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Chronic Apathy Recurrent Indifference Neolithic total posts: 6740 since: Sep 2006	May 15, 08 at 12:56PM [Story] Changed
	This is all based on stuff that happened with me and a good friend of mine. There'll be a few things added and taken out to fit the story better, but all in all it's the same basic idea. It's rated PG13+ for language and sexual content. Comments via PMs or forum posts are always appreciated. So now, without further ado, Changed. --- I walked to the edge of the dock and looked down into the water. It didn't look cold, but the only way to know for sure would be to dive in, since anyone I asked would probably be a jerk and lie. I took off my shirt and shoes and after hesitating for a moment, dove into the water. It was cold - very cold - and I shivered as I swam out to the water trampoline at the center of the pond. I climbed the ladder and laid on the edge. There were already two girls up here and a couple other people were still swimming over. One of the girls I had seen around; I couldn't have told you anything about her other than her name though. I turned to her, "Hey Katie," I said. She looked surprised I knew her name, "Hey, what's your name again," she asked. I faked a laugh, "Chris." ------------------- Guestbook \| Reviews \| Changed \| Loungin' \| GTA IV \| MHF2 \| GH4
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Miky220 Crack is Whack! ultra seeker total posts: 1282 since: Apr 2007	May 15, 08 at 06:04PM re: [Story] Changed
	Please continue. ------------------- "This is my exit; I storm out stage left."
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Chronic Apathy Recurrent Indifference Neolithic total posts: 6740 since: Sep 2006	May 15, 08 at 06:19PM re: [Story] Changed
	The other girl, Miranda, was a pretty good friend of mine, she and I talked for a few minutes. After a while, there were about six of us on the trampoline. It was Andy, a good friend of mine, who suggested we play truth or dare. "Who wants to go first?" Katie volunteered for a truth, and the question was somewhat predictable. "What's the most you've done with a guy?" She got a mischievous look before responding, "Second base; my Bobby and I do stuff all the time." One of the guys - Curtis - asked what second base was. "Fingering and handjobs," I said. Katie nodded and turned to one of the other girls, Yvette. "How far have you gone?" And so it went; after a few minutes everyone but me had been asked the question. Miranda looked at me, "Well Chris," she said, "What base have you gotten to?" I smirked, debating with myself what to say, before finally settling on lying. "I got to second with an old girlfriend," I said, "She let me finger her." ------------------- Guestbook \| Reviews \| Changed \| Loungin' \| GTA IV \| MHF2 \| GH4
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Chronic Apathy Recurrent Indifference Neolithic total posts: 6740 since: Sep 2006	May 16, 08 at 10:33AM re: [Story] Changed
	I quickly followed up my 'confession' with a disclaimer, "Nobody here can say anything about this. What happens on the trampoline stays on the trampoline." Everyone nodded and the conversation melted into more casual talk. A half hour later it was almost too dark to see each other, so we swam back to the dock and laid on the grass. There had only been six of us on the trampoline, but another twenty or so had been cooking hotdogs or playing volleyball. Throughout the rest of the night Katie and I would occationally look at each other and smirk or even outright grin. The group of us had our own little pile of secrets that night that we wouldn't tell anyone else about. ------------------- Guestbook \| Reviews \| Changed \| Loungin' \| GTA IV \| MHF2 \| GH4
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XxKayleexX You should have known sooner seek-o-holic since: Mar 2008	May 17, 08 at 12:20PM re: [Story] Changed
	Food so far I wanna hear what else happens ------------------- CLICK
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Chronic Apathy Recurrent Indifference Neolithic total posts: 6740 since: Sep 2006	May 19, 08 at 09:11AM re: [Story] Changed
