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_ZeD true seeker since: Jan 2003	Jun 26, 03 at 12:33am ^ re: Neo Emcee's Light-Weight Tournament
	Log in to remove this sponsored message rollingpimp Lyrical Stabs:4 Structure:4 Originality:4 Enjoyability:4 Best Line: Looks like you'll have to start coping with your inevitable defeat Because this spit is too incredible your best bet would be to retreat// Improvement Curve: You had a nice spit, it was well structured and flowed very well. But I did see a bar that you rhymed 'me' with 'me', you have a really good vocab so I'm sure you could have came with something better then that. Total:16 the clipse Lyrical Stabs:4.5 Structure:3.5 Originality:3.5 Enjoyability:3 Best Line: BOY U NEED TO UP YOUR FLOW AND YOUR MENTALITY/ THINK U GONNA WIN..HEY MAN COME BACK TO REALITY// Improvement Curve: You started off weak but by the end you picked up with some good rhymes. Something to improve on is your grammer, slang is ok but when you can't spell some words it kinda throws the judges away from enjoying the spit overall. Total:14.5 Round 2 vote: rollingpimp
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Dutch Samurai ----<----<@ Still Seekin' total posts: 3591 since: Aug 2002	Jun 26, 03 at 1:34am ^ re: Neo Emcee's Light-Weight Tournament
	wow 74 & max5 round 2 wow 74 Lyrical Stabs:3 Structure:3 Originality:3.5 Enjoyability:3 Best Line:Shit, you give me hepatitis B, then you must look like a sick disease My acidic spit will melt your feet and leave you standing on your knees// Improvement Curve:Not a bad spit but your alliteration line needs work.. it was more strange than insulting. You had some pretty funny lines, but I felt max's rhymes were stronger. Total:12.5 max5 Lyrical Stabs:3 Structure:3 Originality:4 Enjoyability:3 Best Line:I don't need this crap u messing wit a real killa his name is max u see my stats u better come fully pack to get knocked back or u get left wit a asthma attack// Improvement Curve: You had some good rhymes but, your lines lacked clarity. In other words, work on making it make a bit more sense. Think it out a bit more. But you are improving. Total:13 My vote goes to:max5 ------------------- S'all about 'dat paper... Now with 50% more defness
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King Still Seekin' since: May 2002	Jun 26, 03 at 4:16pm ^ re: Neo Emcee's Light-Weight Tournament
	Rollingpimp Lyrical Stabs:3.5 Structure:4 Originality:4 Enjoyability:4 Best Line:Your time has run out Clipse, time to start writin down new scripts But lets be real, the chance of you ever winnin a battle is like a multiple solar eclipse// Improvement Curve: Good use of similes, and metaphors, you took some round 1 advice and played of a few of his lines. Your spits are always interesting for me to read. Because you got your own style, and you find ways to keep it creative. Keep on incorporating new ideas, and word-play into your rhymes. But as the tourney goes on, make sure you make more of an effort to really attack your opponent. It's okay to have a few lines that describe your style, but make sure you don't get out punched. By not having enough hard hitting disses. Total:15.5 The Clipse Lyrical Stabs:3 Structure:3 Originality:3 Enjoyability:3.5 Best Line:RP BETTER DO WHAT 50 SAID AND BACK DOWN/ NEVER KNOW I MIGHT JUST GO WWE AND GIVE U THE SMACKDOWN Improvement Curve: Nice way to play of his bars, but I felt they weren't creatively done. You definitely no how to come at your opponent hard. But I'd like to see some slicker word-play. Some punch-lines, that are sic, and make the reader have to scope it twice. Total:12.5 Round 2 winner: rollingpimp -------------------
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Jim Raynor Resident Neo since: Jul 2002	Jun 26, 03 at 7:30pm ^ re: Neo Emcee's Light-Weight Tournament
	Since Chrit was such a puss to go first the 2nd round and I didn't wanna get DQed, I mine as well put this down. The ER Oh Mr.Musician here, about to give Chrit a full KO = This kid wouldn't win if he bit shit off Death Row This kids talkin about tearin my ass apart = Got worst rhymes then a storyteller workin at Walmart I don't get it, you talkin about my mom like she was made a clay = She's someone you can't edit nor get a lesbian melee I'm gunna have to go to the Emergency Room = cuz your spelling got my head confused like shrooms You left me more clueless then Mellisa Joan Hart = Now we goin back to the ER, leavin yo body on a loan cart This kids losing his rhymes more times then he loses yang = Whats up with the spelling errors, or was that your type of slang? I'm glad you shit your pants once you see me = Dancen to me, like you'se a bleepin Jay-Z employee Annihlating me? You must be biting off of Osama = All this drama is gunna lead yo ass into the trauma I think I'll end this round with a sound = This kid couildn't go the distance with me, even if he worked at Greyhound This message was edited by Jim Raynor on Jun 26 2003.
