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Log in to remove this sponsored message THE STORY AFTER SAVING ALMA PROLOUGE "The sun arose and drove away the darkness from the world.The Lion War was over,thanks to a young man named Delita.But,all is not as it appears.For their was another hero in this story,named Ramza.His efforts destroyed the greed and ambition that drove men to the brink of madness,namely the Zodiac Stones.The purpose of collecting these "stones" was to summon St. Ajora,and restore order to the world.Yet,St. Ajora was not all he seemed to be.For held in the Germonik Scriptures was the lies that the church had kept from all.St. Ajora,instead of a holy man was truly a demon.And those who took the stones were in hopes to revive him.Ramza and his companions,J.I,Schenberg,Yumiko,and Merlin,were the true hero's,as they killed St. Ajora on that faithful day,in Murond Death City.Since then,no once has seen any of them.Some say they died in the fiery explosion.But one man,Olan Durai,was convinced that they still lived.He even admitted spotting them,but of course was not believed.To this day Delita reigns all as King,for none dare to oppose him." 15 YEARS LATER Ramza awoken a bit after midnight,sweating from an eerie dream.Vormav was calling to him,and despite his resistance he ran.Closer and closer,until finally all seemed to black out.Looking around himself,it seemed that he was deep in the Temple at Murond Holy City.Vormav was there,and another man."Zalbag!?" Ramza screamed,but nothing came out.Vormav drew his sword,and struck Zalbag.The horrific cry would chill anyone to the bone.Then he stood upright."This is but the beggining of your punishment." he said with a glare. "What could this mean?" Ramza thought,and he hopped out of bed.The cottage that he lived in with his sister Alma was in the deep parts of the Sweegy Woods,which no one ever dared to venture into.A cold breeze swept across the trees,almost whispering."Hmm,I need a short walk to help clear my head." said Ramza.As he was walking he came across an apple tree,which himself and Alma had planted 3 years ago.It was a good size,and quite healthy.Ramza picked one of the apples,when he heard a voice from the North."Are we there yet?Come on!You know that were lost.Let's just turn back already!" it said,and another voice replied."We can't turn back until we find him,or His Majesty Delita will demote us to lowly Squires!" Thoughts were racing through Ramza's mind."Delita!?What does he want me for?" But there was no time for that.The voices neared,until they were in clear view."THERE HE IS!" The first voice yelled at the top of his lungs.The four rushed up to Ramza,grasping their weapons."Ramza Belouve,come with us immediatly or be executed." Ramza was armless,so he had no choice.Until,by unlikely odds,Alma rushed outside."What is the meaning of this!" She said,and threw Ramza his Rune Sword..... BATTLE BEGIN: Ramza & Alma VS 3 Knights and 1 Archer. *One of the Knights escapes after the battle* "Why did they disturb us,after these long years.." Alma said."I do not know,but something is bothering me lately.I...I just keep having these weird dreams.Vormav is still alive...is this what it is trying to tell me?" Ramza replied.Alma ran up to Ramza and yanked his arm."Brother,you can't go back.Think what would happen,especially since Delita wants you dead." Ramza quickly turned to face Alma,a petrified look in his face."Im not sure that is the reason he wants to see me.I believe it has something to do with Ovelia." Ramza quickly went back into the house,gathering necessary things for the trip.Alma walked in a little later."If your going,then so am I!" she said."If you want to,I won't object." he replied.Alma then became a bit paranoid,because her brother never let her come with him anywhere.It was always "too dangerous" as he would call it.But still,she said nothing more,as not to jinx it.Once prepared,they headed off out into the world of Ivalice,15 years into the future. WORLD MAP LOCATION: Starting Point:Sweegy Woods Open Areas:Dorter Trade City,Orbonne Monastary. Ramza and Alma stumbled upon Dorter Trade City,which hadn't changed a bit.Only everything and everyone were older.But in front of them seemed to be a riot.On one side were two male knights,a female Archer,and a male Wizard.They seemed oddly familiar."Im telling ya to back off!" one of the knights shouted.And then it became clear."J.I!!" said Ramza.J.I turned around,and shouted back."Hey,Ramza!Good to see you.Well,while your here we could use a little help eh?" BATTLE BEGIN: Ramza,Alma,Yumiko(Archer),J.I(Knight),Schenberg(Knight),Merlin(Wizard) VS A brigade of 5 Male Monks. "I never thought I'd see you guys again." Ramza said afterwords,with a quick cough following."Same here,but Im really glad in a way." said Yumiko."Where have you two been these many years?" She continued.Alma stepped in."Well,we have been living peacefully.I'd prefere not to say where though.And...thank you all for saving me at the Graveyard of Airships." "No sweat,I'd never abandon my leader Ramza anyway." Schenberg replied. "Im pretty sure you want to know what those punks were up to." said Merlin.All Ramza could manage was a nod."Well,we were heading to Goland to cash in this strange orb we found on a exhibition.It looks like it'd be worth some Gil I'd wager.Anyway,these gangsters decided that they wanted it,too bad they didn't realize how battle-fit we really are." Merlin quieted.After a long pause,Yumiko broke the silence."So,where are you two headed?" "Hmm,were not one hundred percent sure yet.But I think that the safest thing to do is head to Orbonne Monastary and decide what do next.We definatly can't go back to the Sweegy Wood,as one of the soldiers that attacked us escaped.Delita will certainly send more troops to take us to him.That's our situation thus far." said Ramza."We'll come with you,it'll be like old times!" J.I said.Ramza smiled."I'd like that." WORLD MAP LOCATION: Starting Point:Dorter Trade City Open Areas:Sweegy Woods-(Possible Random Battle),Orbonne Monastary. 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I've edited it a bit.Just curious of what everyone thinks.Also,Im writing another one of how Auron lands in Ivalice,and the story following.(How suprising.
