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May 01, 07 at 04:51AM
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Part 4: ChaosPlanet

ChaosLord was flying towards somewhere. As he was flying above a town, he heard someone saying "ChaosLord!". ChaosLord stopped and looked. It was Lance and next to him was Jijimon. ChaosLord landed on the ground in front of them. "We heard that you defeated all the legendary pokemon" said Lance. "Yes. You do not have to worry about them anymore" said ChaosLord. "Thank you" said Lance, as he bowed before ChaosLord. "So, where are you going to go now, ChaosLord?" said Jijimon. "I will first go to check the situation on ChaosPlanet" said ChaosLord. "ChaosPlanet?" said Jijimon. "Ah, I have never told you about this. Apart from this planet and Dragon Planet, there exists another planet inhabited by organisms. The conditions on this planet are harsh. There is not much water or light, and the living organisms there have evolved to suit that environment" said ChaosLord. "Evolved?" said Lance. "Yes. The organisms on this planet are machines, like me and some of the digimon that live here" said ChaosLord. "Machines? Living machines?" said Lance. "Yes. Living machines, that have overcome the needs of normal living organisms in order to survive. They do not feed with food or water, and they do not need to breathe, since there is no oxygen on their planet" said ChaosLord. "But... how did they come to existence? And why on this planet?" said Jijimon. ChaosLord said "These machines came to life by energy from black holes, which formed their souls. This energy is sometimes absorbed by some stones made of a metal that are only on that planet. When one of these metal stones absorbs the dark energy, the stone changes shape and a machine is formed". "So, these machines have souls of darkness?" said Jijimon. "Yes. And they never pass away, unless their body is completely destroyed. That is very difficult though, as the metal by which they are made is extremely hard to damage" said ChaosLord. "These machines look a lot like you, ChaosLord" said Jijimon. "Yes, but my origins and my soul are different. I was not born a machine, I used to be a dragon made of flesh. However, my soul was different. It was made of both darkness and light, unlike the souls of the rest dragons, which were made only of light. And this was the difference between them and me, which allowed me to win every battle and evolve into who I am now" said ChaosLord. "Your soul is made of both darkness and light? How is that possible?" said Lance. "This, my friend, is beyond your understanding" said ChaosLord. "And so, now you are going to ChaosPlanet. Why is it named like that?" said Jijimon. "I named it like that after I conquered it. It is a long story" said ChaosLord. "Tell us, ChaosLord, we want to know!" said a Charmander, who had arrived there some minutes ago, along with many other pokemon. "Okay. After I filled earth with water, some dragon-like creatures came to life, before your own existence. These creatures were what you call dinosaurs. I was just there on earth, observing their life. One day, I saw a red and blue dragon flying above earth. He did not see me though, and I decided to follow him, in case he would lead me to a place where other dragons would be. But he seemed to have been lost, and he was just causing destruction to some planets, apparently for no reason. Anyway, I followed him for some days, and then I returned to earth. I saw something incredible. All the dinosaurs and other living organisms had been slaughtered, and the planet had been taken over by some machines. I flew to earth, and the machines immediately attacked me. I fought back and destroyed many of them, until they eventually surrendered. I asked them where they had come from, and they revealed to me the location of their planet. I then took all of them back to their planet, where I was attacked by some more machines who lived there. I fought them for days. These machines were great warriors who really liked to fight, which is why they had come to earth in the first place. They were very persistent. I battled against them for a long time, and they did not surreneder until after six months, after I had slain some of their Chosen Champions, and they realized that I could not be harmed by any means. I became the ruler of the planet, named it ChaosPlanet, built a tower similar to the one I have on earth, also known as ChaosTower, and stayed there for thousands of years. One day, I saw new living organisms on earth. They grew like weeds. I decided to leave ChaosPlanet and go to earth. I picked three Chosen Champions, and made them the Chaos Generals, who would rule this planet after me. They were ChaosBlackWarGreymon, ChaosMetalSeadramon, and ChaosPiedmon. I ordered them not to attack any more planets without my permission, and came to earth, where I built my second tower, the ChaosTower on earth. I think you know the rest. I stopped the dragon horde, left nothing but eggs on their planet, out of which came new dragons, who took a human from earth as their leader, who led them against earth, only to get annihilated by me, along with Dragongod, who also tried to destroy me, and Dragozard, who wanted revenge. Now, the dragons are living on Dragon Planet, the machines are living on ChaosPlanet, and you guys here live on earth" said ChaosLord. "Wow..." said a Squirtle. "Now, I have to go check ChaosPlanet, and then Dragon Planet. I will return here later" said ChaosLord, as he started flying away, towards ChaosPlanet. "ChaosLord... he's incredible..." said a Pidgey. "Yeah..." said a Metapod. "Did you guys hear what he said? He said his soul is made of both light and darkness..." said a Rattata. "Good... Bad... Both..." said a Snorlax. "No, don't get this wrong, darkness is not bad" said Jijimon. "Yeah" said a Houndoom, next to which were an Umbreon and a Murkrow. "You're right. ChaosLord rules!" said a Stantler.

Meanwhile, ChaosLord flew to ChaosPlanet. As he arrived there, some machines looked at him strangely. "Are you..." said a Puppetmon. "I am ChaosLord" said ChaosLord. Suddenly, ChaosBlackWarGreymon came. "Boss!" he said. "ChaosBlackWarGreymon" said ChaosLord. "Finally, after so many years, you are back! To what do we owe the honor of you coming here, my lord?" said ChaosBlackWarGreymon. "There has been a strange incident on earth. Many of its inhabitats lost control of themselves and started causing destruction. Has anything similar happened here?" said ChaosLord. "No, my lord. Everything's just fine on our planet. But now that you mentioned it, we have sensed a disturbing energy in the atmosphere, which makes some of us feel uneasy..." said ChaosBlackWarGreymon. "I see. I sense this energy too. I felt it on earth as well. I think it is coming from over there" said ChaosLord, as he pointed his left claw at a place in the universe. "So, what should we do, my lord? Shall I send forces to that place?" said ChaosLord. "There is no need to. I will go there myself later" said ChaosLord. "Where are you going now, boss?" said ChaosBlackWarGreymon. "I am going to see how things are on another planet" said ChaosLord, as he started to fly. "My lord, I can go check out that place in the universe, if you wish" said ChaosBlackWarGreymon. "Good. I will return to ChaosPlanet later. Meet me at ChaosTower when you return" said ChaosLord. "Yes sir!" said ChaosBlackWarGreymon, as he started to fly towards the place where the mysterious energy was coming from, while ChaosLord headed towards Dragon Planet.



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Chapter 13: The One who Demands to be Worshipped