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BallaFreak Bunnies Bitches ultra seeker total posts: 1327 since: Sep 2002	Jun 26, 03 at 9:15pm ^ re: Neo Emcee's Light-Weight Tournament
	Yasuo posted on Page 3. You’re about the 50th person to use the word ret@rd// So you’ll be scarred and I’ll send my dearest regards on a get-well card// And why do you always talk about my mom, that’s just lard// But last night I caught your mom off guard// Then I talked to Sean Paul// He said his new song is called is “Yasuo’s Male Booty Call”// And he said for yo mom “To Shake that Thing”// But now your mom's in my bed without her G-string// Plus you're like Clemens* you just can't get the win// Cause my rhymes stick in you like a pincushion// So I’ll hit you with my bat and leave a concussion// Then you and your Nun can have a long discussion// About that naked guy and the Russians// And what makes you think I give a fck about your CD’s?// When you go bankrupt, we’ll start a jubilee// Cause you have lost this round like Robert E. Lee//** And your head dragging on the streets// Make sparks like cutting metal to make sheets// Cause you can’t take the heat of facing another defeat// And I have plenty of tricks up my sleeve so you better retreat// So I’ll end this by saying your ending sucked// Cause I’m your assassin and you’re fuked// --------------------- -Shake That Thing is part of one of Sean Paul's songs. - Roger Clemens is a Proffesional Baseball player who can't get a win at the moment. -Jubilee means to celebrate a party/anniversary ***-Robert E. Lee was the Head General for the South who lost in the Civil War against the North. This message was edited by BallaFreak on Jun 26 2003. -------------------
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_ZeD true seeker since: Jan 2003	Jun 26, 03 at 11:04pm ^ re: Neo Emcee's Light-Weight Tournament
	Rapid Lyrical Stabs:3.5 Structure:3 Originality:3 Enjoyability:3 Best Line: Dude , take that penis out your ear it's bleeping with your brain/ Love is pain , so test me once more and I won't refrain from bleeping you up again/ Improvement Curve: You came hard at the start but your rhymes were weak by the end. Some lines seemed to go on for to long and some lines lost there flow. You did however have some good punchlines, but it just wasn't enough. Total:12.5 Furious Faction Lyrical Stabs:3 Structure:3.5 Originality:3.5 Enjoyability:4 Best Line: You ain't sh!t, but a talker, my lyrical diciple, 28 shots in one spit, is what they determined came out of my rifle/ Improvement Curve: You had some good metaphors amd you played off of his lines nicely. You deserve the win for this round because you came out swingin and never gave up all the way through your spit. Total:14 Round 2 vote: Furious Faction ----------------------------------- Yasuo Lyrical Stabs:3.5 Structure:3.5 Originality:3.5 Enjoyability:4 Best Line: People with 20/20 vision need glasses to read your spits// They're even smaller then yo girl and her microscopic tits// Improvement Curve: You had some nice metaphors. You have a unique style in your spits that flow real nice. I'm givin you my vote for round two. Total:14.5 BallaFreak Lyrical Stabs:2.5 Structure:3 Originality:2.5 Enjoyability:3.5 Best Line: And your head dragging on the streets// Make sparks like cutting metal to make sheets// Cause you can't take the heat of facing another defeat// And I have plenty of tricks up my sleeve so you better retreat// Improvement Curve: I didn't think you came that hard. You had some nice rhymes and metaphors but I don't think it was enough. You should have played off his lines a bit more. Total:11.5 Round 2 vote: Yasuo
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BigBalla118 Seeketh Maximus since: May 2002	Jun 27, 03 at 1:08am ^ re: Neo Emcee's Light-Weight Tournament