Since no one is going to reply in this thread,Im going to use it simply to update so people can browse through the fanfics.I hope you don't mind RPG_Master,because I'll definatly be double and triple posting.I also have my Auron story started,it's right below the Sequel. THE STORY AFTER SAVING ALMA PROLOUGE "The sun arose and drove away the darkness from the world.The Lion War was over,thanks to a young man named Delita.But,all is not as it appears.For their was another hero in this story,named Ramza.His efforts destroyed the greed and ambition that drove men to the brink of madness,namely the Zodiac Stones.The purpose of collecting these "stones" was to summon St. Ajora,and restore order to the world.Yet,St. Ajora was not all he seemed to be.For held in the Germonik Scriptures was the lies that the church had kept from all.St. Ajora,instead of a holy man was truly a demon.And those who took the stones were in hopes to revive him.Ramza and his companions,J.I,Schenberg,Yumiko,and Merlin,were the true hero's,as they killed St. Ajora on that faithful day,in Murond Death City.Since then,no once has seen any of them.Some say they died in the fiery explosion.But one man,Olan Durai,was convinced that they still lived.He even admitted spotting them,but of course was not believed.To this day Delita reigns all as King,for none dare to oppose him." 15 YEARS LATER Ramza awoken a bit after midnight,sweating from an eerie dream.Vormav was calling to him,and despite his resistance he ran.Closer and closer,until finally all seemed to black out.Looking around himself,it seemed that he was deep in the Temple at Murond Holy City.Vormav was there,and another man."Zalbag!?" Ramza screamed,but nothing came out.Vormav drew his sword,and stuck Zalbag.The horrific cry would chill anyone to the bone.He then stoop upright."This is only the beggining of your punishment."Vormav said with a piercing glare."What could this mean?" Ramza thought,and he hopped out of bed.The cottage that he lived in with his sister Alma was in the deep parts of the Sweegy Woods,which no one ever dared to venture into.A cold breeze swept across the trees,almost whispering."Hmm,I need a short walk to help clear my head." said Ramza.As he was walking he came across an apple tree,which himself and Alma had planted 3 years ago.It was a good size,and quite healthy.Ramza picked one of the apples,when he heard a voice from the North."Are we there yet?Come on!You know that were lost.Let's just turn back already!" it said,and another voice replied."We can't turn back until we find him,or His Majesty Delita will demote us to lowly Squires!" Thoughts were racing through Ramza's mind."Delita!?What does he want me for?" But there was no time for that.The voices neared,until they were in clear view."THERE HE IS!" The first voice yelled at the top of his lungs.The four rushed up to Ramza,grasping their weapons."Ramza Belouve,come with us immediatly or be executed." Ramza was armless,so he had no choice.Until,by unlikely odds,Alma rushed outside."What is the meaning of this!" She said,and threw Ramza his Rune Sword..... BATTLE BEGIN: Ramza & Alma VS 3 Knights and 1 Archer. *One of the Knights escapes after the battle* "Why did they disturb us,after these long years.." Alma said."I do not know,but something is bothering me lately.I...I just keep having these weird dreams.Vormav is still alive...is this what it is trying to tell me?" Ramza replied.Alma ran up to Ramza and yanked his arm."Brother,you can't go back.Think what would happen,especially since Delita wants you dead." Ramza quickly turned to face Alma,a petrified look in his face."Im not sure that is the reason he wants to see me.I believe it has something to do with Ovelia." Ramza quickly went back into the house,gathering necessary things for the trip.Alma walked in a little later."If your going,then so am I!" she said."If you want to,I won't object." he replied.Alma then became a bit paranoid,because her brother never let her come with him anywhere.It was always "too dangerous" as he would call it.But still,she said nothing more,as not to jinx it.Once prepared,they headed off out into the world of Ivalice,15 years into the