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GL fac!




This message was edited by Controversy on Apr 11 2008.

This bastard is so bitch he should spell his name with an A contrAversy, like dem spanish people do, contrOversy would be a guy you stupid *bleep*

He made the thread and proved he is a bitch



*hold up gotta do this real quick at the beginning*

Up, Down, Up, Down, Left, Right, Left, Right, A, B, A, B, Select, Start,

You can never put the facts down its like i got infinity lives,
I come upfront while you shy aside like a virginity guy,
With a personality of femininity you the wine and the crackers,
Lacking a spine showing off to the fella's how you can bend backwards,

This bitch aint gettin no points like his CRS Stats
Cap off his chimney, choke him out so i dont get no smoke back,
Bitch you blow crack and I aint talkin them drugs,
More like you giving your daddy an upside down reverse hug,

Check the pasture cuzz this milk maid is literally flies on shit,
A controversy, cuzz we cant tell if thats a dick or lips cuzz your thighs blend with your hips,
Im sick of this chicks attitude and swagger,
Somebody that annoys you, this guys a n_gger,

[pause] Now thats controversy[unpause]

This snack cake comin at me got me laughin,
Cuzz this kids a joke on the mic like Jimmy Gaffigan
Send em packin back to burbs with mom and daddy,
He only rough and rugged with guns when hes workin at Academy,

Kick this bitch out like he aint get no flava flav clock,
What you say spock, beam you up, well let me cock back my laser glock,
Fade this weak bitch back without clippers or scissors,
Searchin for controversy usin sonar, snorkel equipment and flippers,

quote Furious Faction

Come at you correct like a crawfish you be backin up,

30 Furious Lives
Lyrical Stabs [0-5]: 3
The he's gay/a woman stuff got a little played out by the end of the spit, just a little. Otherwise you had some pretty good stabs, there wasn't a lot of well, Fury, like I usually expect from you, but it wasn't bad still. You dug around for some dirt and creative insults, all the links show that, hehehe, but you could have used some of them a little more effectively. The "This guy isn't even worth getting mad over" attitude worked well some of the time, like bars 4 or 7, but other times it felt kind of lacklustre, for example bar 5 came across as desperate rather than dismissive. I approve the stretch for more diversity, and this wasn't bad or anything, but don't feel you can't mix in a few gutter stabs with the rest of it.

Structure [0-5]: 2.75
Well, it was a little bland and basic at times, bar 1 was a good start, but then bar 5 on the other hand was pretty weak flow-wise, and the second line was way too long. You threw in an internal of sorts on the 9th line, and just a little more of that with consistency really would've made a difference, so try not to fall back on 1-syllable bars, unless the punch is ungodly badass and sick or something.

Originality [0-5]: 3.25
The dirt-digging and research I appreciated here, just the effort you went to alone shone through a little, I really liked bar 7 for example, a nice simple but effective use of a reference. You could have done better, but... What the Hell, it was alright, diverse, creative, nice one.

Quotable [0-1]: 0
Fade this weak bitch back without clippers or scissors,
Searchin for controversy usin sonar, snorkel equipment and flippers,

I can't really put my finger on why, but, I just liked that

Final Assessment [0-10]: 6
This lacked the typical Fury of the Faction, but it was quite creative, and I approve of the effort to branch out and expand your skills. If you mixed this resourcefulness with your typical rough style, it could be quite effective I reckon, although obviously it takes time to get the hang of, so don't feel you gotta jump right to that, stick at this stuff for a while and practice the new approach. I mean, it's meant to be fun, and experimenting is a good way to have fun and learn I figure. Anyway, a decent spit, not up to your usual, but you tried out some new stuff and that looked promising, so I think you should keep at it.

Total [0-26]: 15


LOL Card Games
Lyrical Stabs [0-5]: 3.5
I was definitely feeling the personal edge here, you got at his style, his moderation activity and his taste in rap, that's 3 close-to-home blows right there. Besides that there was lots of clever punches, the first 7 bars were all heat to me, only 8 and 10 felt a little lacking really, 9 was nice. I don't think I can really offer much advice on this front, maybe to make sure that your stabs always line up for the ultimate purpose of an attack. Bar 8 is clever, a strong rhyme and nice imagery, but as a stab it doesn't seem to be very direct, it says he would drown in shallow blood or water... A bit wayward, ya know? That's a minor point though, overall this was solid stuff.

Structure [0-5]: 3.5
I'm not even gonna bother man, hahaha. A solid chain of multis, I would have given you a higher score but you skipped the transitional rhyme slightly too often, but then again I'd say better to do that than put it in at the cost of making the rest of the line bad, so yeah, good ish.

Originality [0-5]: 3.75
Personals and double meanings all over the shop, shit man, let's change positions, fill me in on some of your tactics.

Quotable [0-1]: 1
Southern slang fades to black you’ve been spittin played tracks miserably
You’ll be the country bumpkin that took sleeping on Haystacks literally*

That's what, 5-syllables, and a fresh, personal simile? Ill

Final Assessment [0-10]: 7
You're really forging a solid, effective style of your own these days man, it's earning a lot of respect from me. I'd say more, but I think I covered it all, I'm just wondering which title you should go after if you win this tournament.

Total [0-26]: 18.75

Winner: Contr(a/o)versy

Thx judges its great not to wait long for votes anymore. Nice battling wit ya Fury I look forward to doing this again at some point.

BOOOO THESE MEN, lol

Good battle contra,

guess its game over for me, damn 2d graphics