i'll try.


Tor imidently started to run. He ran out of his imprisonment, and ran to find his family. (little did he know that his family had passed away over 1000 years ago)

Roberta, meanwhile, was going to Brightvale to see her uncle, who for some reason was still alive.

On her way there she ran into Mrs. X and Kimonio.

Tor came to his farm. he knocked on the door, and a complete stranger answered.
"Wheres Hubert and Patrica?" he asked
"I'm sorry, but no one by that name lives here." the stranger said.
"Lucy?"
"sorry no."
"does anyone with the last name of Elie live here!?"
"Elie? You mean Tormund Elie? he lived here over 1000 years ago."
"and I will live here again. I am Tormund, and all of this land is rightfully mine."
"Tormund passed away over 100 years ago." The lady said.
"no. He didn't if he did I wouldn't be here." Tormund said
"are you his son?"
"no, I am Tormund."
"Well, I am Lady Luck the Battle Faerie." Lady Levly exclaimed.
"I don't give a Fyora. I still own this land I will let you stay here with your family, but the land is still mine."
"I don't have a family."
"yeah? I bet you don't even have wings!"
Lady Luck unfurled her wings from behind her.
"oh." Tor stated.


(I am hoping for Lady Luck and Tor to be married in the end, as Tor has his immortality, same with Lady Luck.)

P.S: Lady Luck is me, I just didn't want a big 'my name's NEOPETS' on the thing, and I didn't feel like including my real name, Alisha.





This message was edited by NEOPETS on Jun 26 2008.

At Brightvale, Kimonio and Mrs. X told Roberta what Kimonio had seen.

"I was coming here to borrow some books", Kimonio told his friends, "to study about the history of Shenku when I heard a strange rumbling sound. I looked behind me and saw purple mist disappearing. I felt a tap on my shoulder and a grunt. I turned around and saw a big purple monster staring straight at me, with a dark faerie standing beside it.

"She stared at me with a smirk on her mouth. She then snapped her fingers and a whole army of monsters appeared. She pointed at me and immediately the monsters started to chase me.

"My father had given me a Meerca potion years before the Darkest Faerie kidnapped him. He had told me to use it in the time of danger. Remembering this, I drank half of the potion and started to sprint to Brightvale.

"I'm lucky I got here safely. But the clouds are spreading. And this time Kreludor and Neopia will be taken into darkness." He said with a grim face. Kimonio then started walking to the castle. Roberta in front, Miss X at the back.



This could be the greatest story ever!! Even better than the DF game!

X looked oddly at Roberta. "You... you are Roberta, right?" She asked slowly. "But...you..." She broke off with a sigh. "I've been around for thousands of years but I've never heard of anything like this..." She said, more to herself than the others.

Tor and Luck sat down to dinner, and they reilized they were the same age, and that they had alot in comen
Slowly, tor reilized he was begining to fall in love with Luck

Oh, Tor is still 16.


(you know how I said that Roberta looked really old, well ignore that. She can come back and still be 16.)

This message was edited by NEOPETS on Jun 26 2008.

Thanks for coming back Kirby. We've been waiting.

I've just sent a picture of our story to the magazine to get into the art gallery. It might appear there soon.


"You need to get Sir Tor here!", King Hagen said sternly to Roberta,"The clouds are spreading and will reach us in less than two hours."

"Well, I'm not going to be here when the monsters attack!",Kimonio said and he jumped through the nearest window.

Roberta and Mrs. X looked down at Kimonio, glanced at each other, then followed after Kimonio. There destination: Tor's home.

"I am sorry for me behaveor earlier, I was confused, and worried." Tor beamed.
"it's ok, I understand." Lady Lucks beautifull face smiled at Tor
It was love at fist sight for the two of them.
Suddenly, a knock met the doors hard wooden fram.
"One of your friends?" Tor asked dreamingly.
"No. I do not have any friends around here, most are in Faerieland." She replied
"Well, It can't be my family, there... Dead." Tor said saddly.

He got up and answered the door.
"Roberta?"


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"Who are they?", Tor questioned.

"I'm Kimonio, a Shenku ninja in training", Kimonio said with a smile.

"And I'm Mrs. X", said Mrs. X.

"Who are you?", Roberta said, looking at the faerie behind Tor.

"I'm Lady Levlys", said the battle faerie,"what are they doing here?", she asked Tor.

"We'll have time to catch back on our lives, but right now we need to get somewhere safe!", Kimonio yelled at the others.

"Why?",they called out.

"Because it's coming!", Kimonio exclaimed.

