Summary:
It is 1843 in the small town of Hilton, on maple street

third house down lives professor Charles Hamilton one of

the greateset inventors in the country.He is a great man of

science, he was also advanced in the medical field as

well.But the professor was not satisfied with his work he

longed to make greater inventions, and one in particular

that would change the world's views and history itself. He

invited the Inventor's Bereau to look upon his

masterpicece, they were extremely impressed, but when the

professor showed them it's abilities they were stunned and

appauled. Frightened by it's power and abilities they

claimed it to be to dangerous and unfit to live with

humanity. They demanded that it be either destroyed or

confined, he was left speechless and ashamed. After that

the Bereau terminated the professor's inventing lisence,

with that done the professor took his creation to his

mansion in Cornwall, England where he sealed it away in the

basement.The year is now 1856 and it has been sealed away

for 13 years, but in a twisted turn of fate is it possible

that the invention will soon see light agian?




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~Prologue~

June 18th, 1843

"I have finally finished it!"A very excited Chrales Hamilton shouted. His voice rang through the old house reaching the room little Mackenzie was in, startled by her father's abrupt commotion she tip-toed down the stairs to his lab. Three-year old Mackenze peeked through the door to see what the fuss was about. "All I have to do is the last of it's programming and it is finished."he said with glee.
Mackenzie slipped in silently and looked around for her father who was in the back. She tottered around the corner and was aghast. "it's a person..."she said wide-eyed referring to the invention. Charles flipped a switch and the person jolted with electric shock, Mackenzie winced and ducked down, but looked back up and it opened it's eyes.
Mackenzie gasped in amazement she moved a little closer and hid behind one of the professors parts crates. The invention moved a little and looked at the professor and did something truly amazing it spoke, "Hello."it said in broken English. "Truly amazing I have broken the barrier."he chuckled. Mackenzie veened in "oh it's a boy."she whispered looking at it's physique and noticing vocal tone. The boy was tall and slender he looked quite elegant, his face like porcelain and his hair black with streaks of silver, and silver tipped bangs, his eyes a light shade of a milky Silver colour tinted with green. The professor helped the boy off the table and tried to get it to stand on it's own it took a few minutes, but in no time the boy was standing on his own no problem. The boy surveyed his surroundings and wobbled around trying to get use to walking. Mackenzie was totally taken in she scooted closer for a better view, but tripped off the edge of the crate and feel flat on her face. "Ouch!"she exclaimed books tumbling on top of her and a final one bonking her on the head. Startled the Professor whipped around to see the commotion, but calmed down when he saw it was only his daughter, "Mackenzie what are you doing in here it's dangerous."Charles said with concern. Mackenzie looked up with curiosity, "Sorry I was just looking for you..."she mumbled. The boy stared at Mackenzie with curiosity "Mackenzie?" he managed to force out stumbling over his words. The professor smiled, "Yes this is Mackenzie."he said picking up his tiny daughter and bringing him over for the invention to see. The boy reached out and touched the girls face, "Mackenzie." it said again. "Papa who is this boy?"she asked.

"He is a Homunculus Mackenzie." Charles said. "A Homunkulos?"she said puzzled by the word. The professor let out a hearty laugh at her attempt of the word, "A Ho-mon-cu-lus."he said sounding it out. "Thats what I said!"she said putting out her bottom lip and crossing her arms. The professor chuckled, "Yup your right it's an artificial human."he explained. Mackenzie looked at him like a deer in the headlights "Artifical?" she said clueless. "Yes, that means he isn't real."he said explaining more. Mackenzie glanced back at the homunculus it was fiddling with some of the beakers and books on the table. "We are going to be able to move back to England and make mama better when I show this invention to the big guys downtown."the professor said.
Mackenzie said with excitement. "Well I'm not sure about your brother he has yet to make his arrival." Charles laughed."But tomorrow young lady you have to promise to be on your best behaviour for me and the investigators alright?"he said firmly. "Yessir!" she said saluting her father."Well private Mackenze it's time you were off to bed isn't it." he said carrying his daughter up the lab stairs to her room. "Awwww no fair!"she said kicking. "Goodnight Mr. Homunkulos!"she said waving at him. The homunculus looked and copied her movements. Mackenzie smiled widely. Her father laid little Makcenzie in her bed and tucked her in, "Sweet dreams my little angel."he said kissing her forehead. "Night-Night Papa."Mackenzie said hugging her dad. The professor walked toward the door, "Make mama's get well medicine okay."she said yawning, Charles froze at the door he looked down and sighed, "You bet."he said under his breath.