Airport City and Slateport City were two cities which were currently in chaos. Many Shinigami, angels and Holy Creatures were wandering around those two cities, sending deceased souls to the afterlife, although their existance were unknown to the living citizens. While these two cities were in chaos, the cities in the rest of the world were still relatively peaceful. One of these cities which remained peaceful was a city located in front of a beautiful sea. Many of the houses and buildings in this city had orange roofs, and there was also a port with a large ship in front of the city, next to the ocean. There were also many Pokémon trainers in the city, and a beautiful sunset could be seen in the ocean in the distance. It was all peaceful there, when suddenly, a huge black beam was shot down from above the clouds into the ocean, creating a huge tidal wave which damaged many houses as well as the ship in the city. "Wh-what was that?" asked a Pokémon trainer wearing a red hat, red clothes and overalls as he stepped back. His clothes were all wet as he was hit by the tidal wave. Then everyone in the city looked out into the ocean, and as the tidal waves from before faded away, they saw ChaosLord, RoboAlakazam, Skizor and a large army of dinosaur-like machines hovering above the sea. "Wh-what are those things?" asked a man as he pointed at the machines. "Dinosaurs!" said a guy wearing glasses as he started running away. Then ChaosLord slowly floated onto the ground of the city, while all the machines behind him did the same too. "So these are the beings who inhabits this planet... the same ones who Mega-Emperor spoke of, heh?" said RoboAlakazam, while Skizor took a quick glance at the beautiful sunset in the horizon. Then many people from the city came and surrounded the machines, and then they started looking at them. "Just what are these things?" asked a man. "Hello, weakling human beings" said ChaosLord, who was standing on the ground, with RoboAlakazam to his left and Skizor to his right. The army of dinosaur-like machines were also standing behind him. Then many people in the city, who were looking at the machines suddenly started sweating, and their hearts were pounding quickly as they felt some powerful psychic energy radiating from ChaosLord’s body, which striked fear into the people's hearts and souls. Some of the people even started trembling in fear, while others became dizzy! The beautiful sunset in the horizon also quickly dissapeared as the whole city suddenly became dark like the night as dark clouds covered the sky shortly after ChaosLord appeared. Strong wind was also blowing, and then it suddenly started raining. The rain started off sprinkling from the sky, but it soon started falling down heavily. Then Skizor noticed a sign somewhere in the city which says "Vermillion City, the Port of Exquisite Sunsets". Then he said "The Port of Exquisite Sunsets... huh?" as he looked back into the ocean, where he saw a beautiful sunset just a moment ago. However, it was now completely replaced by nothing but darkness! "I guess it can't be called that anymore..." Skizor continued. Then a man wearing glasses and white clothes, who was standing right in front of ChaosLord said "Wh-What did you say?" as he looked at ChaosLord while trembling. "Did you not hear me? I said "Hello, weakling human beings" said ChaosLord as he looked the man in the eyes, and then the man’s body started shaking in fear. He also dropped a bag which he was carrying. "Wh-what do you want of us?" asked the man, shaking. Then ChaosLord said "Well, let's see... what do I want of you... you ask? This seems like a pretty interesting planet, don't you agree? I mean, it's rare to see a planet that actually has life on it, hey?". Then the man said "No... aliens... no!" as he started running away, but then ChaosLord used his psychic powers to immobolize the man, and then he lifted the man into the air with his psychic powers. Then he used his psychic powers to carry the man through the air, until he was right in front of ChaosLord's face. Many people who were in the city surrounded ChaosLord and the other machines as they watched ChaosLord use his Psychic powers in amazement. Then ChaosLord said "You asked me what I wanted of you before, am I right? In that case, I shall answer your question. I want all of you weakling human beings... to get on your knees and worship me!", and then he stopped controlling the man with his psychic powers. After that, the man fell on the ground. "Heh..." RoboAlakazam laughed. "Worship him?" asked a woman. "That thing’s insane..." said a teenager. "How disrespectful..." said an old man as he shook his head at ChaosLord. "B-But... But who are you?" asked the man with glasses as he looked up at ChaosLord while breathing heavily. "My name is ChaosLord. I am from Chaos Planet, and I am the PokéGod, and the Ultimate Organism" said ChaosLord. "You... You're mad!" said the man as he tried to run away again. "What a sinner..." said ChaosLord as he shot a laser beam at the man, killing him. All the people who were watching screamed as they saw the man dying. "W-W-Wait a second! If you’re really a God, then why did you kill that guy?" asked a man. "Sinners do not deserve to live..." said ChaosLord as he closed his eyes slowly, and then everyone stepped back, while some people took out some mobile phones and started calling the police. "So... what do you say, inferior beings? How would you like to worship me, the Great OverLord of Chaos as your God?" asked ChaosLord as he slowly reopened his eyes. Then a tall, blonde woman pointed at ChaosLord and said "I’m sorry, you stupid machine! But I don’t like to worship any so-called Gods!", and then she turned her back to ChaosLord and started stomping away. "Chaos Claw..." said ChaosLord calmly as he slashed at the direction where the woman was with his claw, and then a slash came out of nowhere in the air and hit the woman at the back, ripping her heart out and killing her, and then blood started coming out of her back rapidly like a river, and then the blood mixed with the rain water on the ground. "Disrespect leads to Hell..." said ChaosLord as everyone took a few steps back when they saw that, and then many people started screaming and running away. Then the trainer wearing a red hat said "I... will deal with that thing..." as he started walking towards ChaosLord slowly, although his arms were trembling. "W-Wait! Wh-What the hell are you thinking, kid?!? Do you not feel that unpleasant aura which is radiating from that machine’s body? He’s so powerful it’s insane! You stand no chance against him!" a man shouted. "His power's so great... it's even affecting the environment..." said a thin, black-haired man as he looked up at the sky, which was now completely covered in dark clouds! Then the trainer said "I know... I understand the extremely large power gap between me and this machine... but still... if I cannot defeat him, I... I cannot truly call myself a Pokémon Master!" as he took a PokéBall out of his pocket. Then he said "Typhlosion! I choose you!" as he threw out a PokéBall, and out came a Typhlosion. "Typhlosion! Fire Blast attack! Now!" said the trainer as he pointed at ChaosLord. Then his Typhlosion used Fire Blast on ChaosLord. Typhlosion shot a huge blast of fire out of its mouth, and the fire were so thick that they covered the entire width of a street! The ground was also destroyed a bit by the fire, although the fire was soon put out by the heavy rainstorm. "Good job, Typhlosion! It seems you just destroyed the strongest of the bunch! Now, use the same attack against the rest of the machines too!" said the trainer, but then suddenly, he heard ChaosLord’s voice coming from behind him: "Don’t go killing me off, weakling". Then Typhlosion and its trainer both turned around, and they saw ChaosLord standing on top of the roof of a house. "What? You’re still alive? What did you do?" asked the trainer as he took one step back, but then he took two steps forward. Then ChaosLord said "It seems that your Typhlosion is indeed well-trained. Its Fire Blast attack just then was indeed powerful. However... you cannot possibly hope to stand up against one who has infinite power..." and then he started releasing psychic energy out of his body. The psychic energy was so powerful that they sent a huge tsunami outward into the ocean! When the Typhlosion and its trainer felt the psychic energy, they stepped back while their hair and the trainer's clothes were being blown by the psychic energy like wind. "Wh-what is this I'm feeling?" asked the trainer as he looked at ChaosLord. Then ChaosLord said "Psychic energy". "Psychic...energy?" asked a man who was watching. "It's the same thing which allowed me to Teleport and avoid your Typhlosion's Fire Blast attack earlier" said ChaosLord. "I-Impossible... T-Typhlosion! Use Fire Blast again!" said the trainer as he pointed at ChaosLord, and then Typhlosion shot another gigantic blast of fire out of its mouth at ChaosLord, but then ChaosLord said "Hydro Pump" as he shot two blasts of water out of the twin cannons on his back, which put out Typhlosion's Fire Blast completely, and it also hit Typhlosion, sending it flying until it hit a house, and then the house fell down when Typhlosion hit it. "T-Typhlosion! Are you okay?" said the trainer as he started running towards his Typhlosion. "Ehhhiaau..." said Typhlosion, and then it fainted. "There's no hope in opposing the inevitable.." said ChaosLord. "It's okay, you fought well, Typhlosion!" said the trainer as he pointed at his Typhlosion with his PokéBall Then a red beam of energy came out of the PokéBall, which hit Typhlosion, and then Typhlosion got absorbed into the PokéBall. Then he said "Go, Feraligatr!" as he pulled out another PokéBall, and then he threw it at the direction where ChaosLord was. Then a Feraligatr appeared right in front of ChaosLord. "Feraligatr, use Slash!" the trainer shouted, and then Feraligatr tried to use Slash on ChaosLord, but ChaosLord simply stopped the attack by blocking it with his own claw. "Feraligatr! Show him your Hydro Pump!" said the trainer, and then Feraligatr roared. Then it blasted an extremely powerful Hydro Pump from its mouth at ChaosLord from a close distance, but ChaosLord put his drill into the blast of water, and then he spun his drill around faster, deflecting the water all over the place, and some of them hit the people who were surrounding ChaosLord and the other machines. Then ChaosLord stabbed Feraligatr straight through the stomach with his drill, and then Feraligatr let out a loud cry before it fell on the ground, fainted, with blood coming out its stomach. "Feraligatr! No!" its trainer cried as he put Feraligatr back into its PokéBall. "Meganium, I'm counting on you!" said the trainer as he threw out another PokéBall, and out came a Meganium. "Razor Leaf!" the trainer shouted, and then Meganium shot many extremely sharp leaves out of its body at ChaosLord. The leaves hit ChaosLord, but they just bounced off his body without doing any damage! "I-Impossible! What the hell is this thing made of?" asked the trainer, and his Meganium was also surprised. "A material which cannot be destroyed by anything" ChaosLord answered, and then he pointed his drill at Meganium. Then he opened up the drill and blasted a shot of fire out of it, which hit Meganium, and then Meganium got caught on fire and fainted. Then ChaosLord Teleported behind the trainer and slashed him in half with his claw. "A material... which cannot be destroyed... by anything! It's gotta be a lie! You're a liar! A friggin' liar!" said a bald man as he stepped back, but then ChaosLord used his Psychic powers to Teleport the man high up into the air, and then the man fell down from a great height and died after he landed on the ground next to ChaosLord. "You... You fυcking son of a bitch... I refuse to believe that someone like you who comes and starts killing everyone is a God!" said a black man as he pulled out a gun and shot ChaosLord in the face, but the bullet just bounced off ChaosLord without doing anything. "I thought I've already told you dumb people once... I am made from a material which cannot be destroyed by anything" said ChaosLord. "Shut up!" said the black man as he kept shooting at ChaosLord with his gun, but he eventually ran out of bullets. As soon as that happened, the black man gasped. Then he immediately threw his gun away, got on his knees and said "I-I am sorry! M-My deepest apologies, O Great OverLord of Chaos!". "Too late, you've sinned" said ChaosLord as he Teleported himself on top of the black man's head, and then he fell down, crushing the man under his feet. Then he looked at all the other people who were surrounding him and said "Which do you choose... to worship me... or to die like these two non-believers?", and then he looked at the corpses of the last two people he killed.

