Topic: a dark crossing
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NEOPETSif nobody's perfect I must be nobodytrue seeker    total posts: 1179 since: Feb 2007
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 Jul 07, 08 at 03:15PM
a dark crossing
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Ok, since the other story that Kimonio made has ended, I desiced I would make one of my own, XD.
So, millions of years before Neopets lived on neopia, there was a dark thing. And it had hold of neopia, every last bit of it. Then, suddenly five heros came, and they all had to fight it off so Neopets could live on Neopia.
My charactor is Lady Levly the Battle Faerie, you can all make your own. After we all have charactors, we can start XD.
Charactors to be used mainly by one person: Lady Levly the Battle Faerie Shadow the Creature of Dark Matter Fenrir the Blue Gelert Muck the Sludgy Dedstoreer the Grundo Guard in training
(full, absolutly no more)
Chatactors to be used by many: Queen Fyora Egorath (will add more later on in the story)
order in going: NEOPETS->Kimonio->Agwe
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kimonioPart of the Neoseeker Secret Seviceultra seeker     total posts: 1434 since: Mar 2008
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 Jul 07, 08 at 03:28PM
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Shadow the Creature of Dark Matter
Alisha? Faeries are Neopets too. They weren't on Neopia until Neopets were born so technically they are Neopets.
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NEOPETSif nobody's perfect I must be nobodytrue seeker    total posts: 1179 since: Feb 2007
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 Jul 07, 08 at 05:57PM
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exactly. These five heros came from a dieing planet full of neopets, but since the planet was dieing, five of the bravest cretures there were chosen to venture out into space and find other planets to live on. All of the other planets were to small, to cold, to hot, or just plain stanck. And as these five were flying through space, one of them pointed towards a very big planet. There they found found out it was perfect with water, food, and everything that they needed. But it was very dark and misserable there. So in order to save the Neopet race, they have to defet whatever is inside the darkness.
-------------------------------------- Once everyone has there charactor, we'll start from the time when they are on their dieing planet being chosen to find a new home.
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kimonioPart of the Neoseeker Secret Seviceultra seeker     total posts: 1434 since: Mar 2008
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 Jul 07, 08 at 06:35PM
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Can I change my creature to a Sludgey?
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NEOPETSif nobody's perfect I must be nobodytrue seeker    total posts: 1179 since: Feb 2007
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 Jul 07, 08 at 06:37PM
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sure. You can make a new charactor, or use your old one. (but perferably a bit of a name change)
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kimonioPart of the Neoseeker Secret Seviceultra seeker     total posts: 1434 since: Mar 2008
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 Jul 07, 08 at 07:26PM
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.....I'll create a new one.
Muck the Sludgy
Oh, and I wasn't changing my character to a Sludgey made out of dark matter. I was just wondering if I could change the dark matter part to Sludgy. But never mind changing it to a Sludgy. Just turn it back to Shadow the Creature of Dark Matter.
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AgweGo Michael Phelps!!!!!mad messenger   total posts: 275 since: Apr 2008
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 Jul 07, 08 at 10:33PM
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OO! I am Fenrir, a blue Gelert! That's powerful!
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kimonioPart of the Neoseeker Secret Seviceultra seeker     total posts: 1434 since: Mar 2008
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 Jul 08, 08 at 06:44AM
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Kimonio the Shenkuu Ninja Kyrii!!!........with his daughter Nicole the Fire Faerie who doesn't count as a character.
Characters so far:
Lady Levly the Battle Faeire Shadow the Creature of Dark Matter Fenrir, the Blue Lupe Muck the Sludgy Dedstoreer the Grundo Guard in training
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NEOPETSif nobody's perfect I must be nobodytrue seeker    total posts: 1179 since: Feb 2007
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 Jul 08, 08 at 08:29AM
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yea, but could you change the name a bit.. I'm gonna enter this in the ntimes and I don't wanna seem like I'm copying you. Of course I'll give ya'll credit, but If the names are to alike then TNT wont take it into the ntimes.