future. WORLD MAP LOCATION: Starting Point:Sweegy Woods Open Areas:Dorter Trade City,Orbonne Monastary. Ramza and Alma stumbled upon Dorter Trade City,which hadn't changed a bit.Only everything and everyone were older.But in front of them seemed to be a riot.On one side were two male knights,a female Archer,and a male Wizard.They seemed oddly familiar."Im telling ya to back off!" one of the knights shouted.And then it became clear."J.I!!" said Ramza.J.I turned around,and shouted back."Hey,Ramza!Good to see you.Well,while your here we could use a little help eh?" BATTLE BEGIN: Ramza,Alma,Yumiko(Archer),J.I(Knight),Schenberg(Knight),Merlin(Wizard) VS A brigade of 5 Male Monks. "I never thought I'd see you guys again." Ramza said afterwords,with a quick cough following."Same here,but Im really glad in a way." said Yumiko."Where have you two been these many years?" She continued.Alma stepped in."Well,we have been living peacefully.I'd prefere not to say where though.And...thank you all for saving me at the Graveyard of Airships." "No sweat,I'd never abandon my leader Ramza anyway." Schenberg replied. "Im pretty sure you want to know what those punks were up to." said Merlin.All Ramza could manage was a nod."Well,we were heading to Goland to cash in this strange orb we found on a exhibition.It looks like it'd be worth some Gil I'd wager.Anyway,these gangsters decided that they wanted it,too bad they didn't realize how battle-fit we really are." Merlin quieted.After a long pause,Yumiko broke the silence."So,where are you two headed?" "Hmm,were not one hundred percent sure yet.But I think that the safest thing to do is head to Orbonne Monastary and decide what do next.We certainly can't go back to the Sweegy Wood,as one of the soldiers that attacked us escaped.Delita will certainly send more troops to take us to him.That's our situation thus far." said Ramza."We'll come with you,it'll be like old times!" J.I said.Ramza smiled."I'd like that." WORLD MAP LOCATION: Starting Point:Dorter Trade City Open Areas:Sweegy Woods-(Possible Random Battle),Orbonne Monastary. BEFORE ENTERING ORBONNE -------------------- A lone soldier entered the halls of Zeltennia.A bit injured,but nothing fatal."I must see his majesty immediatly." he said.Through the corridors,until he reached the throne room."What do you want?" the king said."I found him,your Majesty Delita."replied the soldier.Delita began pacing back and forth."Hmm,so this day has come.Send some troops out,I want him brought to me as soon as possible!""Yes sir."said the soldier."What happens if he refuses?" "Then you will have to use force,for I know Ramza will not go willingly." The soldier quickly took his leave.Once he was out of sight,Delita began to mutter to himself."Ramza Belouve,whether you like it or not this will end soon." And as he said this,he pulled out an object from his pocket.It shone a brilliant light... ------------------- "I cannot believe this." Ramza said,as he looked at the remains of Orbonne Monastary.What was once a great library was now in ruins.Shattered pieces of rusted stones and glass lay everywhere.And in the midst of it all there seemed to be a person,kneeling down.Coming up closer,Ramza realized who it was.Grasping her blade,Agrais was obviously in a state of depression."It's all...gone...all gone." she said."What happened?" Ramza replied.Agrias took a moment to answer."About 2 days ago a gang of theives came to the Monastary.But their was something special about the supposive leader.He...he summoned a powerful beast that I've never seen before.It destroyed everything in it's path,including here.I couldn't do anything to stop it." Agrais took in a deep breath,and got up.Looking at Ramza,she finally realized."RAMZA!?What happened to you.Everyone assumed that your dead!And you to Alma." "No we've just been in hiding for a while,I think it was for the best." Alma replied.Ramza wasted no time in getting to the point."I cannot forgive those who did this,where do these gansters hide?" "In *blank*,just through the Araguay Woods." Agrais replied."Alright then,let's get them!" Event:Agrias joins party as a Guest. Equipment:Rune Sword,Crystal Sheild,Grand