To be continued


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Part 5: A New World

ChaosBlackWarGreymon flew for some time, and he felt the energy growing stronger. He kept flying, until he eventually found a planet that was similar to earth, in that it had water, natural places similar to those on earth, and some towns and villages. "This must be it..." said ChaosBlackWarGreymon. He flew towards that planet, and landed on a small village. "Who are you?" asked an old man, as he saw ChaosBlackWarGreymon. But ChaosBlackWargreymon didn't even turn to face him. "Hmmm... this place seethes with this energy..." he said. Then he looked at the old man and said "Hey old man, what is this place?". The old man said "This is our village" said the old man. "Where is your leader?" said ChaosBlackWarGreymon. "Do you mean our mayor, or lord Ryuumaru?" said the old man. "Ryuumaru? Who is that?" said ChaosBlackWarGreymon. "You don't know about lord Ryuumaru?" said the old man. "Tell me" said ChaosBlackWarGreymon. "Ryuumaru is the highest god of the universe" said the old man. "Oh? That is interesting. What else?" said ChaosBlackWarGreymon. "Ryuumaru created this whole world. It's a long story..." said the old man. "I want to hear it" said ChaosBlackWarGreymon. The old man said "Okay... In the beginning, there was no life in the universe, except a half red half blue dragon with yellow eyes, known as Dragonaurus. This dragon was all alone in the universe, and all he did was cause random destruction. He filled a planet with water, and then dived in an ocean and went to sleep there. The water made the planet suitable for living organisms to live in, and, as Dragonaurus was sleeping, life started to get created on the planet. Humans and other creatures came to life. Everything was peaceful on our planet, until one day the humans started a huge war all over the planet. This war woke Dragonaurus up and caused his wrath, and then Dragonaurus started attacking the humans and the other creatures, who were unable to stop him. However, a person known as Ryuumaru, who fought to make the world better, would change everything. He trained himself very much, to a point where he managed to develop special powers never seen before. Ryuumaru also tamed and trained five creatures, with the help of which he managed to defeat Dragonaurus for the first time in history. Dragonaurus was impressed, and he joined Ryuumaru, who promised him that he would allow him to go back to sleep after the war was over. Dragonaurus, Ryuumaru and the five creatures he tamed fought to stop the war, and the war finally stopped when Ryuumaru gained so much strength as to become the ultimate being, even stronger than Dragonaurus, and stop the war all by himself, and creating this world as it is now. We named this planet New World. The planet is ruled by Ryuumaru himself, who maintains order with his wise rules and the harsh punishment for breaking them". ChaosBlackWarGreymon said "I see. And where is Ryuumaru now?". "He is located in the dragon statue on the top of his castle, which is behind those indestructible walls" said the old man as he pointed at a huge, white, circular wall, which had some big double doors. "But that is off limits to anyone other than Ryuumaru and the Shinigamis and Sacred Creatures" he continued. "Shinigamis? Sacred Creatures?" said ChaosBlackWarGreymon. "Yes, Shinigamis are humans with powers beyond those of normal people like me. They excel at close combat, and can also use special energy attacks. And Sacred Creatures also have very strong powers. Shinigamis are given their powers by lord Ryuumaru himself" said the old man. "Okay" said ChaosBlackWarGreymon, as he started flying towards the castle's walls. "Wait..." said the old man, but ChaosBlackWarGreymon just ignored him and flew above the walls, and landed in a town that was behind those walls. "Hmmm..." said ChaosBlackWarGreymon, as he walked and observed the environment. A man saw him and said "Hey you! Who are you?". ChaosBlackWarGreymon said "Oh, I'm just a Sacred Creature" said ChaosBlackWarGreymon. "I've never seen you around before..." said the man. "I'm new" said ChaosBlackWarGreymon, as he ignored the human and just continued to look around, sensing the energy on the environment. ChaosBlackWarGreymon continued to walk and reached close to Ryuumaru's castle. Suddenly, a tall, muscular man with blue hair, blue eyes and white clothes saw him and said "Huh? Who are you? You don't seem to be from this planet!" as he immediately fired a red beam of energy from his palm at ChaosBlackWarGreymon, which hit him at his right shoulder, but it was only a mere pinprick for ChaosBlackWarGreymon, who ignored the man. "Get out of here!" said the man again, as he fired another beam at ChaosBlackWarGreymon, hitting him at the right shoulder once more, still without doing any damage. "You aren't very bright, are you?" said ChaosBlackWarGreymon, as he was looking at the huge gold statue on the top of the castle, and ignoring the man, who was at his right. "What? What the hell did you just say to me?" said the man, as he charged angrily at ChaosBlackWarGreymon and tried to punch him, but ChaosBlackWarGreymon raised his right hand and caught the man's hand in his own. "Disappear, maggot. I am not here for you" said ChaosBlackWarGreymon as he tossed the man hard at the castle, and he got smashed on it. "Fυck! I'll kill you, you bastard!" said the man, furious, as he got up from the ground and pulled out a sword. "Enough" sounded a voice. Then ChaosBlackWarGreymon and the man looked and saw a man dressed in black, with long, white hair and green eyes. "Mag, stop it" said that man. "But...! This guy's an intruder!" said the man with blue eyes, whose name was Mag. "Go" said the man with green eyes. "Oww man..." said Mag, as he started walking away. He looked at ChaosBlackWarGreymon one last time and said "We'll meet again to finish what we started, you bastard dragon!". "I'm looking forward to it, "Mag"" said ChaosBlackWarGreymon. "Argh! Fυck!" said Mag as he walked away. "Who are you? I know you are not one of the Sacred Creatures" said the green-eyed man. "The question is, who are you?" said ChaosBlackWarGreymon. "I am Ryuumaru, the ruler of this world" said Ryuumaru. "Ah, so you are the master of this planet" said ChaosBlackWarGreymon. "Yes, that is me. I make people into Shinigamis, and wild creatures into Sacred Creatures. And I don't recall making you one..." said Ryuumaru. "Well, Ryuumaru, a strange energy is being radiated from your planet, which is disturbing living organisms on other planets" said ChaosBlackWarGreymon. "I can sense that this energy is emitted more from this castle... from that Shinigami previously... from you..." he continued. "I don't know what you're talking about" said Ryuumaru. ChaosBlackWarGreymon looked around at the castle and at the other places around. "You still haven't answered my question" said Ryuumaru. "What?" said ChaosBlackWarGreymon. "Who are you?" said Ryuumaru. "I am ChaosBlackWarGreymon of ChaosPlanet. I came here to find the source of the energy that is damaging the balance in the world" said ChaosBlackWarGreymon. "ChaosPlanet? I've never heard about this planet before" said Ryuumaru. ChaosBlackwarGreymon said "I had never heard of your planet either". "Well, since you are not a Sacred Creature, I will have to ask you to leave from here..." said Ryuumaru. "Okay, my job is done anyway" said ChaosBlackWarGreymon, as he started to fly. He stopped, though, and then turned his head and looked at Ryuumaru and asked "Hey, who was this Mag guy anyway?". "Mag is a member of the Sacred Band, a group of the ten most powerful warmasters in our planet, who receive commands only by me, and have authority over Shinigamis, Sacred Creatures and peasants" said Ryuumaru. "Okay then. Farewell" said ChaosBlackWarGreymon, as he started flying back to ChaosPlanet.

While ChaosBlackWarGreymon as at the New World, ChaosLord was at Dragon Planet. Once he reached the planet, he saw some dragons. "Look! Is that..." said a Ghostdragon. "ChaosLord!" said an Archeoptegon. ChaosLord landed on the planet. "Hello, dragons" he said. Dragonaurus approached him and said "ChaosLord! What are you doing here? We did just as you said, and we never went to earth". "I know, this is not the reason why I came" said ChaosLord. "Then what is it?" said Dragonaurus. "I just came to see how things are on this planet" said ChaosLord. "Well, things are fine here. But... now that you mention it, there have been some slight problems" said Dragonaurus. "I thought so. What happened?" asked ChaosLord. "Well... lately, some dragons have been going berserker, causing much destruction apparently for no reason. Some of us think it is because of some energy in the atmosphere, but then again not all of us sense this energy, which makes us disagree about the cause of the behaviour of these dragons" said Dragonaurus. "I see. That energy is affecting you too" said ChaosLord. "Who else is being affected by it?" asked a Komodrasaur. "The beings that live on earth and on ChaosPlanet" said ChaosLord. "ChaosPlanet? What is that?" asked a Snakezaur. "It is a planet inhabited by machines. And now I must go there and see if ChaosBlackwarGreymon has discovered any interesting information. I will see you later" said ChaosLord, as he flew away from Dragon Planet, back to ChaosTower on ChaosPlanet. "So, the energy is causing this after all?" said an Aligon. "It seems so" said Dragonaurus. "Let's just hope that ChaosLord will stop it" he continued.



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Chapter 14: The Spreading of Chaos


"None of them... I ain't choosin' any of your options, fυckhead!" said a man as he charged at ChaosLord and tried to punch him, but ChaosLord slapped the man with his claw, knocking him out and sending him flying until he landed in the sea. Then suddenly, a gun shot was heard, and then a bullet hit ChaosLord at the back of the head. Then ChaosLord turned around and saw a cop. "Alright, I'll deal with you, machine!" said the cop as he pointed at ChaosLord with his gun. Then ChaosLord started walking towards the cop slowly, while the cop was slowly stepping back away from ChaosLord. "S-S-S-Stay back!" said the cop, trembling as he felt the psychic energy coming out of ChaosLord's body, which were getting stronger and stronger as ChaosLord walked closer to the cop. Then ChaosLord lifted the cop up from the ground with his psychic powers, and then he threw the cop across the ocean, and he eventually got lost in the horizon. Then ChaosLord turned around to face the people again, but he saw many police cars surrounding him! Then many policemen came out of the cars and started shooting at ChaosLord with some guns, but the bullets were hitting ChaosLord without doing any damage! "I'll let you guys have these weaklings" said ChaosLord as he looked at his army of dinosaur-like machines. "Yes sir!" the dinosaur-like machines shouted together as they all charged towards the policemen and started eating, slashing, stomping them and whipping them with their powerful tails. The police were shooting the dinosaur-like machines with their guns, but the bullets were too weak to penetrate through their metal bodies.

While the dinosaurs were slaughtering the policemen, ChaosLord, RoboAlakazam and Skizor started walking towards the citizens slowly. Some policemen were firing at ChaosLord, RoboAlakazam and Skizor, but they just ignored the bullets, which weren't doing anything to them. "Sir, should we help the dinosaurs?" asked RoboAlakazam as he floated next to ChaosLord. "No... My dinosaur army is way more than enough to deal with those weak sinners" ChaosLord replied. "I see" said RoboAlakazam. Then ChaosLord looked at a little kid and said "Worship me". "No!" said the kid, but then ChaosLord opened his mouth, and then he started sucking air into it. The little kid got sucked inside ChaosLord's mouth, and then ChaosLord crunched the kid a few times. Then he spat the remains of the kid out of his mouth at a young, teenage girl, knocking her down and covering a dress which she was wearing with the little kid's blood. Then the girl screamed. Then ChaosLord looked at the rest of the people and said "Worship me and you will be saved. But if you refuse, you will be slayed" as lightning suddenly sparked in the sky, which was followed by a loud thunder. "Run!" said an old man, and then the people started running away, but a group of ten Pokémon trainers stayed behind. "You guys run, we'll deal with this fυcker!" said one of the trainers as he looked at the people who were running away, and then he took out six PokéBalls and threw them out, and then a Charizard, a Blastoise, a Venusaur, a Raichu, a Rhydon and an Alakazam appeared. Then the other trainers sent out all six of their Pokémon too. "Attack!" the trainers shouted together, and then all their Pokémon used their most powerful attacks against ChaosLord, but ChaosLord controlled the attacks with his Psychic powers and redirected them back to the Pokémon, hitting them and damaging them badly. Some of the Pokémon were also sent flying by their own attacks, and they landed on their own trainers, damaging them too. "The unclean must be purged" said ChaosLord as he shot two huge blasts of powerful slicing wind out of the twin cannons on his back at the Pokémon and their trainers. The blasts of slicing wind ripped many pieces of rocks out of the ground as they travelled above the ground, reducing parts of it to rubbles, before they hit the Pokémon and their trainers, shredding them into hundreds of pieces while they were screaming, and their bodies all exploded in blood. Since the Pokémon and the trainers who were hit by the attack were all very close together, one huge explosion of blood could be seen from very far away in the distance. After the Pokémon and the trainers were shredded to pieces by the two blasts of slicing wind, their blood were also being carried by the slicing wind, which were still going until they hit a large building, making it collapse. After that, the blood of the Pokémon and the trainers who were killed started raining down from the sky, and they mixed with the rain water on the ground.

Meanwhile, the dinosaurs have just finished slaughtering all the policemen, many of whom were eaten, while none of the dinosaurs were even harmed due to their excellent defence. But then suddenly, a missile hit a Mamenchisaurus-like machine, blowing him up. "Hm?" What just happened?" said a Titanosaurus-like machine as he looked at the remains of the one who just got blown up. Then all the dinosaurs looked around themselves, and they saw that they were surrounded by tanks and warships! "Surrender now, lizards!" said a soldier who was standing on the ground. Then a Tyrannosaurus-like machine looked at ChaosLord and said "ChaosLord, should we kill these guys too?". "You may" ChaosLord answered, and then the dinosaurs started fighting with the army. "Slaughter them!" said another Tyrannosaurus-like machine, and then all the dinosaurs started stomping around, fighting with the army. These dinosaurs were so powerful that they were destroying tanks with a single strike from their big, mighty tails! They were also blasting Hyper Beams out of their mouthes at the warships, damaging them, as well as some of the soldiers who were in them. The soldiers were firing at the dinosaurs with sniper rifles, submachineguns and other weapons, although none of them other than rocket launchers and grenade launchers were doing much damage to the dinosaurs, who were all wearing extremely hard armor. The tanks were able to defeat some of the dinosaurs easily, but they were big targets, so they were also destroyed easily by the dinosaurs. Then some army planes came and dropped some bombs on the dinosaurs, blowing many of them up, but then some other dinosaurs started firing Hyper Beams at the planes, destroying them.