	[1]Game Crazy(0) vs. Big Balla118(1) R2[Navy] Game crazy, I been waiting 2 days and you still aint respond// I bouta finish this off, so get ready to play along// I am going to smoke you like a Bin Laden// It is too late for you, no chance for parden// I got so many ways to Kill you, like Loon "Tell Me How You Want That"// You can pick, but no matter what I am going to leave your dead body at the bottom of a vat// Round 1 was mine and so will be Round 2// When you walk up to the stage, they be like "Aint He New"// Like 3 6, I am Riding Spinners, like the dial on your clock// Your time is running low like the number of bullets in my glock// I hit you 3 in the arm, 5 times in the head, but only 1 went to the brain// It was enough to give you brain damage, got you running around, bitch you insane// I told you don't phuck with me, but you prefer not to take heed// But now you sitting there in the corner feeling your mouth start to bleed// You beggin me to call 911, I like "What the hell I look Like"// It time for you to step down and pass the mic// But you keep coming back to me like "Na I aint gon give up"// Damn, I had to shoot you 5 more times in the head, have you finally had enough// You damn right you crazy, you think you are Jason walking around on One leg and one arm// Next time I will remember not to promise your girlfriend that I won't do any harm// I can see why you gave up this time you are not Freddy// You are not going to come back to kill the murderers that killed you, you are to petty//* I dont think you have realized that you are battling me// Lets get real for once, at least learn to pronounce my name its Big B// You better learn it well, Mr. Crazy, because I killed you once and I will do it again// You are going to see your bones coming out of your skin, yea they bent// I am going to give your head to your mother, send it through UPS// I got so much respect, I aint going to jail even if I confess// I still trying to figure out if I should give it as a whole or leave it in pieces// You better have been praying, you bout to meet your new best friend, his name is Jesus// * - Bin laden is also known as weed, a good example of this is Three 6 Mafia's new CD - Unbreakables, Track #5 - For those that didn't know, Freddy Kreuger was a child molester at first, but then some teenagers found out and beat him up and lit him on fire which killed him. Then he came back in their dreams and killed them. ------------------- The World Is Yours** DMC NeoPortal Fifa 06
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ying Still Seekin' total posts: 3903 since: Aug 2002	Jun 27, 03 at 2:46am ^ re: Neo Emcee's Light-Weight Tournament
	Round 2 vs Raynor. Well it looks like you started to get some rhymes// To bad, cuz your girlfrind said they suck right after I buster her hym// There's no way you can beat me at your bset// Cuz you suck mroe dick thne all of the rest// No wonder we you won the first roun Jim// You started suckin on a judges cock, cuz your brains so dim// Screw this tourney I really don't need to win it// But I can put my cock in your mothu and spin it// Im tiered of getting of getting fiered on for the rhymes I spit// So why don't you take this rhmye, take it home and Ill tell you, "Make what you want of it." Everyones on my case because they don't know how to rap// Well they all ahve pimps and need to get a bitch slap// I will lyrically poision your ass with my venom// Send you back to the forest, give you an axe and some denim// When is this site going to get it through there head// When they learn to judge they would know I left this cat for dead// Jim why do you evne try to beat me, defeat me, maybe even beseech me// Ill go get the rap devil to bleepen conceive me// You aren't worth a good spit of my time// Hell that line dident even seem to rhyme// Im jsut tiered of listeing to yours and everyone elses bullshit// Ill just go my homies come back and give you a gangsta hit// You all must be deaf not to be haring the words that are comeing out of my mouth// Well F_U_C_K you all, ill take my spits and I'm out// ------------------- It is simply...Tunes!*
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Game Crazy Fuel Your Obsession, Obey Your Desire s-e-e-k-e-r total posts: 1879 since: Mar 2003	Jun 27, 03 at 8:21am ^ re: Neo Emcee's Light-Weight Tournament
