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Gelatin_Rhino Completely Incomplete threadnought total posts: 588 since: Feb 2007	Apr 17, 09 at 1:29am ^ [Poems] by Gelatin Rhino C&C are wanted =D
	Log in to remove this sponsored message I'm not too good at poetry. But I've had a lot of emotions lately, and poetry is really the way I can get them all out. They will all mostly be about my life. So. 1. You're permanently on my mind Get out of my head Please? You're clogging my thoughts With all of your perfect words you've said My memory is filled with your smile, Your laugh. I can't think straight when I'm around you All my surroundings vanish And I wait for you To look at me So I'm on you're mind. I wish I didn't feel this way Because you're my best friend I try to wipe my thoughts about you from my head But I can't I think you're permanetly on my mind. Eh it's probably mad crappy. Edit: May 06, 09 ------------------- Now I lay me down to sleep, I pray my heart you choose to keep. And if I die before I wake, all of me is yours to take.
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Gelatin_Rhino Completely Incomplete threadnought total posts: 588 since: Feb 2007	Apr 17, 09 at 2:08am ^ re: [Poems] by Gelatin Rhino C&C are wanted =D
	I'm not a good rhymer, btw. So probably only like 2 are going to rhyme 2. Keep me sane You're tanned skin, made tanner against your bright blue shirt You're brown eyes filled with excitement You're bright smile You're deep chuckle All of those things wrapped into one, Keep me sane. 3. What we were supposed to be Why do we have to change now? I thought everything was going well. I didn't realize how much we all talk behind each others backs Yet smile as we see each others faces. We were supposed to be best friends Our group was supposed to stay strong. I thought we would stay together But each day we see each other, we tear each other apart. We trash each other once someone walks away It's scary to know someone is talking about you. Why do we have to change now? I thought everything was going well. ------------------- Now I lay me down to sleep, I pray my heart you choose to keep. And if I die before I wake, all of me is yours to take.
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IronFistQueen Space makes me happy. Relentless total posts: 9315 since: Dec 2007	Apr 17, 09 at 2:54am ^ re: [Poems] by Gelatin Rhino C&C are wanted =D
	I personally think this is really great. I mean I'm not a poetry expert, but a lot of the emotions your putting into this is kinda similar to how I'm feeling right now. It's pretty good. (:
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Gelatin_Rhino Completely Incomplete threadnought total posts: 588 since: Feb 2007	Apr 17, 09 at 7:19pm ^ re: [Poems] by Gelatin Rhino C&C are wanted =D
	Thanks =3 This happened today. I found out one of my classmates is emo. 4. Why do you do that to yourself? I saw you today You're face was blank, you're arms were covered You barely looked at me, avoided eye contact at all costs. I asked you what was wrong You looked deep into my soul, with you're light hazel eyes To see my true intentions. You pulled up your sleeves, showed me your scars I gasped, you shrugged like it was nothing And rolled your sleeves back down. "Why do you do that to yourself?" I asked you quietly You answered with a short summary of your life "Dad's an asshole, My sister's a pain in the ass, I'm teased everyday, I hate my life." You continued to do your work While the images of the reddened scars across your arms Were plastered in my mind. ------------------- Now I lay me down to sleep, I pray my heart you choose to keep. And if I die before I wake, all of me is yours to take.
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big_dreamerx3 Neophyte total posts: 31 since: Apr 2009	Apr 17, 09 at 8:23pm ^ re: [Poems] by Gelatin Rhino C&C are wanted =D
	this[u][/u] is [b][/b]amazing! i feel bad for that kid.
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Gelatin_Rhino Completely Incomplete threadnought total posts: 588 since: Feb 2007	Apr 17, 09 at 9:29pm ^ re: [Poems] by Gelatin Rhino C&C are wanted =D
	Thanks Same. I've never really talked to him before, besides a few times. He has like speech problems too, it reminds me of autism, but I'm pretty sure hes not autistic. This poem isn't based on the guy I wrote the above poems on They're about the guy I used to like, for 4 years. >.< 5. My Horoscope My horoscope never mentioned this It didn't give me a clue this would happen I never thought I would get over you, But hey, I am, And I think it's for the better. You're hazel eyes don't make my knees weak, You're soft hugs feel like hugging my dog, When you talk to me, I don't feel a connection anymore, Just two best friends talking, And I think it's for the better. You would tease me, because you knew I liked you You never even gave me a chance Maybe if you did, I would still have feelings for you But now I don't, And I think it's for the better. 6. Remember those summer days I hope you're happy with the path you took. You went your way, I went mine. Now we talk to each other when we're supposed to, But we barely remeber what the other said. You have your friends, I have mine. We are too oppostites, but used to be best friends. What happened to us? Remember those summer days we would spend, doing nothing? Where did those days go? Where did our friendship go? I'm not sure if we were supposed to be friends, or were forced to be friends. But either way, its over. ------------------- Now I lay me down to sleep, I pray my heart you choose to keep. And if I die before I wake, all of me is yours to take.