Meanwhile, ChaosLord, RoboAlakazam and Skizor were watching as the dinosaurs were fighting with the army. Then suddenly, some of the soldiers noticed them, and then the soldiers started heading towards the place where ChaosLord, RoboAlakazam and Skizor were. Some tanks also followed them. "It looks like you three are the cowardly ones!" said a soldier as he started shooting at RoboAlakazam with an uzi submachinegun, but RoboAlakazam used his psychic powers to redirect the bullets back at the soldier, killing him. Then another soldier was firing at Skizor, but Skizor deflected all the bullets with his claws. Then he suddenly started flying towards the soldier who was firing at him before at a speed which the eye cannot follow. Before the soldier noticed it, Skizor had already moved behind him. Then Skizor beheaded the soldiers with his left claw. Then some tanks were firing at ChaosLord, but ChaosLord was just standing there as explosions were happening all over his body without causing him any harm. "Hmm... these guys seem to be giving your men quite a hard time... should we help them?" asked RoboAlakazam. "Yeah. I can deal with these guys coming after me" said ChaosLord, and then RoboAlakazam and Skizor both started flying towards the place where the dinosaurs were fighting with the army. Skizor started flying around in the sky, destroying army planes with his claws, and occasionally diving down to the ground to slash up some soldiers, while flying around at extreme speed and dodging all the bullets, rockets and missiles fired at him. At the same time, RoboAlakazam was firing Psybeams at many tanks and warships, destroying them, while creating a shield of psychic energy around his own body to protect himself against all the projectiles.

Meanwhile, ChaosLord was just standing still with his eyes closed while many soldiers were surrounding him and shooting him with some guns. "Hey! You! What the fυck's with your reaction? Aren't you going to do anything?" said a soldier as he was looking at ChaosLord while firing at him with a machinegun at the same time. Then ChaosLord opened his eyes, looked at the soldier and said "You want me to do something? I see. You'll regret it then", and then he started shooting many missiles out of his cannons rapidly, destroying all the tanks and soldiers that were surrounding him. Then ChaosLord looked and saw that everyone who were running away from him before had all dissapeared out of sight. "It's useless..." said ChaosLord as he used his psychic powers to Teleport everyone back in front of him! "No! Where are we? We're back where we were before!" said a man while everyone were frightened after they were suddenly Teleported. "Oh well... atleast the army's here... I'm sure where safe now, are we?" said another person. "Your army is getting owned" said ChaosLord. "No... it can't be..." a woman said as she covered her mouth with her hands. "Worship me" said ChaosLord, but then suddenly, some electricity hit ChaosLord from behind. Then ChaosLord turned around and saw a tall, muscular man with spiky yellow hair, wearing green clothes and he had a Raichu next to him. "Don't worry people, atleast I'm here!" said the man. "Lt. Surge!" said a girl excitedly as she saw the yellow-haired man and blushed. "Everyone! Run away while I take this guy down myself!" said the yellow-haired man, known as Lt. Surge. Then all the people who were Teleported by ChaosLord before took this opportunity to run away again. "Who are you?" asked ChaosLord as he looked at Lt. Surge. "I am Lt. Surge, the Gym Leader of this city" Lt. Surge replied. Then ChaosLord said "It seems that you didn't come here in order to worship me". "So what of it? I came here to take you down" said Lt. Surge. "I wonder if you can" said ChaosLord. Then Lt. Surge said "I will! Raichu, Zap Cannon attack! Now!". "RAAIICHUU!!!" Raichu cried as it blasted a powerful shot of electricity at ChaosLord, who absorbed the electricity into his drill. "I'll give this back" said ChaosLord as he thrusted his drill into the ground in front of him, and then some electricity came out of the drill and started travelling along the surface of the ground towards Raichu. The electricity were also reducing some of the ground to rubbles as they travelled along it. Then the electricity was about to hit Raichu. "Raichu, dodge it!" said Lt. Surge, and then Raichu jumped up in the air and dodged the electricity. "Use Thunder! Now!" Lt. Surged shouted. "RAII.....CHUUUUUU!!!!" Raichu cried while it was still in mid-air as lightning sparked in the sky. Then a thick bolt of lightning came down from the sky at ChaosLord. The lightning was almost immediately followed by an extremely loud thunder, but ChaosLord Teleported and avoided the lightning strike, which created an enormous crater in the ground, and it also caused a huge explosion which destroyed four buildings and many cars around it. Then ChaosLord reappeared somewhere else on the ground, and then he looked up and saw Raichu, which was still in mid-air. Then ChaosLord aimed at Raichu with his cannons, and then he fired two missiles at Raichu. The missiles hit Raichu, causing a huge explosion in the air, and then Raichu was sent flying by the explosion until it hit a parked car, flipping it over, and then Raichu fainted. "You bastard..." said Lt. Surge as he looked at ChaosLord while returning Raichu back into its PokéBall. "Go, Electabuzz!" said Lt. Surge as he threw out another PokéBall, and out came an Electabuzz. "Electabuzz! Use Cross Chop on that machine!" Lt. Surge shouted as he pointed at ChaosLord. Then Electabuzz charged at ChaosLord and Cross Chopped him at the face, but nothing happened. Then ChaosLord sighed as he hit Electabuzz with the side of his arm, sending it flying back, and then it landed on the ground on its back. Then Electabuzz started sliding across the wet surface of the ground. Then ChaosLord flew towards Electabuzz and tackled it at extreme speed, sending it flying until it hit a truck, knocking it down. Then ChaosLord raised his claw and was about to slay Electabuzz, which was on the ground, fainted, but Lt. Surge quickly put his Electabuzz back into its PokéBall before ChaosLord was able to attack it. "Enough!" said Lt. Surge as he threw out another PokéBall, and out came an Electrode. "This is the end! Electrode, use Explosion!" said Lt. Surge as he pointed at ChaosLord. Then Electrode started rolling on the ground towards ChaosLord at extreme speed. Then Electrode used Explosion when it got close to ChaosLord, causing a huge explosion, and thick smokes covered the city. "I guess the Gym Leader needs to step in at times like these..." said Lt. Surge as he watched the smoke, thinking that ChaosLord had been destroyed, but then suddenly, he heard ChaosLord's voice coming from behind him: "Sorry, but I don't think even a Gym Leader would be enough". Then Lt. Surge turned around and saw ChaosLord standing behind him. ChaosLord also had his back turned to Lt. Surge "What? I-Impossible..." said Lt. Surge. "All's possible for the PokéGod" said ChaosLord as he swinged his tail hard at Lt. Surge, sending him flying through the air until he landed in the ocean. Then ChaosLord faced the direction where the people were standing before, and he saw that everyone had dissapeared out of sight again. "It's useless no matter how many times you weak humans try" said ChaosLord, and then he suddenly roared extremely loudly. The roar was so loud that many people in other cities could hear it! The sound of the roar also shattered all the glasses in the city, including the windows of every single house and building in the city, every single glass cup in the city, and the glasses of everyone in the city who wears them. A small earthquake also happened when ChaosLord roared, and the earthquake made many buildings in the city fall down. One of these buildings fell down right in front of the path of the people who were running away from ChaosLord. "Dammit! Our path's blocked! We need to head back and find another path!" said a girl as she saw the building which was blocking her path. Then she and everyone else who were with her started running towards the opposite direction of where they came from. "But what was that extremely loud and creepy sound earlier?" asked a young boy. Then suddenly, everyone heard a voice coming from in front of them: "The roar of the PokéGod". Then everyone looked ahead and saw ChaosLord blocking their path. "No... not you again..." said an old lady as she looked at ChaosLord angrily, but then ChaosLord used his psychic powers to toss the old lady up into space. Then ChaosLord looked at the people and said "Alright, I believe I've already shown you enough of my powers to say that... unless you people are extremely dumb... that you now know there are only two choices left for you... either to worship me... or to die. You should all know that there are no alternatives". Everyone were silent for a minute. "So... What do you say?" asked ChaosLord. Then everyone got on their knees and started worshipping ChaosLord. "As I thought. Now, spread it. Go spread your knowledge about my existance, and repeat to other people throughout the world the words I said to you: "Worship me and you will be saved. But if you refuse, you will be slayed"". "U-Understood, O Great OverLord of Chaos!" said all the people together, and then they all started heading off to different places.

To be continued


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Part 6: The warning

ChaosLord flew back to the final room of ChaosTower on ChaosPlanet and waited there. Soon, ChaosBlackWarGreymon arrived, and kneeled before ChaosLord. "OverLord of Chaos, I have discovered some interesting facts about the source of the energy" said ChaosBlackWarGreymon. "Continue" said ChaosLord. "This energy appears to be coming from a planet which is very similar to earth. Its inhabitats call it the New World, and the mysterious power runs through this place. It pools in these locations" said ChaosBlackWarGreymon. "Did you find out who or what is creating this power?" said ChaosLord. "I am not entirely sure, but I believe that it comes from a person known as Ryuumaru, who is the ruler of this place, and is considered to be the highest god in the universe by the inhabitats of that place" said ChaosBlackWarGreymon. "Highest god?" said ChaosLord. "Yes, my lord" said ChaosBlackWarGreymon. "According to their mythology, Ryuumaru is the creator of their world. He trained himself and, with the help of five other creatures he trained, he defeated a dragon, known as Dragonaurus, who was destroying their planet during a huge war. In fact, that Dragonaurus was also the reason why the beings of the planet came to life in the first place, as he filled their planet with water while he was on something like a rampage" he continued. "Dragonaurus?" said ChaosLord. "Yes, my lord. Dragonaurus is supposed to be the second most powerful being in the universe, after Ryuumaru" said ChaosBlackWarGreymon. "Dragonaurus is a half red half blue dragon with yellow eyes, right?" said ChaosLord. "Yes, according to what I was told, this is true. Do you know something about that dragon?" asked ChaosBlackWarGreymon. "Dragonaurus is a rare kind of dragon that used to live on a planet known as Dragon Planet. In the past, I slaughtered all of the dragons of that place and left only their eggs. Only one of them seemed to contain a Dragonaurus, though, as when I met the dragons later, there was only one Dragonaurus with them" said ChaosLord. "Maybe a Dragonaurus left the planet even before you went there to slaughter these dragons" said ChaosBlackWarGreymon. "Yes, that is probably it. I remember seeing a Dragonaurus flying over earth even before humans existed, before I had even discovered ChaosPlanet. Perhaps it was this one that filled their planet with water" said ChaosLord. "Well, we can find him and ask him about that" said ChaosBlackWarGreymon. "That is of no importance right now. What else did you learn about the planet you found?" said ChaosLord. "After he was defeated, Dragonaurus joined Ryuumaru and fought to stop the war with him and the five other beings that Ryuumaru had tamed. The war finally ended when Ryuumaru became powerful enough as to stop the war on his own. Then, he became the king and created a new society with strict rules and severe punishment for breaking them" said ChaosBlackWarGreymon. "So, that Ryuumaru's power is so great as to even come out of his own body and extend into the universe?" said ChaosLord. "Maybe it is not just Ryuumaru's energy, my lord. It could also be the energy from people and creatures to whom Ryuumaru has given powers, known as the Shinigamis, and the Sacred Crearures. They live in some towns inside a huge, circular, supposedly indestructible wall. That place is also where Ryuumaru's castle is located, and also where the members of the Sacred Band, the finest warriors of that planet, live" said ChaosBlackWarGreymon. ChaosLord then stood still and sensed the energy. "However, the energy seemed to also come from the whole planet, as if the air, the land and the sea of this place had been tainted by it" said ChaosBlackWarGreymon. "I will go and see what can be done about that" said ChaosLord. "My lord, it might be difficult to reason with these people there. They do not know of your existence, or your power" said ChaosBlackWarGreymon. "They'll learn..." said ChaosLord, and then he flew out of ChaosTower and started travelling towards the New World.

