1 Round
16-20 Lines
No Feeding
Best of 3 judges

Due by this Friday 11:59

Alright then, Good luck Storm.

Bitch, when you read this edition's leg you shoulda fled to the distance
How can you dredge a resistance against the father you beg for assistance?
I won't spoil you, the type of Dad to leave this wannabe royalty scarred
Like this boy could be hard! Only thing in his waist's a pizza loyalty card

Face it prick, you can't date a chick and you'll never have a relationship
Even your action figure's made to ship with "Wasted dick masturbation grip!!!"
Save that shit about beating K, like the hype's some type of appeasement
Bitch, your "finest achievement's" been leading Open Mic to bereavement (psh, well done.. )

Like a doctor's injection sheet, each one of the roster gets sent to sleep
No Bandwidth left to leech after you spit an entire oscar acceptance speech
F$£k ya smug ascencion, you poster boy for pregnancy drug prevention
Born re.tarded if you think an emcees's a librarian with thug pretensions

Barely done detention, watch this gangsta actor break down and just melt
Like when Lojik and Facts attacked and jacked this fake clown for his belt -
- And he cried to King. Respect him? When he constantly injects his septum
So far up our collective rectum, brown's his entire effective spectrum? (F$£K that! )

Plus this punk's homely as shit, no wonder he's terrified of posting a pic
So f%$kin ugly, any photo he picked would crash the site he hosted it with
Sheeit, I'm coasting with this bout, plucking this sad little crying sucker out
Now run home and polish that belt no-one else gives a flying f$%k about

Corny little bastard.

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- He asked for help from me with the rankings and stuff even though I already stepped down as a mod.
- His most important possesion in life is his pizza loyalty card, according to his topical with EJ
- He crowed about his achievements when he beat Kaotic but heads keep saying he's killed the forum as mod.
- He cried to King when Lojik voted against him and FF ended up with the title in that Heavy tournament. Since then nobody can be bothered to vye for it.

*Both Jecht and luckyguess have quit the battle after losing a round to me.
**Get hooked up, this tune is ill.
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Facing Storm you lack will to weather me, this cat is filled with jealousy
Cus I’ve beaten you AND Jecht for the title, straight up killed ya legacy
I bring the illest weaponry, you the skill of peasantry ya worthless bitch
Mad cus people constantly reference my name, no one’s even heard of his (Jake who?)

Serve this kid and steal his parenthesis, cus we belong in separate brackets (thank you)
Only thing you’re in the running for is champion of perfected whackness
Ain’t looking forwards to this like his head was backwards, face the truth
Nobody else has done half the damage moderating this place as you

The case is proved, but stubborn as a rock Rockwell still denies it
So I’ll open ya skull, pour liquid concrete inside it and watch ya mindset
Ya fate’s decided, in my shadow you’ve set up permanent residence
See we’ve both murdered some veterans, but I word it with eloquence

Observe all the testaments, ya ex-partner faked retirement just to duck me
Kinda reminiscent of the time I faced ya role model and busted lucky*
In this tournament you’ll be crushed abruptly, I ain’t stressed for personals
If you win you’ll just face me AGAIN, to me this is just a dress rehearsal

Go on pack ya sickest punches and best reversals, bring ya illest lyrics kid
Cus at the end of the day 100% truthfully it doesn’t make a bit of difference
So spit with viciousness, cus you can’t touch my status, ya nothing to me
Thus I’ll end this with a shout-out to Desc, I wrote this bumping his beats**
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Sorry about leaving this kinda late, just been busy lately.

Jake

Stabs[0-5]:3.5
Structure[0-5]:3.75
Originality[0-5]:3.25
Quotable[0-1]:1
Save that shit about beating K, like the hype's some type of appeasement
Bitch, your "finest achievement's" been leading Open Mic to bereavement (psh, well done.. )

Like a doctor's injection sheet, each one of the roster gets sent to sleep
No Bandwidth left to leech after you spit an entire oscar acceptance speech...Lol

Final Assessment[0-10]:6.5
The opening was an aight start I didn't like the way the 2nd line was phrased. Following that it picked right up wit the funny multie line about masturbation grip lol. Some cool personals other than the one about him crying about Lojiks shitty voting which was good just a little outdated man. A nice punching edge was displayed in this spit. Your witty stabs were mostly in the beggining towards mid then you made direct statement stabbing which is funny cuz both of you sorta took that same approach making this one hard to judge. Originality suffered some cuz the last stanza wasn't mind invading but it still stabbed well. The flow was outstanding for the most part so this was a good drop indeed.

Total:18


Fyrestorm

Stabs[0-5]:3.25
Structure[0-5]:3.5
Originality[0-5]:3.25
Quotable[0-1]:
Ya fate’s decided, in my shadow you’ve set up permanent residence
See we’ve both murdered some veterans, but I word it with eloquence

Final Assessment[0-10]:6.5
The opening was good but honestly title bragging does get tiresome along wit mentioning Jechtts name in another WILE diss. Not that you did it excessively but that seems to be everyone's strategy against him. I liked the swagger in bar 2 but realistically you two are the most mentioned names in here so that was a nice dose of irony. I think the 2nd and 3rd stanzas was where the heat was shown especially that mindset bar. Shit was so good idea wise it negated the non ender rhyme lol. After that you went the Jechtt route again but you now better than that. It did seem like you made this without trimming out some unneeded stuff like that last stanza.(just a little too cocky and indirect) Flow wise this was a breeze almost as good as Jakes its just his sylabbles matched up a little more but I liked the hardly used multie enders you had. Actually champ you might've took this if you went back and revamped those last two stanzas cuz they really made the difference here. Other than that this verse was quality shit you were just a little of your game this time around but decent effort champ.

Total:16.5

Winner:Jake

Hehehe, two votes from two people who faced each other earlier, quaint. Thanks for the judgements guys , and good round Wile. Hehe, I was afraid I was gonna win this thing at this rate. Good luck in the final, if you win it then I'll see you for the title. Don't keep me waiting .

Thanks for the votes bros, and yeah, it was like Fyre was on some King Hippo shit, everytime he opened his mouth he caught a punch in it.