"Well you can forget it," The figure hissed.
"Because I'm going to save the Harvest Goddess myself." He continued.
"Incorrect usage detected. Correction necessary." Presea argued.
"Presea...let's go..." I mumbled, pulling Presea out of the cave with me.
"Wait! That...that girl...she resembles.." The boy called after me.
"Whatever. Just leave my sister alone!" I shouted, running to my house with Presea following after.

There was a tingly feeling in my stomach.
My eyes shot open.
"Oh my God!" I gasped.
A tall, female figure stood before me.
And she was frozen in stone.
"What happened to her?" I asked frantically.

"Stupid kid..." I mumbled, shoving a slice of bread into my mouth.
"Correction. Age eighteen." Presea shot back.
"Presea..." I frowned.
A knock at the door.
I opened it.
"What do you want?!" I snapped.
Woops, that wasn't the kid.
A woman with very short hair stood at the doorway.
"I....I'm Ellen. We heard there was a new farmer in town and thought you might want this dog."
I stared at her.
The puppy beside her sniffed at me and wandered inside the house.
"Sure, we'll take him." I smiled.
The dog hobbled up to Presea.
As far as I know, Presea loves dogs.
Puppies especially.
Presea stared at the dog.
The dog wagged its tail and stared back.
"Presea, don't you want to play with the doggy?" I grinned.
"Yes, yes, this dog is very energetic. A great companion indeed." Ellen cheered.
Presea scowled at the dog.
"Wait, Presea, don't!" I shouted.
Too late.
Oh, how I pity this dog.

"Everything!" a little sprite shouted. "We need your help!"
"To turn her back," another said.
"No we don't," a voice hissed.
"Jamie!" a sprite exclaimed.
I turned around. A dark figure was approaching from the entrance.
I gulped.

Presea kicked the puppy.
Hard.
The creature flew across the room, stopping when it hit the wall.
It barked out loud screeches of pain.
"Presea...How, how could you?! You used to love dogs!" I cried out.
Ellen rushed over to the dog.
"My only companion....is my sister." She answered, casually heading to the bedroom.
Ellen looked up and scowled at me.
"You...that...That girl is some monster. Haven't her parents taught her anything?!" She hissed, softly tending to the puppy.
"D-Don't call her a monster!" I frowned.
Presea was watching from the corner of the room.
"So you call an emotionless child that goes around kicking innocent creatures a normal person?!" asked Ellen.
"It...No!" I shouted.
She doesn't know.
I can't tell her.
I pushed Ellen and her dog out of my house.
Presea stood behind me.
"It's okay, Presea. She doesn't know, thats all." I said, beginning to walk away.
I stopped.
"Wait, ....I guess you don't care.." I mumbled, a tear falling down my cheek.

I quit. This is boring now.

Forever? ._o
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Presea stiffened.
"Because you have no feelings...." I continued.
She stepped back.
"Fee-lings?"
I nodded.
"You're just a walking body, occasionally speaking, but with no emotion." I went on.
Presea started shaking, but I was turned away from her.
"Am..I...a monster?" She asked.
I turned around.
"Presea...I-I..."
"I'm useless. But...I can't control it. I can't feel anymore. But do what you wish. Abandon me. I'm useless." She agreed.
I shook my head.
"No..."
Presea ignored me.
Her eyes were still dull, her expression blank.
It was obvious that if I tried to console her it would do no good.
She is useless.
"I'll save you." I promised under my breath.
She walked away.

Idk. I just can never think of a good story. =(

Ah, I see.
Well, if you get a really good one to strike your head, be sure to post right away! ^^
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The next morning I got up early.
Skipping breakfast, I headed to the yard.
I tended the crops.
Well, the crop.
I finished tending the crop.
Sniffing the air, I scrunched up my nose.
"What's that horrible smell?!" I frowned.
I looked to see where the smoke was coming from.
Our house.
I cursed under my breath and ran inside the house.
"Presea, what are you doing?!" I shouted, pulling her from the stove.
"Please discontinue. I am preparing breakfast. I must do my part. Like a normal child." She mumbled.
"Presea, it's...it's on fire!" I yelled.
Presea pulled the plate out from the smoking stove.
"A healthy breakfast. Please, eat up." She demanded.
I sighed.
"Hey, Presea..." I began.
Her eyes were...
"Presea, can you see?" I asked.
Presea was silent.
"D-Did the smoke blind you?!"
She shook her head.
"My eyes are..."
"They're....stone!" I cried.

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Woah.. O___o IDEA STURCK MY HEAD! Dun dun dunnn...


This is Alyson. She's a Native American who just ended up in Flower Bud.

