Le Bleu Café : A Writers' Gathering Place - Page 27

Well, I commented on yours, zoo zom.

I don't think I've ever posted in here before (if I have, feel free to shoot tell me), but I'd like to point out my current story, The Human Race's Last Hope. It's about a girl named Leena who has special powers that can save the human race, and these powers are wanted by Damian, who is a childhood friend gone bad...kinda. :L She's protected by Damian's younger brother, Mark, and...stuff. The plot's kinda...loose, atm, mostly because I'm just playing around with Leena and Mark's personalities while trying to get the exact plot down. I nearly have the next chapter finished, though I highly doubt I'll finish it today (even though I desperately want to D: ).

But yeah, it's my baby, and, while I'd prefer criticism, which I have only gotten like, 1 post of in the entire thing so far, right now I'd almost prefer a "THIS IS GUD MOAR PLZ". Note, I said almost.

What I'd REALLY love is criticism/telling me things you like/don't like about the story, especially the characters and their personality traits.

Sixpack and Liveslikebeth? I read your stories and thay sound verry good. Not my type of thing, but still good.

They are all perfect in my opinion, but not my type of thing. I'm more into fantacy but that doesn't stop me seeing that your stories are really interesting.

I've written a few chapters of two stories and no one has taken interest enough to continue them D:

I would appreciate at least some constructive criticism.

quote Jameson user

I've written a few chapters of two stories and no one has taken interest enough to continue them D:

I would appreciate at least some constructive criticism.

Coming write up!
u c wut i did thr?

yeah post a link

quote Pokemon_Spyro_fan

yeah post a link

I managed to find my more recent story just now: Scarred

EDIT: And here's my older one: Hand of Quietus