furuba...and HARVEST MOON! Ok sorry that was obvious... ; ------------------- You may know me as Lutearina! has no midget signature to put because of the size limit O:
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