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NEOPETSif nobody's perfect I must be nobodys-e-e-k-e-r     total posts: 1711 since: Feb 2007
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 Jul 02, 08 at 9:09am
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ok, so go! I wanna type a story again!
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kimonioPart of the Neoseeker Secret Sevices-e-e-k-e-r     total posts: 1807 since: Mar 2008
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 Jul 02, 08 at 1:44pm
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I can't. I need Malcom's part before I can post.
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NEOPETSif nobody's perfect I must be nobodys-e-e-k-e-r     total posts: 1711 since: Feb 2007
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 Jul 03, 08 at 8:18am
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no offence, but I was talking to Aqwe
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AgweYour face!mad messenger   total posts: 319 since: Apr 2008
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 Jul 03, 08 at 8:31am
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wait, I'm confused about the book thing. Like what does it do? Any ways, until I hear back, I'm lost, so NEOPETS, you can post your part.
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kimonioPart of the Neoseeker Secret Sevices-e-e-k-e-r     total posts: 1807 since: Mar 2008
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 Jul 03, 08 at 8:46am
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The book has powers. It can turn evil to good, and defeat even the darkest of monsters. You know that PM I sent you that had the monster's histories on it? Use that. Have Malcom read off of the book telling how the monsters turned evil.
Oh, Agwe? You know how you said Sophie put on the amulet and got the DF's powers? That's a great idea! But you will have to wait to see when it comes in......
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AgweYour face!mad messenger   total posts: 319 since: Apr 2008
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 Jul 03, 08 at 4:17pm
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Okay Big K, here it is: Malcom started reading the ancient text of the Altadorians, without thinking of why he could, "Alright, the first page talks about the Black Knight, it reads, 'The Black Knight, once a noble knight, he ascended the ranks of knights faster than anyone before. He was the perfect knight, until the Lupe named Jeran came to Meridell to become a squire. He went up the ranks faster than the Black Knight, which made the him very angry. So one day, Jeran and the Black Knight were on a mission together, to exterminate the last of the werelupes. A tiny Lupe pup was running away from a werelupe, but right as Jeran was about to save him, the Black Knight's anger took over him, and he struck Jeran with his sword. Luckily, a werelupe pounced on the Black Knight, as he was about to kill Jeran. The Black Knight was never seen again, although Jeran did recover, he vowed he would avenge the pup he was not able to save.' By the way, I'm doing these one at a time, so as not to make it too long.
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AgweYour face!mad messenger   total posts: 319 since: Apr 2008
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 Jul 03, 08 at 4:55pm
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"Alright, next, it talks about the Werelupe King," Malcom said, " It reads, 'The Werelupe King, actually turned out to be the pup that Jeran was not able to save. The pup was raised normally and was a good tactician and soldier, even at his young age. But one day, as he was playing with friends, the last smidgen of werelupes that were alive, attacked his village, in hopes of gaining more werelupes. Bravely, the pup stood up against the werelupes, but they defeated him, and killed his parents. The werelupes started chasing the young pup, until; they finally captured, and transformed him. The wereluupe gene, and the fact that his parents were killed in front of him, are why people think he was driven so bloodthirsty and insane.', Wow!" Malcom exclaimed, "THAT was depressing!" "Just keep reading the book!" everyone yelled in unison, "Okay, okay," Malcom replied, "Next chapter."
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AgweYour face!mad messenger   total posts: 319 since: Apr 2008
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 Jul 03, 08 at 10:39pm
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By the way,Tor and Roberta have taught Malcom about motes, just in case people needed to know that for a big fight scene.
"This chapter is about the Gelert Assassin." Malcom began, "Oh yay!" Tor replied in a sarcastic tone, "Any who, it reads, 'The Gelert Assassin was once a nobleman, in line for the king of Market Town. He decided one day to propose to his sweetheart. But one day, she was kidnapped by the Black Knight, and was never heard from again. This loss fueled the Gelert Assassin's greed and anger, and he took it all out, on the town's people. For this, he was banished. He was unheard of until he faced Tormund and Roberta. But after Tor disappeared, he attacked Tor's farm, defeating everyone there.' Sorry, Tor." "That information was not yours to know!" The Gelert Assassin jumped down from a cliff and attacked Malcom, who defended, "YOU!" Tor yelled, "You killed my parents, and Lucy! I'l give you their fate!" Tor sprinted at the Gelert Assassin, attacking him like it was for his own life, "I've gotta' help him!" Malcom exclaimed, "No Malcom, this is Tor's fight." Roberta replied, "You know Tor, they begged me for mercy, but i didn't give it to them!" The Assassin taunted, "AUGH!" Tor attacked with one last powerful strike, finishing of the Assassin, "Tor! You have to stop!" Lady Luck yelled out, "Sorry everyone, it's just... that..." Tor replied, "it'll be alright Tor," Lady Luck comforted Tor, "Malcom, could you keep on reading?" Luck continued, "Sure." He replied.
P.S. Sorry if that was a little to dark, but I just typed what came to mind. Plus, NEOPETS, Lady Luck's name reminds me of a keyblade from Kingdom Hearts called that.
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kimonioPart of the Neoseeker Secret Sevices-e-e-k-e-r     total posts: 1807 since: Mar 2008
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 Jul 04, 08 at 5:59am
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I had imagined that Lucy had grown up and went to live in Meridell but that was great! Wow. Just wow.
P.S.:It seems that the Black Knight is the cause of every thing......I think that this would be a good part in the second Neopets game.
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NEOPETSif nobody's perfect I must be nobodys-e-e-k-e-r     total posts: 1711 since: Feb 2007
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 Jul 04, 08 at 8:54am
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Tor held on to Lady Luck like a newborn foal would his mother. He didn't need the only person he had love left for to be taken away. Tor fumbled a dimond ring in his fingers, and slowly, ever so slowly, slipped it on Lucks ring finger. She looked at him, a little surprised at first, then nodded her head. She leaned towards Tor, and gave him a small little kiss on his lips.
