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"when in doubt, use explosion"

So thats what fire did! He sent out all of his Eeveelutions, and they all just happened to know explosion..

"Now....all of you.... EXPLOSION!"

Out of the smoke walks a mysterious pokemon trainer. fire says, "who are you" and the mysterious pokemon trainer replies, "I am ice. i was trapped by darkrai for almost destroying him before. Now i am free, but i cannot get my revenge on him for trapping me." ice says as he gets a furious look in his eye. Then...

Fire's Pokémon were never stated to be inside Poké Balls, so I think it's fine for him to have seven Pokémon around him.

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"So, what do you intend to do now?" asked Fire as he looked at Ice. Then...

Am not in control of other people's emotions

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"M-Me? What did I do??!!" said Fire, taking two steps back with his eyes widened, looking surprised, confused and offended at the same time. "Enough chatter! Go, Nessie!" said Ice then, as he took out a Poké Ball with his right hand, pushed a small button on it to enlarge it, and then he threw it forward! The Poké Ball then landed on the ground and opened in a bright flash of white energy, revealing a Lapras, nicknamed Nessie! "Eiiroouu!!" Nessie then let out a gentle cry as it emerged from its Poké Ball, as it tilted its head from left to right with its eyes closed, before raising its head up high, while still having the left side of its head facing forward, and then it reopened its eyes and looked at Fire with the corner of its left eye briefly while moving its ears a bit. After that, it turned its head to face Fire completely, looking ready to battle! Then...

both trainers and arceus face ice in an epic battle, with acclaim's dragonairus (srry if spelled wrong) using golden blast, arceus using judgement, and fire's eeveelutions using explode (all at once, so ice got pwn'd). when the smoke and golden light start fading away...

because megamapleman does not seem to wnat to continue this thread, I will reply for him
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Because I wanted you to see the truth of your ways, to open up the good(ness help me) inside you. When I saw ice, i saw no good(ness it's getting worse) in him, unlike you, where there was a sliver of hope(fulness that this will end soon)

Then a gold latias came and sacrificed itself to destroy everything and create a new world. In this world, There was a boy named Spike. He had a Jolteon and Vaporeon. He had to save Shadow Rayquaza by...

As it turned out, the whole story after the second to last paragraph of this post was so far nothing more than a random fantasy that played out in ACCLAIM's mind as he shouted "...Obey me subjects! Obey me world!". However, the continuous, eerie silence that followed eventually caught ACCLAIM's attention, and he snapped out of it. "Hm?" ACCLAIM said then, realizing that no one was actually hailing him, and then he looked at the crowd, finding himself at a bit of confusion and disbelief. "What's wrong? Why aren't they worshippin' me?" he wondered then, surprised at how ineffective his speech had been compared to what he had imagined it to be.

Faced with this unexpected situation, ACCLAIM then started thinking what to do next. But then, all of a sudden, nine white-dressed people who covered themselves in clothes like these suddenly appeared behind him, standing on the air at a level of height a bit above ACCLAIM, looking down at him! ACCLAIM was alerted by a sound that was heard as the nine people appeared in the air, and said "Huh?" as he immediately turned around to face at the direction of the sound, quickly noticing the white-dressed group standing in the air. "What? Who are you guys?" ACCLAIM asked then, looking at the white-dressed people curiously. "Shut your mouth" one of them, who was standing in the front and middle of the group and had a sheathed katana to the left of his waist, said then. "What?" ACCLAIM said then, frowning in irritation. "Not only are you back to this place you've been forbidden from entering... But you're also putting the Great PokeGod's name in your mouth and spreading lies around him? You've got a lot of nerve, brat" the same person who had spoken before said then. "Just who are you?" ACCLAIM asked then. The person standing in front of the group then grabbed the hilt of his katana, and then he suddenly disappeared, before instantly reappearing some distance behind ACCLAIM! After his reappearance, the white-dressed person had his back turned at ACCLAIM, and was holding the hilt of his now halfway-sheathed katana in his hand. The person standing behind ACCLAIM then sheathed his katana, and a when the katana got completely sheathed, a characteristic clicking sound was made. On that clicking sound, a huge explosion of blood suddenly happened on ACCLAIM's left shoulder, blowing off his left arm from his body! "GRAAAAARGH!!!" ACCLAIM screamed then, widening his eyes as he watched his left arm and megaphone flying away from him, and a fountain of blood began erupting from his wound! ACCLAIM's arm fell into a lake somewhere on the mountain, where some wild Carvanha devoured it in a split second, while his megaphone smashed down onto a rock and broke. "Shit! Shit!" ACCLAIM said then, as he put his right hand over his wound to stop the bleeding. "Dammit...! What was that for, you bastard?!" he said then enraged, as he turned to look at the person with the katana. "Consider this a warning" the person with the katana said then, with his back still turned at ACCLAIM. "If you're still within my sight after the next minute... your head will be the next to go" he continued, without even turning to face ACCLAIM. "Piece 'a shit!" ACCLAIM said then, as he grabbed his Dragon Sword and charged furiously at the person! But then, one of the other white-dressed people suddenly disappeared and reappeared behind the person with the katana, facing ACCLAIM. That person then pointed both his hands at ACCLAIM and said "Hyper Beam", before charging a huge Hyper Beam in his hands and firing it at ACCLAIM! "Ugh!" ACCLAIM said then, as the Hyper Beam shined in front of his face and body before crashing on him, blasting him away! "Graaaaargh!" ACCLAIM screamed then as the Hyper Beam carried him along as it flew diagonally downwards down the mountain, until eventually crashing into a solitary hermit's house somewhere on the mountain, destroying it in a large explosion. A huge cloud of dust was raised after the explosion, which completely devastated the building, while the white-dressed people watched the sight apathetically, including the one who had chopped off ACCLAIM's arm before, who slowly turned around to start observing the cloud of dust below. As the cloud of dust started to settle down, the nine white-dressed people then saw ACCLAIM's figure becoming apparent. "Tch..." ACCLAIM said, as he grabbed onto a ruined wall and made his way up from the ground where he had fallen. He then looked up and saw the nine mysterious white-dressed persons standing in the sky and looking down at him, with their intentions and identities coldly concealed behind the masks they were wearing. "This is the last time I say this. Abandon this place... or else you'll abandon your life" the person with the katana said then, as he looked down at ACCLAIM through the darkness of his mask. "Fuck... Who the hell are you bastards?" ACCLAIM said angrily then, as he hatefully looked at the nine people threatening his life.

"That's right... Maybe you don't recognize us behind those masks" one of the white-dressed persons, who had been standing exactly in the middle of the group, said then, and ACCLAIM focused at him, while those around him slightly stepped to the side, distancing themselves a bit from him. "My name is Redemption... the leader of the Supermoderators" the white-dressed person standing between the others said then, and upon hearing that, ACCLAIM widened his eyes in shock and fear! Then...