Alright, I've been writing a story that is so far amazing. I think it could also be turned into a RPG. So I think I will try.

This is it.
Hannah Williams, former Bounty Hunter, has pilgramiged to the Mountain Areas of Japan. She had killed not only her father, but the entire Royal Family. (She lived in London and was finnally given the Bounty for the Royal Family) She is staying away from her "Master" who somehow has a bound connecting the both of them. Whenever one is feeling emotion, the other feels pain. This is what she was entrusted with when she became a Bounty Hunter. This was how they communicated, without meeting eachother in person. When she went to Japan she met the owner of a Dojo called Hirohama named Nanatanka. He was assasinated. She thinks by her Master. She learned little from Nanatanka, and was sworn to protect herself and her village of Gredenhan. She bought a Dojo called Gangen for only 10 yen and taught herself the art of samuari. She than built her self an army of samuari to destroy the overpowering clan of evil.
(Working on it currently)

I was with you until you said the word "This".

10yen? Where the hell do you get a freakin' Dojo for 10Yen?!








I want one...

Well, the dojo was closed for 300 years. This is very old times. The place needs decontaminating. It's not like it's set in stone either. And I haven't even gotten close to finishing the story. I've only written I think 5 chapters. And it's not up to that part yet. She hasn't even completed her training yet. Thanks for your ver nice compliment btw.

My sarcasm Senses are Tingling.

It's just kinda hard to follow, that's all.

Heres mine:
500 years ago, the battle between both Dark Forces has ended. Valmar, the devils brother, has been sealed behind a gate and chained, casted by light magic. Valen, the mastermind behind the dark crystals has been sealed in an endless pit of light. Now, Noah, an ordinary teenage boy taught the way of the scythe has been chosen by Centaka, the goddess of light, to rid the world of monsters. He takes his scythe and best friend, Zoey and goes on his adventure. Little does he know that Centaka is looking for something else. Something powerful to make her goal. Play in this epic storyline as you discover the secrets of the past.

Nice... Or Maybe I just like the name Zoey...

I made one on the Original RPGMaker, I was thinking of Revamping it...

Ssenkrad:

Michael Wolf lives in the town of Tisdale. He leads a prettey average life. But after laving all expectancy behind, something terrible happens...
His father is killed, his friend disappears, and his town inadvertantly burns to a crisp. In desperation during the moment, Michael runs to his father's place of employment, "Wolf Inn", in the hopes of finding his father still alive.
Instead, he finds Ssenkrad. A devil creature, stiving for total Omnipotency. He tells Michael his reasoning for taking the town by a one man storm, "Your father had something of mine..."
After that, Ssenkrad strikes Michael down.

Michael awakings to see that he is being Doctored back to health by Christophe Mcree, And Zeth Darke.
They explain to him the full story of Ssenkrad, and tell him that they have been hunting him,
so he can not gain control of the entire universe, using the power of the 9 Shards.
What are they you ask? I will Not tell you. What happens next you ask? I will not tell you. (Unless I ever get around to formating it for the PC V. Then you'll know.)

Play through an epic RPG journey, of Drama, Devotion, Love, Hate, Good, and Evil. Play Through,

Ssenkrad

Kind of like Inuyasha. Well I like the devil creature. Sounds pretty good.

Also part of my story is up on the writer's lounge. It's called the Prophecy of Abigail Williams, if you wanted to read it. I'm only up to chapter 7.

This message was edited by alleniverson3 on Aug 05 2005.

Im new to this so,hello

I like of some of your ideas but the best RPG's are ones with more simple storys. Here's mine.

Yuka is a 17 year old guy who has just lost his family and friends thanks to an attack by the Diabolical "Mazic Army".
(Think of them as something like Shinra from FF7)
Derik who is the leader of Mazic has stolen a sacred stone from Yuka's village (Carda Village) and plans to collect or "steal" them all to summon the ultimate demon "SYN".

If SYN is summoned he can destroy the world in pretty much the snap of ya fingers.
Yuka is pretty pissed by the fact Derik wiped out his village, so he goes on a quest to Shut down the Mazic Army,
slay Derik and retrieve all the crystals.

Thanks Guys,its my first idea for a game so be nice

Actually, hehe, my story didn't turn out very well. It was good don't get me wrong, but it's hard to explain. Well I'm making a new story which would have been the sequel, but I decided to make it the first one. This one is probably easier to make into a game as well.
When Jimmy Martin woke up for his first day of school, he had no idea what he was in for. As the days of highschool boredom rolled on, he found that Emily, his crush, and longtime friend was acting strange. Finally Emily confronted him and they became girl and boyfriend. But when a random situation where Emily kisses Jimmy, Jimmy falls through the wall he was back to back with. Little did he know, that both he and Emily were going down a drain to Fuedal Japan. Metting Nanatanka Yuri Son, Emily and Jimmy would be trained. They were chosen to defeat Oda Nobunaga, who had been raging havoc not only in Nanatanka's time period, but also their's. When enemies are created, love will be strengthened, as Emily and Jimmy will fall deeply in love with eachother. But one day when traveling down the road, a monster appears. The monster has human like qualitties, but looks like an ox. How could this be? Well the truth is that Nobunaga is using one of the sacred Gangan Diamon's power to create an army of monsters. Can Jimmy and Emily save both their worlds?

Oh yeah, the story is called the War in the Unknown Worlds. I'm still working on chapter two.

Well my story is different. Since most of the games we have seen lately revolve around White, Black, Blue and Red; I thought that it would be a good idea to go back to a type of skill that is overlooked... Alchemy.

A powerful evil force travels to the past to a time long ago, in a world in which White, Black, Blue and Red magic was not yet developed Alchemy reigned and was the main weapon of choice among most teens. Including Riley, a boy who will help to develop alchemy into its future form of magic. He must face the highly advanced magic of the evil force from the future while to pass his final Alchemy exam at the Aquarius School of Arts and Alchemy.

Yep... thats it. The only problem is that I have trouble finishing games that I start creating. This game will proably be another piece in my ever-growing unfinished games pile. So what do you think?

quote Ssenkrad

My sarcasm Senses are Tingling.

It's just kinda hard to follow, that's all.

The story didn't work I know. I write a lot of stories. And the story was better than the summary, and different. I'm not good at summaries.

Neither am I... but what pther stories do you have?

Mine's about a ninja village that was attacked by demons. Only one ninja has the power of destruction and he is the only one who can eradicate the demons. Though, he has a long way to go...

Hey I like your guys stories, but what do u think about mine?

Title: FAME

The game of Fame is about reputation and success. The player starts as a young man/woman who has just left their parents home. You start on a large island with 5 cities, 3 towns, and many caves/mountains/forests. The first town is called Juna, a tropical paradise. The other 4 cities are on a mountain, in a desert, in the tundra, and a large commercial city. The time frame for the game is unknown, there are guns, swords, magic, and cars (FF7 style). There are monsters and characters in this land, but the whole point of the game if to build a reputation by answering questions people you meet ask. Then the second part is the sucess part, you need to complete goals or objectives different people ask of you.

So please e-mail me to let me know.