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BB_Brona http:// discussioncentral .net N'Somniac since: May 2008	Sep 20, 08 at 1:40pm ^ Through My Eyes. [Comments Please!]
	Log in to remove this sponsored message I can't remember much, before I went to live with my owners I think they're called. All I know is I was saved from death, I had one brother. I'll go back to my earliest memories, starting from when I met my owners... ... ..... ....... I stood there shivering, scared and nervous, on the tall shiny silver platform. These huge tall people came in, two bigger than the other two, humans I think they're called, they didn't look cruel or mean or evil, they looked down on me with adoring eyes, the started to stroke me and mumbling this funny language... "Awww she's so small and cute." One of the small ones said. "I don't think the name Roxii suits her though, we need to think of another name" The other small one said. "Ummmm.... I know Minnie, because she's so small." Then she picked me up I started crying with fear, I didn't want to fall. "Awww she's whining... why?" Small 1 said "Maybe she's scared" Small 2 said "I think shes wants to go home" Said Big 1 "I don't know we haven't got a bed or anything for her" Siad Big 2 "But Mom please!" Said both smalls. "Ok fine" Siad big 2, Mom. So I was carried out to this big funny blue thing, the seemed to tear it open all over, and then they put me into it and came in after me. The put a harness on themselves but none on me... "I want to hold her!" Said small 1 "No Me!" said small 2 "Orla said it first Bróna" Siad big 2, Mom. So, Small 1 was called Orla, Small 2 was called Bróna and Big 2 was called Mom. The funny blue thing I learned was called a car. And they, the humans, my owners, called me Minnie, or the Dog. ------------------- "Am I mad?" “I’m afraid so. You’re positively bonkers. But let me tell you a secret. All the best people are.”
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Kitty1999candy The Sweetest Sin ♪ neologist total posts: 408 since: Jul 2008	Sep 20, 08 at 2:39pm ^ re: Through My Eyes. [Comments Please!]
	Awww!!!! Puppy!!! Roxii fits the puppy I like that name!!! Write more soon please! ------------------- Kathrine
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BB_Brona http:// discussioncentral .net N'Somniac since: May 2008	Sep 20, 08 at 8:30pm ^ re: Through My Eyes. [Comments Please!]
	For you Kitty! The dog's name is Minnie. -------- -------- ---------- ----------- I should try and tell you what I look like, I have brownish blackish patches on my back and tail, my ears are black, I think I'm called a Jack Russel crossed with a Grayhound, and apparently from the way I jump a kangaroo too. I was so scared, in the Car everything around me vibrated, I felt really sick, I started to cry again. I looked out the window and everything whizzed by so quickly, I was feeling even sicker. There was a sudden stop. I nearly fell off Orla's knees. She was the one who got to "hold" me. I was glad someone was, because the harness looked way to big for me. The vibrating stopped and the door opened. We went in to the house, I think it was, well I was carried in by Orla. It was a sunny day, they took me outside the other side. Into this big red wooden shed? They took out a big cardboard box and cut a massive door, and put a blanket into it. Then me.... Spoiler: (Big)Photo Of Dog. ------------------- "Am I mad?" “I’m afraid so. You’re positively bonkers. But let me tell you a secret. All the best people are.”
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SacredSerpent true seeker total posts: 1189 since: Jun 2008	Sep 21, 08 at 7:44pm ^ re: Through My Eyes. [Comments Please!]
	Its really good. Don't see many stories like this here. But I've always liked reading them. ------------------- Photos--Omen--Digiport
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BB_Brona http:// discussioncentral .net N'Somniac since: May 2008	Sep 22, 08 at 5:22pm ^ re: Through My Eyes. [Comments Please!]
	Thank You!! -------- -------- -------- -------- I was nervous but the warmth of the blankets helped. I could tell I was in no danger but I missed my mother a little. I didn't know at the time I'd never see her again, its probably better I didn't because I would have cried a lot. Brona and Orla stayed in the Shed until I fell asleep at least, they may have stayed longer but I don't know because I was asleep. The Next morning I woke up, it took me a few minutes to remember where I was. I got up and wandered around inside, I wanted to explore, I sniffed the air, I could smell lots of new smells. They were strange and different, I suppose I will get used to them. Outside I heard a door open and close. I heard a voice say "Minnie?". I got scared and I scurried into the bed, I tried to bury my way under the blankets to hide. ------------------- "Am I mad?" “I’m afraid so. You’re positively bonkers. But let me tell you a secret. All the best people are.”
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SacredSerpent true seeker total posts: 1189 since: Jun 2008	Sep 26, 08 at 3:07am ^ re: Through My Eyes. [Comments Please!]
	Its really good. I'd have to say its probably one of my favorite stories here. Please write more soon. ------------------- Photos--Omen--Digiport
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BB_Brona http:// discussioncentral .net N'Somniac since: May 2008	Sep 28, 08 at 12:01pm ^ re: Through My Eyes. [Comments Please!]
	Thank you SacredSerpent. -------- -------- -------- -------- I heard the door of the Shed oeping, as much as I wanted to look up and see who or what was there, I kept my head under the blankets out of fear. The footsteps drew closer. I felt a hand come around back, the person lifted me into their arms... And talked to me gently in a soothing voice. "Hi Minnie." Siad Brona. It took me a good month or so to get settled, but thats a little boring so are you ready for a time warp? Two Months Later... The back door open slowly and quietly, but I heard it from my bed. I jumped up and tore out, to Brona and Orla. I was happy to see them it meant that I was going to be played with, walked or fed. I jumped up on them. They gigled and laughed, they were happy to see me too. They got the lead. Yeay! I'm going for a walk!. They brought me out the front, but we didn't leave the garden instead they opened the Car door, Orla went in first the Brona picked me up and gave me to Orla, then she hopped in. Mom was in the front. The engine started, I whined, I hated the Car it was scary. Where was I going? ------------------- "Am I mad?" “I’m afraid so. You’re positively bonkers. But let me tell you a secret. All the best people are.”
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Starlety The Dog Days Are Over. s-e-e-k-e-r total posts: 1849 since: Sep 2008	Sep 28, 08 at 8:32pm ^ re: Through My Eyes. [Comments Please!]
	What a cool story! ------------------- The dog days are over The dog days are done Can you hear the horses Cos here they come.
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BB_Brona http:// discussioncentral .net N'Somniac since: May 2008	Dec 29, 08 at 12:48pm ^ re: Through My Eyes. [Comments Please!]
	Sorry I didn't write much of this but I think I'll continue it now. ------ -- - ---- - - - -- -- - - While the drove around I kept my head down and didn't look out the windows I was scared. They were driving for at least 10 minutes when They open the door, I smelt a dog smell, excitement rose up. I started barking and barking answered me. But I wasn't allowed out of the Car yet. Bróna held me while Orla got out, I struggled to try and get out. Orla closed the door. I whined. "Shhh. You'll get to play with Mitch soon." Who's Mitch I thought... Then the door opened And I saw Mitch. Spoiler: Picture of Mitch ------------------- "Am I mad?" “I’m afraid so. You’re positively bonkers. But let me tell you a secret. All the best people are.”
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Subaru7 Re-assessment. Hooked on Neo since: Jun 2008	Dec 29, 08 at 12:57pm ^ re: Through My Eyes. [Comments Please!]
	Heh, not bad, not bad at all...
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Bumblebee98 Neo-newbie total posts: 3 since: Dec 2008	Dec 30, 08 at 1:49am ^ re: Through My Eyes. [Comments Please!]
	Awe, this is a really good story, and I love the idea that its about a dog ^.^
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