June 19th, 1843

Charles got up early and put on his best suit, he fixed his hair and put on his best cologne. He fixed the house and picked up stray things around the house, everything had to be perfect for the Bereau. Before he knew it there was a firm knock on the door, Charles rushed to it and opened it, "Mr. Hamilton I presume?" the older stout gentleman asked. "Yes this is."Charles said with confidence. "Please come in Gentlemen."Charles said opening the door wider. The three men shuffled inside, one was about in his late 40s and he was taking furious notes all along the way, another man was robust and about in his middle 30s he was taking photographs, and the last man which had spoken before had a clipboard and would check off something every once in a while. "Shall we continue to your masterpiece professor?"the stout man asked. "Oh yes this way please."Charles said walking down to his lab as the men followed, when Charles touched the handle to the lab he felt a tingle of excitement, "This might be my lucky break." he thought. He opened the door and led the men inside when they got to the center of the lab they peered onto the table where a boy sat, "So where is it?"the note taking man asked. "Your looking at it gentlemen."Charles said with a smile. "Don't tell me this boy is your invention Mr. Hamilton."the stout man asked confused. "Ah but he is' 'stand up please." Charles said. The boy rose to his feet and looked at the men, "Tell them what we practiced."Charles urged. "Pleased to make your acquaintance men of the Bereau." the boy said with a smile.
The men looked at Charles puzzled, "What is this all about Hamilton?"the stout one asked getting impatient. "He is a artificial human."Charles said. "Artifical?"they asked in unison."Yes he has a man made brain that is programmed to learn and to respond like a normal human."explained Charles.
"I call this Artifical Intellegence!"he exclaimed. The men seemed to be interested now, "how will this be different from a normal human? Like what will keep him from being ordinary?"asked the note taking man. "Glad you asked, he has some powers incapable of humans he is increasingly stronger he can lift two entire cars on their own, he can do basic functions and he also knows all the major languages." Charles explained. "He may also be used to help the military as a weapon of war."Charles said. "How would that be?"asked the photographer unconvinced. "He has a major detonator connected to all the major cities, if I wanted him to he could go bomb japan or invade France even blow Hilton off the map."he said with a wide smile. "What the hell are you mad man?"the stout man said staggering back. "You made a device that could blow up the entire world are you sane?"he said getting riled up. "I would like to think at least more sane than you sir."Charles said with a wicked smile. The stout man was enraged, "I will see to it you lose your inventing licence and that this abomination is destroyed!"he shouted pointing at the homunculus. "Oh really now and how is that?"Charles asked smugly. The stout man was red with anger "YOU WILL FIND OUT TOMORROW HAMILTON!"the man shouted as he stomped out the door. The photographer took a few quick snaps and walked out as well. The professor laughed and then set his lab notes down, "Fools they will see..."Charles said darkly.


June 20th, 1843

Charles sat at the kitchen table drinking his coffee "Ugh what a night."he said rubbing his forehead. He was interrupted by furious knocking on the door, "Hm only 10am a little early for visitors."he thought. He walked to the door and opened it only to find the stout man from the bereau again and one of the superintendents of the inventing society. "Sir I have come to suspend your inventing licence, from my source I have heard you have made a invention of destruction and we do not stand for that here."the superintendent explained. "With this suspension you will be cut off from all funding and will no longer be recognized as our part of our organization."he continued. "So basically your ostracizing me."Charles said coyly. "You could say that." the stout man said with a smile.
Mackenzie heard the commotion and tip-toed down the stairs, she peered into the doorway and then darted across the dining room so no one would see her. Quietly she walked down the steps to the lab and swung open the door, quickly she closed it and ran over to the invention. "Hey are you awake?"she asked whispering The homunculus sat up and looked at her he was quiet for a moment registering what she was saying and then replied, "Yes I am." he said back.
Mackenzie hopped up on to the table beside him, "You know your name is way too long."she said annoyed. The homunculus looked at her confused. "I'm going to give you a better name."she said smiling. She studied the invention looking for any promising features and spotted he had a lot of features that were silver, "How about Silver?"she asked.
The homunculus looked at her and then became dazed she heard a bit of noise and then a click, "Silver has been the new registered name."he said subconsciously.
"Hooray!"Mackenzie said hugging him, silver hugged her back she felt so warm. "Why am I so cold?" he asked. "Huh?"Mackenzie said confused, just then the professor came barging in the lab door swearing. "That damn Michaleson!" he said referring to the stout man. "He has always been out to get me, I knew he wanted to just boot e out of the way for his own benefit."he said with disgust. Mackenzie gripped silver "Papa what's wrong?"she said timidly. "Mackenzie why are you in here?"he asked. "I thought Silver was lonely."she said. "Silver?"Charles said confused, the homunculus looked up, "Yes master?"he asked. The professor looked at the invention and then back at his daughter, he gave her one of those 'what did you do' looks.
"I gave him a new name the old on sounded stuffy."she said.
"Oh well it wont be needed now he is going to be locked away."the professor said under his breath. "He is going on a trip?"Mackenzie asked. "Yeah whatever, go to your room for now I'm going somewhere tomorrow pack your things for Chiyaki's house."he said. "Okay!"Mackenzie said skipping to her room. The professor glanced over at silver ad then looked down, "Temporary shut down, stand by."he said disgusted. Silver's eyes lit up and then they went dark and his pupils disappeared. The professor locked Silver in a trunk and put him in the family car.