After some time, ChaosLord reached the planet, and landed on some grass. He stood and sensed the energy. "This is not one energy... it is many forms of energy mixed together" he thought. "H-Hello? You are stepping on my flowers. Could you please get out of my garden?" said a woman. ChaosLord then flew out of the garden, and went towards the huge white walls. "These must be the walls ChaosBlackWarGreymon was talking about" thought ChaosLord. Then he teleported behind the walls, and a black man dressed in black saw him. "Hm? Who are you?" said the man. "I am looking for Ryuumaru" said ChaosLord. "Are you one of the Sacred Crearures?" asked the man. "No" said ChaosLord. "Then you are an intruder" said the man, as he pulled out a black sword, and shot some black energy out of it at ChaosLord. But the black energy got reflected as it hit ChaosLord's left claw, which ChaosLord used to block the beam, which then returned back to the man, hitting him and dropping him to the ground. "What... this is not normal" said the man, as he got up fast. "Do you know who I am?" said ChaosLord. "No, and I don't care, because in a few seconds, you will no longer even exist" said the man. Then he tried to slash ChaosLord with his sword, but ChaosLord did a spin and slammed him with his tail before his attack could land, and the man was sent flying until he fell in some mud. "Argh..." he said, as he got up, dirty and smelling from the mud. "You are strong..." said the man. "You have no idea how strong" said ChaosLord. "But brute force alone can't win a battle. Let's see your speed" said the man, as he started running around ChaosLord at extreme speed. ChaosLord stood still patiently, while the man ran around him in circles, trying to confuse him, but ChaosLord seemed to remain calm. The man kept running and running, and when he thought it was the right time to catch ChaosLord off guard, he jumped at extreme speed towards ChaosLord to stab him with his sword, but ChaosLord reacted instantly and grabbed his sword's end with the three ends of his right hand, stopping the man's attack. "WHAT?" said the man. "You are a fool" said ChaosLord, as he opened his right claw and immediately fired a Hyper Beam from it, blasting the black man and his sword away. They both flew for some distance until the man eventually got smashed on a wooden house, and his sword got stabbed on the house's wooden wall, exactly above the man's head, cutting some of his hair.

Meanwhile, inside Ryuumaru's castle, a girl dressed in a purple kimono, who had big, blue eyes and orange hair tied in a ponytail, was walking in a corridor. Suddenly, she heard some strange sound coming from outside the castle, as if something had hit a wall. Immediately, she ran at a balcony to see what was going on. Then, she looked and saw the black man smashed on the wooden wall of a house, and then she looked at ChaosLord, who was also there. ChaosLord turned his head and also looked at her in the eyes. Immediately, the girl ran away scared. "Ryuumaru! Ryuumaru!" she shouted as she opened a door and entered a room, inside which was Ryuumaru, sitting on a chair and writing something down on a book on his desk. Ryuumaru stopped writing, looked at the girl, and said "What is it, Rika?". The girl, whose name was Rika, said "Something terrible! A mean, scary machine is right outside the castle, fighting against Kuroi! He looked at me in the eyes, and I was so scared! Ryuumaru, I think he might have killed Kuroi! What should we do? I'm scared!!!!". "Relax, I'll go check it out" said Ryuumaru, as he got up from his chair and started walking away. "Be careful!!!" said Rika, frightened. "I'll be fine" said Ryuumaru, as he walked towards a balcony. He walked at it and saw ChaosLord and the black man, who was called Kuroi. Kuroi got up and grabbed his sword, while three more men came into the fighting scene. The three men pulled out some swords and charged at ChaosLord, only to get sent flying by an explosion of psychic energy ChaosLord created around himself. One of the men was sent flying and ended up inside a river, which dragged him, another broke through the window of a house and ended up on a table, breaking it, while the last one flew right next to Ryuumaru and got smashed on the castle's wall, and then fell on the balcony fainted. "Hmm..." said Ryuumaru, as two men, three women and a small dragon arrived. The dragon fired a yellow beam at ChaosLord, but ChaosLord used his psychic powers to redirect it at the three women, hitting the ground at their feet, fainting them all in a big explosion. Then ChaosLord looked at the dragon straight in the eyes, and the dragon got paralyzed from a powerful feeling of fear, and then he lost his senses and fell fainted on the ground. Then the two men started charging at ChaosLord, who pointed at them with his left claw, stopping them cold with his psychic power. Then, with this power, he raised them high in the air, and threw them at Kuroi, who ducked and avoided their bodies, which got smashed on the ground behind Kuroi, and the two men fainted. Then Kuroi pulled out two pistols from his pockets and started shooting ChaosLord, but the bullets were just bouncing off ChaosLord's body after they were hitting him, without doing him any damage at all. Nevertheless, Kuroi stubbornly kept shooting ChaosLord, when suddenly he heard a voice "Enough!". Then Kuroi stopped firing his weapons, and he and ChaosLord looked and saw Ryuumaru standing on the balcony. Ryuumaru jumped from the balcony next to Kuroi, facing ChaosLord. Also, at the same time, all the members of the Sacred Band and many Shinigamis arrived, all of them having pulled out their swords and ready for battle. "Who are you?" asked Ryuumaru. "I am PokeGod ChaosLord. And you must be Ryuumaru" said ChaosLord. "That's right, I am Ryuumaru" said Ryuumaru. "What do you want here?" he continued. "The spirit energy that you and your warriors emit... and the particles in the air, which slow down the aging process of the beings here and keep your environment clean... they are causing trouble to the rest of the world" said ChaosLord, as he was looking around. "You know of the particles in our planet's atmosphere? Strange, I did not tell the other machine anything about that. How can you know about it?" said Ryuumaru."I understand more than you could possibly know" said ChaosLord as he looked at Ryuumaru. "So, what do you want here?" said Ryuumaru. "These energies, and mostly your spirit energy, are harmful for the rest universe. This must stop" said ChaosLord. "Harmful? How can that be? The inhabitats of our planet are just fine" said Ryuumaru. "Living for years under such conditions, they've grown used to this energy. But the inhabitats of earth, ChaosPlanet and Dragon Planet have not" said ChaosLord. "Okay, so, what can be done about it?" said Ryuumaru. "This planet has been defiled extremely. Only its destruction can purge it clean. You must take all the planet's population and move to another planet. I will destroy this one, and then you and your people will live on another planet, and stop practicing these foul, unnatural powers" said ChaosLord, and then all the people and creatures who were around were shocked, except for Ryuumaru. "You are asking me to leave the planet I created, abandon my powers, and go live as any peasant on another planet?" said Ryuumaru. "There is no other choice" said ChaosLord. "What will happen if I don't accept?" said Ryuumaru. "You don't want to know" said ChaosLord. Then he turned his back at Ryuumaru, and was about to start flying. "I will give you six days to think of it. So long" said ChaosLord, as he flew away. Ryuumaru then looked down. "What are we going to do, my lord?" asked a Shinigami. Ryuumaru looked at that man and said "These machines are just looking for an excuse for war. If that is what they want, then let them come" said Ryuumaru. "Just what I thought too! I hope this black dragon guy comes too, I can't wait to kick his ass!" said Mag, excited. "W-War?" said Rika, as she looked from the balcony, with a feeling of fear obvious on her face. Ryuumaru looked at her and said "I wish there was another way to settle this out. But sometimes, we must fight. We can't just let some arrogant machines to drive us from our land like that" said Ryuumaru. "But... what if we lose? These machines looked very powerful... Even Kuroi couldn't beat that red machine before! What will happen if thousands of them come?" said Rika. Ryumaru jumped up to the balcony, next to Rika. "Do not worry, Rika. That was natural, he did say he was some sort of god after all. He must be their leader, and to be so, he must be hard to take out. But Dragonaurus was also hard to take out, and I defeated him. And now I am even stronger. I have mastered the arts of hand-to-hand combat and energy control. Trust me, these machines don't stand a chance against us" said Ryuumaru. "Y-Yes... We can do it... We can defeat them..." said Rika. "We can. And we will" said Ryuumaru, and then he and Rika walked into the castle, while the Sacred Band, the Sacred Creatures and the Shinigamis that were just outside the castle dispersed, discussing with each other about what had just happened.



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May scorpions nest in their bellies, and plague eat them from within. That they would do such a thing deserves a thousand scorpions gnawing at their guts for eternity.


Part 7: Transgression

ChaosLord flew back at ChaosPlanet, where some machines were waiting for him. The three Chaos Generals were also with them. ChaosLord landed in front of them."How did it go, my lord?" said ChaosBlackWarGreymon. "I gave them six days to think of my proposal, to evacuate their planet and stop practicing the exercises that create these foul powers. Let us just hope that they can listen to reason" said ChaosLord. "But there's no way they will listen! They do not even know you or your power, my lord! Why would they listen to someone they don't respect?" said ChaosMetalSeadramon. "As long as they have a free will, there is always a possibility that they will see the facts and come up with a logical decision. I gave them six days, so that they can think clearly before they act. Now we shall wait" said ChaosLord. "But, my lord. I doubt that they are actually considering what you said to them. I think they will probably be making plans for an attack right now!" said ChaosPiedmon. "But they don't know where out planet is located. They didn't even know about its existence until I met them" said ChaosBlackWarGreymon. "They might send spies!" said ChaosPiedmon. "Alright then. Get some Chosen Champions and their units to guard the planet. Tell them to look out for any strangers" said ChaosLord. "Yes sir!" said ChaosMetalSeadramon, and then he and the two other Chaos Generals went to inform the rest machines about what they should do. ChaosLord went to ChaosTower, and waited there.