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Gelatin_Rhino Completely Incomplete threadnought total posts: 588 since: Feb 2007	Apr 19, 09 at 1:55am ^ re: [Poems] by Gelatin Rhino C&C are wanted =D
	This poem is based off a party today. Mer, I'm so confused right now >.< 7. Your mind was somewhere else I see you, see me I'm not sure if this is a connection But I feel something different. When you were partners with that same girl An overwhelming feeling of jealous washed over me. When you were slow dancing with that girl My smile was wiped from my face. I envyed her, and I didn't know why I didn't like you, right? You were just a friend. But when we slow danced, You were awkward, Your eyes were searching For that girl? I didn't know. But your mind was somewhere else. When that girl left She waved goodbye to you You smiled and waved back. I started to leave, and so did you. We were awkward again When are we ever awkward? We always laugh and talk, But what was going on now? Why were you awkward all night? You waved goodbye, I saw you, see me, I'm not sure if this is a connection But I feel something different. ------------------- Now I lay me down to sleep, I pray my heart you choose to keep. And if I die before I wake, all of me is yours to take.
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Gelatin_Rhino Completely Incomplete threadnought total posts: 588 since: Feb 2007	May 04, 09 at 11:50pm ^ re: [Poems] by Gelatin Rhino C&C are wanted =D
	8. Your footprints are everywhere You and your lies, I'm done with them. I can't take them anymore You deny every single one Trying to cover up all your tracks But you just leave your footprints everywhere And we all know that you're lying But you don't realize That as you dig this deep hole The light is harder to see I don't know if you will ever work your way back up But I wish you luck in all that you do. Edit: May 04, 09 ------------------- Now I lay me down to sleep, I pray my heart you choose to keep. And if I die before I wake, all of me is yours to take.
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big_dreamerx3 Neophyte total posts: 31 since: Apr 2009	May 05, 09 at 12:15am ^ re: [Poems] by Gelatin Rhino C&C are wanted =D
	sounds like a annoying type of person. ------------------- maybe its not my weekend but it's going to be my year. and im so sick of watching everyone as i go nowhere.
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Gelatin_Rhino Completely Incomplete threadnought total posts: 588 since: Feb 2007	May 05, 09 at 1:55am ^ re: [Poems] by Gelatin Rhino C&C are wanted =D
	We had to do Limericks today in English, so I'll just put them up here 10. The Very Young Fellow There once was a very young fellow Who's favorite color was yellow He ate a small pie And could not tell the lie That the pie tasted like jello. 11. The Girl Who Loved Flowers There once was a gil who loved flowers She would sit there and smell them for hours While picking a bud She slipped in the mud And had to rush to clean off in the showers. 12. You and Your Stupid Cookies Why did you try and suck up to us today? We all hate you, for the things you said. Nothing can change the way we feel, And to be honest, We didn't like you from the start. You were forcing yourself to be our friend When the more you tried, the more we hated you. We just wanted some space. But no, You took it up so we barely had room for everyone else. And today, What was that all about? You and your stupid cookies? Trying to make us like you again by giving us food? Not the brightest idea. You just need to back off. You said some things that were horrible. I don't know if I can trust you again, Because you keep showering us with gifts Just to get back into a group You honestly were never in. ------------------- Now I lay me down to sleep, I pray my heart you choose to keep. And if I die before I wake, all of me is yours to take.
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dogzLUV Misunderstood Monkey forum junky total posts: 93 since: Apr 2009	May 05, 09 at 3:42am ^ re: [Poems] by Gelatin Rhino C&C are wanted =D
	These are good... Keep on writing/typing/thinking! -------------------
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Ichigo_Rox Rell-Bells <3 Resident Neo total posts: 2501 since: Dec 2006	May 05, 09 at 1:45pm ^ re: [Poems] by Gelatin Rhino C&C are wanted =D
	This is really good so far! I'll read them all when I have time! Sorry, kinda pressed right now... .___. ------------------- http://www.youtube.com/user/PopPrincesses
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big_dreamerx3 Neophyte total posts: 31 since: Apr 2009	May 05, 09 at 7:09pm ^ re: [Poems] by Gelatin Rhino C&C are wanted =D
	i like the poem you and your stupid cookies ------------------- maybe its not my weekend but it's going to be my year. and im so sick of watching everyone as i go nowhere.
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Gelatin_Rhino Completely Incomplete threadnought total posts: 588 since: Feb 2007	May 06, 09 at 11:00pm ^ re: [Poems] by Gelatin Rhino C&C are wanted =D
	Haha, thanks 13. Ode to Writer's Block Writer's block, oh writer's block You do so little for me. You give me no ideas at all, leaving me thinking non stop. Writer's block, oh writer's block You come at the worst times When I want to write You take over, and engulf my mind. Writer's block, oh writer's block What would I do without you? I can name a few things. Well actually, a lot of things. ------------------- Now I lay me down to sleep, I pray my heart you choose to keep. And if I die before I wake, all of me is yours to take.
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Gelatin_Rhino Completely Incomplete threadnought total posts: 588 since: Feb 2007	May 12, 09 at 7:53pm ^ re: [Poems] by Gelatin Rhino C&C are wanted =D
	I'm gonna make this one rhyme 14. I'll be willing My throat has been burning all day Just thinking of you, knowing that you liked me. A lump has been in the way Killing me, eating me alive. I've waited so long for this to moment to arrive And now that it has, I'm scared to death. What if our friendship doesn't survive? I don't know if I want to chance it. But if you're willing to try it out Then I'll be willing to too. I trust you, no doubt So please, give me a chance, and I'll give you one too. ------------------- Now I lay me down to sleep, I pray my heart you choose to keep. And if I die before I wake, all of me is yours to take.
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