June 21st, 1843

Charles arrived in Cornwall England where he met with his nephew James. "I need you to watch the mansion at all times James."Charles explained. "I'll protect it with my life sir!"James said firmly. "Thank you."Charles said getting back in the taxi. "whatever you do don't let it get out of the mansion James."Charles said rolling up the window, with that the car pulled away.

Silver lay in the trunk in the basement of Hamiltion manor in Cornwall,England since June 20th, 1843.Th year is now 1856 will this be the year when the homunculus will be set free?

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~Announcement~
Due To a lack of inactivity a lot of people have quit. I wanted to post publicly that all NPC spots except the older adults are available. Also if you would like a part that has someone listed but they have been inactive please go ahead and pm me about it and I will try and arrange you to get in. Remember I would like to be PM'd only regarding this matter so we can save space for posting. Thank you very much.

Main Characters!

Mackenzie Hamilton (Mouschi_Chan)
age:16
birth:September 19th, 1840
personality:Usually reserved, she can be flighty and oblivious around her family and close friends, she is average when it comes to studies, she has a calm and charming sense about her.
Appearence:She has Straight Blonde shoulder length hair.She has brown eyes and is about 5'3 and weighs 112lbs.
Other:She use to be very close to her father, until he got extremely absorbed in his work.She blames him most for her mother's death because he could have found a cure for her illness.She is also very protective of her little brother Ethan, she dosen't want him to become like their father.

Ethan Hamilton
age:13
birth:August 23rd, 1843
personality:He usually keeps to himself, he is exceptionally even close to genius levels one step ahead of his father a real child prodigy.He is a little shy and is reluctant about showing his feelings to others.
Appearence:He has brown wavy hair. He has broqn eyes and is about 5'2 he weighs 114lbs.
other:His & Mackenzie's mother passed away when he was two and she five.Ethan loves his older sister, and looks up to her, but thinks she can be a bit overprotective at times. Ethan also wants to become an inventor like his father, but his sister thinks otherwise.

Chiyaki Nakahara
age:16
birth:December 21st, 1840
personality:Always cheery and bubbly, but sometimes seems to collide with trouble often, which sometimes can be a burden.She ahs been friends with Mackenzie since they were two, they are neighbors.
Appearence: She has straight raven black hair like her father that goes to her waist. She is 5'3 and weighs 100lbs.
other:She lives with her parents and brother. She is always giving him a hard time but she looks out for him.

Kouta Nakahara(SleepingNinetails)[Is on leave of Absence, and character is not available.]
age:16
birth:October 13th, 1840
personality:is shy and very smart in studies, unlike his sister he dosen't get into as much trouble, he is also heir to the family buisness.
Appearence:He has light brown wavy hair and one small fly away hair in the back that sticks up he also has grey eyes like his mom's. He is 5'6 and wighs 120lbs.
other:Kouta is good friends with Ethan and Mackenzie, whom he has a crush on.

Charles Hamilton [NPC]
age:45
birth:Februrary 4th, 1811
personality:a very outgoing and enthusiastic man. He is very dilligent and likes to see things out through the end.
Appearence:He has brown hair that is turning grey, he has side burns and a mustache, he also wears glasses.His eyes are brown and he is 5'7 and weighs 162lbs.
other:He is an accomplished invenor, and a great man of science he is also experenced in the medicla field.

Keiko Hamilton [NPC] [Deceased]
age:42
birth:May 12th, 1814
personality:warm and kind, she always seems to have a smile on her face and is ready to cheer you up. She is also very much a perfectionist.
Appearence:She has dark black hair and it goes past her waist. She has dark brown eyes and is a petite 5'2, she weigs 117lbs.
other:She owned a small flower shop where her and miss Nakahara worked. Although the shop closed due to keiko's illness.

Seiji Nakahara [NPC]
age:46
birth:July 29th, 1810
personality:A light-hearted, hard working man, he always tries to encourage people but he can be very strict at times.
Appearence:He has light black hair and has grey eyes.He is 5'9 and is 145lbs of pure muscle and a few sweets.
other: He commutes to the next town for his job.

Kotoko Nakahara [NPC]
age:42
birth:March 10th, 1814
personality:She is a very precise woman andis a neat freak, she can be blunt, but she is always there to help you in a sticky situation.
Appearence:She has black hair that is wavy she also has three small fly aways toward the back of her head that stick straight up just like Kouta'sshe has black eyes. She is 5'4 and weighs 115 lbs.
other:She went to the same highschool as Keiko and they were good friends.She helps manage keiko's shop.