The next day after ChaosLord had come to his planet, Ryuumaru called a meeting of him with the ten members of the Sacred Band, the finest warriors on the planet after him. The meeting was held in a large room with a wooden floor and golden walls decorated by many gems. In the room there was a long table, with four chairs to one side, three to the other, and one high chair at the top end of the table. Ryuumaru sat on on the high chair, looking down on the gold table in front of him, while the members of the Sacred Band came to the meeting. Seven Shinigamis and three Sacred Creatures entered the room and took their positions around the table. Ryuumaru then started talking. "I called you here today to discuss the important issue of war. You were all there yesterday when the leader of the enemy arrogantly showed himself at the castle and demanded that we abandon our homes and lives. Are we to let a black mark stain the history of our existence like that?" said Ryuumaru. "Hell no! I say we go and kick some metal butt right now!" said Mag. "Calm down, Mag. We don't even know where these machines came from" said a man with long, brown hair and facial hair, dressed in white. "Joshua is right. We can't attack them just like that. First we will need to find more information about them, and then make a plan for an attack" said an old, bald man with long white moustache and beard, dressed in white, whose name was Yaiba. "We should send spies to infiltrate their planet and find out information about them. Their location, their numbers, their power" said Kuroi. "Kuroi is right. I will send a spy first to find out the location of their planet, and after that, I will send more to find out about their strength" said Ryuumaru. "Does everyone agree?" said Ryuumaru, and then all the members of the Sacred Band agreed. "Fine then. Let it be so" said Ryuumaru, and then the meeting ended.

Ryuumaru then went outside his castle. He walked at a quiet place where there was much grass, trees, a lake and a small waterfall, and found a short Shinigami with red hair who was training. "Gaara" he said. The Shinigami turned around and saw Ryuumaru, and immediately said "My lord" as he kneeled. "I have a mission for you" said Ryuumaru. "What would you have me do, master?" said Gaara. "I want you to travel towards this location and search for a planet inhabited by machines" said Ryuumaru, as he pointed at a direction in the sky, in which he had seen ChaosLord flying as he left their planet after his visit. "Now?" said Gaara. "Yes. We must act as soon as possible" said Ryuumaru. "As you wish, my lord" said Gaara, as a black energy surrounded him, and he started flying towards the direction at which Ryuumaru had pointed. He flew for some time, and he saw a dark planet which appeared to be inhabited. "Hmm..." he said, but suddenly, he was hit from behind at his left shoulder by something that was flying at extreme speed, and got severely damaged and started bleeding badly. He looked and saw a metal bird flying away from him at extreme speed. The metal bird then turned quickly and flew at him again, hitting him with its right wing once more, but at his right shoulder this time, before he could react, since the bird was flying at incredible speed, which could hardly be avoided by Gaara's reflexes. "W-What is this?" said Gaara, as he flew away fast, but he had already been heavily injured. The metal bird then flew at Gaara fast and fired some missiles from its wings at Gaara at a close range so that he would not avoid them, and the missiles hit him and hurt him even more. Gaara was exhausted, and said "I... I'd better run away and tell Ryuumaru about my discovery before that thing kills me!". But then, the bird flew at him with extreme speed and started spinning around itself very fast, and then it tried to drill Gaara with its beak, but he avoided the attack in the last second. "I-I could have died by that!" he said, and then the metal bird stopped spinning, stod still in the air, and looked at Gaara, and then it fired a Hyper Beam at him from its mouth. Gaara immediately pulled out his sword and fired a red beam of energy, which collided with the bird's Hyper Beam and created a big explosion. Then, out of the explosion's dust emerged the bird flying at extreme speed, and went flying at Gaara and tackled him at the stomach, making him cough out much blood, and lose his senses.

Ryuumaru was waiting for Gaara to return in his room, in his castle. Rika was with him also. "He's taking too long! What if he didn't make it?" she said. "I doubt about that. Gaara is a very stealthy and powerful Shinigami, I'm sure he can defend himself, if he even gets discovered that it" said Ryuumaru. "I'm worried!!!" said Rika. Suddenly, they heard a noise coming from the balcony, as if something had fallen on it. "What was that?" said Rika. "I'll go check it out" said Ryuumaru. Then he walked at the balcony, and saw a big bag fallen on it. Then he looked at the sky and saw a silver, metal bird flying away from his planet. "Hmm..." said Ryuumaru, and then he looked at the bag, and saw a note attached to it. Meanwhile, Rika also came and started to open the bag. Ryuumaru read the note. "As children of the PokeGod we value honesty above all other qualities, and feel it would be less than honest not to inform you that your conduct of late has caused us considerable annoyance" said the note. "Oh no..." said Rika, as she opened the bag. Ryuumaru looked and saw Gaara in the bag, fainted and heavily injured and bleeding. He was still alive, though. "Rika, get someone to heal Gaara, fast!" said Ryuumaru. "O-Okay!" said Rika, as she started to run to find someone to heal Gaara. "Damn..." said Ryuumaru.

The next day, Gaara woke up in a hospital buiding on his planet. Ryuumaru and some other people were all around him. "W-What happened?" asked Gaara. "I don't know. You tell us" said Ryuumaru. "Oh... I remember... I went to the place where you told me... I found a planet... but then, I was suddenly attacked by a bird-like machine... it was too fast, and it could see me, even though I had covered myself in dark energy... I don't know how, I guess it must've had more senses than just vision... and before I could even realize what was happening, this machine had already caused me heavy injuries at my shoulders with its sharp wings... then I tried to run away, but it chased me... after that, I don't remember clearly what happened" said Gaara. "So, there is a planet at this location?" said Ryuumaru. "Yes, my lord. I am pretty confident about that" said Gaara. "Good. Now rest" said Ryuumaru, as he walked away. He went out of the hospital, and started to walk back to his castle. While he was walking, Dragonaurus, a half red and half blue dragon with yellow eyes, flew and landed next to him. "Hi, Dragonaurus" said Ryuumaru. "Hi, Ryuumaru. How's it going?" said Dragonaurus. "Not too well. Our spy got crushed by a machine. They're better than I thought. At least, though, he discovered the location of ChaosPlanet" said Ryuumaru. "So, what should we do now?" said Dragonaurus. "I'm thinking of sending Dragonightmare on an investigation mission" said Ryuumaru. "Dragonightmare, eh? I've heard of him. It is said that he is one of our most powerful Shinigamis, his power even rivalling that of the members of the Sacred Band" said Dragonaurus. "Exactly. Even if the machines find him, he will be able to put up a much greater fight against them, and escape" said Ryuumaru. "Right. And his strong armor makes him much more resistant than Gaara. I think he'll definitely pull it off" said Dragonaurus.

Later that day, at night, Ryuumaru called Dragonightmare to his office. He was a tall, strong man with black knight armor and a green dragon symbol on his chest plate. He was also weilding a big sword. Dragonightmare arrived into the room and saw Ryuumaru sitting on a chair behind his desk. "Did you ask for me, my lord?" said Dragonightmare, as he bowed before Ryumaru. "Yes, Dragonightmare. As you may know, the spy we sent managed to confirm the location of ChaosPlanet, but not anything else. I want you to go and investigate that planet" said Ryuumaru. "As you wish, my lord" said Dragonightmare, as he exit Ryuumaru's castle, and met Gaara. He asked him where ChaosPlanet was, and Gaara pointed at a direction in the sky. Dragonightmare then flew towards that direction at extreme speed. After some time, he arrived at ChaosPlanet, and landed behind a big rock. On the other side of the rock, there were two machines with four arms, each one holding a deadly weapon, like a flamethrower, a rocket launcher, a shotgun, or even a minigun. They were Gunchamps, and they were talking to each other. "Have you heard of the spy Skarmwary caught? Poor bastard got totally owned there!" said one of them. "Yeah, that fool couldn't even lay a blow on Skarmwary. It flew so fast that the guy couldn't even see what hit him!" said the other, laughing. "Anyway, we should be careful for spies on our planet, as Chosen Champion Machinedramon ordered us" he continued. Then the two Gunchamps started walking, patrolling the area. Dragonightmare was following them, hiding behind rocks and other things. After some minutes, while they were walking, one of the Gunchamps whispered "Psst! Don't look back, but I think there's a guy spying on us". "Really? Let's blow him to pieces" whispered the other. "No, he might get away. Let's take him to Machinedramon" whispered the other Gunchamp. "Good idea" said the other one, and then they walked towards a structure of some sort. "Wait here. I'll go talk to the boss!" said one of the Gunchamps, as he entered the structure. "Okay" said the other Gunchamp as he waited. After a few minutes, Gunchamp exit the building and said "Hey! Come with me! Machinedramon has something important to say!". "Important? That might be interesting. I'd better follow these machines" thought Dragonightmare, as he was hiding behind a small structure, observing the machines. The two Gunchamps entered the building, and Dragonightmare, after seeing that noone else was in the area, went to the door of the building. He looked carefully, and saw that there was an empty corridor which lead to another door to a room. Dragonightmare took some slow and silent steps and quietly started to move towards that door. Suddenly, Dragonightmare got caught completely off guard as a wall next to him got crushed by a huge Machinedramon, which grabbed Dragonightmare with its right claw before he could react, and said "You think you can sneak about without us seeing you?". Dragonightmare dropped his sword out of surprise as Machinedramon grabbed him, and then Machinedramon stomped on his sword and crushed it beneath his heavy tread. Immobilized by Machinedramon's tight hold, Dragonightmare desperately tried to escape, but he all he could do was move his legs, as Machinedramon had grabbed his entire upper body and his arms too. Dragonightmare struggled as much as he could to escape, but Machinedramon tightened his hold even more, sqeezing Dragonightmare and cracking his upper body armor until it broke to pieces, and then he used Energy Claw, absorbing much energy from Dragonightmare's body into his right hand and to the rest of his metal body. As Dragonightmare lost his energy, he started feeling faint, ans lose his senses, stopping to try to escape. "Wrargh!" said Machinedramon, as he turned his claw so that Dragonightmare's head was facing the ground, and then he smashed Dragonightmare hard on the ground three times, crushing him along with a part of his upper armor. Then Machinedramon raised his right claw, started spinning it very fast, and then he lowered it and pointed it at the ground, and opened it at the last moment before it hit the land, drilling Dragonightmare alive on the ground and chopping his entire metal armor and body to pieces, with sand, metal pieces and and blood getting spilled everywhere. The Gunchamps saw that and one of them said "That showed him! Good job, Machinedramon!". "This clown got what he deserved for trespassing in our land. Now get his worthless remains out of here" said Machinedramon, and then the Gunchamps took the pieces of Dragonightmare's body to ChaosPiedmon, one of the Chaos Generals.