Helm,Maximillian,Grand Gauntlet(PA+4,MA+4) WORLD MAP LOCATION: Starting Point:Orbonne Monastary Open Areas:Dorter Trade City(Shop),Sweegy Woods(Possible Random Battle),Araguay Woods,*blank* *blank*=A new area which I have yet to name. ================================================== AURON'S JOURNEY THROUGH IVALICE SOME NOTES All of you remember the beginning of FFX right?Auron and Tidus fight off Sins army of monsters,until they come in close contact with Sin himself.A very short time after,they get sucked in by him.Aurons intent was to go back to Spira and wait for Tidus.But this story is what would happen if he had instead gone to the world of Ivalice.The time in which this happened is in Chapter 2 of Final Fantasy Tactics.Enjoy. A shining light was all but in clear view.Almost as in a void.But,the void was slowly being sucked in by darkness,until all was as black as night. A young girl was playing in the town of Goug.It was raining very badly,but all the children came out during this time anyway."Hey Lucy,come with us.Were going to play in the Slums." said a boy."Alright,but I'd better ask my parents first." said Lucy.The boy had a good laugh."Now come on,it'll be fun I promise." So she went.The slums were almost always a home to drunks,so you had to be very careful.Fortunatly she knew that a couple of her friends were coming too.They arrived,the rain seemed to be falling harder now."This is kinda cool." said Lucy.But soon she noticed that no one was around."That dumb kid,he ran away!" she thought,but walked a little further anyway."Urgh....dammit..." said a very low pitched voice."Who's there?" Lucy replied.Until she saw what was making the noises.He looked like an older man,dressed in very funny clothes.And if that wasn't frightening enough,he had a huge two handed sword laying by him."Mommy!!" said Lucy,and she fled back home. Auron finally gathered enough strength to get up."What is this place,Im certain it isn't anywhere in Spira." he said.Picking up his Shimmering Blade,Auron decided to head to the nearest town,or wherever he could find."Hmm,seems like there’s a couple of houses over there." Auron thought,and headed towards them.When he reached Goug,everyone was inside."No shelter huh?" he said,but saw that below the bridge he would be safe from rain,and that is where he slumbered. A Chocobo cried,signaling morning.When Auron awoke,he noticed that a couple of people were staring at him.So he stood up and walked away,not saying a word.The rain finally stopped,but dark clouds showed that was not very long ago.After leaving Goug,he headed West.Finally stopping at a marsh to take a break."I must find a bigger city,so maybe I could discover where this place is." Auron said,his hopes a bit down.But that was soon interrupted by a rumble.Skeletons were coming up from the ground,as well as more monsters to join them."They have sensed my presence,but this shall be quite simple." ---------- Auron's Statistics LV:18 HP:320 MP:24 PA:9(Diamond Armlet makes 10) MA:1(Diamond Armlet makes 2) SP:7 Move:4 Jump:3 Skills-Listed in Create A Job Class 3 Thread Learned:Guard,Dragon Fang Equipment: Shimmering Blade AT+11 Evade:20%-(Auron’s swords have innate Two Hands ability) Cross Helm Auron's Robe HP+60 Diamond Armlet ---------- BATTLE BEGIN: Auron VS 3 Skeletons,1 Bull Demon,2 Ghouls "I've never seen monsters as these before,how pathetic." Auron said after the battle. This message was edited by Oniblade on Sep 14 2002. This message was merged with other messages by RPG_Master44 (moderator) | |
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| oblivion46000 |
Sep 15, 02 at 11:07pm ^
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Hey this is pretty good, though I haven't seen a Fanfic before. Hey if Auron is in Ivalice, are you gonna make a FFX fanfic for what would happen if Auron wasn't there? Well keep up the good work.
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| Oniblade |
Sep 16, 02 at 12:55am ^
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A fanfic is just a story that you made that's related to a game,TV series,etc.And that Auron idea is pretty good,but Im going to work on the FFT one for now.
