Nah I mean Abs itch! (add a 'b')

But six pack of jacks... tasty!

Also I can't Live on six bottles of soda. I think you mean lift.

Yellow is hard to shade without making it appear too olive-y.
The arms stick out a little from the shirt edge, I can't figure it out, I did something wrong but I dunno what.

ZOMG SODA WHERE!?
My friend is friends with this guy who has an eight-pack. She took a picture once, It was like ...

Err... Yeah... I meant lift...

I did once see a youtube video telling how to fake abs, I think... Perhaps you watched that...

Woot, yeah, Odie. Look fine today x3
The shading is horrible on the hoodie, I know D<

The hoodie isn't the problem. It's the hair. The color on the stripe in the middle is far, far too brownish. You gotta shade that a bit better, man!

Yeah, I know, working on it I have to re-colour the entire hair slightly more brownish anyways.
Maybe he just has dark roots?

EDIT;

Better, but the line itself is wrong. Look at Hammy's thing closely. It's not a jagged line; it's a straight line with half-pyramids coming off of each side

Just because I post my sprites in Hammy's tutorial means I have to sprite according to him? It's jagged, but softly jagged. I got the hair line idea from Hammy, and read his tutorial for

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a) brushing up, b) the general idea c) his was the only place I could find rtp spritesets

Don't get me wrong, this helped tons, but I have my own style too.

True... It just doesn't look... Well... Right to me!! I don't know why, but it just doesn't look how it should!

I think I might make a sprite of myself in HK style.

Also my battery ran flat as this picture was being taken (hence the white triangle and dodgy quality) but this is me:

Man... If you look like that, do you want to be a detective?

Nah a rapper! LMAO!

Not sure what I want to be. I don't give a fudge about fashion so I make my own style. Normally I have a shirt on.

I like my hat and my Jack Johnson Hoodie!

I did make a sprite of you in HK style
See above. Except it is hatless and the hoodie is blue.
Haha, I thought that was a Billabong hoodie at first.

I know but I mean I might make one myself just for fun.

I'd like to see a sprite of you!

JACK JOHNSON IS AWSOME! sorry...

Yeah... He sure is!... Well... By squirrel standards...