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VarietyBlack Solitude: waste of a man. high on "N" total posts: 769 since: Aug 2011	Dec 03, 12 at 6:43pm ^ Reflections {An Original Poem}[Feedback?]
	Log in to remove this advertisement I stare into the mirror; My reflection stares back at me. And though it may sound ludicrous, I wonder what reflections see. When our reflections look in the mirror, Do they see us looking back? Or do they have their own reflection That they're looking at? Does that reflection have a reflection And that reflection have its own? And does that reflection have a reflection, Or is it left alone? My questions can never be answered About this mirrored land. No one can answer my questions; Only reflections can. So I'll just sit and ponder What the man in the mirror sees, And wonder if what he's seeing Staring back at him is me. Just a note, guys, I wrote this poem in the eleventh grade; we were supposed to write something within some parameters the teacher had given us, and, though I was off the mark a bit, I got full points. She said she enjoyed it, so I thought I'd share it with everyone. Feedback is more than welcome; it's encouraged! poetry ------------------- Come try your hand at the Monotype Challenge! Read and critique Umbra, winner of four Pokéfiction Awards! -------------------
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Ellipsis seek-o-holic since: Mar 2012	Dec 04, 12 at 2:26pm ^ re: Reflections {An Original Poem}[Feedback?]
	It's a good poem. You deserved full marks. It gets a little repetitive, though, what with how every stanza just seems to be a restatement of the one before it. Try to work on this, but otherwise you're a good poet.
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VarietyBlack Solitude: waste of a man. high on "N" total posts: 769 since: Aug 2011	Dec 06, 12 at 3:03pm ^ re: Reflections {An Original Poem}[Feedback?]
	quote Ellipsis It's a good poem. You deserved full marks. It gets a little repetitive, though, what with how every stanza just seems to be a restatement of the one before it. Try to work on this, but otherwise you're a good poet. I threw it together as a product of procrastination, so repetition was bound to be an issue! Haha! I thank you for the compliment, however; it means a lot. ------------------- Come try your hand at the Monotype Challenge! Read and critique Umbra, winner of four Pokéfiction Awards! -------------------
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Ellipsis seek-o-holic since: Mar 2012	Dec 06, 12 at 3:07pm ^ re: Reflections {An Original Poem}[Feedback?]
	quote VarietyBlack quote Ellipsis It's a good poem. You deserved full marks. It gets a little repetitive, though, what with how every stanza just seems to be a restatement of the one before it. Try to work on this, but otherwise you're a good poet. I threw it together as a product of procrastination, so repetition was bound to be an issue! Haha! I thank you for the compliment, however; it means a lot. You're very welcome. I think everyone procrastinates from time to time, and for a product of that, it is very good.
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