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kimonioPart of the Neoseeker Secret Seviceultra seeker     total posts: 1434 since: Mar 2008
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 Jul 08, 08 at 10:14AM
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Kimonio the Shenkuu Ninja Kyrii is now changed to............Dedstoreer the Grundo Guard in training.
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NEOPETSif nobody's perfect I must be nobodytrue seeker    total posts: 1179 since: Feb 2007
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 Jul 08, 08 at 10:46AM
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ok, we have five. We can start now. Kimonio, since you let me start on your thing you can start for this. make sure that you start with your charactor(s) on their dieing planet.
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Kirby_netmad messenger   total posts: 295 since: Dec 2007
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 Jul 08, 08 at 11:49AM
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'Fore ya start, can I join as Bunni, a red cybunny? I want to be more active in this one.
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NEOPETSif nobody's perfect I must be nobodytrue seeker    total posts: 1179 since: Feb 2007
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 Jul 08, 08 at 12:27PM
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its going to go NEOPETS->Kimonio->Agwe
I'm going
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NEOPETSif nobody's perfect I must be nobodytrue seeker    total posts: 1179 since: Feb 2007
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 Jul 08, 08 at 12:40PM
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Lady Levly, a Battle Faerie was walking over the dead grass. Her dieing brown, gloomy planet (named Egorath) slowly went by her as she walked to the now crumbling Main Hall. Today would be the day when Queen Fyora would chose six creatures to fly into space and find a new planet for neopets to live on. She placed her hand on her swords and watched all the empty houses and caves with fear of a meat eating thing to come running out of it. Her purple hair hung over her sholder as there hadn't been a single breeze in over two years. Around her, neopets, petpets, and every creature she could think of walked to the Egorath Main Hall. She jogged up the crumbleing steps of the Main Hall, and opened the splitting wooden doors. Everyone was assembled in there pre-arranged seat, and Levly went off to find the seat number L56.
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kimonioPart of the Neoseeker Secret Seviceultra seeker     total posts: 1434 since: Mar 2008
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 Jul 08, 08 at 05:44PM
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Dedstoreer looked at his old planet, Lakok. If it was destroyed he didn't care. He was tired of warding off Claykos, the huge birds that ate his people. He was frustrated at all the food that was left after other animals ate it.
"I HATE THIS PLANET!!", he screamed.
The planet started to crumble.
"I didn't mean it!", he said frightened.
A red grundo walked up to him.
"Yes, Ranok?", he asked boredly. Ranok was always ordering him around.
"The king would like to see you, Dedstoreerok." He told Dedstoreer smugly.
Dedstoreer grimaced. It wasn't because he was scared of the king, it was just that he didn't like his given name. Everyone in his village had a name ending in "ok"; except the females. Now Dedstoreer wished he was a girl as he walked into his father's throne room.
"Yes father? You wanted to see me?", he asked his father.
"We need you to go and search for another planet for us to live on.", his father said.
"YOU MEAN I'M LOOKING FOR IT ALONE?!?!", Destoreer screamed in amazement.
"No, you will be accompanied by others."
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It was peaceful. Everything is perfect. It is on the plane-
"Will you hush already?!? I'm trying to hunt!!!", Muck the Sludgy told the narrator.
A bird flew by. Before Muck could grab it, a rumble shook the ground. Muck jumped up and ran toward his muddy kingdom. His father stood at the castle gates watching him come closer.
"If you weren't so dimwitted", his father said,"you would know that you need to go on a mission to find another planet for us."
Muck became so happy that he almost cried. That would have made him more slimy than he was.
"Now go to your room and pack!", his father ordered.
"Yes sir!", Muck told him and then left to prepare his things.
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Shadow looked at his gloomy planet. He lived in a place where vampires and werewolves wrecked havok. He saw a light appear in the distance. Scared out of his dark wits, he ran to tell the king.
"So, vou tell me dat a light appeared in ze distance?", the king asked in his vampire voice and accent.
"Zat's right.", Shadow told him in the same accent.
"Zen zis meanz dat you need to go with five otherz to find a new planet for us to live on.", the king told him.
Shadow nodded, turned into a Korbat(this is where they originated from), and flew to his room to prepare.
Was this good, Alisha? 
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