	[1]Game Crazy vs. Big Balla118[Navy] Round 2 Now your last rhyme didn't seem to make sense Just read it over, because I can't copy and paste the whole spit Now don't take any offence But you really should read your work over, and then click "submit" So I will go over some stuff with you I wish i had more lines than 30 so i could go into detail of round 2 "Every single statistic, I have advantages over you" Well Yes that is mostly true Guys GC bleeped none, Guys Balla bleeped 142 So what year are you in at school? Oh Year 3? Are you a rebel, and get sent to the hall? Did you laugh 'coz someone said they needed a wee-wee? Look, I'm in control You're just a dead soul I found your last victory abit suspicious Because it didn't even seem that ambitious Was any of actually meant to be vicious? How you won it made me confused But what I conclude Is that your stuff is bad Like a little kid that is depressed or just sad But to prove that you're just hype would be tricky Unlike when your hands get sticky Over the queen of England* But I understand That you're desperate Look everyone he's started to sweat He's feeling the pressure of hip-hop Big Balla, maybe you should stop The Queen of England is well old, and well i think you get the picture P.S. i didnt know that when you press preview it changes the swearing to bleep* But i think you get what the bleeps are in mine Oh and i didnt reply for 2 days, becuase i went 1st in the last round so you have ot go first in this round -------------------
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King Still Seekin' since: May 2002	Jun 28, 03 at 12:18am ^ re: Neo Emcee's Light-Weight Tournament
	Jim Raynor Lyrical Stabs:3.5 Structure:3.5 Originality:3.5 Enjoyability:4 Best Line:I'm gunna have to go to the Emergency Room = cuz your spelling got my head confused like shrooms That diss kinda of sumed up his rounds, good diss. Improvement Curve: Good round, to be honest your doing what's needed to get the win. And what I mean by that is emcee's don't really use up their A material depending on the competition. You know the deal keep it moving next round, and just keep it new and creative. Total:14.5 ying Lyrical stabs:3 Structure:3 Originality:2.5 Enjoyability:2.5 Best Line:I will lyrically poision your ass with my venom// Send you back to the forest, give you an axe and some denim// Improvement Curve: Your spelling errors threw the flow off for me once again. You did hit harder that round, but I though you played on the genital crap, a little much at the beginning. If you could clean up your structure, mainly your spelling mistakes. You probably could turn in a solid round. Total:11 Round 2 vote: Jim Raynor This message was edited by King on Jun 27 2003. -------------------
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Delinquent The Razor Blade Assassin ultra seeker total posts: 1446 since: Jun 2001	Jun 28, 03 at 3:26am ^ re: Neo Emcee's Light-Weight Tournament
	Jim Raynor Lyrical Stabs: 3.5 Structure: 3 Originality: 3.75 Enjoyability: 3.5 Best Line: Annihlating me? You must be biting off of Osama = All this drama is gunna lead yo ass into the trauma I like this line, obviously cause I'm in the military, lol. Sike na, but I thought this was a tight line the way you rhymed it in. It was the most solid line that stuck in my head and flowed the smoothest. Improvement Curve: Your flow was solid, but you need to work on your lyrical stabs in this round. I know you got them, and the only real way to improve them is to use them. Total: 13.75 ying Lyrical stabs: 2.5 Structure: 3.25 Originality: 2.25 Enjoyability: 2.5 Best Line:I will lyrically poision your ass with my venom// Send you back to the forest, give you an axe and some denim// I liked this line cause it didn't have all the same references to judging and bashing the sight, it just showed lyrical skill at it's rawest compared to the rest of the verse. Improvement Curve: I don't know if you where upset about the judgement of the last round, but I think you need to get a little more focused on your opponent, and less focused on the score. Not to sound harsh, I'm just being real, but you coulda saved this round with a little more originality and lyrical venom, which you displayed that you had with that line. Total:10.5 ------------------- Dem D.Block Boyz ILL Eagle