Seeing the clouds surrounding the house, Lady Levlys told the others to gather around her. There was a shot of light and they found themselves in Faerieland.


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quote NEOPETS

P.S: Lady Levly is me, I just didn't want a big 'my name's NEOPETS' on the thing, and I didn't feel like including my real name, Alisha.

Down below, the clouds were getting higher. They ran to Fyoras Court.

a little bit later

"My Lady, I am sure you know that the Darkest Faerie has escaped once again, but we need help. I am Sir Tormund of Meridell, and these neopians are Mrs X, Kimonio, Lady Luck the Battle Faerie, and Lady Roberta of Brightvale. As you know, Lady Luck, Roberta, and I can not go under the spell of the clouds, but Kimonio and Mrs. X can. We ask for Miladys help." Tor stated (very proudly at that).

"We are gratefull for your help, and we shall give you two more amulets." Fyora said.

"If you're so worried about Neopia, then why don't you help?!?!" Roberta yelled.

"Roberta!" Luck and Tor both yelled.


PS: when Tor was in his house, he had gathered his Razor Blade (from Altador), Altadorian Plate (armor), and his Altadorian Sheild. And all of his motes, food, water, and suplies.

quote kimonio

You mean your last name is Levly?

"Because the Darkest Faerie is stronger than last time," Queen Fyora told Roberta,"last time I was able to hold her off. But this time she's stronger than ever. King Altador will tell you on the way to where the portal is located."

"King Altador is here?", Kimonio asked the faerie queen eagerly.

"Yes."

"But you will never get to see him," said a voice behind the group.


She had found them.


"And this time I will finally finish you off," said a different voice.

"King Altador!", gasped the group in relieve.

"Wrong, It's me. The Gelert Assasin."

Tor drew his sword and charged at the Gelert Assasian. Soon he was engaged in a fight for his life.
"Luck, no!" He yelled, but it was to late. Luck started to blast at the Darkest Faerie, Roberta and Fyora included.
The Darkest Faerie was inded more powerful then before.

Already, Roberta was lifeless.

Kimonio and Mrs.X Were helping with both the Gelert Assasian and the Darkest Faeire.

"Come!" King Altador had suddely appered in the room, and everyone, including Fyora, followed.

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"No.", Kimonio said. His voice sounded like it was turning evil.

"Oh no,"Queen Fyora said.

"We don't listen to you people anymore," Mrs. X said.

"You see before you my two new slaves. They will do what I want from now on. If you try to stop me, I will send the Kyrii out to destroy you.", the Darkest Faerie said with a smile.

"Who said I was under your control?", Kimonio questioned, laughing at the now angry dark faerie.

He snapped his fingers and instantly Roberta was alive again. The faerie stood where she was, frozen with fear.

"If you don't mind now, we will be leaving.", and he, along with the others, stepped into the portal.

"NOOOOOOOO!", Screamed the Darkest Faerie. Kimonio had once again slipped out of her control.

This message was edited by kimonio on Jun 21 2008.

hmmmm, that's a good storyline so far, but I think it's a little weird that the Darkest Faerie is alive AGAIN, we should make it someone else, like... THE BLACK KNIGHT!! He's pretty cool, and maybe Sophie turned on Tor and Roberta and revived the Black Knight, AND the Werelupe king, and fused them together to make... the Wereknight king! That would be cool. And it got the Darkest Faerie's necklace and somehow got the DF's powers! He would have an army of Werelupe Elites, Dark knights, and all the DF's minions! And could you add me in as a character? I would be Malcom, a lupe that is a huge fan of Tor and Roberta, and I tried to follow their every footstep and ended up becoming a squire, and magician, so I would be average at both magic and sword fighting! Anyways if you need my help again just call on me. Signing off!

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quote Agwe

hmmmm, that's a good storyline so far, but I think it's a little weird that the Darkest Faerie is alive AGAIN, we should make it someone else, like... THE BLACK KNIGHT!! He's pretty cool, and maybe Sophie turned on Tor and Roberta and revived the Black Knight, AND the Werelupe king, and fused them together to make... the Wereknight king! That would be cool. And it got the Darkest Faerie's necklace and somehow got the DF's powers! He would have an army of Werelupe Elites, Dark knights, and all the DF's minions! And could you add me in as a character? I would be Malcom, a lupe that is a huge fan of Tor and Roberta, and I tried to follow their every footstep and ended up becoming a squire, and magician, so I would be average at both magic and sword fighting! Anyways if you need my help again just call on me. Signing off!