(Your right,hope he doesn't see that part. Here's an update to the Auron story alone.. AURON'S JOURNEY THROUGH IVALICE SOME NOTES All of you remember the beginning of FFX right?Auron and Tidus fight off Sins army of monsters,until they come in close contact with Sin himself.A very short time after,they get sucked in by him.Aurons intent was to go back to Spira and wait for Tidus.But this story is what would happen if he had instead gone to the world of Ivalice.The time in which this happened is in Chapter 2 of Final Fantasy Tactics.Enjoy. A shining light was all but in clear view.Almost as in a void.But,the void was slowly being sucked in by darkness,until all was as black as night. A young girl was playing in the town of Goug.It was raining very badly,but all the children came out during this time anyway."Hey Lucy,come with us.Were going to play in the Slums." said a boy."Alright,but I'd better ask my parents first." said Lucy.The boy had a good laugh."Now come on,it'll be fun I promise." So she went.The slums were almost always a home to drunks,so you had to be very careful.Fortunatly she knew that a couple of her friends were coming too.They arrived,the rain seemed to be falling harder now."This is kinda cool." said Lucy.But soon she noticed that no one was around."That dumb kid,he ran away!" she thought,but walked a little further anyway."Urgh....dammit..." said a very low pitched voice."Who's there?" Lucy replied.Until she saw what was making the noises.He looked like an older man,dressed in very funny clothes.And if that wasn't frightening enough,he had a huge sword laying by him."Mommy!!" said Lucy,and she fled back home. Auron finally gathered enough strength to get up."What is this place,Im certain it isn't anywhere in Spira." he said.Picking up his Shimmering Blade,Auron decided to head to the nearest town,or wherever he could find."Hmm,seems like there’s a couple of houses over there." Auron thought,and headed towards them.When he reached Goug,everyone was inside."No shelter huh?" he said,but saw that below the bridge he would be safe from rain,and that is where he slumbered. A Chocobo cried,signaling morning.When Auron awoke,he noticed that a couple of people were staring at him.So he stood up and walked away,not saying a word.The rain finally stopped,but dark clouds showed that was not very long ago.After leaving Goug,he headed West.Finally stopping at a marsh to take a break."I must find a bigger city,so maybe I could discover where I am."Auron said,his hopes a bit down.But that was soon interrupted by a rumble.Skeletons were coming up from the ground,as well as more monsters to join them."They have sensed my presence,but this shall be quite simple." ---------- Auron's Statistics LV:18 HP:320 MP:24 PA:9(Diamond Armlet makes 10) MA:1(Diamond Armlet makes 2) SP:7 Move:4 Jump:3 Skills-Listed in Create A Job Class 3 Thread Learned:Guard,Dragon Fang Equipment: Shimmering Blade AT+11 Evade:20%-(Auron’s swords have innate Two Hands ability) Cross Helm Auron's Robe HP+60 Diamond Armlet ---------- BATTLE BEGIN: Auron VS 3 Skeletons,1 Bull Demon,2 Ghouls "I've never seen monsters as these before,how pathetic." Auron said after the battle.His train of thought lost,he continued to the Northwest.Hoping to find out where he truly was... After a days walk,Auron came to Lionel."This...this is a castle?" he said."So,I was with no doubt sent into the past.."A knight from overhead noticed Auron."Who are you,and what is your purpose at Lionel?" he said.Auron gave no reply,just an akward stare."If you have no business,then leave immediatly." the Knight had now realized how funny looking Auron clothes were."You must be a soldier of the Hokuten,how dare you come here!" he said."I've no idea what you mean." Auron replied."That's the poorest excuse I've ever heard.Get him!" BATTLE BEGIN: Auron VS 4 Knights,1 Wizard "Drop your weapons." a voice said from the gates.It was a very old priest like man."Fools,do not simply attack someone without reason.Does he look like someone from the Hokuten?" He looked at Auron."You have come a long way,please except our hospitality." The gates were opened,and Auron went inside.The castle itself looked ancient,as if it was sitting there for a long time.Dusty sheilds and torches lined the halls.As they were walking the priest said."My name is Dracula,and yours?" "Auron." said Auron."An odd name,one from which I have never heard.What brings you here?" Dracula replied."Im looking for an answer,would you happen to know where I am?" Dracula stopped."You don't know?" he said."Lionel is located in southern Ivalice." "Ivalice?So I am not in Spira then." Auron said."You are quite the comedian,saying you come from another world." Auron sighed."If you do not believe me,then I will leave." "No,no.I didn't mean that.Please stay here for the night." said Dracula.Auron turned around."I suppose so,it would be stupid to refuse." | |
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Sep 21, 02 at 4:34pm ^
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Sep 22, 02 at 2:54am ^
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I appreciate it.But both fanfics are going to be put on hold for the moment.Im working on a unique storyline called Heathens Sword right now.Also,Im going to edit these two so there will be no more "World Map Location" and "Battle Begin" signs,everything will be in plain text.Then I might put them on a Fanfic site.
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Sep 22, 02 at 2:01pm ^
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Ahh, yea
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| oblivion46000 |
Sep 23, 02 at 12:33am ^
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hehe, well we have to write a short story, and I was gonna make a chapter 5, but I might get in trouble, so I might make that here if it's ok with u Oni, but I'm not 100% sure if i'll do it. Then again, your fanfic are already sorta like a Chapter 5...
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No,it's a Sequel.Chapter 5 would be considered an add-on.And go ahead,the title doesn't say "Oniblade's Fanfics."So anyone can post short stories that they came up with.
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