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King Still Seekin' since: May 2002	Jun 28, 03 at 10:51pm ^ re: Neo Emcee's Light-Weight Tournament
	BigBalla118 Lyrical Stabs:3.5 Structure:3.5 Originality:3 Enjoyability:3.5 Best Line:You beggin me to call 911, I like "What the hell I look Like"// It time for you to step down and pass the mic// Improvement Curve: You definitely hit harder that round, in some spots you may need to use you're instead of you are, makes it more conducive to reading. Keep on upping the ante when it comes to new ways to diss your opponent you never wanna use similar tatics too much like the song references. Soiid round Total:13.5 Game Crazy Lyrical Stabs:3 Structure:3 Originality:2.5 Enjoyability:2.5 Best Line:Now your last rhyme didn't seem to make sense Just read it over, because I can't copy and paste the whole spit Now don't take any offence But you really should read your work over, and then click "submit Improvement Curve: You started off sorta of unique, and it was effective. But to-wards the end you sorta of reduced you lines, and the punches were basic. I also felt you could have made a better attempt to attack his earlier material. Just keep working on your punch lines, and practice playing of your opponents lines more. Total:11 Round 2 vote: BigBalla118 -------------------
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Delinquent The Razor Blade Assassin ultra seeker total posts: 1446 since: Jun 2001	Jun 29, 03 at 6:46am ^ re: Neo Emcee's Light-Weight Tournament
	yasuo Lyrical Stabs: 4.5 Structure: 5 Originality: 4 Enjoyability: 5 Best Line:You're a penny compaired to the dimes that I spit across the globe//* While your material should be with shit shot from a space probe// Improvement Curve: This was a nice spit. Smooth and solid from start to finish. My suggestion though is that you should try more combinations now, you got the flowing down. Try to switch it up a little with some more linking words. That's just a suggestion. It was a solid spit none the less. Total: 18.5 Ballafreak Lyrical Stabs: 4 Structure: 5 Originality: 4 Enjoyability: 4 Best Line:So I’ll hit you with my bat and leave a concussion// Then you and your Nun can have a long discussion// About that naked guy and the Russians// Improvement Curve: Nice smooth rhyme. I was feelin it. I think you should come harder with your punchlines though, they just didn't hit hard enough for this round. Your structure was nice, and I liked the combinations, but just try to come harder for next time. Total: 17 Vote: yasuo bigballa18 Lyrical Stabs: 3.5 Structure: 4 Originality: 4 Enjoyability: 3.5 Best Line: Like 3 6, I am Riding Spinners, like the dial on your clock// Your time is running low like the number of bullets in my glock// Improvement Curve: this was nice. Try to work on your punchlines more. Try to be more aggressive and innovative. And working with a little more wordplay wouldn't hurt either. Some of your lines seemed like they'd be hard, but then they got thrown off, and some just didn't rhyme in my head like bin laden and parden. Total: 15 Gamecrazy Lyrical Stabs: 2.5 Structure: 4 Originality: 4.5 Enjoyability: 3 Best Line: Now your last rhyme didn’t seem to make sense Just read it over, because I can’t copy and paste the whole spit Now don’t take any offence But you really should read your work over, and then click “submit” Improvement Curve: I was really feeling your first lines, but then you seemed to be forcing the large words out near the end. Try to work more on dissing your opponent instead of just insulting his intelligence. Sometimes that works, but it just didn't do it for this round. Total: 14 Vote: BigBalla18 ------------------- Dem D.Block Boyz ILL Eagle