Colleen Smith
age:14
birth:April 17th, 1842
personality:A calm quiet girl, she can be arrogant at times and makes rash decisions, but over all she just wants to be to herself.
Appearence:She has Blonde hair that goes to the middle of her back, she has crystal blue eyes.She is 5'1 and weighs 100lbs.
other:She is one of James's good friends, she lives with him in his uncle's mansion, because she was an orphan.She is really grateful to him and has a crush on james who is oblivious of her feelings.

James Hamilton
age:15
birth:November 7th, 1841
personality:he is a very happy-go-lucky person although he can be a bit dense and spaces out alot.
Appearence:He has brownish-blondish hair and it is straight. He has hazel eyes and is about 5'6 he weighs 124lbs.
other:He is Charles Hamilton's nephew, he is also taking care of hos uncle's mansion in Cornwall, England, where he and Colleen live.

Silver (Province)
age:16 [dosen't age in appearence]
creation: June 18th, 1843
personality:he is a very smart homunculus he is trying to figure out what his purpose for creation was and is looking for the professor.
Appearence:He has very wavy almost a little curly hair that is black with sliver tips. He has silver eyes and is about 5'8 he weighs 145lbs.
other: He was an invention by professor Charles Hamilton, he is a Homunculus.

Laura Bales
age: 24
birthdate: November 30th
personality: a bit standoffish she can come across rather bitter toward people especially younger children. She loses her temper easily and has a bit of a swearing problem.
appearence: Her hair is short like the "Bob" fashion and she has choppy bangs her hair is blonde with a brown tint. She is slender but has a bit of a muscular physique. she is 5'5 and weighs in at about 140lbs (mostly muscle).
other: she runs the Pub downtown, even though she loves the pub she would rather just be there having a draft with the boys and not worry about management.

Jared Grant
age: 23
Birthdate: January 1st.
Personality: He is cheery and a bit of a flirt with the local dames that come into the pub.He has a refreshing smile and words that would make you melt.
Appearence: He is tan skinned and has nut brown hair with natural blonde highlights. He has an average body type and is 6'1.He weighs about 155lbs and he wears glasses.
Other: He works as a bartender at the pub downtown with Laura. Although usually he spends time flirting with the girls than he does his work. Maybe someday he will find that girl that changes his point of view.

Abbi Weaver [NPC]
age: 14
birthdate:September 22nd ,1842
personality: Outgoing, but she doesn't give people much respect unless they're good at things.
appearence: she has fair blonde hair that is usually in a ponytail. Her eyes are green, and she is about 5'4 and she weighs 112lbs.
other: She is a maid that works at Hamilton Manor. You don't usually see her often because she blends in.


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Intro
Diary Entry one: June 28th 1856

It has been a very long year, I hadn't imagined how much happened. Have you ever felt that things were happening too fast? Well that's how I feel now sitting in the third seat on the left of this airplane flying to England. Father has up and sent me and Ethan to an Aristocratic school, and we are none to pleased. Thankfully I persuaded Father in allowing Chiyaki and Kouta to come. Nothing has been the same since Mother passed, Father threw himself into his studies like a workhorse, I think he is trying to avoid thinking about mom. But honestly do you think that is an excuse to abandon your children, oh well maybe were better off without him around.

England is a nice place I have been here once, it has lovely landscape and it has a calm feeling about it. We have the mansion father has in Cornwall where we will be staying with my cousin, whom is the curator since as long as I remeber. I don't know why we never just moved here than stay in Hilton, but if that had happened I would be sperated from my beloved Chiyaki. My memory might be playing tricks on me but it's sort of a deja vu to me the memory is blurry but I feel as though that in a while I will just find out the Quest. Father told us before we left if we finished the Quest we could become accomplished people, whatever that means? Maybe I will find out more when I get there, you know a 9 hour flight can be exhausting so I will write more later.

June 28, 1856 around 7:45pm - Happy Hour at the Pub

Nothing much was going on. Jared was just tending to the customers and occasionally a cute girl would walk in. Jared would attempt to talk to a couple of them but not once did they show any interest in him. Ho took a can of soda and began to drink it while Laura was taking care of a couple of the customers. Just then a young woman sat at the counter and ordered a beer. Jared got the beer and tried to talk to her.

"So, what brings a woman like yourself here?" Jared asked
"Is that really any of your business?" she responded
"No, I guess not. So, what you think of the town?" he asked
"Are you trying to hit on me?!?" she asked
"Just starting up a conversa-." he responded with

But before he could finish the woman got very angry and backhanded Jared leaving a red mark on his face. He looked around to see people lsughing at him. He quickly took the woman's empty beer bottle and threw it away.