"Aqwe, keep reading!" Fyora yelled, still fighting with the Darkest Faerie
________________________________________ P.S: Aqwe your part ROCKED! XD it almost made me cry!:'(
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kimonioPart of the Neoseeker Secret Sevices-e-e-k-e-r     total posts: 1807 since: Mar 2008
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 Jul 04, 08 at 8:56am
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Tor fumbled a dimond ring in his fingers, and slowly, ever so slowly, slipped it on Lucks ring finger. She looked at him, a little surprised at first, then nodded her head. She leaned towards Tor, and gave him a small little kiss on his lips. Uh, this is going into the Neopian Times. Remember?
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AgweYour face!mad messenger   total posts: 319 since: Apr 2008
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 Jul 04, 08 at 9:49am
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Woo! I expected much different reactions. But I still have to type the Darkest Faerie's. Oh, and Kimonio, I'm sort of using your idea for a faerie name for the darkest faerie. Here's the last one:
"This is the very last chapter, and it's about the darkest faerie. This should help a lot," Malcom began, "' It reads, 'The Darkest Faerie, the worst enemy of Neopians, was once a fire faerie named Leray. Her older sister would grow to be Queen Fyora, for she was wise at a very young age, and every faerie in Faerie Land prospered in her presence. One day, Leray was with her mother, and she was talking about her accomplishes in school, but her mother broke in and started talking about Fyora. Filled with jealousy and resentment for Fyora, Leray went to the faerie of darkness, Jhudora, and asked for dark powers, the likes of which nobody had ever seen. The faerie refused, unless Leray would do many favors for her, she did, and soon enough, Leray was the Darkest Faerie. With this newfound power, the Darkest Faerie went after the ones who she resented the most, Fyora, and her own mother. When she arrived at her house, she cast a spell on her mother to put her in an endless sleep. When Fyora arrived, she threatened to turn the Darkest Faerie in to the Defenders, but the Darkest Faerie was a master of deception, and convinced Fyora that it was an accident, so Fyora let her go. Looking for a new place to go, the Darkest Faerie found Altador, she decided to turn a new leaf and help, she even fell in love with Kng Altador. But when she found out that King Altador was with Jerdana, it fueled her anger like trees to a fire, and she tried destroying Altador. She failed, although she thought she had done it, and she was captured, to be watched over by her sister for the rest of eternity. Unfortunately, she broke free of her stony prison, and wreaked havoc once again, until she was captured by Tormund and Roberta. But although everyone thought she was defeated for good, she broke free again, and even as I am writing this book, is destroying Neopia. To the reader of this book, use the map on the back of this book, to find the weapon that will most certainly defeat the Darkest Faerie forever. Good Luck reader, and farewell.' That was odd." Malcom finished, everyone looked around, making sure that the Darkest Faerie was nearby, and looked at the map, also in Altadorian text,"It's on the roof." Malcom said, "It's on the roof?!" Tor yelled, "I can't believe Roberta and I never looked at the ROOF!" "Well at least we can find it now," Kimonio replied, "Off to Altador!" Malcom exclaimed.
P.S. I know that that was long, but it was worth it, right? 'Till next time you need me, "Good night, and good luck."
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kimonioPart of the Neoseeker Secret Sevices-e-e-k-e-r     total posts: 1807 since: Mar 2008
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 Jul 04, 08 at 10:54am
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Kimonio looked around himself. All of the monsters were steaming with light. He caught a glimpse of the Black Knight and The Gelert Assasin.
"Tor! Wait!", Kimonio called out to the group," I want you to meet some people."
Tor ran over.
The Gelert Assasin walked over to Tor. Tor was about to draw his sword when he saw that the Gelert had turned back into his prince form. He was in a spirit form.
"Thank you my friend for showing me the evil I had turned into. I will be forever grateful. As for you", he turned to the Black Knight who was now in his knight form, "what happened to Fauna?"
"Fauna? She became one of the Defenders of Altador.", Roberta told him.
The Gelert Prince looked at her and said,"Take me to her. I want to say goodbye one last time." There were tears in his eyes.
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NEOPETSif nobody's perfect I must be nobodys-e-e-k-e-r     total posts: 1711 since: Feb 2007
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 Jul 04, 08 at 12:42pm
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Tor rolled his eyes but agreed to take him to Fauna. He watched his back, and kept Luck far away from the Gelert Assasian. The Gelert Assasian walked through a portal, and was never seen or heard of again. "I must go to the roof and get the wepon" Lady Luck said, flying upwards. She landed on the old grass roof and scanned the area. Nothing. She flew above for a full veiw of the roof, and there it was. It was a-
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She leaned towards Tor, and gave him a small little kiss on his lips. delet that sentence. P.S: You all must renember that Lady Luck is a battle faerie.
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kimonioPart of the Neoseeker Secret Sevices-e-e-k-e-r     total posts: 1807 since: Mar 2008
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 Jul 04, 08 at 1:35pm
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substitute "a" for "the".
the Defenders. They were all staring at the group, smiling.
"Well done,"King Altador said,"you've all done a great job. Leray has heard her history and has returned to her fire form. Now Fyora needs to finish the job...oh yes. Here is Fauna, Your Highness."
The Prince stepped forward,"Come with me Fauna, I don't want to be seperated from you ever again."
Fauna smiled and stepped into the light that would take them away.
There was a blinding light and the pair disappeared in a cloud of dust.
A light wizzed by Luck's ear.
Leray and Fyora were in a fight that could change everything.
We are getting very close to Part Two: A New Enemy. It was inspired by Agwe.
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