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max5 No time for games high on "N" total posts: 748 since: Apr 2002	Jun 30, 03 at 6:52am ^ re: Neo Emcee's Light-Weight Tournament
	round 3 Jukebox go 2 track 4 I knew a weak mc had to come across my path/ U messing wit max so soak up my aftermath// I thought u would stop talking trash in your body cast never new u/ Your ass would last your nothing to me but a good laugh/ Yo do u no who u facing lace u up an hit the transformation/ I advise u to wait patience or you’ll be vacating this place// They wont find no evidence but they find your brains all over the place/ I'm America's most wanted u cant spit face to face your lawyer can’t get U out of this one, is not the O.J. Simpson case/ I can get a way wit anything like replacing your face// Put your legs where your eyes should be/ That’s one of down falls man when u battling me// So I guest u got no choice but to leave/ U cant stop this u must be obnoxious/ Hide your body parts in different kinds of boxes// Everything u speak is false/ I think you just found out he lost/ Wow are u they’re somebody check this guys pulse// The last post I heard had your body mal function/ When I'm done, you'll going to need some serious surgical reconstruction// I got to take u once and for good/ Don’t want to see your face again in up in my hood// Having u sicker than Christopher Reeve/ Until your lungs striver up, then u can't breath/ Its time for u to throw in the towel and concede to me// I would go easy one u but this is round 3/ Do you understand man your nothin but a fan/ give you my oder graph an send u back to the stands// Just remember im the mc that can always kick your ass// I'm like Libran James 1st round pick in the NBA draft// U can’t succeed against me that’s suicide/ So how the song go/ Na Na Na Na Na Na ah ah ah ah you sucks good bye// ------------------- I Be Da only Big Boy Dat Tha Big Boys Watch
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wow 74 Still Seekin' total posts: 3387 since: Jun 2002	Jun 30, 03 at 11:59pm ^ re: Neo Emcee's Light-Weight Tournament
	Damn it, time's running down and this is all I got: max5, I'm gonna kill your family tree leaf by leaf* Then chill as I tell the cops you suicide of grief// Call me a chef, cause I cook up rhymes that are sizzling Sizzle your ears, leave you deaf and dispose what's left for dumping// Your bars are all over the place and most of them don't even rhyme Hang you with a rope, leave in my front door to use as a windchime// Your spit is like a fly and they are always a nuisance (I pronounce this word "new - sents) Put acid down your mouth and serve you as refreshments// Stop bringing up Christopher Reeves line, that's very repetitively You'll be him when I beat you with a hammer and kill consecutively// Didn't understand your spit, fix the spelling and grammars mistakes You're so soft people can put a straw in and mistake for milkshakes// The song fits for me, cause I suck at getting "good-byed" Leave you such a wreckage the comp will read "access denied"// Again, can't spell Lebron James, you and him ain't nothing to fear Like him, your raps are so lame they play for the worthless Cavaliers// Quote max "I think you just found out he lost" who is this he? "He" is your bro giving you so much orgasm you lose your mentality// Before I go, I have screwed you so much you have nail marks on your anus I sended you flying not to the planet Ur-anus, but to the planet "Ur-penis"// -------------------- -------------------------- ----------------------------- If you don't understand that line, it means I'm going to kill his each of him family members one at a time carbonic acid mixed with water in his body (and other things) = soda (cokes, 7ups, etc.) * Cleveland Cavaliers is the sucky NBA team lebron james play for Edit: Max, don't even think about editing your post to change stuff. This message was edited by wow 74 on Jun 30 2003.
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