Alyson was worried.
What to do..? She thought.
She ran up to some mini fat guy.
"Hello! Are you here for the Ranch Plan?" The mini fat guy asked.
Alyson looked around nervously. "Y-Yes.." She said quietly.
"Wonderful! So, do you want the beach side, village center or riverside?" The fat guy asked.
"N-None.." Alyson muttered. The fat guy was shocked.
"What?! No.. Ohhhh... Your the Native American girl!" The fat guy said.
Now he figures it out? Alyson thought.
"Yes.." Alyson said. "Very well! I hope you do good! ...By the way, I'm Theodore." Theodore said.
Alyson held in her laughter until Theodore was out of sight. (Out of sight, dude! >_>)
She ran up to the woods.

P.S: I got the idea because I'm a Native American myself. ^_~

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I swung the door open.
It was raining.
What a waste to have just watered my crops...
Anyway, I had to get to the sprites.
"Grr, where did they take us?!" I mumbled.
Presea was silent.
"Dang it, we're lost." I hissed.
"Follow." Presea ordered, heading south.
Before I knew it, we were at the cave.
Presea stared at the Harvest Goddess just like before.
The sprites sat at the very end, staring into the creek that seperated them from her.
"What is it?" One of them asked.
"I-it's Presea..." I mangaed to say.
"What's this about the girl?" another asked.
I was getting real tired of this 'girl' they spoke of.
" My sister, Presea,--"
"She's got the case of H.G." Jamie cut in.

Eh... My stories never work ...


Lucy is Eve's younger sister. She and her two best friends, Sam and Alice always hang out. They go to a school in FlowerBud and Maria is the teacher. Lucy has a Cocker Spaniel who's name is Princess. Princes goes everywhere with Lucy. At school, Princess waits outside for Lucy.

Lucy sighed. "NO!" She shouted.
"Get up! Your gonna be late for school!" Eve shouted.
Lucy sighed. She sat up and pushed her sister out of the way.
She brushed her hair and teeth and changed.
She rushed out of the door.
"Hey Alice!" Lucy smiled.


This message was edited by HarvestMoonLover on May 30 2008.

I twirled around in the falling snow, eight years ago.
"Coming Mom?" I shouted.
I spun around because there was no answer to see my mom laying on the ground, on her stomach knife in her back.
A lone figure dressed in black sweatpants and a black hoodie, I was not able to see the face.
I moaned in horror.
"Mommy?" I whispered, absoulutely horrified.
She lifted her head, and whispered.
"Caralyn please be brave," she whispered mortified. I gave her a hug.
"No, no I won't let you die." I cried.

((This part is a liitle bit gory.))

Grabbing the knife from her back, I swung wildly at the hooded figure, until it fell dead.
My chest was heaving.
"I just killed someone." I whispered. It felt horrible absolutely horrible.

It's a nice start.

"Hey." Alice said. "Look! Sam's.."
"I know! He's..."
....
.....
......
"HAH!" Sam shouted.
"Oh snap." Lucy muttered.
"Ya lost the bet!" He shouted.
Sam, Lucy, and Alice are the best of buds.
"Drat!" Lucy mumbled. She handed am his 15 G.
"Now I'm gonna go get me some bubble bum." Sam smiled.
"And you ain't gettin' none!" He shouted.
As you can tell, Sam has a small country accent.
Everyone loves it. Mostly those freaky, popular girls. Bleh.
Trust me. I'm not the girl you think I am. My older sister, EVe makes me.. wear this stupid stuff.

New story! Haha. I can NEVER keep up in here...the forum looks dead anyways. =/ Point of view from Maria, the librarian girlie. XD

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Father always wanted me to be a teacher. He wanted me to go to college and learn more, so I could become what he wanted me to be.
I attented college, just to make him happy.
I am 24 now, and out of college. I came to the college in the City at age 20, because I had to work and earn money to buy books and such.
And then I was acepted.
Father had always expected good from me.
Good grades, which I brought home. A good attitude, which I kept up, and good socializing skills, which I had.
As a child, I had many friends. Father was always so proud.
As a teenager, my teachers in high school were very proud.
I was on the Honor Roll, in the Honor band, everything.
Father was so proud. He even told me plenty of times Mothern would be very proud of me as well.
When I was six years old, Mother has died.
Suddenly.
She was very sick. The doctors did everything to keep her heart beating and healthy.
And she then died in her sleep.
Father grieved so much, so badly.
He couldnt take care of me, until one day, he decided to be a father, and a mother to me.
He worked hard to keep the food on the table for both of us, and my pet dog, Trixie.
Now, at age 24, I was in my dorm at the college, and I got a letter.

Dear Maria,

Hi, sweetheart! It your Papa here. As you know, you're almost done your years at college! When you do graduate, how about visiting your old man here in Flower Bud, eh? There's a new farmer coming to town, and plenty more people came here, and have good jobs as farmers, and shop keepers. The place is wonderful, here, and I would just love it if you'd stay with me for a while.

Sincerely,

Theodore Oken, mayor of Flower Bud Village