The next day, Ryuumaru woke up in his room, on his bed. He got up, got dressed in his black clothes, and then he heard the door to his room getting knocked. "Come in" said Ryuumaru. Then Rika opened the door and entered the room, saying "Good morning, Ryuumaru!". "Ah, good morning, Rika. I thought it was Dragonightmare" said Ryuumaru. "He hasn't returned yet?" said Rika. "I don't know" said Ryuumaru. Rika looked and saw a box on a desk. "Ryuumaru, what is in this box?" said Rika. "I don't know. I don't remember leaving it there" said Ryuumaru, as he walked at the box. He saw a note attached to it, grabbed it, and read it. "The PokeGod wishes it to be known that you are growing distinctly tedious and annoying to him. Your behaviour has offended him, and he trusts that you will learn to mend your ways in future" said the note. "AAAAHHH!" sounded Rika's scream then, as she ran away. Ryuumaru looked. Rika had opened the box, and inside it was Dragonightmare's helmet, badly damaged and stained with his own blood. Ryuumaru was filled with sweat as he stepped back until he tripped and fell on his bed. "No... Dragonightmare..." he said, as he looked at the ceiling of his room with desparation.

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Chapter 15: Ninja to the Rescue


"How pointless..." said ChaosLord as he shot many needles out of his cannons at some of the people who were heading off, killing them. "Wh-what? D-Didn't you say you won't kill us as long as we worship you?" asked an old man. Then ChaosLord said "Yes, but those people who I just killed... I told them to spread my words... not to run away from me...". "Wh-what do you mean?" asked a fat man. Then ChaosLord said "Just then, I read all of your minds with my psychic powers. And by doing so, I found out that some people actually had no intentions of spreading my words as I told them to... instead, all they wanted to do was to take the opportunity to escape from me. And those people got what they deserve: ...hell". Everyone were surprised. "Now, I read all your minds too, and it seems like you guys are sincere about spreading my words. Now, spread them!" said ChaosLord, and then all the people who were still alive started heading off. Then ChaosLord closed his eyes and said "And what about you guys... the cowardly ones who are hiding behind that building? I know you're there. Show yourselves... if you value your lives". Then a group of ten people who were hiding behind a building came out and looked at ChaosLord. "W-We'll help spread your words too!" said one of them, but then ChaosLord said "Do not lie to me. You're merely trying to escape", and then he fired many needles out of his cannons at the people. The needles were about to hit them, when suddenly, three guys dressed in black suits jumped in front of the people and deflected all the needles with some kunai which they were holding. After that, thousands more people dressed in black suits jumped into the area, surrounding ChaosLord. "Who are you guys?" asked ChaosLord. Then the people dressed in black suits said "We are ninja from the Hidden Ninja Village in Pokéia. We were sent here to Kanto to do a mission. Although it is not part of our duty to come here, we felt that we can't just ignore all the chaos that's been going on here in Vermillion City" said one of the people dressed in black suits. "N-Ninja...?" said one of the people who were hiding from ChaosLord before. Then one of the ninja said "Fifty of us shall remain here to fight this red machine. He seems like the strongest of them all, so just one of us probably cannot deal with him. As for the rest of you, go help the army". Then fifty ninja stayed behind to fight ChaosLord, while the rest of the ninja started running towards the place where the army were fighting with the dinosaurys. Then one of the fifty ninja who stayed behind looked at ChaosLord and said "You're outnumbered! Now surrender, machine!". Then ChaosLord said "I feel no need to surrender against some weaklings who I can crush easily". "Oh really?" said a ninja as he took out a kunai, and then he threw it at ChaosLord's face, but the kunai just bounced off him without doing anything. "I'm not done yet!" said the ninja as he did some hand seals. Then he said "Katon: Goukakyuu no Jutsu!", and then he blasted a huge ball of extremely hot blazing fire out of his mouth at ChaosLord. The fireball hit ChaosLord, covering him in flames. "Now!" said the ninja, and then all the other 49 ninja who were with him surrounded ChaosLord. Then they all took out some star-shaped shuriken and threw them at ChaosLord. All the shuriken hit ChaosLord from every single direction. While all of this was happening, the ten people took this opportunity to run away. "How's that?" asked a ninja as he looked at ChaosLord. Then all the ninja watched as the rainstorm put out the fire which were covering ChaosLord's body, and they were all surprised when they saw that ChaosLord was unharmed! "Pathetic, just like you" said ChaosLord as he blasted two missiles at the ninja who was talking to him before, but the ninja jumped high up in the air and dodged the missile, which made an explosion on the ground. Then the ninja who jumped in the air formed some hand seals while he was still in mid-air. Then he said "Suiton: Suiryuudan!", and then some of the rain water which were falling down from the sky formed into the shape of a dragon. Then the dragon hovered around in the air for a while before crashing down onto ChaosLord, creating a huge explosion of water when it hit him. Then another ninja, who was standing on the ground formed some hand seals, and then he said "Raikiri!" as a ball of electricity formed in his hand. Then the ninja charged at ChaosLord at extreme speed and thrusted the ball of electricity at him while he was still covered in water, and then a huge explosion of electricity happened, which sent ChaosLord flying. ChaosLord destroyed many buildings as he was flying, and then he hovered high up in the air. Then he blasted two Hyper Beams out of his cannons from the air down at the place where the fifty ninja were standing, but the ninja all jumped towards different directions, avoiding the Hyper Beams, which created two large craters in the ground. Then all the ninja, who were still in mid-air took out some shuriken and threw them at ChaosLord, but ChaosLord blasted two shots of powerful wind out of his cannons, blowing all the shuriken back at the ninja! Then one of the ninja said "Fuuton: Daitoppa!" as he formed some hand seals, and then a huge explosion of wind happened around his body, deflecting all the shuriken which were flying at the ninja. Then all the ninja landed back on the ground. Then one of them said "Doton: Doryuu Taiga!" as he formed some hand seals, and then some of the ground in front of him turned into a river of mud! Then the ninja said "Doton: Doryuudan!" as he formed some more hand seals, and then some of the mud formed into the shape of a dragon's head, and then the dragon head started blasting many missiles made of mud out of its mouth at ChaosLord. Then the ninja said "Karyuudan!" as he formed more hand seals, and then he blasted some fire out of his mouth at the mud missiles which were flying towards ChaosLord. Now, many missiles made of mud, which were all on fire were flying towards ChaosLord. ChaosLord was being hit by the missiles, which were slowly pushing him backwards through the air. "How ridiculous..." said ChaosLord as he used his cannons to aim at the ninja who was attacking him. Then he said "Hydro Thunder!" as he blasted two Hydro Pumps, which had electricity in them out of his cannons at the ninja who was attacking him. The two powerful blasts of electrified water overpowered the mud missiles which were fired at him, and then they were about to hit the ninja who was attacking him. "Doton: Doryuuheki!" said the ninja as he quickly formed some hand seals, and then a huge wall made from rock rose up from the ground in front of the ninja, protecting him from the Hydro Pumps. However, the wall was shattered into pieces by the Hydro Pumps, and a huge explosion of water and electricity happened. Then ChaosLord started spinning his body around fast to get rid of the mud and fire which was all over him after getting hit by the missiles. Then the ninja who attacked ChaosLord before jumped out of the explosion of water and lightning and straight at ChaosLord. He punched ChaosLord in the face while flying through the air, but ChaosLord didn't even flinch from the punch. Then ChaosLord stabbed the ninja straight through the heart with his drill, killing him, and then his corpse fell down from the air onto the ground. "No! They killed Ken! We need to be careful now!" said another ninja. Then ChaosLord floated down to the ground, and then he looked and saw the other 49 ninja charging at him. The ninja pulled out some kunai and tried to stab ChaosLord with them, but ChaosLord shot two blasts of slicing wind out of his cannons, shredding all 49 ninja into pieces! But then ChaosLord looked and saw all the ninja's corpses dissapearing into a big cloud of smoke! "Hm? What happened?" said ChaosLord as he watched the smoke fade away. After that, he saw many pieces of logs on the ground! Then he heard a voice coming from behind him: "We're over here!". Then ChaosLord turned around and saw the 49 ninja who he thought he had killed before standing on some grass! "Impossible..." said ChaosLord. Then one of the ninja said "Ryuusa Bakuryu!" as he clapped his hands together, and then he started forming many hand seals rapidly. As he was forming the seals, a huge tsunami of sand came out of the ground and started heading towards ChaosLord. The tsunami of sand hit ChaosLord, and then it kept going, carrying ChaosLord with it. The tsunami of sand travelled across the city, taking down many buildings, houses and cars. After the tsunami of sand ended, a large part of the city was destroyed, and the parts which were destroyed were covered with sand. Then the ninja who summoned the tsunami of sand before said "Sabaku Taisou!" as he put both his palms on the ground, and then some shock waves travelled along all the sand on the ground, hardening them, with ChaosLord trapped inside the sand. "It's over..." said the ninja. "A-Awesome technique... You did it... you defeated that machine..." said another ninja, when suddenly, he saw ChaosLord standing on top of the sand. "Wh-what? I-Impossible..." said the ninja as they all looked at ChaosLord. "H-How did you get out from there?" asked a ninja as he stepped back. ChaosLord said "I simply Teleported. It's nothing to me. But what's surprising... is why you guys aren't dead yet. I thought I've already killed you earlier". Then one of the ninja said "Fool! Is this your first time fighting against Shinobi? You didn't kill us at all! You merely destroyed our replacements!". "Replacement?" asked ChaosLord. The ninja said "Yes. Kawarimi no Jutsu. It is a ninjutsu we ninja use which allows us to disguise objects we find in the environment as ourselves. This way, we can confuse the foe into attacking a replacement of ourselves, and while they're doing so, we strike them from elsewhere. It is one of the most basic ninja techniques". Then ChaosLord said "And you guys used logs as your replacements before, right?". "Yeah" a ninja answered. Then another ninja said "Anyway, let's show that machine another trick of ours!" as he formed a hand seal. "Alright!" all the other ninja said, and then they all did the same hand seal too. "Kage Bunshin no Jutsu!" said all the ninja together, and then they all created ten clones of themselves! Then all the clones charged at ChaosLord and tried to attack him, but ChaosLord said "Chaos Wave" as he unleashed a powerful explosion of psychic energy out of his body, destroying all the clones, who all dissapeared into a cloud of smoke. Then ChaosLord looked and saw that nothing came out of the smoke! "Hm? Aren't they meant to be replacements?" said ChaosLord. Then suddenly, he heard a voice coming from behind him: "No!". ChaosLord turned around and saw a ninja behind him, who had a ball of spiralling blue energy in his hand. "Rasengan!" said the ninja as he thrusted the ball at ChaosLord, sending him sliding back on his feet a few metres. "Die, you worthless ant!" said ChaosLord as he disintigrated the ninja with a powerful Hyper Beam. Then ChaosLord looked ahead and saw 48 ninja standing before him. "No, that was not a replacement technique. They were shadow clones. We literally made clones of ourselves just then" said a ninja. Then ChaosLord said "Whatever, I've gotten bored of you guys. Now, just die", and then he started firing many bullets out of his cannons at the ninja, who all started running at different directions to dodge the bullets, which were creating many holes in the ground. Some of the ninja also started throwing many kunai with strange notes attached to them at ChaosLord while running around him, and the notes exploded when they hit him, but the explosions didn't even flinch ChaosLord! Then all the ninja ran behind a building in the city. "You're not getting away" said ChaosLord as he Teleported behind that building. Immediately after that, he saw all 48 ninja charging at him, but he fired many bullets out of his cannons rapidly, massacreing them all.

