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Desert_Motel_Dreams
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Barney Calhoun |
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The sun enveloped the Black Mesa Research Facility. Another day, hard work, extreme heat, god knows what else.
The facility buzzed with excitement, the chatting of scientists could be heard all around, as they told others there tales and what they had done the night before. The glass windows in the ceiling let the rays of sunlight shine down on the shiny floor, making the surface sparkle. Barney walked down the corridor, his blue uniform was itchy, he was getting irritated. His grey armour dragged him down, making him feel tired and lazy as he walked around the humid corridors past excited and agitated scientists. The noise was loud, it was worse when the heat made you hallucinate and sweat furiously. He walked down the corridors, dragging his feet and trying to keep a normal face, for fear of getting worried looks from scientists. He worried they'd look and exclaim, "Do you need to go to the toilet, Barney?". He worried as, the truth was, he most certainly did not need to use the loo. The heat and droning on of peoples voices made him feel like pulling his gun out and going on a killing spree. But he was Barney, that security guard that was seen as being friendly to everyone. He walked into the locker room, grabbing his pistol and helmet from the locker. The room smelt musty and looked hazy. He wondered if some scientists were hiding with a couple of joints, but soon shook off the thought and think of it as being the showers from round the corner. As he left the room, a rumble echoed down the corridors, scientists moaned and groaned, in fear. Barney looked around, standing still and listening. No sound. Nothing more. He proceeded on towards the main hall with the reception desk. Shattering glass interrupted the worried scientists and Barney stopped and looked up, the glass windows had cracked and shards of glass were slowly falling down from the ceiling. A shard of glass dropped in slow motion, piercing the air like the tip of an arrow, it sliced into a scientists head and he dropped to the ground gently, as everything it seemed fell silent. An explosion made the facility shudder. Barney poised his pistol, looking around wildly. The scientists all huddled together, chatting carefully and quietly. More smaller explosions erupted down the corrider, moving towards the main hall and a scream echoed after. A scientist ran into the main hall on fire screaming and waving around viciously, Barney moved forward, and then stepped back towards the wall, holding his gun out suspiciously. A spark shot out above, more sparks. Sizzling sounds. Barney cautiously looked up, as a ceiling fan fizzed and exploded, breaking off and spinning towards him. He leapt out of the way, hitting his head against the floor. The fan whizzed through the air and collided with the wall. He felt unable to move, severe pains shot through his head. A light system sparked and ripped and swung towards Barney, hitting the wall above him, smashing and sparking. A live wire whipped out and slashed around angrily. Barney lay still, as the light system towered just above him, sparking and lashing out. More explosions and shockwaves shook the facility harshly. A vending machine which was leant against the wall, swayed back and forth, and ended up toppling down, smashing and crushing soda cans, creating cold volcanic fountains of fizzy cola. The liquid slowly travelled across the glossy floor towards the electrical light appliance which hung above Barney, trapping him from getting up. The scientists were no longer there. One was non existant, splatted into a million pieces. The others were long gone, perhaps free, perhaps on there way to death, Barney didn't know, he didn't care. He couldn't do anything. The soda moved closer towards the light system, and Barney tightly shut his eyes. Waiting. -------------------
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Rabsh
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so what's the story in 25 words or less
sorry, gotta goo to school, couldnt read it completely | |
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Desert_Motel_Dreams
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lol, impossible to do...read it when ya have the chance, or don't lol, its no worry.
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Rabsh
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ooohhhh...a quarter of my essaays at school are based on games. I take ideas of what I did, managed to stay alive...
but I never got the idea of somethin like that man, can I take that one? its ca col stuff you've written, but have you imagined an end?? me too, write some stories, though they never last more than 3 chapters. you've heard abt Dead-Light? that one inspired me a lot! andd I decided to twist and turn it into a HL. so, when I have nothin better to do, I write some pages... hopefully, itll resemble a HL | |
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Desert_Motel_Dreams
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Yeah whatever man, anyone can take it, this one, ya know, I write lots of stuff, and this was written when it was late and I was tired, so its not that amazing.
But yeah go ahead. -------------------
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Rabsh
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thnx, and true, it isnt that great, but it has real suspense, OK, maybe not so much of it, but for great HL fans, Barney is gonna die! *Runs around madly* AAAAA *then realizes* oh, its not finished yet, why don't I continue it my way?
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Desert_Motel_Dreams
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lol, you could add to the story on here, in this thread and like any fans that come to this thread can continue the situation..
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Rabsh
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hmm... true. true...
but tell me one thing... why did you imagine a scene like that? | |
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Desert_Motel_Dreams
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I dunno, it puts lil Barney in a situation, bit of fun!
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Rabsh
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yeah, I like 'but the was Barney, freindly to everyone..'
or somethin like that... | |
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Desert_Motel_Dreams
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Oh because, the stress must get to him sometimes, and the heat, and the annoying but cool scientists..
But he is still so friendly always, but I just wondered, ya know he could easily snap under the pressure of his job. But does he? The story is what you want it to be. -------------------
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Rabsh
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I want him to stay calm and friendly, cause his job is to PROTECT the scientists... unless we make him kinda mentally ill
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Desert_Motel_Dreams
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lmfao, yeah, mentally ill, he could be if we want him to be.
Anyway, chow! -------------------
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Rabsh
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OK.. I just used it today
i bet ill score high! the title was 'When you got scared, but couldnt do anything about it" | |
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Desert_Motel_Dreams
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Interesting and looong title lol.
Well it isn't anything special, I was tired. But good luck man. chow! -------------------
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