	I didn't like the way the chapter ended up, so I decided to rewrite it. The same idea is still there, but a few of the things I didn't like I rephrased. .:~4 Months Later~:. I took out my cellphone and dialed Andy's number. His dad answered, "Hello?" "Hey," I responded, "is Andy there?" "Yeah, hold on." I waited a couple seconds before hearing him pick up, "Hey." "Are you freaked coming, I asked. "The carnival ends tonight." "Yeah, yeah," he said, "I'll be down in a second." While I waited for him I walked around the carnival. It wasn't huge, but then again this wasn't a huge town, so that wasn't understandable. I was about to get something to eat when I thought I recognized someone in the crowd. "Katie?" I yelled, not completely sure it was her. She turned and I got a better look at her face, it was her. "Hey," she said, and walked up to me. "How are you?" "I'm not bad, you?" "I'm good, I'm good. God, the last time I saw you was on the trampoline." Thinking quickly, I realized she was right. "Wow, you're right." We shot the breeze for a while and she ended up giving me her number. Finally, Andy walked up to us. "Okay," he said, "I'm here. Let's go do something." I nodded and turned to Katie, "I'll talk to you later." "Yeah," she said, "call me sometime." We walked seperate ways, but after a couple seconds I looked for my shoulder and smiled. ------------------- Guestbook \| Reviews \| Changed \| Loungin' \| GTA IV \| MHF2 \| GH4
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Barbydoll Im gunna b off neo for a few days. x <3 member: postin' posse total posts: 512 since: Nov 2007	May 20, 08 at 07:39AM re: [Story] Changed
	Love tjis. The font makes it dramatic. Carry on. -------------------
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Chronic Apathy Recurrent Indifference Neolithic total posts: 6740 since: Sep 2006	May 20, 08 at 10:46AM re: [Story] Changed
	I waited a couple days before calling her. When I did she didn't answer so I just left a message. "Hey, it's Chris, I was just wondering if you wanted to hang out sometime or something. Call me back." I went about my daily routine for a few hours before she called back. "Hey," she said, "how are you?" "Not bad," I responded, "you?" "Not too horrible either." An awkward silence passed while I tried to decide what I should say next. "So, uh, do you want to do something this weekend?" "Oh sorry," she said. "I'm going to Harrisburg with Bobby's family." "Who's Bobby?" "My boyfriend." Shit! "Oh, alright." I knew I probably sounded dismayed, but I didn't care. "Sorry, I have to go." "Alright, bye." "Bye." I hung up the phone, a little disappointed. Actually though, why did I care about hanging out with her at all? I'd only even seen her a few times, I didn't even know her last name. What the hell? This message was edited by Chronic Apathy on May 20 2008. ------------------- Guestbook \| Reviews \| Changed \| Loungin' \| GTA IV \| MHF2 \| GH4
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Barbydoll Im gunna b off neo for a few days. x <3 member: postin' posse total posts: 512 since: Nov 2007	May 21, 08 at 08:23AM re: [Story] Changed
	Rude...but good!!! -------------------
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Chronic Apathy Recurrent Indifference Neolithic total posts: 6740 since: Sep 2006	May 21, 08 at 12:32PM re: [Story] Changed
	She and I talked every now and then on the phone over the next three months. Nothing extreme - we never talked more than an hour a week total - but we were starting to become pretty good friends. One such night she was especially giddy (or "hyper" as she called it), and I asked her why. "Well," she said. "You remember what I told you guys on the trampoline?" "Yeah, the whole second base thing," I responded, confused. "Well, it was kind of a lie." I laughed in spite of myself; I hadn't ever considered that maybe she was lying too. "Well why are you telling me this now?" I asked. "Because Bobby and I got to second for real today." For a second, my heart stopped, I didn't know what to say. I've always believed in abstinece, even if I didn't act like it. But now my mind had to raise another question, why did I care what she did? She wasn't my girlfriend, I still barely knew her at all. ------------------- Guestbook \| Reviews \| Changed \| Loungin' \| GTA IV \| MHF2 \| GH4
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Miky220 Crack is Whack! ultra seeker total posts: 1282 since: Apr 2007	May 22, 08 at 04:12PM re: [Story] Changed
	Please, please continue. This is intriguing. ------------------- "This is my exit; I storm out stage left."
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Barbydoll Im gunna b off neo for a few days. x <3 member: postin' posse total posts: 512 since: Nov 2007	May 23, 08 at 08:26AM re: [Story] Changed
	Very. well written. -------------------
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