To be continued


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Part 8: War!!!

Later, Ryuumaru called all of the Shinigamis and sacred Creatures to gather outside his castle, in front of his balcony. All were there except for Rika, who was in her room, sitting on her bed and thinking, and Dragonightmare, who had gone to join his ancestors. Outside the castle, the Shingamis and Sacred Creatures were talking. "What does lord Ryuumaru want us for?" asked a man. "It's probably got something with these machines that came in our planet" said a woman. A phoenix said "Perhaps we're going to war against them". "I hope so! I *bleep*ing hope so!!" said Mag, with a huge smile of insanity in his face and an evil look in his eyes. "Hey, where is Rika?" asked a Shinigami. Just then, Ryuumaru walked out to a balcony on his castle, and everyone looked at him. Ryuumaru also looked at them. "Shinigamis and Holy Creatures" he said. "I have something unfortunate to announce. The machines have killed one of our warriors. Dragonightmare has been cruelly slain, but died a hero's death while on a mission" said Ryuumaru, and then all the people got shocked and started talking to each other. "They killed... Dragonightmare? I thought he was one of the most powerful Shinigamis around!" said a woman. "Yes! These machines... they must really be something!" said a man. "We are now openly in war with them machines. From this point on, if you see any machines close to or on our planet, you may attack them at will and destroy them" said Ryuumaru. Meanwhile, the people kept talking to each other. "Damn! Dragonightmare's dead? Can some machines really be that strong?" said a man. "I saw this ChaosLord guy when he came to our planet... he seemed to win without effort!" said a Shinigami. The Shinigamis and Sacred creatures kept talking, until Ryuumaru shouted "SILENCE!!". Then everyone stopped talking, and looked at him. "Since we are in war against the machines, we need to set up our defense. From now on, your daily training will be doubled. The coming battle is of great importance. Its outcome could mean our survival, or the end of our very existence. We must all be prepared. Losing is not an option we can afford" said Ryuumaru. "Also, Master Hand, Crazy Hand, Giga Bowser, and a thousand Shinigamis will guard an area in space, to warn us about the arrival of the enemy and delay them when they come" he continued. The Shinigamis and Sacred creatures started talking, while Ryuumaru entered his castle, where Rika was waiting for him, with tears in her eyes. "Rika..." said Ryuumaru. "Why... Why does it have to be war? Can't we just leave this planet? We have the power to do it..." said Rika. "Rika, I do not want to hear such words. We will destroy these machines and avenge Dragonightmare's death" said Ryuumaru. "But..." said Rika. "Rika, come on. Do not fall into despair" said Ryuumaru. "S-Sorry, I just don't want anyone else to get killed..." said Rika, as she wiped some tears off her eyes. "Do not worry. It'll be fine" said Ryuumaru.

The days passed, and it was time for ChaosLord to go check if Ryuumaru and his people had evacuated their planet. ChaosLord got outside his tower, and the Chaos Generals and some other machines were waiting for him. "My lord" said ChaosBlackWarGreymon, as he and the rest machines bowed before ChaosLord. "Yes, ChaosBlackWarGreymon" said ChaosLord. "Today you are going to see if the New World has been evacuated, right?" said ChaosBlackWarGreymon. "Yes" said ChaosLord. "If you would allow us, ChaosLord, we, the Chaos Generals, would like to join you" said ChaosBlackWarGreymon. ChaosLord looked at the Chaos Generals and said "Okay, you can come". "Great!" said ChaosMetalSeadramon, excited, as he and the other Chaos generals smiled, and then they started flying with ChaosLord towards the New World. While they were flying they heard a voice "You are about to enter the New World and commit suicide". Then ChaosLord said "Hey guys you heard that? We're committing suicide!" and then he and the Chaos Generals laughed and kept going. Then they reached close to the planet in a few seconds. But in their way, on space, there was a big platform with pink lights. ChaosLord landed on it and looked at his machines and said "Okay guys, this is the planet! Show time!". But then ChaosMetalSeadramon said "Boss! Something's behind you!". ChaosLord said "Where?" as he used a spinning back chop and hit something with his left claw. Then ChaosLord saw that what he had hit was a big white glove. "Who are you?" said ChaosLord. Then the glove said "I am Master Hand, a Sacred Creature and guardian of this planet". Then he punched ChaosLord but nothing happened, the punch didn't even move ChaosLord back a little. Then ChaosLord said "Dumb jerk, so you want to die" and tried to slash the glove with his left claw, but the glove jumped and avoided being slashed. Then another white glove appeared. It said "Am Crazy Hand! You are intruders!" and tried to punch ChaosLord, but ChaosLord simply punched Crazy Hand with his right hand and the hand fell down. Then suddenly a giant dragon appeared. It said "I am Giga Bowser! The third guardian of this planet! Prepare to die!" as he tried to use a move called Dark Knuckle against ChaosLord. Some purple flame came out of his fist and he punched ChaosLord. But nothing happened, this didn't even push ChaosLord back a little. Then ChaosLord said "Ha, ha, ha! You think you can harm me?" as he punched Giga Bowser hard with his right hand, sending him flying back for some distance. Then ChaosLord used Psychic Control, as he took control of Giga Bowser's body with his psychic energy and hit him hard on the platform some times, and then he tossed him to space. Then he looked at the two hands. Master Hand was doing "The Walking" with his fingers while Crazy Hand was crawling like a spider. Then ChaosLord laughed and stomped Crazy Hand, burying him inside the platform, while he crunched Master Hand, almost killing him. Then Crazy Hand crawled out of the platform and went to Master Hand, and then they caught each other and tried to use a hypnotizing move against ChaosLord. Then ChaosLord said "You really think you can put a machine to sleep? This is ridiculous...". Then Master Hand and Crazy Hand tried to punch ChaosLord, but ChaosLord simply used Giga Claw and Mega Drill at the same time, as he slashed Crazy Hand with his left claw and drilled Master Hand with his other hand, which he was using as a drill. So both hands died. Then the machines noticed something coming towards ChaosLord from the sky. It was Giga Bowser! He was diving towards ChaosLord! But ChaosLord simply used his psychic powers to stop Giga Bowser in the air, and then he tossed him hard on the ground. Then Giga Bowser spat some flames from his mouth at ChaosLord, but nothing happened. Then ChaosLord said "Alright, I'm bored with you weakling, time to kill you!". Then Giga Bowser hid in his shell. ChaosLord said "Oh, a shell! I love eating the inside!". Then he did a chop on Giga Bowser's shell with his left claw and cracked it open. Then he crunched Giga Bowser to pieces with his powerful jaws. Just then, a thousand Shinigamis came flying on the platform. "Ah, a fresh heap of victims" said ChaosPiedmon. "Slaughter them!" said ChaosLord. "With pleasure!" said ChaosBlackWarGreymon, as he and the two other Chaos Generals started fighting against the Shinigamis. "River of Power!" shouted ChaosMetalSeadramon, as he unleashed a massive beam of sea-blue energy from his nose, which hit many Shinigamis, damaging many of them badly or killing them. "Terra Force!" said ChaosBlackWarGreymon, as he formed a gigantic ball of yellow energy and threw it at the Shinigamis, hitting them and creating a huge explosion which sent many of them flying. "Trump Sword!" said ChaosPiedmon as he pulled two swords from his back with psychic power, and then he started chopping up the Shinigamis. The Shinigamis kept charging at the machines, though, but ChaosLord roared before them, unleashing a huge wave of energy which sent the Shinigamis flying back. "Haaaa!" said a Shinigami as he charged at ChaosLord with blinding speed, but before he could even tell what had happened, ChaosLord had stabbed him through the stomach with his left claw as he was charging. Two more Shinigamis jumped at ChaosLord with their swords raised and ready to slash ChaosLord, but ChaosLord spinned the drills on his head and eviscerated the two Shinigamis as they landed their attacks on him. As the battle went on, a Shinigami called Ryuumaru with a mobile phone. Ryuumaru was, at the moment, having a meeting with the Sacred Band. "Excuse me" he said, as he walked out of the meeting room, to another room, where he picked up a phone and talked to the Shinigami. "What is it?" he said. "Lord, Ryuumaru, the machines have arrived!" said the Shinigami. "Really? You are fighting them right now?" said Ryuumaru. "Yes, but we won't be able to hold them for much longer" said the Shinigami. Meanwhile, Mag, who was in the meeting room, heard Ryuumaru's conversation. "Sounds like the Shinigamis are having fun with the machines..." he said, as he had a huge smile of insanity and got up from his seat. "Mag? What are you doing?" said Holyta, a light gray ponyta-like Sacred Creature with blue flames, red eyes, light gray wings and a horn. Mag said nothing as he started to run outside the castle. Meanwhile, Ryuumaru was talking to the Shinigami. "Alright, hold them there for as long as you can" he said. "Yes... AAAARRGH!!!" sounded the Shinigami's voice, and then Ryuumaru closed his eyes and hanged up the phone. Then he walked back to the meeting room, and noticed Mag was m